How to Hook a Reader with Your Screenplay - The First 10 Pages Explained

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  • @StudioBinder
    @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому +21

    Chapters:
    00:00 - Introduction to Starting your Screenplay
    00:31 - The Importance of the First 10 Pages Explained
    01:19 - Tone
    03:52 - Character
    06:42 - Setting
    08:50 - Theme
    11:39 - Stakes
    13:45 - Deep Dive: Sideways
    17:56 - Takeaways

  • @joaquinhernandez6940
    @joaquinhernandez6940 2 місяці тому +131

    Congratulations on making it to 500 videos StudioBinder!

  • @elormmichaels5602
    @elormmichaels5602 2 місяці тому +38

    I learn a lot from u guys to shoot all my movies , from storyboard till the entire movie is out . THANKS

  • @rayancedrichaddad1197
    @rayancedrichaddad1197 2 місяці тому +30

    A Complete Audiovisual encyclopedia about the Art of Screenwriting. Like for the Art of an Opening Scene, to Hook the Audiences, Everything should happen in the First 10 Pages. Thousand Thanks StudioBinder for this Inspiring video.💯💯💯

  • @amiiae
    @amiiae 2 місяці тому +20

    Again, thank you so much for these helpful videos. As a young teenager that dreams to become an actor or a director, these videos could never be more helpful. Thank you so much, please continue to make these videos!

  • @bubediscuss
    @bubediscuss 2 місяці тому +16

    Sideways is one of the funniest films ever put to screen. Paul Giamatti's Merlot meldowns are to be preserved forever.

  • @AScreenwritersJourney
    @AScreenwritersJourney 2 місяці тому +8

    Thank you for including Sorry To Bother You - more people need to hear about this gem!

  • @jessebbedwell
    @jessebbedwell 2 місяці тому +10

    This is why independently financed films are going to be so important. Over 100 years of cinema and we still have barely even begun to scratch the surface of its potential.

  • @y_fam_goeglyd
    @y_fam_goeglyd 2 місяці тому +7

    Thank you! You help so much with my writing. I've learned more from you than my final year creative writing course at uni. Seeing what you mean really helps me to take things in, and I am not even writing for the screen!

  • @DudeSerious-ng8ii
    @DudeSerious-ng8ii 2 місяці тому +318

    Any aspiring indian filmmakers here😊

  • @estherlynnie
    @estherlynnie 2 місяці тому

    Studio binder is the best! Thank you for all the information you've shared.

  • @RomaFlix
    @RomaFlix 2 місяці тому +4

    This video is that exactly that i needed today, thanks studiobinder ❤

  • @shiteshkumartiwari4554
    @shiteshkumartiwari4554 2 місяці тому +11

    I'm watching all your videos for a long time. Lots of love from Nepal

  • @Lis-ard
    @Lis-ard 2 місяці тому +4

    I was hoping to see a video like this from you guys! Great work as always

  • @metafuel
    @metafuel 2 місяці тому +4

    Superb work as always.
    I love your content.
    One of my favourite movies is Snatch.
    Everything done brilliantly in the first ten pages by Mr. Ritchie.

  • @BMWGRANDUZ
    @BMWGRANDUZ 2 місяці тому +3

    I love this channel I'm learning so much film making stuff please don't stop upload video such a good channel keep going guys.

  • @EirikBull
    @EirikBull Місяць тому

    Loved this. Writing a screenplay now and I was unsure about the opening scene. This video got me thinking about it differently. :)
    Also, very good to see American Fiction in this video. It was one of my absolute favorite films last year.

  • @sbinningpictures
    @sbinningpictures 23 дні тому

    I just finished my first movie as director . I learned a lot from studio binder . I will do mention you when I will get my oscars . Thanks 🙏🏻

  • @vicentecampos2893
    @vicentecampos2893 2 місяці тому

    Another great lesson.Thx.

  • @Puppetsinmyhead
    @Puppetsinmyhead 2 місяці тому +4

    Donna axed me as she coming out the house😂. Definitely need to see this movie!

  • @freddyjosereginomontalvo4667
    @freddyjosereginomontalvo4667 2 місяці тому +3

    I love start my weeks with your videos
    🌍🌟

  • @MwayiComfort
    @MwayiComfort 2 місяці тому +6

    Wow my weekly class ❤

  • @Leprutz
    @Leprutz 2 місяці тому +1

    I love From dusk till dawn. It subverts any expectations. The tone, the Stakes, as well as the characters and it's set up change drastically from the middle of the movie, changing it into a completely new genre as well. Great film.

  • @raulpierri
    @raulpierri 2 місяці тому +3

    Excellent, as always.

  • @46s-FilmMaking
    @46s-FilmMaking 2 місяці тому +3

    The first 10 pages can truly make or break a screenplay's chances 🎬

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому

      First impressions are critical!

  • @danielbarrero2815
    @danielbarrero2815 2 місяці тому +3

    Thank you for your videos!

  • @akibtafhim
    @akibtafhim 2 місяці тому +4

    Addiction to Studiobinder? "I'm lovin' it!"

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому +1

      Addiction to that filmmaking life 😮‍💨

  • @rutaiwanwongsirasawad4040
    @rutaiwanwongsirasawad4040 2 місяці тому +1

    Love this. Thank you.

  • @rowdy1212
    @rowdy1212 2 місяці тому +4

    Sir thank you for this helpful video.. please make a video on most difficult act 2 part. 'how to write engaging act 2 '

  • @brycecombs2868
    @brycecombs2868 2 місяці тому +2

    Without a doubt, SW A New Hope has the best opening that I can recall, which is not over the top or promises more than the film delivers.🥰

  • @arnavdurani9962
    @arnavdurani9962 2 місяці тому +2

    loved this

  • @spinsandneedles
    @spinsandneedles 2 місяці тому +1

    The examples you've shown were as exciting on paper as on film. A few others: Apocalypse Now, Inglourious Basterds, Dunkirk, The Witch, Donnie Brasco, Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan, Raiders of the Lost Ark, Silverado, Coraline, Henry V, The French Connection, Rocky III, The Killer, Battle: Los Angeles, Grand Prix title sequence, and of course most James Bond pre-title sequences.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому +1

      Great examples!

    • @spinsandneedles
      @spinsandneedles 2 місяці тому

      @@StudioBinder Thanks. Again those scripts were wonderful that you've shown. I don't know how many pages went into the opening of Once Upon A Time In The West, but there was an opening which certainly hooked viewers in with the various characters, sights, and sounds.

  • @SuuSinator
    @SuuSinator 2 місяці тому +3

    Thanks for your videos (and software)!
    I think "Lawrence of Arabia" definitly has one of the best opening pages.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому +1

      One of the best for a reason 👌

  • @AdityaSingh-sg7gp
    @AdityaSingh-sg7gp 2 місяці тому +3

    Very Nice Video Sir ❤

  • @veera222
    @veera222 2 місяці тому

    Again Thank You 🤝

  • @mcZoehh
    @mcZoehh 2 місяці тому

    great video mates

  • @TheJordanLeopold
    @TheJordanLeopold Місяць тому

    Aye, shout out to Power Rangers the Movie at the end. The sky diving scene is burned into my brain since as a kid as being one of the most fun intros to an action movie lol I appreciate the deep cut references in your videos

  • @Eraserhead1995
    @Eraserhead1995 Місяць тому

    Thanks ❤

  • @tylerwhorff7143
    @tylerwhorff7143 2 місяці тому +1

    Nice video essay 🤝

  • @tnxmelater
    @tnxmelater 2 місяці тому +1

    thank you🎉

  • @themillenial28
    @themillenial28 2 місяці тому

    Can you guys make a separate video series on how to review or analyze movies?

  • @thedoctor2871
    @thedoctor2871 2 місяці тому +2

    This is always the hardest part when I write my scripts.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому

      At least you can get it over with first haha

    • @LeeLoate
      @LeeLoate 7 днів тому

      Same here. Scriptwriting is so stressful

  • @DavidBeaumont
    @DavidBeaumont 2 місяці тому +3

    I'd have loved to see more examples of films where the first 10 pages were known to have helped make the difference between it getting picked up or not. I doubt anyone would have stopped reading a script by Monty Python, at the height of their fame, if the first 10 pages didn't wow them. Same for a Disney film where the script was likely written at the direct request of the studio. Were any of the examples breakthrough projects for young screen writers for example?

  • @okbakhenfer3238
    @okbakhenfer3238 2 місяці тому +2

    for a great script, there must be a great introduction.

  • @DidYouGetSniped
    @DidYouGetSniped 2 місяці тому +2

    This will definitely help me write my latest script! Nice Work.

  • @PhantomFilmAustralia
    @PhantomFilmAustralia 2 місяці тому +1

    From a technical standpoint, the film, *"In Bruges"* is a perfect movie. There is not one scene which doesn't propel either story or character development. The writing is sublime, the cinematography is stunning, the acting is pitch perfect. It is the perfect example in showing how something small and seemingly innocuous may seem inconsequential, can have vital importance in a later scene. "Cause and Effect." (SPOILER) For example, when Ken is at a booth paying the entry fee to access the tower, he empties his pockets of small change to be rid of his coins. He comes up short 10 cents only having €4.90 when entry is 5 Euros. The attendant sternly refuses entry to Ken several times regardless that it's only a 10 cent discrepancy. Ken's haggling with the attendant is futile, and is forced to break a fifty. At face value, we could chalk this up as just a small, light-hearted and humourous scene, as not another thought is given to the incident, that is...until the end. Ken, again at the top of the tower, bleeding from a gunshot wound, must warn his friend, Ray that his life is in danger; though Ray is at a cafe in the courtyard at the bottom of the tower. The threat is their former boss who after shooting Ken, is on his way down the tower to kill Ray. Ken knowing he can not walk down the flights of stairs in time to protect his friend he decides to jump from the tower-his suicide alerting Ray to the impending threat. Looking over the balcony, Ken is unable to see below due to a thick fog blanketing the courtyard. Not wanting a pedestrian below to be injured or foil his suicide, Ken pulls a fistful of coins from his pocket, and drops them over the balcony. The tinkling sound of the coins hitting the cobblestones below alerts the pedestrians below to steer clear. Then Ken jumps. Had Ken have been granted entry to the tower the first time, then he would not have had the coins in his pocket which eventually contributed in saving Ray's life. Cause and Effect. The "dum-dum" bullets are another example of how something that seems so frivolous can later be of such consequential magnitude.
    In Bruges is a perfect movie to study and to use as a blueprint for writing drama.

  • @mainstay.
    @mainstay. 2 місяці тому +3

    So am I correct in thinking 'the first 10 pages' of a script corresponds to the first 10 minutes of a movie/show?

  • @smcdonough1427
    @smcdonough1427 Місяць тому

    Man, Sound of Metal is so good

  • @sulmanmuneer8642
    @sulmanmuneer8642 2 місяці тому +1

    From Pakistan 🇵🇰:- Your channel and theory is too Good 😇

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому

      Appreciate it :)

    • @sulmanmuneer8642
      @sulmanmuneer8642 2 місяці тому

      @@StudioBinder From Pakistan 🇵🇰:- I've been watching your channel

  • @GlenCollinsOfficial
    @GlenCollinsOfficial 2 місяці тому +2

    First!
    Please analyse director Jonathan Glazer. Especially his work on ‘Under the Skin’ & ‘the Zone of Interest’.

  • @bollywoodfightactionreacti9189
    @bollywoodfightactionreacti9189 2 місяці тому +1

    Nice ❤

  • @user-en9uv8jj7p
    @user-en9uv8jj7p Місяць тому

    I like the the intros (first 10 pages) of Kung Fu panda but particularly Kung Fu panda 2.

  • @kirillbach6298
    @kirillbach6298 2 місяці тому +1

    Thanks

  • @clausvergara9702
    @clausvergara9702 2 місяці тому +1

    Maybe I cheating a bit, but the screenplays that I personally read is Casablanca, Butch Cassidy and Sundance Kid and The Banshee Of Inshierin has the hook in the first ten pages.

  • @iamPrinceK
    @iamPrinceK 2 місяці тому +2

    Thanks Studio Binder for this informative video 🫡👏🌟

  • @WhiteNight_255
    @WhiteNight_255 2 місяці тому +1

    you are BACK, so am I

  • @itstonycia
    @itstonycia Місяць тому

    I struggle so much with writing in general. I get in my head thinking I’m not good and that prevents me from even trying at times. Imposter syndrome, lack of confidence, lack of practice..a lot of things. But I do have stories, I have ideas…but they need a place in a script.

  • @abdullahqureshi2337
    @abdullahqureshi2337 Місяць тому

    Thank you @studiobinder ❤❤❤

  • @sajalrai7957
    @sajalrai7957 2 місяці тому

    @studiobinder Can you please update the links for cheat sheets of the shot list series, it'll be really helpful for all of us...

  • @dameanvil
    @dameanvil 2 місяці тому +1

    00:00 🚀 Introduction: Writers grab attention with thrilling action, complex characters, and gripping plots in the first 10 pages.
    0:32 📜 Importance of First 10 Pages: First 10 pages are crucial as they establish key story elements like tone, characters, setting, theme, and stakes.
    1:20 🎭 Tone: Opening pages set the tone and genre of the film, priming the audience for what's to come.
    3:52 🧑‍🤝‍🧑 Character: First 10 pages introduce primary characters, showcasing their essential qualities and motivations.
    6:43 🏞 Setting: Setting is established early to give readers a sense of time and place, influencing the narrative.
    8:50 🎭 Theme: First 10 pages often hint at the larger ideas and themes the movie will explore.
    11:40 ⚖ Stakes: Stakes are introduced to answer the question: Why does any of this matter?
    13:46 🔍 Deep Dive - "Sideways": Examines how the opening pages of the script establish characters, setting, tone, themes, and stakes.
    17:57 💡 Takeaways: First 10 pages are crucial for establishing key story elements and getting the audience on board for the rest of the film.

  • @michaelmkd8968
    @michaelmkd8968 2 місяці тому +1

    Hi StudioBinder! How much screentime does 10 pages mean? Is it an average of like 15 minutes or a percentage relative to any story length?

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому +2

      Would be about 10 minutes. Scripts work at 1 page a minute

    • @michaelmkd8968
      @michaelmkd8968 2 місяці тому

      @@StudioBinder ok thank you very much! I suppose the inciting incident is not usually included in those first minutes

  • @tylerbailey4279
    @tylerbailey4279 2 місяці тому +2

    Best ways to pitch a script

  • @eusoumelo
    @eusoumelo 2 місяці тому +1

    Could you, please, make one of these great videos on fabula and syuzhet?

  • @johanninoaballe1297
    @johanninoaballe1297 2 місяці тому

    any video for how to become a production designer

  • @KillinItWithFire
    @KillinItWithFire 2 місяці тому

    @studiobinder Do you have a video that resembles Denis Velleneuve recent comments about letting the visuals tell the story, rather than dialogue heavy conversations/exposition?

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому +1

      Not exactly instead of dialogue, but all of our cinematography/editing videos is about visual storytelling

  • @jimwashere112
    @jimwashere112 Місяць тому

    Cars has one of the best openings, in my opinion

  • @Chill_Mode_JD
    @Chill_Mode_JD 2 місяці тому +1

    Welcome to class 🎥🎓💯

  • @vfxyemen00
    @vfxyemen00 Місяць тому

    My favorite hook-me up movie from the start is Enemy at the gate

  • @TonaA.R.
    @TonaA.R. 23 дні тому

    Blade Runner Opening scene is wonderful

  • @brain_respect_and_freedom
    @brain_respect_and_freedom 2 місяці тому +1

    Sometimes people don't follow this rule and we watched movies like for example "Elizabethtown" /2005/ or maybe SNOOZETOWN: "It’s fitting that the very first line of Elizabethtown, delivered by Orlando Bloom in voice over, is a line about collosal failure. The actual line is “As somebody once said, there’s a difference between a failure, and a fiasco.”

  • @Croydon97
    @Croydon97 2 місяці тому

    Am 19 years old and there is this film am working on that's giving me headache but after watching this i know things will be better

  • @volant3
    @volant3 2 місяці тому +1

    Could you share the aspecto ratio of this video?

  • @SuryayanChakraborty-do9sn
    @SuryayanChakraborty-do9sn 2 місяці тому +4

    can you guys make one more dedicated video on how to direct actors please?

    • @Kimandrea234
      @Kimandrea234 2 місяці тому +2

      They have videos about how big directors direct their actors

    • @story4films96
      @story4films96 2 місяці тому +1

      Getting more deeper in how to direct non-actors/first time actors and how to avoid end result notes

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому

      What about it would you like covered?

    • @SuryayanChakraborty-do9sn
      @SuryayanChakraborty-do9sn 2 місяці тому

      @@StudioBinder actually I m gonna make a debut film so I am a amateur myself and looking for how to teach acting to beginner actors. Btw thanks for replying.

  • @FilmCritic933
    @FilmCritic933 27 днів тому

    Please do an explanation video on Lola Run Lola

  • @juandediosreyes8526
    @juandediosreyes8526 2 місяці тому

    Hello. I present the hero and the villain of my story in the first page, but over time the story reveals that the character that seemed to be the hero is the villain and the character that seemed to be the villain is the hero. Shoud I reveal this slow burn realization in the log line? Thank you!

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому +1

      Big twists don't need to be mentioned in a logline

    • @juandediosreyes8526
      @juandediosreyes8526 2 місяці тому

      @@StudioBinder Thank you for your answer!!!!!

  • @georgeofhamilton
    @georgeofhamilton 2 місяці тому

    It would’ve been nice to get more examples of scene description, aside from dialogue.

  • @fatimagray4604
    @fatimagray4604 2 місяці тому

    Tennessee filmmaker in the house

  • @marcusmezzano
    @marcusmezzano 2 місяці тому +1

    I feel bad for studiobinder because this narrators voice is the only one I want to hear on a studiobinder video 😬😬

  • @stephenwilliams3807
    @stephenwilliams3807 2 місяці тому +1

    Scorsese - Goodfellas and The Irishman, Goodfellas in particular

  • @user-wj2gc6he4t
    @user-wj2gc6he4t 2 місяці тому +1

    can you please analysis good screenplay films in 2023

  • @General_reader
    @General_reader 2 місяці тому +1

    Where do people purchase screenplay/scripts!?!?!?

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому

      Studios usually get them from agents or commission them

  • @NucleusMediaMalayalam
    @NucleusMediaMalayalam 2 місяці тому +1

    Sir please add the subtitle

  • @user-vx7cg3ol7b
    @user-vx7cg3ol7b 2 місяці тому

    Please make a video about Damien Chazelle on Director's playbook....

  • @LongShotfilmz
    @LongShotfilmz 2 місяці тому

    Aspiring Ugandan Filmmaker

  • @soumyadeepmajumdar8776
    @soumyadeepmajumdar8776 2 місяці тому

    make a video on past lives

  • @SaifAfridi0336
    @SaifAfridi0336 2 місяці тому +1

  • @garnalmaani
    @garnalmaani 2 місяці тому +1

    500 films 🎉

  • @user-su4qh7nx3r
    @user-su4qh7nx3r 2 місяці тому +1

    make one about how to write super hero movies

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому

      we did! ua-cam.com/video/zjZ5z8I7lWU/v-deo.html

  • @PatrickMastersProductions
    @PatrickMastersProductions 2 місяці тому

    I think Boogie Nights had the best opening 10 pages.

  • @adibshirazi
    @adibshirazi 2 місяці тому +1

    👌👌

  • @raisingelephant
    @raisingelephant 2 місяці тому +1

    ❤️👏

  • @cainazzo1
    @cainazzo1 2 місяці тому +1

    Deep red by Dario Argento

  • @Dreddwinner
    @Dreddwinner 2 місяці тому +1

    ⚠️

  • @RobinJDt67
    @RobinJDt67 2 місяці тому

    Lokesh kanagaraj here🙋‍♂️

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому

      Welcome!

    • @RobinJDt67
      @RobinJDt67 2 місяці тому

      @@StudioBinder just for fun... But I like your videos, I feel like I'm studying in a filming school... Thank you...

  • @yahiyakhan01
    @yahiyakhan01 2 місяці тому

    Do something abut Indian filmmaking.that’s gonna be a great opportunity for indian film makers.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  2 місяці тому

      What about Indian filmmaking would you like covered?

    • @yahiyakhan01
      @yahiyakhan01 2 місяці тому

      @@StudioBinder i am a filmmaker,in indian filmmaking what is the reason people watch our movies and appreciate all over the world.

  • @user-og4hl7ku7f
    @user-og4hl7ku7f Місяць тому

    Servant.. scene where he picks up the baby and the babys head hits the bed.

  • @TinLeadHammer
    @TinLeadHammer Місяць тому

    Please, re-do the thumbnail using a different typeface: reads like "First IO pages", which did not make sense to me for about five seconds :)

  • @mrvincefox
    @mrvincefox 2 місяці тому +2

    First 2 minutes of this video gripped me into clickbait

  • @yonos007
    @yonos007 2 місяці тому

    Was that American Fiction or a Dunkin commercial?

  • @user-wj2gc6he4t
    @user-wj2gc6he4t 2 місяці тому

    side ways 2004