I'm confused he goes from being inside the mall getting ready to secure it, to being outside picking strangers to head to the mall to see if he can hold up there.
My intent was to have owen bring back people from the water treatment plant to stay with him in the mall, Help keep it secure only to be destroyed and over run by Zombies. But in the writing process, I didnt translate that very well at all and decided against the mall being over taken. Thank you for the feedback and well improve with every story. Thanks for listening
I really love a story that starts at the beginning and moves through the terrors. This would have been a great book, if you would have proof listened the thing, it jumps around like a ping pong ball, one minute Owen is alone the next he is helping people the next he is alone and back and forth. A story has to flow this one is a like a ping pong game. to bad it started out great.
@@bearjawhomestead thank you for your feedback, we just hired proofreader to focus on the zombie series. We can only improve moving forward, thanks for listening
I'm confused he goes from being inside the mall getting ready to secure it, to being outside picking strangers to head to the mall to see if he can hold up there.
My intent was to have owen bring back people from the water treatment plant to stay with him in the mall, Help keep it secure only to be destroyed and over run by Zombies. But in the writing process, I didnt translate that very well at all and decided against the mall being over taken. Thank you for the feedback and well improve with every story. Thanks for listening
What happened to the survivors he met at the mall that were supposed to help him secure the joint.
@@storystream10009 ahh ok thank you.
It’s AI generated
I really love a story that starts at the beginning and moves through the terrors. This would have been a great book, if you would have proof listened the thing, it jumps around like a ping pong ball, one minute Owen is alone the next he is helping people the next he is alone and back and forth. A story has to flow this one is a like a ping pong game. to bad it started out great.
@@texlougatorbait thank you for your feedback, we have hired a proofreader and can only improve moving forward, thanks for listening
Very nicely read...thank you for your story..
Thank you for the feedback, we will only improve moving forward, Thanks for listening
Im wondering if these get proof read after the ai makes them. Malls dont go from having thousands of peoples foot traffic to crumbling in hours.
@@bearjawhomestead thank you for your feedback, we just hired proofreader to focus on the zombie series. We can only improve moving forward, thanks for listening
All right, let’s hope this is a good one come on good story
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wow, its dawn of the dead #3.
Lets hope they make another one someday, We love dawn of the dead 😀
North Dakota... no firepower.. 😂😂😂😂😂😂 kills me...
We know how much fire power is in North Dakota, But its just a zombie story. Thanks for listening
He seams to be obsessed with fragility
A different z tale .
@@alicesowders292 thank you for listening