Dean is prob the most badass gas station attendant in the history of mankind. Challenges a skin walker to save a man and out classes a police officer in police stuff
Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" wouall's stories get more better every day Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" stories get more better every day Me I am from Arkansaws Boone County small town 45 People Everton Arkansas, we had a Booger Man Monster 60 Years ago lived in Hog Creek underground Cave next to our Farm, the Taney Farm it stole childrens fom Skool House {This was 1958 } noe theys all White Supremist's living there the Skinwalker morphed into White Supremasch Terrorist's
Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" stories get more better every day Me I am from Arkansaws Boon County small town 45 People Everton Arkansas, we had a Booger Man Monster 60 Years ago lived in Hog Creek underground Cave next to our Farm, the Taney Farm I was 8 years old......John Lotspech
I loved this and didn't want it to end. I loved the sarcasm and humor that was thrown in at the best times. Definitely one of my favorite narrator's on here 💯
Wow. Came up on autoplay after one of your more recent stories. Either your voice dropped several octaves or you're really good at making your voice deeper. Great narration even 3 years ago. Keep up the good work, brother!
This has been one of the best stories I've heard . I an so well told ,that anger the confusion the almost insanity in the way it's told that holds a sense of realism .. dude you fucken did an amazing job narrating this tale .. fuckin bravo . This goes on my favorites list . . I love monster stories an the way you convey the emotions is a work of art .please don't stop doing what you do .
Hello Vivith. This is an epic story. You are an amazing narrator. The pairing of the two of you, to me, is career-changing. I was hanging on the edge of each word, not able to predict what will happen next. All I can say is that I am glad that I was not doing anything urgent or of any importance; as I am paralyzed by your talent. You are truly underrated and over-talented for such a platform.
Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" stories get more better every day Me I am from Arkansaws Boon County small town 45 People Everton Arkansas, we had a Booger Man Monster 60 Years ago lived in Hog Creek underground Cave next to our Farm, the Taney Farm
Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" stories get more better every day Me I am from Arkansaws Boon County small town 45 People Everton Arkansas, we had a Booger Man Monster 60 Years ago lived in Hog Creek underground Cave next to our Farm, the Taney Farm I was 8 years old......John Lotspech Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" stories get more better every day Me I am from Arkansaws Boon County small town 45 People Everton Arkansas, we had a Booger Man Monster 60 Years ago lived in Hog Creek underground Cave next to our Farm, the Taney Farm
@@edwardlouisbernays2469 Thank you sir for bringing a tear to my eye, I needed that. I love everything about what you just said so much I think I’d like to have a beer with you in Arkansaw
Okay, there is much to be said about the story. Please, if you are the writer, take no offence at these criticisms, as I try to be helpful. There is a great plot to be written and it does have the elements of a truly great story. But there are many things missing. The plot goes at a neck breaking speed, with characters that could be fleshed out more. The main protagonist and the wife have this weird ass relationship and start fighting out of nowhere (at least, out of nowhere to the audience). From our perspective, they barely even know each-other, as the most important years to develop their relationship had played out "off screan." The fact that a gas station clerk could have killed a mythical monster is quite a stretch, but it can happen for sure. But it happened way too quickly, with not enough struggle. The fact that he mutilited the creature was quite insane, but sure, that can happen too. Maybe if he noticed that it wasn't dead yet or something, therefore he had to be more thorough, it could have worked. Also, there was no stated reason for him to be so reckless and risk his life. We barely knew the woman, and had no idea about their prior relationship, so from our perspective, he's risking it all for some random dude and a random cop. The fact that we barely know them makes it also really hard to feel anything toward these characters, let alone consern for their well-beings or excitement for their victories. Action scenes like this only really work when we connect to the people they happen to. The most exposition and character motive we get at the beginning is for the random native american guy, who gets killed off nearly instantly. The main character also seems quite unlikable. With negative characteristics out the wazoo, like being condecending, rude and having anger issues. Sure, these factors alone don't make people fully unlikable, but these characteristics can only work whith someone who has at least the same amount of positive ones, or a good reason to be that way. Also, the random cops in the office come off as random NPCs, they don't even have any back-story or any motivations. They aren't even two dimensional, they lack dimensions entirely. And an explanation on how the protagonist had become "leader of his pack" is also quite important, but lacks entirely. Overall, there are things happening out of left field with so much missing information. Write the story with this version as being your rough draft. Have everything fleshed out more, write bridges to the missing time, do more world- and character-building and it will be an awesome story. However. This in itself, was super fun. And I liked it. That's why I took the time of writing this long ass comment. I want to hear more, I want to know more of your story. Keep it up.
Cool story but it's weird like the second part of a previous story. The constant use of "Oj" and "Jenny" had me confused in the beggining as I thought there was two officers
Spoiler: Very well narrated, but that ending was very disappointing. I think the narrator just started winging it by part 6. My main issue is, why couldn't the witch just explain that the skinwalker, in the beginning, was her son and explain the sacrifice that was needed to revive him while he was tied up to a stump. I kept hearing, "you don't know the truth" too many times. B!tch, just explain! The last problem I had was with how illogical Dean became at the end. When the witch basically said, "you killed humans", Dean could have said, "without free will, these are no humans." The story made no damn sense after part 5. Also, i feel like the conflict between Dean and Jenny should have been resolved.
As an indigenous person, I'm so sick of these stories. It's not the writing, I haven't listened to it and I won't, so I'm not going to shame the writing, that's rude. But, this is something terrifying and in its own way, sacred in the fact that we don't talk about it, and with good reason. But yet, (again, not whoever wrote this) we have misinformation being spread like wildfire leading people do actually do dumb things, wrong lore, and mostly disgusting portrayals. Can't people for knce just leave us alone and stop butchering cultures? Is it THAT hard to be respectful? We're being killed at the highest rate (not that the news will tell you that) and right towards actual extinction, but sure. Keep taking. It's what people seem intent on doing until we're gone like the already hundreds of lost tribes that have been wiped out. 😑
Next week... The skin of the foreskinwalker
😆
Horrifying!!!
It was so small and… flappy.
Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" wou'r stories get better every day
This voice is different, the usual voice is lower and more menacing
He is a great narrator. He even makes poorly written stories come to life and gives them some sense.
Bro the way you read these stories is fucking perfect and hilarious 😂 please don't stop
The author needs to spend some time around real people nobody acts like that
I cosign this statement. This has very...soap opera vibes
@@CelesteTheeDragonLady word
Dean is prob the most badass gas station attendant in the history of mankind. Challenges a skin walker to save a man and out classes a police officer in police stuff
If all gas station attendants were as hardcore as Dean, we'd no longer need cops or soldiers haha!
I love Skinwalkers stories! Thanks. Almost on 10K! You deserve much more🧡
Skinwalker stories are my favorite ❤️. I pretty much listened to everyone worth listening to on UA-cam. You did an amazing job.
You deserve to be the biggest creepypasta youtuber! Between your voice and the way you tell stories, you are by FAR the best out there.
Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" wouall's stories get more better every day
Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" stories get more better every day
Me I am from Arkansaws Boone County small town 45 People Everton Arkansas, we had a Booger Man Monster 60 Years ago lived in Hog Creek underground Cave next to our Farm, the Taney Farm it stole childrens fom Skool House {This was 1958 } noe theys all White Supremist's living there the Skinwalker morphed into White Supremasch Terrorist's
Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" stories get more better every day
Me I am from Arkansaws Boon County small town 45 People Everton Arkansas, we had a Booger Man Monster 60 Years ago lived in Hog Creek underground Cave next to our Farm, the Taney Farm I was 8 years old......John Lotspech
Holy shite man.... to the writer thank you. An to you good sir for the wicked sick narration man.
👊💀🍻🇺🇲🍻🏴☠️🍻 WOO! Lol
"He ended up dying two days later..............that fucker" 🤣lmao crazy one
I loved this and didn't want it to end. I loved the sarcasm and humor that was thrown in at the best times. Definitely one of my favorite narrator's on here 💯
Good narration, But F up ending... evil entities portrayed as inocent peace craving beings..
26:17 Jenny must have two heads if she had several concussions, lol
I have to say I'm surprised that your subs are not much much higher
Wow. Came up on autoplay after one of your more recent stories. Either your voice dropped several octaves or you're really good at making your voice deeper. Great narration even 3 years ago. Keep up the good work, brother!
He just has a crazy vocal range. I also was wondering before I saw his live stream.
That ending had me shook
Oh man, this was such a good story! I love a good skinwalker tale.
This has been one of the best stories I've heard .
I an so well told ,that anger the confusion the almost insanity in the way it's told that holds a sense of realism .. dude you fucken did an amazing job narrating this tale .. fuckin bravo . This goes on my favorites list . . I love monster stories an the way you convey the emotions is a work of art .please don't stop doing what you do .
The story was well read and fantastic background ambience. Good work. I don’t like the cliffhanger though.
Fantastic as always, hope the love triangle has worked out.
Everytime all's I can say is wow. 👏👏👍👍 Amazing
That was absolutely awesome 😁👍
I look forward to your videos, easily one of my favourite narrator's
This got my attention right away. This was a great story!!!
I’m halfway through this and that gal has been knocked unconscious now at least five times…
Dean is a smart arse
That story was really really good! Most awesome narration 🥰🥰
Hello Vivith. This is an epic story. You are an amazing narrator. The pairing of the two of you, to me, is career-changing. I was hanging on the edge of each word, not able to predict what will happen next. All I can say is that I am glad that I was not doing anything urgent or of any importance; as I am paralyzed by your talent. You are truly underrated and over-talented for such a platform.
That’s very nice compliment you gave him☺️
What u mean by “careering changing” ?
Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" stories get more better every day
Me I am from Arkansaws Boon County small town 45 People Everton Arkansas, we had a Booger Man Monster 60 Years ago lived in Hog Creek underground Cave next to our Farm, the Taney Farm
Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" stories get more better every day
Me I am from Arkansaws Boon County small town 45 People Everton Arkansas, we had a Booger Man Monster 60 Years ago lived in Hog Creek underground Cave next to our Farm, the Taney Farm I was 8 years old......John Lotspech
Wow this is "Bad To The Bone" stories get more better every day
Me I am from Arkansaws Boon County small town 45 People Everton Arkansas, we had a Booger Man Monster 60 Years ago lived in Hog Creek underground Cave next to our Farm, the Taney Farm
@@edwardlouisbernays2469 Thank you sir for bringing a tear to my eye, I needed that. I love everything about what you just said so much I think I’d like to have a beer with you in Arkansaw
Great story! Very well read.
I fired and I missed. I fired again and I missed, I missed both times...
Omg! Awesome story! Can't wait until the nexted one.
Great story line, original, well written, 👏👌
What a great f'n story!! Awesome job!
This is beyond horror this is simply brilliant thank u
*waits patiently *
That’s so intense the whole time ! I really enjoyed this story!
Awesome story and wonderful narrator. 😎🤩
Phew!
That was certainly a winding story.
Viidith is awesome as always!
How can Jenny have virgin blood???
Made me think of tales from the gas station
This was wonderful Viidith! You really nailed it! Thank you for it! To the author and you, thank you for sharing this. Great Job!
Ty something
This video is so good.
Tell the author I love this intriguing story
Wow.... that was a stupid ending....
I love your narration’s there epic
That's one tuff story
So sad
That was dark, very dark.
GOOD SHIT BRO. NEXT TIME YOU COME ACROSS THE CITY OF TUCSON IN A STORY, PRONOUNCE IT AS "TOO SAUN". SALUTE HOMIE.
Good one, ry💝💝💝🌈🌈🌈
Season 16 of supernatural sounds awesome
Im not being a treehugger but he brought it on himself I truly HATE TROPHY HUNTERS
Sooo gooood!
Well done!
Wow!!!! Sooooo good
Eeeek!!!! I’m so excited.
Okay, there is much to be said about the story. Please, if you are the writer, take no offence at these criticisms, as I try to be helpful. There is a great plot to be written and it does have the elements of a truly great story. But there are many things missing.
The plot goes at a neck breaking speed, with characters that could be fleshed out more. The main protagonist and the wife have this weird ass relationship and start fighting out of nowhere (at least, out of nowhere to the audience). From our perspective, they barely even know each-other, as the most important years to develop their relationship had played out "off screan."
The fact that a gas station clerk could have killed a mythical monster is quite a stretch, but it can happen for sure. But it happened way too quickly, with not enough struggle. The fact that he mutilited the creature was quite insane, but sure, that can happen too. Maybe if he noticed that it wasn't dead yet or something, therefore he had to be more thorough, it could have worked. Also, there was no stated reason for him to be so reckless and risk his life. We barely knew the woman, and had no idea about their prior relationship, so from our perspective, he's risking it all for some random dude and a random cop. The fact that we barely know them makes it also really hard to feel anything toward these characters, let alone consern for their well-beings or excitement for their victories. Action scenes like this only really work when we connect to the people they happen to. The most exposition and character motive we get at the beginning is for the random native american guy, who gets killed off nearly instantly.
The main character also seems quite unlikable. With negative characteristics out the wazoo, like being condecending, rude and having anger issues. Sure, these factors alone don't make people fully unlikable, but these characteristics can only work whith someone who has at least the same amount of positive ones, or a good reason to be that way. Also, the random cops in the office come off as random NPCs, they don't even have any back-story or any motivations. They aren't even two dimensional, they lack dimensions entirely. And an explanation on how the protagonist had become "leader of his pack" is also quite important, but lacks entirely.
Overall, there are things happening out of left field with so much missing information. Write the story with this version as being your rough draft. Have everything fleshed out more, write bridges to the missing time, do more world- and character-building and it will be an awesome story.
However. This in itself, was super fun. And I liked it. That's why I took the time of writing this long ass comment. I want to hear more, I want to know more of your story. Keep it up.
It could have been better.... why does the bad guy always mostly prevail in the end... evil never wins... let's remember that....
Poor Jenny....only halfway through the story but even if she lives she is doomed to have CTE after the dozen or so times she been "knocked out"!
Cool story but it's weird like the second part of a previous story. The constant use of "Oj" and "Jenny" had me confused in the beggining as I thought there was two officers
Wow didn’t see that ending coming
Brilliant as always many thanks x
Great story! ☠️🤘☠️
Why they just didn't tell the police officers that they were the citizens
That was fantastic ❤❤❤❤
Damn it, Ronnie!
I was thinking the same thing
Jenny nocksout more times than krillin dies in dragon ball
I cannot listen to your story when I am alone it scares me 😁😁😁
Your narration is great. The story is pretty crap.
just amazing job this should be in movies
Was good, but end was predictable
Wow, i have not hward this [ne in a looong time
Commenting to feed the algorithm
Jenny gets knocked out a lot 😆
Owl bitch... lmao im dead
Spoiler:
Very well narrated, but that ending was very disappointing.
I think the narrator just started winging it by part 6. My main issue is, why couldn't the witch just explain that the skinwalker, in the beginning, was her son and explain the sacrifice that was needed to revive him while he was tied up to a stump. I kept hearing, "you don't know the truth" too many times. B!tch, just explain!
The last problem I had was with how illogical Dean became at the end. When the witch basically said, "you killed humans", Dean could have said, "without free will, these are no humans."
The story made no damn sense after part 5.
Also, i feel like the conflict between Dean and Jenny should have been resolved.
I was always hoping that he's grab that witch and pull them both into the fire. Just to end it fully.
Subtitles need screening!
Loooovvvveeeeed this story
love the eerie music
Boosting and shakeing it .. Woo hooo
Good one , a little skinny😉
That was so sad
Dammit i missed it
Is this from the tales from the gas station?
No, not at all. MrCreepyPasta does those
❤🫀❤️
Terrific story, too bad wording needs proof reading.
This seems written poorly
As an indigenous person, I'm so sick of these stories. It's not the writing, I haven't listened to it and I won't, so I'm not going to shame the writing, that's rude. But, this is something terrifying and in its own way, sacred in the fact that we don't talk about it, and with good reason. But yet, (again, not whoever wrote this) we have misinformation being spread like wildfire leading people do actually do dumb things, wrong lore, and mostly disgusting portrayals. Can't people for knce just leave us alone and stop butchering cultures? Is it THAT hard to be respectful? We're being killed at the highest rate (not that the news will tell you that) and right towards actual extinction, but sure. Keep taking. It's what people seem intent on doing until we're gone like the already hundreds of lost tribes that have been wiped out. 😑
This is dayum good
I’ve never gotten a chance to listen to you live!! So happy 🙂
Lmao.. Too-saion?? Is that how he pronounces Tucson, AZ?