For me it was a good ending coz I didn't want to see them together..... maybe he loved her so much but it's still not enough to be in a relationship, coz he can't make y/n his priority, his child will always be his first priority. He will hurt y/n unintentionally with his actions and watching her like this it will hurt him too but he wouldn't have any choice rather than taking responsibility of his child😐. It's better to live single rather than hurting herself daily watching jk happy with his another family..... Can u plz clear my confusion.. who wanted y/n to go out from jk's life?
thank you for this comment, you understood it every well. anyways i don’t want to explain in the comments about the “unknown texter” so should i maybe make a sequel? also to know how Y/N lives after this part. 🤔
Jungkook what he did was wrong his daughter have elise who can look after her but for y/n jungkook is only person to be lean on he literally giving priority for her daughter than y/n she accepted eventhough how much pain it would be
Wow just wow😂 Elise told jk that she wants to break up and here Jk easily agreed just i mean jk just using elise and jk didn't even try to find why she wants to Break up nor even sad But elise sacrifice her live carrying baby for Jk 's career .i am sorry if i went too far telling But for me It's not easy to live a life with baby single mom I am really feel sad for Elise 😔
Have to say there is y/n is the one who suffered most honestly 🙂,, it's become hard for her to stay with jk while he have a connection with his ex ( not that way , i hope y'll understand what i mean ) ,, he have child with his ex that's not a big thing , the thing is when society make you wrong , and especially when he needed him , he needed to go to for his ex child everytime ( as a girl i can say that it's will be hard to handle for any girl , no girl ) i can say ,, but jk's death are unacceptable 😞😅
I agree with you but at this point Jungkook didn't left her for his ex , he still loved her and he also didn't knew that he had child 😭and on place he didn't even knew that he had a baby with y/n and he even lived without her for 2 years and atlast he died too 😭😭
I really feel bad for jk.... She didn't even tell at first that she was crying become he dad was no more... He just saw her crying... N she was safe so he didn't worry much.. N went to see his child.. Who fainted... She shouldn't have left him... He clearly loved her... Can u make a bonus like it's a dream... Plz..
I know someone said its best if jk and y/n doesn't end together ..They will only end hurting themselves . But I think the problem back then was Elise being a single mother as she had noone to help her with her baby so she often seeked help from jk and jk loved his daughter thats why she was so precious to him. But now the situation is different Elise is happy with her partner and has someone who can take care of her and her baby . The fact will never change that Elise and jk both have a kid together , jk will always adore his daughter but now Elise is happy and already moved on but only characters unhappy here are y/n and jk..They deserves love to...Its was noones' fault , I guess its better if they get there love back...And I also think jk already understood his mistakes of ignoring y/n's problems but now he proved his love . So I think they deserve to be together
Tbh jk and y/n should of had a serious talk bc y/n didint see that jk was the only one who could help Elise and the fact they have a baby together will never change and he tbh I love when fathers put there kids first and y/n kind of didint see that but y/n and jk deserved love there story ends with nothing but heartache plzzz make a bonus but he lives🙏🥺😭🙏🥺😭💜💜
Yes, jk had a child with Elise and he felt responsible for his child. That wasn’t the end of the world. Whose to say he couldn’t have a child with y/n as well. He would have also had a responsibility to their child too.There was no need for y/n to feel like a third wheel, especially when he loved her and not Elise. Now it was never specified if jk was her boyfriend or husband. (It could have been a problem if jk’s parents made him marry Elise, If he wasn’t already married to y/n, considering that jk’s father kept nagging about grandkids). Though it was never said who sent y/n the texts about being a homewrecker. In about 50 percent of the fanfics out there, y/n flees a relationship when she is pregnant without telling her boyfriend/husband and he finds out about it years later. This is the first one where I’ve seen another woman to be the one who makes this rash decision and how it affects y/n. This is a different slant on a common fanfic theme. Although the ending was too common, it was a very good storyline overall. 👏👏👏
11:36 | Elise was the one carrying the baby, sorry. ua-cam.com/video/TSQuw5sIeew/v-deo.html < PART 2 LINK The characters here are flawed and imperfect. They commit mistakes, make bad decisions and other things that might frustrate the readers. I made sure to write this as realistic as possible.
Basically I felt bad for both jk and y/n......They both suffered a lot, A tear escaped from my eyes after seeing the last scene🙂 Hey I know that you've written this story but still whom do you think suffered the most??
THIS FF GIVING ME GOOSEBUMPS😩I LOVED IT🥰MASTERPIECE💜BTW CAN YOU MAKE IT A LITTLE LONGER?LIKE THE LINE/S I NEED TO PAUSE IT BECAUSE I CAN'T READ THAT FAST😗KEEP GOING UNNIE/OPPA😊
I am crying, they really loved each other. Jungkook sacrificed himself for her 😭
i agree with you 😭😭
For me it was a good ending coz I didn't want to see them together..... maybe he loved her so much but it's still not enough to be in a relationship, coz he can't make y/n his priority, his child will always be his first priority. He will hurt y/n unintentionally with his actions and watching her like this it will hurt him too but he wouldn't have any choice rather than taking responsibility of his child😐.
It's better to live single rather than hurting herself daily watching jk happy with his another family.....
Can u plz clear my confusion.. who wanted y/n to go out from jk's life?
thank you for this comment, you understood it every well. anyways i don’t want to explain in the comments about the “unknown texter” so should i maybe make a sequel? also to know how Y/N lives after this part. 🤔
@@reveriefiction6992 👍
@R yes ....coz *living with him is more painful* than leaving him...
Meegoo😭😭😭
Jungkook what he did was wrong his daughter have elise who can look after her but for y/n jungkook is only person to be lean on he literally giving priority for her daughter than y/n she accepted eventhough how much pain it would be
Yn move on after jk death and met tae he makes her strong and feeling loved and they get happily married and have a baby name jungkook 😘
that’s a cute idea right there! 🤍
Yeah
I'm double died na sa pain
Sooonuu😭😭😭😭💔💔
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Wow just wow😂 Elise told jk that she wants to break up and here Jk easily agreed just i mean jk just using elise and jk didn't even try to find why she wants to Break up nor even sad But elise sacrifice her live carrying baby for Jk 's career .i am sorry if i went too far telling But for me It's not easy to live a life with baby single mom I am really feel sad for Elise 😔
Have to say there is y/n is the one who suffered most honestly 🙂,, it's become hard for her to stay with jk while he have a connection with his ex ( not that way , i hope y'll understand what i mean ) ,, he have child with his ex that's not a big thing , the thing is when society make you wrong , and especially when he needed him , he needed to go to for his ex child everytime ( as a girl i can say that it's will be hard to handle for any girl , no girl ) i can say ,, but jk's death are unacceptable 😞😅
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I agree with you but at this point Jungkook didn't left her for his ex , he still loved her and he also didn't knew that he had child 😭and on place he didn't even knew that he had a baby with y/n and he even lived without her for 2 years and atlast he died too 😭😭
ua-cam.com/video/TSQuw5sIeew/v-deo.html link for part 2
Please...a dream sequence...and he's right by her side... can't wait for next episode.
I really feel bad for jk.... She didn't even tell at first that she was crying become he dad was no more... He just saw her crying... N she was safe so he didn't worry much.. N went to see his child.. Who fainted... She shouldn't have left him... He clearly loved her... Can u make a bonus like it's a dream... Plz..
I know someone said its best if jk and y/n doesn't end together ..They will only end hurting themselves . But I think the problem back then was Elise being a single mother as she had noone to help her with her baby so she often seeked help from jk and jk loved his daughter thats why she was so precious to him. But now the situation is different Elise is happy with her partner and has someone who can take care of her and her baby . The fact will never change that Elise and jk both have a kid together , jk will always adore his daughter but now Elise is happy and already moved on but only characters unhappy here are y/n and jk..They deserves love to...Its was noones' fault , I guess its better if they get there love back...And I also think jk already understood his mistakes of ignoring y/n's problems but now he proved his love . So I think they deserve to be together
Tbh jk and y/n should of had a serious talk bc y/n didint see that jk was the only one who could help Elise and the fact they have a baby together will never change and he tbh I love when fathers put there kids first and y/n kind of didint see that but y/n and jk deserved love there story ends with nothing but heartache plzzz make a bonus but he lives🙏🥺😭🙏🥺😭💜💜
Yes, jk had a child with Elise and he felt responsible for his child. That wasn’t the end of the world. Whose to say he couldn’t have a child with y/n as well. He would have also had a responsibility to their child too.There was no need for y/n to feel like a third wheel, especially when he loved her and not Elise.
Now it was never specified if jk was her boyfriend or husband. (It could have been a problem if jk’s parents made him marry Elise, If he wasn’t already married to y/n, considering that jk’s father kept nagging about grandkids). Though it was never said who sent y/n the texts about being a homewrecker.
In about 50 percent of the fanfics out there, y/n flees a relationship when she is pregnant without telling her boyfriend/husband and he finds out about it years later. This is the first one where I’ve seen another woman to be the one who makes this rash decision and how it affects y/n. This is a different slant on a common fanfic theme. Although the ending was too common, it was a very good storyline overall. 👏👏👏
Right
I feel bad for both of them but I think Jungkook still atleast had to knew that he had a baby with y/n 😭
11:36 | Elise was the one carrying the baby, sorry.
ua-cam.com/video/TSQuw5sIeew/v-deo.html < PART 2 LINK
The characters here are flawed and imperfect. They commit mistakes, make bad decisions and other things that might frustrate the readers. I made sure to write this as realistic as possible.
Unnie plzzz make a bonus and he lives 🙏🥺😭🙏🥺😭💜💜
And u did made it realistic I loved it author ❤
Basically I felt bad for both jk and y/n......They both suffered a lot, A tear escaped from my eyes after seeing the last scene🙂
Hey I know that you've written this story but still whom do you think suffered the most??
THIS FF GIVING ME GOOSEBUMPS😩I LOVED IT🥰MASTERPIECE💜BTW CAN YOU MAKE IT A LITTLE LONGER?LIKE THE LINE/S I NEED TO PAUSE IT BECAUSE I CAN'T READ THAT FAST😗KEEP GOING UNNIE/OPPA😊
Thank youuu so much! 🤍 I will make it longer next time, I’m sorry. And you can call me Unnie 🥰
It's a still mystery who was the one sending y/n texts with unknown number 🤔
Yes
@@reveriefiction6992 yess it's needed 💜
@@reveriefiction6992 yes
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tbh y/n did the right thing , jk is LOWKEY annoying
Author -nim please make a happy ending
Jungkook my favorite so cute 🥰 everything
Now the situation would be different if yn was the daughter right?
Why ? What a sad and depressing story ! Why giving hope that they will get together ? Cruel!
It was amazing but what happened to junghee?
Thank You Umaira Siddiqui!🤍
Junghee is in the care of her mother, Elise.
@@reveriefiction6992 Most welcome 💜 and thank you for answering my question.💜💜
@@reveriefiction6992 please make a sequel because we want to know about the unknown messenger and also how is y/n's life after jungkook's death.
😭😭😭😭😭too emotional
Masterpiece 💓💓
Please part 2/bonus part
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Bonus part please, or no ??
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Can u make this as a dream?
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Plz bonus part 🙇🙇
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Is there any bonus part or not? pls tell me...🥺
@@reveriefiction6992 yeppp
@@reveriefiction6992 yes please 🥺
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I can read because it's very fast
Part 2 plz
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🤧🤧🤧😭😭😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
I love it