I find this a listenable story, which is saying something compared to previously listened stories. I’m still annoyed that the on-screen text has a lot of mistakes. Still, getting better, with a story that makes sense and actually goes somewhere.
Love the HFY themed stories, but I would love them to be a little realistic, first battle and they lose badly, a little less hubris and instead of saying “We’ve overcome so much more than you know, we can overcome anything.” Why not an honest “Don’t know, we may fail, but [continue we hate bullies lines…].” This is like a 100 pound rich kid boasting he can beat a 6’ 6” 245 pound martial arts expert.
Can not be acieved: the AI creating the stories is good but need to be perfected, logically and morally. Storyline segments repeat themselves unnecessary and plot fluency stuck suddenly. Hopefully this will be corrected..
@@user-maxorlov5most of these are human written (albeit not by published successful authors) and posted to the HFY Reddit thread. They are converted by multiple UA-cam channels by using (AI?) text to speech engines, and AI created graphics. I like the HFY concept, but sometimes I find myself thinking, never ever gonna happen like that. LOL!
The AI creating the stories is good but need to be perfected, logically and morally. Storyline segments repeat themselves unnecessary and plot fluency stuck suddenly. Hopefully this will be corrected.
Bro these are 98% written and read by an AI. The issue is the prompting. There's little variation and no prompts to exclude specific words, terms, or short plots. I'm probably gonna generate a catered story for myself for an AI to read. Sometimes they are irritating.. also... hearing an AI narrator take breaths is sort of difficult for my brain to process. I'd tell it NOT to. But it's been trained on recordings of people so, it learned there's breathing noises before and after sentences. It's not good at consistency. Sometimes no breath, sometimes breath
I have criticism of all the stories that I’ve read. They always use a very limited number of names for people and the Prometheus that seems to be a ship name that is is used by everybody. There are thousands of shit names out there that they could use, which would be suitable things like ark royal Avenger. in the same way that the admirals all have the same name and there are thousands of names they could choose other than that I really love the stories
Pity these story's have to be woke,concidering the attitudes of women towards having to enlist when they reach the 18 ,so never going to bother with this woke rubbish,
Captain Elina Reyes. The last story it was Elaura Rodriguez. The previous one to that was also Elaura. Your AI is obviously brainwashed with DEI. I saw the captains name in the first 10 seconds and that's it for me, I don't give a shit about the story. Way too repetitive, no originality. I'm out.
The black ship series has had me since I listened to the first one. No repetitive words, excellent listen. Multiple characters, races.
I find this a listenable story, which is saying something compared to previously listened stories. I’m still annoyed that the on-screen text has a lot of mistakes. Still, getting better, with a story that makes sense and actually goes somewhere.
Everyone that died while she was debating whether or not to use the whippers, their blood is on her hands
Great story
Wyatt Staples is the main character.
Captain Rice, Reyes, Rhys. Lol
Love the HFY themed stories, but I would love them to be a little realistic, first battle and they lose badly, a little less hubris and instead of saying “We’ve overcome so much more than you know, we can overcome anything.” Why not an honest “Don’t know, we may fail, but [continue we hate bullies lines…].” This is like a 100 pound rich kid boasting he can beat a 6’ 6” 245 pound martial arts expert.
Can not be acieved: the AI creating the stories is good but need to be perfected, logically and morally. Storyline segments repeat themselves unnecessary and plot fluency stuck suddenly. Hopefully this will be corrected..
@@user-maxorlov5most of these are human written (albeit not by published successful authors) and posted to the HFY Reddit thread. They are converted by multiple UA-cam channels by using (AI?) text to speech engines, and AI created graphics. I like the HFY concept, but sometimes I find myself thinking, never ever gonna happen like that. LOL!
why drop the disguise when firing. more confusion would have resulted in their own ships destroying supply depot's.
The AI creating the stories is good but need to be perfected, logically and morally. Storyline segments repeat themselves unnecessary and plot fluency stuck suddenly. Hopefully this will be corrected.
The fact that every sci-fi story ALWAYS uses the same ship and people names. NO originality.......sad that, just like movies, no imagination
Bro these are 98% written and read by an AI. The issue is the prompting. There's little variation and no prompts to exclude specific words, terms, or short plots. I'm probably gonna generate a catered story for myself for an AI to read. Sometimes they are irritating.. also... hearing an AI narrator take breaths is sort of difficult for my brain to process. I'd tell it NOT to. But it's been trained on recordings of people so, it learned there's breathing noises before and after sentences. It's not good at consistency. Sometimes no breath, sometimes breath
Moore Jason Perez Joseph Miller Steven
I have criticism of all the stories that I’ve read. They always use a very limited number of names for people and the Prometheus that seems to be a ship name that is is used by everybody. There are thousands of shit names out there that they could use, which would be suitable things like ark royal Avenger. in the same way that the admirals all have the same name and there are thousands of names they could choose other than that I really love the stories
Genetation problems never end repeating mistake Trillions Trillions years
Pity these story's have to be woke,concidering the attitudes of women towards having to enlist when they reach the 18 ,so never going to bother with this woke rubbish,
Good but flawed.
Plus this captain sacrificing her self is bullshit, it's old story telling, not sci fi, it's jingoism
Brown Linda Lewis Amy Perez Helen
Captain Elina Reyes. The last story it was Elaura Rodriguez. The previous one to that was also Elaura. Your AI is obviously brainwashed with DEI. I saw the captains name in the first 10 seconds and that's it for me, I don't give a shit about the story. Way too repetitive, no originality. I'm out.
You don't hesitate, if you do you die. This story is poor
You definitely need to work on some different story lines.