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  • Опубліковано 27 кві 2018
  • Warriors: Fire Alone is a stageplay fan-adaptation of the first 6 Warriors books.
    Next episode -
    [COMING SOON]
    Difficulty following along? Subtitles are available!
    We also have a Fire Alone discord for you to keep up with the project!:
    / discord
    Want to know more? Here's a video about the project:
    • A Brief Preface to War...
    ☆ Want to support my stuff? My Patreon can be found here;
    / colacatinthehat
    ☆ Featuring the vocal talents of:
    Fausti. A - Firepaw
    / gingajinketsukoushi
    Cour - Redtail
    / minijoshgaming
    Blixemi - Bluestar
    / blixemi
    StarxHusky - Yellowfang
    / starxhusky
    FelineSeraphim - Smudge
    / jup1x
    ☆ Music:
    Sanctuary - Johannes Bornlöf
    Road Less Travelled - Jonny Easton
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  • @HollyAndThorn
    @HollyAndThorn  11 місяців тому +26

    Can't believe it's been Five Years!
    Please buckle up for the FULL ACT 1 coming next Saturday 12th August 2023! See you there!
    ua-cam.com/users/shorts6TbMsV_Rmfc?feature=share
    ❤‍🔥

  • @Viva-qd2bo
    @Viva-qd2bo 6 років тому +841

    THEORY
    Rusty leaves to ThunderClan without Redtail and when he comes Redtail's already dead and he wants to join the Clan now not only to live a life of excitement and wonder, but to avenge his father.

    • @albertohirota
      @albertohirota 5 років тому +30

      Me: OH MAH GAWD
      *calls Erin Hunter*
      *a few minutes later*
      Me again: *YEETS THE TABLE*

    • @berry7939
      @berry7939 5 років тому +9

      I was thinknig he would of seen it with ravenpaw,

    • @Mia-zn2dr
      @Mia-zn2dr 5 років тому +3

      202 likes now

    • @dragonstouch1042
      @dragonstouch1042 5 років тому +12

      Starfeather136 can we have a Bramblepaw situation where Tigerclaw sees Redtail whenever he sees Firepaw?

    • @squirrelflight2323
      @squirrelflight2323 4 роки тому +1

      Yes that makes sense

  • @zomblee_1146
    @zomblee_1146 4 роки тому +323

    Redtail: *deputy*
    Rusty: “ SO YOURE IMPORTANT NOW?! “

    • @eclipes5784
      @eclipes5784 3 роки тому +16

      redtail: i was not importent in the 1st place?!

    • @Hollowmello1285
      @Hollowmello1285 3 роки тому +12

      @@eclipes5784 rusty: nah

    • @pand3m0nium_41
      @pand3m0nium_41 3 роки тому +9

      **Tigerstar Breaks The door down**
      *so anyways, I started tearing throats ope-*

    • @southhouse8420
      @southhouse8420 3 роки тому +2

      @@pand3m0nium_41 *Every cat:* **BLUE STARRERR**

    • @hairman7057
      @hairman7057 3 роки тому +1

      That’s weird lol

  • @aurorapixie8892
    @aurorapixie8892 6 років тому +630

    "In the name of Star Clan, we protect and guide and lead and love you."/"In the name of Star Clan, we live and fight and bleed and die for you." Sent shivers down my spine.

  • @ashmeowy
    @ashmeowy 5 років тому +559

    The thumbnail looks like Firestar has beautiful blonde hair

  • @Northflowo
    @Northflowo 6 років тому +3008

    This is fantastic! I really like how you decided to make Redtail Rusty's father, it's funny that he now isn't some random kittypet with a destiny anymore, but instead has an initial bond to the Clans and a reason to join them. Can't wait for the next part :^)

    • @cooperolm9687
      @cooperolm9687 6 років тому +104

      It was never a random kittypet, it was Jake. (Although I've always had an inkling that it was originally supposed to be Pinestar. I had this whole theory that Tigerclaw, Fireheart, and Scourge were all half brothers.)

    • @izzy1356
      @izzy1356 6 років тому +51

      To be fair though, at the time the first arc came out, Jake might as well have been a random kittypet. 😅
      (Edit: now that I'm looking at these comments on a PC, I realized North meant Rusty, not Jake, as "some random kittypet" lol. Point still stands though about Jake, best dad boi was nowhere to be found)

    • @wolfstar6042
      @wolfstar6042 6 років тому +32

      I mean I thought it was good from a positive messages sort of thing for Firestar to be a random kittypet, because like you know “you can be whatever you want”, etc. but it makes more sense for Firstar to want to join the clans if he’s heard about them from someone who doesn’t think that they are all murderers.

    • @emilyratterree2818
      @emilyratterree2818 6 років тому +9

      Northflower Rusty has always had a reason to join ThunderClan! His in two prophecies! Plus his 'strange' dreams, his will into the forest, meeting strange cats in the forest who then invited him to join ThunderClan. Duh. People read the books, it's not that hard

    • @Northflowo
      @Northflowo 6 років тому +17

      That's literally what I just said. He had a reason, and the reason was that it was his *destiny* -> he had dreams from what's supposedly Starclan

  • @DatAssIsCash
    @DatAssIsCash 6 років тому +417

    I HAVE TEARS. IN MY SIGHT HOLES.

    • @qwamustdraw3705
      @qwamustdraw3705 6 років тому +7

      I also have tears in my sight holes

    • @MoriiFauna
      @MoriiFauna 6 років тому +3

      Same

    • @wolfstar6042
      @wolfstar6042 6 років тому +3

      “SIGHT HOLES” - quote Tom 2018

    • @sofiasotherchannel8698
      @sofiasotherchannel8698 6 років тому +2

      Oh gOD MY SIGHT HOLES ARE STARTING TO SWEAT

    • @M0RlZA
      @M0RlZA 5 років тому +2

      Your watchers are melting?Oh my,let me get my absorber!

  • @pinkbunnygirl43
    @pinkbunnygirl43 6 років тому +251

    Does this mean Rusty and Sandpaw are siblings now? :) I’m surprised by all the changes and interested to see where it goes!

    • @HollyAndThorn
      @HollyAndThorn  6 років тому +91

      They are not! Honestly that fact didn't have much weight in the original series so in this version Sandpaw and Redtail are unrelated. Thanks for the watch :D

    • @jekkyfish.
      @jekkyfish. 3 роки тому +21

      colacatinthehat
      Oh good. It could’ve been sweet home Alabama

    • @YumeQueen
      @YumeQueen 3 роки тому +13

      would be nice if lionheart would be her dad. hebwbwb

    • @twerkingskeletongif
      @twerkingskeletongif 3 роки тому +9

      @@jekkyfish. why do people keep making fun of Alabama...
      It’s not fair to people who live there

    • @rori1381
      @rori1381 3 роки тому +3

      but they end up being m-mates.......................

  • @lunarsol9108
    @lunarsol9108 5 років тому +92

    I start a petition for part too!
    Just sign anywhere! :3p

    • @moontail6992
      @moontail6992 4 роки тому

      I’m signing with likes and comments, I wanna see how Rusty reacts to his dad dying

    • @saturn_is_blue
      @saturn_is_blue 4 роки тому

      y e s

    • @carrotsprig
      @carrotsprig 4 роки тому +1

      Still waiting... **cries**

    • @pand3m0nium_41
      @pand3m0nium_41 3 роки тому

      *So anyways, I started signing*

  • @illbringyoudown
    @illbringyoudown 6 років тому +610

    AT LAST THE WARRIORS ADAPTION WE ALL DESERVE IS HERE

    • @thedinolorian819
      @thedinolorian819 6 років тому +1

      illbringyoudown omg I love ❤️ your channel I love your pandora chorus series

  • @HollyAndThorn
    @HollyAndThorn  6 років тому +2139

    Warriors: Fire Alone is a fan-project that I wrote for fun back in October that adapts the first arc into a stageplay. Because it's an adaptation a lot of things were cut and changed to fit into a shorter run time and different medium. On a whim I asked if people wanted to voice act it and they said yes and here we are! None of the actors asked for payment and boy did they do a stellar job! I'm blown away by the talent!!
    I hope that you'll have fun with this project as much as I have, as a writing exercise I've learned a lot from it and it's exciting to revisit the first arc in a new way! See you next time!

    • @rookm1270
      @rookm1270 6 років тому +4

      colacatinthehat oh my god this s amazing

    • @pitchquack303c2
      @pitchquack303c2 6 років тому +6

      colacatinthehat
      Excuse me?
      This is amazing!
      But I also had a question.
      I heard there was a movie of Warrior Cats coming out and I wasn’t sure if this was it or not.
      So is this the movie I heard about, or is there actually a movie that will be going into theaters?

    • @mariewilson6371
      @mariewilson6371 6 років тому +5

      colacatinthehat I can't wait to see the second episode :3

    • @thepokepoet9482
      @thepokepoet9482 6 років тому +1

      colacatinthehat I love this so much, Holly. Can't wait to see more!!!

    • @tatatatad3379
      @tatatatad3379 6 років тому +1

      colacatinthehat I like it how you changed some parts of the book 👌 👌 👌

  • @Mollymauking
    @Mollymauking 5 років тому +72

    I really like how Redtail softens it down for Rusty. Like how he tells that little ode- He makes it friendly, soft and warm. ( 3:55-4:05 )

  • @aris0up
    @aris0up 4 роки тому +32

    i like how this gives rusty a justifiable drive to go into the clans rather than the wild just randomly “calling” to him as his destiny, and it makes us curious about the clans themselves right off the bat with redtail as the link between both worlds here. not to mention redtail actually being a character. it does make tigerclaw killing redtail a bit clichéd since fireheart/star now has the whole “you killed my father” motivation but this is still a very interesting take, i hope to see more whenever the time comes

  • @QuietRage
    @QuietRage 6 років тому +743

    This is a really interesting take of Into the Wild! I wonder how Firepaw will react to hearing about his father's death? I guess that will make his quarrel with Tigerclaw much more personal, albiet a bit more cliched. Ah well, its no big deal, I am sure this project will turn out fantastic regardless!

    • @Tszabrakkin
      @Tszabrakkin 6 років тому +10

      Hello Quiet Rage :O

    • @darknight6470
      @darknight6470 6 років тому +13

      Quiet Rage definitely. I really like that Redtail is his father. I’m also a big fan of you.

    • @noniekangas3142
      @noniekangas3142 5 років тому +18

      +Ghost The UA-camr
      Sandstorm’s familial relationship with Redtail was never mentioned in the books. So maybe she won’t be related to him at all.

    • @dragonstouch1042
      @dragonstouch1042 5 років тому +3

      Quiet Rage should I make the obvious Princess Bride joke?

    • @suzieqm1
      @suzieqm1 5 років тому +3

      Yeah! I always thought Jake was firestars dad.

  • @Blixemi
    @Blixemi 6 років тому +861

    fglk'sajg'd hOLLY MY RETINAS??!! They're being burned by your BRILLIANCE? This turned out so DANG GOOD i've got little baby goosebumps ontop of the regular goosebumps. I'm shOOK!!! Amazing job all around, I'm so excited to be apart of such a wonderful and unique Holly-fied Warriors masterpiece!!~!

    • @thethree33aj17
      @thethree33aj17 6 років тому +4

      Blixemi I totally agree!!

    • @bl4z3dvll48
      @bl4z3dvll48 6 років тому

      This is so cool!!

    • @addy8186
      @addy8186 6 років тому

      I agree

    • @addy8186
      @addy8186 6 років тому +2

      I love how they made redtail rustys father, the voice acters are so good!

    • @lannaulanday5533
      @lannaulanday5533 6 років тому

      Yep, I agree

  • @GBR-cj6fj
    @GBR-cj6fj 3 роки тому +14

    “Next Episode- [COMING SOON]
    **2 years ago**
    Me: :(

  • @ruethechosenone5197
    @ruethechosenone5197 6 років тому +40

    Rusty is going to have more reasons to figure out who killed Redtail now.

  • @PanRawr
    @PanRawr 6 років тому +167

    Redtail being Rusty's father blew me away, I really love that idea? That stronger connection beyond "mystical destiny" is just really cool? Gosh, you guys have already done an amazing job capturing me and holding the appeal of the first book! I can't wait until the next episode!

  • @kitkat7316
    @kitkat7316 4 роки тому +29

    Rusty/Firepaw: Father! Father! Don’t go!
    Me: *cries my pathetic little heart out over a fictional cat*

  • @r.b.4338
    @r.b.4338 4 роки тому +71

    I wish Rusty's father was Jake.
    *Because Jake is everyones father.*

    • @starcycle4308
      @starcycle4308 4 роки тому +5

      XD

    • @efilymetahi
      @efilymetahi 4 роки тому +6

      Yup

    • @pand3m0nium_41
      @pand3m0nium_41 3 роки тому +3

      Tallstar: *Wait, that’s illegal.*
      * i s h i p i t i m s o r r y *

    • @parvatin1759
      @parvatin1759 2 роки тому

      wait but Jake is canonically Firestar's father in the original books

  • @cranberrythecat4555
    @cranberrythecat4555 6 років тому +447

    This was amazing! And I actually really like the changes so far. Though the idea of Rusty initially joining the clans out of a desire for a fulfilling life is a good one, I can see how his relation to Redtail could be a strong motivation too--and one that is perhaps more easily relatable to the audience. But I know this will make Redtail's eventual death much more heartbreaking. This time on a personal level! This looks great so far, and I can't wait to see the rest of it! Great job to everyone who participated!
    First Five Giants, now this. We've got such a creative community going on! :D

    • @kleptogoat5971
      @kleptogoat5971 6 років тому

      Cranberry the Cat I

    • @BrianHall33
      @BrianHall33 6 років тому +4

      Cranberry the Cat the warriors community has always been the most creative community I’ve ever seen

    • @goosebackes5416
      @goosebackes5416 6 років тому

      ...alright but..isnt sandstorm redtails daughter

    • @featherthethirdwheel3738
      @featherthethirdwheel3738 6 років тому +1

      Allison Backes if they can change Rusty's father then why couldn't they change Sandpaw's?

  • @advil9567
    @advil9567 6 років тому +393

    YES! Spottedleaf was replaced with my BABE Yellowfang

    • @kachicu
      @kachicu 5 років тому +14

      Then she's prob gon die in place of Spottedleaf

    • @cowboyrider01
      @cowboyrider01 5 років тому +3

      YAAAAAASS

    • @qt_pi_
      @qt_pi_ 5 років тому +6

      Thunder griffin *Medicine cat apprentice not Junior medicine cat

    • @bryleeclements5709
      @bryleeclements5709 5 років тому +6

      YASS U GO YELLOWFANG!

    • @FriedEgg_Oden
      @FriedEgg_Oden 5 років тому +4

      How the fuck can it even be into the wild if there is no Spottedleaf she’s a big part in the book

  • @coffee2535
    @coffee2535 6 років тому +79

    Well geez. Rip Tallstar and *Jake*

    • @YaRinGEEE
      @YaRinGEEE 4 роки тому +2

      What if they're reversed?? O.o
      Jakestar confirmed!?
      Maybe Sunstar, or Firestar? Maybe even Flamestar or Blazestar!?

  • @alex_croft5935
    @alex_croft5935 5 років тому +40

    This fan fiction touched me alot and i almost cryed watching it its alot changing story but who cares about the story change its a fan fiction by you and oh god i cant wait for the next part its really amazing

  • @anikabeersing3476
    @anikabeersing3476 6 років тому +96

    I love Redtail as Rusty's father! He has so little time in the books and the way you fit him into this plot line is very well done! The art is beautiful, the voices are AMAZING, the changes make sense, and this is overall extremely well done! I cant't wait to see more!

    • @dragonstouch1042
      @dragonstouch1042 5 років тому +2

      Anika Beersing at least he’s getting a super edition

    • @dragonstouch1042
      @dragonstouch1042 5 років тому +5

      Anika Beersing I kinda hope Tigerclaw is unnerved by Firepaw, like how he was with Bramblekit, but instead it’s Redtail’s ghost always watching him

  • @druidshollow
    @druidshollow 6 років тому +129

    WHAT THIS IS SO COOL,,,, im sure youve heard it a million times but redtail being his dad is the COOLEST hc ever???? i adore it!! everythings been put together so well and i cant wait to see more!

  • @PIZZA-kv1js
    @PIZZA-kv1js 5 років тому +9

    Why is everyone so stupid? THIS IS AN FAN-ADAPTATION that is why the plot is different. One to cut some stuff out plus it is a new twist which makes the plot go faster. Can't wait till the next episode!

    • @mhaismylife6881
      @mhaismylife6881 4 роки тому +3

      lol people cant read apparently, i feel so bad for cola!

  • @AmyMist
    @AmyMist 6 років тому +25

    I'm a little annoyed by all the commentators that don't realize this is not a strict 1:1 adaptation!
    I like that you've given the viewer a greater stake in Redtail as a character! It'll make... well, whatever happens to him feel impact in a way that I'm not used to!

  • @Selket
    @Selket 6 років тому +393

    I absolutly LOVE the changes you made so far! I can see it already being way more impactful and tight than the sourcematerial. The deaths are really going to be super heartwrenching, damn.
    What an amazing and unique project!! Can‘t wait for more.

  • @Furrosuti
    @Furrosuti 6 років тому +209

    LEGENDS RETOLD! THIS IS TOO GOOD!!

    • @cattigen6859
      @cattigen6859 6 років тому

      KindledFlame yo can’t wait for you in next episode X3

  • @cakee1511
    @cakee1511 4 роки тому +16

    I love how you made yellow fang the medicine cat instead of spotted leaf and that lion heart died not redtail, and that it was a windclan attack and not a riverclan attack!

  • @ariri3001
    @ariri3001 5 років тому +49

    Half these comments don't know what an AU is lmao

  • @CrowCoded
    @CrowCoded 6 років тому +93

    With every passing year a new adaption or a new au of the original books arise and with these new years hails products that are far better than those before them. This video is no exception. THIS is the warrior cats should have had, honestly. Your writing and stage direction for this is a MASTERPIECE and enviable to a hugh degree. I don't know what I thought going into this, but coming out of it - fresh off the hype train - all expectations were blown exponentially out of the water. Between the writing, the concept behind this, all the artist talents, and the absolutely phenomenal voice over cast I have to say that this is by far one of the best warrior cats adaption created.
    It may not have the original story line or be fully animated, but it this case I think it works far more better and I frankly love it entirely for what it is and I don't see how it can improve further past perfection! Honestly. It's just plain amazing and I'm already reverting to a 5 year mental state in my impatience for the next release. I already hella wanna draw fan art of this too, especially since the probability of me ever being able to make art specifically for it is low. Eeeeeks. I feel like a middle schooler I'm fangirling so hard. Keep this up and you'll go further than antone before you, that's a promise. I can't wait to see what happens next.

  • @BlueMaroonAnimations
    @BlueMaroonAnimations 6 років тому +209

    Everyone did a really good job in this congrats on making this project happen! I'm very interested in seeing where this take on the story goes. I'm sad we didn't get to see any Lionheart though, RIP Lionheart

    • @BlueMaroonAnimations
      @BlueMaroonAnimations 6 років тому +12

      Just a little side critique of the story, I think it would have been better for Redtail not to mention the clans to Rusty, it would have been better if Rusty didn't know why Redtail lived in the forest or why Redtail had to stop seeing him. Rusty could still want to live in the forest with his father without knowing about clan life. Then when Rusty inevitably goes to look for Redtail, we still get the introduction to the clans through Rusty's eyes, this is more so that the exposition about clan life would feel a bit more natural and it would keep a bit of mystery for both the audience and the character. Its honestly just a small thing that I was thinking about thats all :')

    • @BrianHall33
      @BrianHall33 6 років тому +1

      RIP Lionheart! The most noble golden fluff ball of all time

  • @BrianHall33
    @BrianHall33 6 років тому +71

    This is great and really well made, some of the changes seem a bit unnecessary but oh well it’s not like I can change that. How will Sandpaw and Firepaw work out if Redtail is now Fires dad, will her dad be different. Again some of the changes ore fine with me, like yellowfang being thunderclans med cat from the beginning, makes sense. Windclan being the aggressors... strange but I can go with that, interested in the story there. But why Goldenflower being big hurt Instead of Mousefur? That just doesn’t make sense.
    But that’s just a little pet peeve overall I’m liking this and I’m intrigued on where this is going.

    • @starcycle4308
      @starcycle4308 4 роки тому +6

      Sandpaw and Redtail are unrelated in this "AU", the creator said in a reply to a comment.

  • @gachalegends9421
    @gachalegends9421 4 роки тому +4

    wait wait wait wait wait this is your own take on the back story of rust YESH THIS IS JUST YESH

  • @LittleMissChii
    @LittleMissChii 6 років тому +151

    Something something something spottedleaf.
    BUT HONESTLY I LOVE THIS SO MUCH HOLLY This is such an interesting take on the first book! So excited for more

  • @kinpatsucat1935
    @kinpatsucat1935 6 років тому +141

    This is so nice

  • @bariiaj
    @bariiaj 5 років тому +9

    `` "In the name of Star Clan, we protect and guide and lead and love you. ``
    `` In the name of Star Clan, we live and fight and bleed and die for you. ``
    THIS GAVE ME HAMILTON VIBES AND MADE ME CHOKE UP SDFJGMUHNFGFH MY EYES ARE NOT CRYING THEY'RE JUST SWEATING

  • @texpelt8858
    @texpelt8858 6 років тому +7

    And suddenly Yellowfang shows up early! My reaction : HOLY SH-!

  • @dovehaze_
    @dovehaze_ 6 років тому +116

    AAA IT'S FINALLY OUT! I'm so excited for this project, it's such a cool concept and all the changes makes the story so interesting, it almost feels like I'm getting introduced to warriors again. Thank you for letting me join this incredible project, and bless you Holly for your patience and creativity!

  • @HHSDaily
    @HHSDaily 6 років тому +57

    Love it can't wait for more! Warriors has a special place in my heart despite never finishing any of the books!

  • @tfhowthattaken
    @tfhowthattaken 3 роки тому +5

    i remember watching this a few years back on the UA-cam app on the old wiiU that I had and thinking that this was amazing, i still think its amazing. you don't have to continue it but i wanted to say though that I love the effort you put into the voice acting and the animation.

  • @kiwiii3753
    @kiwiii3753 5 років тому +12

    For some reason I always imagined Bluestar to have a British accent.

  • @7catsinatrenchcoat789
    @7catsinatrenchcoat789 6 років тому +54

    H. Holy fuck. OH MY GOD IM LOVING THESE CHANGES. oh my god I'm in awe this is so good. The voice actors are so talented and all the artists should be proud of their work! You especially should be proud of this script, it's phenomenal so far aaa 💜😭 Can't wait for all this.

  • @heatherly893
    @heatherly893 6 років тому +47

    First of all, I really loved this!!! Can't wait for the next part!
    I know that this is a stageplay, not the books, and should be judged on its own terms, but my curiosity is piqued and I wonder how the strategies you've chosen to make things clearer and more concise will change the rest of the story.
    I can see that you were very quick and deliberate in setting up the characters' motives. Rusty wants to join Thunderclan, mostly to be like his father, and Bluestar wants to keep the clan strong and find out how 'fire alone will save our clan'. Bluestar's motives are very similar to how they appeared in the book, which is pretty straightforward, since Bluestar has always had fairly clear motives.
    The idea of Rusty wanting to join his father is a very interesting way of solving the "problem" of motive. It is definitely clearer than his motives which serve as a catalyst in the book: "vaguely dissatisfied with life, afraid of getting fat and lazy, has dreams about the forest, feels called to take up an invitation to join a band of strange wildcats". These are hard to verbalize, so they don't make for particularly good dialogue, and they are also fairly vague and don't tell us about the core of Fireheart's character.
    In the books it's not really important WHY Rusty joins Thunderclan - just that he does, and that he lives by his decision. He's still young and his character hasn't been created yet. It's the way in which Firepaw faces the struggles of the first book that establish his character for the rest of the series (his kindness, friendship, duty, loyalty, fairness, desire to prove himself despite kittypet blood, etc.). But that kind of lengthy character development doesn't suit a stageplay well.
    For most of the first book Firepaw's major motives are caring for his new friends and defying his kittypet roots, but you couldn't set these as main motives because it would be impossible to establish these from the very beginning, and even then, they are secondary to the main plot of the series, which is protecting the clan from Tigerstar. It was important for you to establish motives which would 1. be in existence at the beginning 2. be compelling 3. carry through to the rest of the stageplay, or at least develop naturally into the next motive.
    I suppose you could have said that Starclan gave Rusty the dreams and gave Bluestar the prophecy, so they are the driving force, but this tells us very little about character and makes for a pretty low-stakes plot too, so I'm glad you didn't.
    Another "problem" you've tackled is loyalty. In the books, Firewpaw's loyalty to the clan is largely undeserved - more a product of his joining and training with them at a young impressionable age than anything he actually owes this clan in particular. However, by setting up Redtail as Rusty's father, you have made his loyalty to the clan more plausible by linking it to loyalty to his father.
    I wonder how this will affect Fireheart's relationship to Bluestar. In the books, Firepaw wants to impress Bluestar and earn her respect since she was the first person to believe in him, but here his father was the first person to believe in him. Firepaw might be less motivated by respect for Bluestar and more motivated by wanting to live up to his father's legacy.
    I wonder if Rusty's relationship with Redtail will also affect his decision to oppose Tigerclaw - in the book it's mainly about justice (and helping Ravenpaw) (and protecting the clan from a murderer) while here I suspect revenge for Redtail's death will play a part. You probably won't even include Ravenpaw as a character.
    The whole father/son warrior/kittypet dynamic reminds me of Cloudtail and Fireheart's relationship, which makes it more believable, to me. I wonder if this is a combination of both relationships (Bluestar/Firepaw and Fireheart/Cloudpaw), in which case Cloutail will not appear in this version.
    Finally, you changed one of Fireheart's inner struggles by not giving him full kittypet blood. Fireheart's struggle to prove himself despite his blood has always been one of the pillars of his character, especially at the beginning. But now you've given him more credibility to his clanmates by having a deputy as a father, so kittypet blood might play a smaller role.
    Anyway, congratulations again for finishing this first part! I've never thought much about the details of adapting something and I'm excited to see how this plays out!

    • @bellazwar8880
      @bellazwar8880 6 років тому +1

      But what about Redtail being Sandstorms father.

  • @ornyth8863
    @ornyth8863 5 років тому +23

    Wait- If Redtail is Rusty's father..and Sandpaw is Redtail daughter... doesn't that mean...lmao
    Anyways I love this stageplay! I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

    • @pokora8811
      @pokora8811 3 роки тому +2

      Well you need to first look at Willow Pelt and Patch Pelt xD

  • @brinbeezy
    @brinbeezy 5 років тому +13

    This is amazing!
    Ive watched this like 50 times but shush
    Just now as I was watching it, I remembered how almost as soon as Rusty ( Firestar) joins ThunderClan, Redtail is announced dead. So it gave me an idea that I might as well share.
    What if when Tigerstar drags in Redtail, he is on the brink of death to Silverpelt and Rusty(Firestar) see's his dead 'father' or dying father? And what if Redtail saw Rusty and knew forth that maybe is son was safe their.
    Then there'd probably be a whole scene of Rusty mourning his fallen father and then it would drag into the scene of Longtail antagonizing Rusty for being a Kittypet.
    And so on and so on in the book.
    (Or idk maybe it could just be how it is in the book were he's already dead and Redtail just watches over him in StarClan)
    I just thought it could be a SnAZz-FUll( that's totally a word,) event in the scene of Redtail's death.
    👂👀👃👀👂👌

    • @brinbeezy
      @brinbeezy 5 років тому

      This is so late qwq

  • @ayanamcr.7303
    @ayanamcr.7303 6 років тому +33

    I like this adaption

  • @Leafie1205
    @Leafie1205 6 років тому +25

    I love this so far!! The art, voice acting, and writing is fantastic! I think it's really interesting that Redtail is now Rusty's father, it gives him more meaning than just being a random cat who died. I also noticed the change from Mousefur's wounds to Goldenflower's; I thought that was a good choice since Goldenflower will be more important later on. All in all, great work so far!!

  • @rorotriplero
    @rorotriplero 6 років тому +1

    OMGGG, I HAVE STRUCK GOLD! Great! Can’t wait for the next part! The art, the story, the modifications and just everything about it is all around amazing! Keep it up!

  • @kitclod
    @kitclod 5 років тому +4

    0:46 I'm already crying, he's so happy to see redtail oml.

  • @No-mj4hu
    @No-mj4hu 6 років тому +99

    Finally, a universe where Spottedleaf doesn't exist

    • @No-mj4hu
      @No-mj4hu 6 років тому +5

      Cassandra Snyder
      Oml I was jOkinG

    • @CatoftheStorm
      @CatoftheStorm 6 років тому

      Maybe Spottedleaf will be Fireheart's mate instead? :P
      (If she exists as a regular warrior in this world.)

    • @crypticaqua8758
      @crypticaqua8758 6 років тому +8

      Cassandra Snyder it's so simple to fix these problems. After all, it's an adaptation. There are a lot of big changes, Sand doesn't have to have Redtail as her father and she also doesn't have to nearly die. Simple. Spottedleaf is completely useless, and you know it.

    • @jace9929
      @jace9929 6 років тому +3

      Cassandra Snyder Hey maybe in this universe yellowfang is thunderclan or many other things like she switched instead

    • @bryleeclements5709
      @bryleeclements5709 5 років тому

      HALLELUJAH

  • @kalestars5104
    @kalestars5104 6 років тому +20

    ooh. Lionheart dying instead of Redtail?
    Interesting!! Can't wait for the next episode

  • @aspen1051
    @aspen1051 5 років тому

    I loved how you did this! Omg I’m in love. Keep up the good work! Can’t wait for the next episode

  • @axelf9947
    @axelf9947 5 років тому +4

    I.. I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIs

  • @fluddie6832
    @fluddie6832 6 років тому +22

    I was weary of this at first but after watching the whole episode I can safely say that I am going to thoroughly enjoy this! Thank you so much, we need more people thinking outside the box like this in our community! :D

  • @Mimikou
    @Mimikou 6 років тому +113

    ME? CRYING?? HAHA NO THERES DUST IN MY EYES

  • @myrkthecat
    @myrkthecat 5 років тому

    Impressive! Your writing talent makes this seem nearly original, in a way. I appreciate this adaption more than I honestly thought I was. I'm very, very impressed. Great job! I definitely look forward to more. The twists and changes are fascinating and immersive. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

  • @lauralbranch
    @lauralbranch 6 років тому

    Ok this is really cool! I love that you combined the characters, but it still feels soooo natural! It's amazing!

  • @BlaizeEternal
    @BlaizeEternal 6 років тому +9

    I understand why the Yellowfang change was made, but I'm gonna miss the part of the story where rusty cares for her and bonds w/ her because thier freindship was one of my favorites

  • @SaraXu
    @SaraXu 6 років тому +58

    This new plot is so interesting, Redtail and windclan are finally important and the whole concept is just so brilliant . I can't wait for the part 2
    Also all artists and voice actors did so good job 👏👏👏❤

    • @paigehc6659
      @paigehc6659 6 років тому

      SaraXu Windclan and Redtail had always been important, wtf

    • @SaraXu
      @SaraXu 6 років тому +1

      Dragon Legend Yes, but they are now more important and have more impact to the story and the reader.

    • @SaraXu
      @SaraXu 6 років тому +1

      Dragon Legend I'm also talking about only the first book

    • @paigehc6659
      @paigehc6659 6 років тому

      SaraXu Yeah, I suppose so

  • @seigedrakonera5689
    @seigedrakonera5689 5 років тому

    OMG! I *LOVE* this, the art sets the situations well and the storry telling with multiple voices is not as easy as some think. Lots of more editing then most single voice audio book. Keep up the amazing work!

  • @0rca_s
    @0rca_s 5 років тому

    I can't wait for the next part ahhhhhh, This is beautiful! Well done holly!

  • @PetriCour
    @PetriCour 6 років тому +64

    Oh boy I've never read fight cats, now I know the whole story, thanks colacat!

    • @HollyAndThorn
      @HollyAndThorn  6 років тому +31

      You're welcome Cour! This is exactly how the story goes and I changed nothing!

    • @raniahelal2706
      @raniahelal2706 6 років тому +2

      colacatinthehat Well, not really, spottedleaf was the one who told BlueStar "Fire alone will save our clan" and YellowFang was brought to thunder clan by Firestar.

    • @dropespeon
      @dropespeon 6 років тому +26

      it was sarcasm pff

    • @warpedtour-ec8wx
      @warpedtour-ec8wx 6 років тому +10

      "Fight cats" I'm dead

    • @unni_sloth
      @unni_sloth 6 років тому +1

      this is a fan version, it is not the real story. WANT THE REAL STORY? READ THE BOOKS

  • @KingCriims
    @KingCriims 6 років тому +70

    Waiting for all the comments from butthurt fans about the changes like
    But seriously this is really good and I throughly enjoyed it! Everyone did so well!!

    • @movedchannels1654
      @movedchannels1654 6 років тому +2

      Gooseberyy I actually prefer this lol

    • @KingCriims
      @KingCriims 6 років тому +1

      star and orion Me too it’s an interesting spin on the series

    • @movedchannels1654
      @movedchannels1654 6 років тому +2

      Gooseberyy agreed, I quite like how redtail is rusty's father

    • @ApostleWolf
      @ApostleWolf 6 років тому +1

      I don't prefer one over the other. I'm gonna wait until this series is over till I decide on that, but I really like this so far.

    • @movedchannels1654
      @movedchannels1654 6 років тому +1

      The Spirit Of Silverfang well prologue wise I prefer this one

  • @user-oj7np2ej1z
    @user-oj7np2ej1z 4 роки тому +3

    Smudge: "I'll be sniffing catnip if you need me"

  • @a_starsworld
    @a_starsworld 4 роки тому +5

    If only this really happened this would be a much better book...

  • @binugget
    @binugget 6 років тому +243

    .... no spottedleaf? Seriously? HALLELUJAH HALLELUJAH
    HALLELUJAH HALLELUJAH
    HALLELUJAH HALLELUJAH
    I LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH! GREAT JOB! I CANT WAIT TO SEE MORE.

    • @MissNoraTW
      @MissNoraTW 6 років тому +10

      Cinderheart Warrior VA and Covers
      Spottedleaf was cut out from this fan-made adoption stageplay because she's useless.

    • @toti6941
      @toti6941 6 років тому

      Ikr. XD

    • @sokam9820
      @sokam9820 6 років тому +1

      Cinderheart Warrior VA and Covers IK YASAA

    • @crypticaqua8758
      @crypticaqua8758 6 років тому +8

      Cami_Cosmos let's hope Clawface is killed by Yellowfang owo

    • @dragonstouch1042
      @dragonstouch1042 5 років тому +1

      Cami_Cosmos we kinda need a medicine cat

  • @StarxHusky
    @StarxHusky 6 років тому +18

    I can’t tell you enough how gorgeous this is and how much I admire your talent and creativity. I’m so blessed to be part of this project. Incredible job to the cast and artists as well!! ❤️ This came together so beautifully!

  • @Vilistarock
    @Vilistarock 6 років тому

    This was absolutely amazing! I've imagined over and over how the first series could be rewritten to serve a different medium, and you're already hitting the nail really well! I'm excited to see where it'll go from here, and how you imagine him intergrating in the clans now with previous knowledge of them, it really makes out for an interesting twist! Keep it up!

  • @madelynt1615
    @madelynt1615 5 років тому +3

    rusty's voice is so cute

  • @soapyulp8940
    @soapyulp8940 6 років тому +16

    Screech the angry old lady is medicine cat :D

  • @akiosouma5081
    @akiosouma5081 6 років тому +15

    Oh God.. THIS IS AMAZING!! I LOVE the dynamic between Redtail and Rusty. And I love that change alot. Also I am a bit sad about Lionheart being deputy before Redtail cause I like him alot. And Mousefur got replaced at the beginning with Goldenflower? Mmmmh~ Well but that doesn't really matter. Cause this adaptation is already o so amazing. It is a total new way to narritate the story of our little firecat we love and admire. And I truly being amazed. It is only a fracture of the whole till now and god I can't wait for more.
    About the writing: I love Redtail being the narrator. It is a really amazing idea. I love it. Also the changes are a bit surpising they are well made. And How much I love this "In the name of Starclan we protect and guide and lead and love you!". This is my absolute favorite warriors phrase for now. Jeez it is so powerful!!! I can't say so much about it till now because we only now fracture like I said so yeah... But I really love it! Well done!
    About the Voice Actor cast: What exactly are you?! The voices fitting so well. The way they acting are so amazing and despite the fact there aren't any realy mimic and body language, but they showing so much emotions! They all did so well. They fit the characters so well. I l truly love it. To all voice actors: You are amazing!!
    And Last but not least the artists: Everyone did an amazing job. I saw some styles I directly recognize but a few I didn't know till now. But I love every single scene. Thank you for giving the whole story even more dynamic through such beautiful pictures.
    I can't really say how much I love the story already. I actually was nearly to cry when Redtail said he can't come anymore and Rusty followed him. He must felt so betrayed and sad and confused. Redtail said he can't be his son anymore. Saying he can't be with him anymore to protect his clan. And Rusty won't be able to understand that bond for now.... such a poor little kit. I suppose in the next part we will meet Graypaw then? I am curios who will be the narrator in the next Part because Redtail doesn't come to him anymore, maybe it will change to Rusty?
    I don't want to wait tbh XD But I have to :D Starclan please give me partient for this ^^ This was a bit long but hey! I guess thats fine ♥

  • @forest6522
    @forest6522 6 років тому

    Wow!! This is sooo good! I love how the changes you made stay true to the plot, even if some characters' places are different.

  • @GJisAwkward
    @GJisAwkward 5 років тому

    I watched this two or three times and I believe this should belong on Netflix or something! You guys did an amazing job on this episode and I’m just jumping around in my house waiting for the next one. I thank you very much for making this and it gives me a WHOLE new perspective of the Warriors series.

  • @UltimateAlphaFox96
    @UltimateAlphaFox96 6 років тому +67

    Redtail being Rusty's dad was an incredible idea, who would've thought it?
    A bit confused why you decided to have Yellowfang take Spottedleaf's place... but I'm guessing you're planning something special for Spottedleaf, at least I hope so, since Firestar and Spottedleaf's relationship was never really touched on when they were alive.
    Developing that would be a great idea, and make Spottedleaf's death harder and really test the bond Sandstorm and Fireheart will have later on.

    • @MissNoraTW
      @MissNoraTW 6 років тому +15

      HEG The Alpha Fox
      Sorry but Spottedleaf was cut out from this fan-made adoption stageplay because she's useless and unneeded in the first series.

    • @UltimateAlphaFox96
      @UltimateAlphaFox96 6 років тому +6

      诺雅龙犬 huh, well ok.
      Kinda a bummer but i see your point.

    • @nickowen4131
      @nickowen4131 5 років тому +2

      I feel like if he takes a mate he'll take cinderpelt, but she'll be a warrior this time.

    • @xmn_flowerx9577
      @xmn_flowerx9577 5 років тому +2

      Spottedleaf is my least favorite character. I actually like Dovewing more than her

    • @zebrastream_clan1736
      @zebrastream_clan1736 6 місяців тому

      And is anyone forget that in the original, Firepaw loved Spottedleaf even he's a child? I only see Firepaw as a brother to Spottedleafm

  • @Crittercat2005AJ
    @Crittercat2005AJ 6 років тому +7

    Aww, this is really cute! I love the ending where Rusty is pleading Redtail not to leave him

  • @charlottem9422
    @charlottem9422 4 роки тому +1

    I love how different this is from the books!! It bend the timelines in a unique way that makes sense!! I love it ❤️

  • @Tatertottt
    @Tatertottt 5 років тому +3

    Okay, I absolutely adore this, first few minutes.

  • @trashcat9366
    @trashcat9366 6 років тому +12

    I was unsure of the changes at first...
    But then I saw that you replaced Spottedleaf with Yellowfang and I was instantly on board pfff

  • @shiro_3575
    @shiro_3575 6 років тому +12

    Oh man!!!! In the name of StarClan, I love this!!!!!!

  • @silvb
    @silvb 5 років тому +3

    I LOVE THIS TAKE ON THE WARRIORS SERIES!! SO AMAZING!

  • @CreativeCalamityy
    @CreativeCalamityy 6 років тому

    This is amazing! It’s like a hole new book but the same books at the same time. I love it! Aching to see the next part!

  • @veronicasawyer1321
    @veronicasawyer1321 6 років тому +9

    *sees this is finally out*
    *proceeds to make the loudest gasp in history of gasps*

  • @user-xk1cl5bw3y
    @user-xk1cl5bw3y 6 років тому +6

    This is absolutely fantastic! I like how you made Redtail Rusty's father so he's not a random kittypet that have a destiny but have a initial bond to the clans and actually have a reason to join them. I just can't wait for the next episode! It feels like the first time i read the first lines of words in Into the wild all over again. I can picture the day in the summer when i first opened Into the wild to reed the first book of the fantastic story of Warrior cats. The deaths are going to be so heart breaking. Plus the end gives me goose bumps!
    I'm also very excited to se Bluestar's character design in the sun!
    Bluestar is one of my favorite cats and that's why .)
    Sorry for bad English.

  • @Theshenanigan
    @Theshenanigan 6 років тому +22

    I'm only confused about Yellowfang instead of Spottedleaf.

    • @rockybreeze4778
      @rockybreeze4778 6 років тому +11

      they probably cut spottedleaf since she wasnt that important to the plot

    • @starkoyaa
      @starkoyaa 4 роки тому +3

      I also feel like they maybe should’ve at least mentioned her?

  • @malzeno1202
    @malzeno1202 6 років тому

    This is a gorgeous twist to the story! It doesn’t change as much as the original that we know and love, but it still gives a kick that makes it AWESOME.

  • @fabtasticdomino8137
    @fabtasticdomino8137 6 років тому +6

    WOAH dude this is amazing!!! Everyone did a great job!!!! The changes that where made where amazing and well choosen! Just as good as books!!!! I can not express how amazing this is ;×;

  • @roamingfantasy
    @roamingfantasy 6 років тому +3

    Ok this plot with Redtail being the father of Rusty should be canon

  • @bobcatcubs
    @bobcatcubs 4 роки тому +1

    I'm finding this a bit late, but it's so good!!!! The art is gorgeous and the voice acting is stellar! I love love love the adaptations and changes!

  • @mange2696
    @mange2696 5 років тому +6

    Im so ready for the next part

  • @BumbleTus
    @BumbleTus 6 років тому +10

    This is so cool! I love the changes you made and I'm really excited to see where the project goes! Also amaaazing art and voice acting gosh dang everyone A+

  • @alyssa915
    @alyssa915 6 років тому +3

    Wow this is AMAZING!!! I love how you put a twist on things, such as Redtail being Rusty’s father and Yellowfang being the Medicine cat!! This is brilliant! ^^

  • @ellec.3081
    @ellec.3081 6 років тому

    Omg!! This is amazing!! The voice acting is amazing and so is the artwork!! 💕💕

  • @sporekitty2114
    @sporekitty2114 6 років тому

    I HAVE BEEN SPOOKED THIS IS CHILLING YET AMAZING

  • @WillowHeartz
    @WillowHeartz 6 років тому +4

    Great job on this I actually enjoyed it! It did shock me a lot of character changes but really its a nice touch to it! Can't WAIT to see how the clan reacts to Redtail being Rusty's father

  • @goldstar9587
    @goldstar9587 6 років тому +7

    I saw the notification, messaged all my friends then raced over here.

  • @gus_bustr7599
    @gus_bustr7599 5 років тому

    I love how everything fits so perfectly together...
    Absolutely love this!

  • @JurassicPancake
    @JurassicPancake 6 років тому +12

    I'm about four minutes in and so far Redtail is training Rusty for I don't really know, and Yellowfang is already the medicine cat?
    > *W* *H* *E* *E* *Z* *E* *S* ITS SO GOOD-
    EDIT: REDTAIL IS RUSTY'S FATHER OH BOY THATS SOME SPICY MEATBALL RIGHT THERE-A