Interesting tale. Wish there was more to it. Would like to have followed the path of this story to find out what the enemy is indeed up to and where the nodes lead to.
"I am Susan Ivanova, Commander. Daughter of Andre and Sophie Ivanov. I am the right hand of vengeance and the boot that is going to kick your sorry ass all the way back to Earth, sweetheart! I am death incarnate, and the last living thing that you will ever see."
D*** good start for a story that hasn't broken. Open the thesaurus to pull out every conceivable synonym for invincible. Thanks muchly for your typical outstanding narration!
Reminds me of when I was playing FFXI as a DPS and could predict when mobs were going to use an 'instant' skill, then bash them out of it. I got accused of using bots almost as often as when I was playing Diablo II hard-core!
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Interesting tale. Wish there was more to it. Would like to have followed the path of this story to find out what the enemy is indeed up to and where the nodes lead to.
let's keep our fingers crossed for sequels
Certainly, the writing style was pretty darn great too!
I agree, lets hope for more.
I'm hooked! Now I'm wanting to follow down the wormhole!
"Were it so easy" - The Arbiter
I came down to the comments to see if anyone else had made this comment XD
The sheer amount of old-friend BS between them....HAHAHAHAHAA!
Alright, that's not enough. I gotta hear how this ends.
For The Agro-rythm!
Not gonna lie. The beginning phrase reminded me of an episode of Babylon 5. Comes The Inquisitor.
"I am Susan Ivanova, Commander. Daughter of Andre and Sophie Ivanov. I am the right hand of vengeance and the boot that is going to kick your sorry ass all the way back to Earth, sweetheart! I am death incarnate, and the last living thing that you will ever see."
You did a great job with the narration on this one, Agro. Always appreciate your take on my stories. :D
Definitely a good part 1 of something bigger. Hope we get to see the rest.
Yeah, gonna need more of this one.
That's a corker, told with exactly the right energy.. I'll have to see what else the author has done. Many thanks!
I'd watch the hell out of this movie.
now I wanna get a picture of those bowls...
This simply amazing 😻
Love the pilot episode I hope the whole series comes out.
Hope this becomes a series!
Love your work and your voice ❤
Great start for a book
Great story; Excellent narration! Love the banter between the two. I hope there are some sequels.
Good to see your content popping back up. Missed you.
D*** good start for a story that hasn't broken. Open the thesaurus to pull out every conceivable synonym for invincible.
Thanks muchly for your typical outstanding narration!
Reminds me of when I was playing FFXI as a DPS and could predict when mobs were going to use an 'instant' skill, then bash them out of it. I got accused of using bots almost as often as when I was playing Diablo II hard-core!
Wonderfully told thank you ASN. UKUK
Bravo Sir Encore!
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I sure hope this series teaser takes off with you narrating. I really want to hear it.
There better be additional parts coming soon.
Ohhh..this is gonna be FUN 🤩
First like... Second comment for the YT nubs.... For the Squirrel
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They prefer daemon
Has potential
A like and a coment for support for the hero writer and the awesome voice!
For DA SKWERL and his Nest
Very nice! So when does chapter two of this novel drop?
Perfect teaser😂
welp waiting for part two
interesting story and thanks for the narration
Love this one,but............. HATE being left hanging :P
Hoping for more
Love your vids
Greetings, Mentlegent!
For the Rhyhtm that is Algo
A good start
Another great read by the Squirrel.
I'd like to see his second retirement and better bowls.
For the Algorithm, for the Author(s), for the Holographic Voice!
Dang. Author needs to run with this story.
Hoping this is not a one shot.
Would love to hear the rest of it.
I need the follow up to this!
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No such thing as a fair fight. There are fights you win and fights you lose, nothing about fairness.
Hope you keeping cool. Those jackets are warm, and today is not cool.
Now if breaking warp nodes is as easy as breaking poorly made bowls, the war is won.
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Is there a second part?
Second part my ass, we need a whole novel for this one!
Bowling for a hole in one?
Is this a prequel to another story?
no! where's the rest? is it available?
Not as far as I am aware of
Where are next 6 chapters
Not seeing you stuff man.
Keep seeing computer read crap.
Am unhappy.
3rd, 7 June 2024
So what??