Rajiv was 32 year old was working under rajul builders as civil engineer and was given a task build a multi sport complex within 2 years Rajiv investigated the land and started his construction with his labour and he build the stadium within 18 months and now only the final touch up was remaining like electricity connection ,drinking water connection, installment of tracks and seats which was also done within 2 months and the construction was over in time . When tournament was held all were amazed to see such stadium in there city all gave good reviews about stadium . After which Rajiv was given more construction to do by his boss.
I have perceived no of characters but my lead character is ram of age 35 yrs old with positive mood. Action - helping tribal children for there career in sports. So my story runs like this Ram is a social worker. He got to know that there are some tribal children who are good runner but they don't get any chance to prove themselves. So he decided to help them by organising an event in his city's stadium. He also invited some members of state sports authority. All children did a good performance in running. Audience as well as members of authority also get impressed by their performance. They promised ram that they will definitely help them to join state's sports academy to train themselves. They also appreciate the efforts taken by ram to organize event. Everyone wishes ram for his future work. Sir pls review it.
Impressive Aditya, I really impressed by your story. Would you help me to write a story well like your. If you help ke it would be very kind of you. Instagram : Amit.pal01
Theme is good but execution is not up to the mark. Show how your main character trained those tribal children what instructions he gave him to participate in event. Avoid giving appreciation to hero. Is event ka future outcome kya hua wo b btao like after the success of those children many others tribal children started taking interest in sports and other physical activities. All the best wishes to u.
Ramprasad is a senior PT instructor in navodaya vidyalaya. He decided to organise a inter school athletic meet. The principal of the school appointed Ramprasad as an organiser. Then he conduct a meeting with other school PT and collect fund and decided to organise it next month.he then make the ground repair and also arranged seats for audience. He also decided to call chief guest. And he also arranges energy drinks and snacks for the participants. He bought a trophy and certificates for the competition. On the day of competition, Ramprasad gave a first speech at ground and welcomed all the guest, judges. The competition went well and all enjoyed and at the end of it all principals appriceiated Ramprasad for organising meet.
Good morning friends, picture shown to us. This picture is a ground for running. I have seen one boy whose name Ram, he student of SSS school and a lot of odienece those are enjoy win of its favorite runner . Ram get first position in this match. Some odienece are disappointed because h Its runner has faced defeat. .
Deepak, age 20,college athlete, on getting the news of state level running championship, Deepak decided to participate in my running championship. Firstly he registered his name. He started to improve his performance. Then he made a vedio and saw he was lagging in stamina so he hired a coach. In the guidance of coach . He went for running daily to increase stamina and went for swimming to increase better breathe system. He did diet and not ate junk food. He did physical exercise and yoga . Because of his practise he became fully confidensd and he performed well in championship and won the championship
I perceive 4 characters all are male , positive mood and are in agr group of 20-25yrs . Prakash came to know abt a relay race to be organised a week later. He wanted to participate in it. As it required 4 participants in a team so he called his 3 friends who are good in running. He told them abt the relay race participation to which all agreed. Later Prakash made a strategy of initiating the race and gave responsibility to another to end the relay(as he knew they both were quicker than the other two) and told the other two to complete the relay in between. On D-Day when he his team mates implemented the strategy they swiftly got an advantage over the opponents and won comfortably. 🎖️
Ramesh was 18 years old, studying 12th standard at kuppam. He was preparing for agniveer rally past 3 months with proper diet and practice. After completion his college returning home he saw a poster(pamphlet )related to Marathon which will held in next month. That pamphlet mentioned interested candidates registered their names as soon as possible limited seats only. Without wasting time a registered his name. Ramesh increased his practice performance morning and evening finally the day came. He participated in that competition with full Josh and won the 1st prize 🏆, Ramesh felt happy.
My story action is marathon race According to my perception in this picture. I have seen 20 character.14 of them are male .the age is around 20 to 38 year old .other 6 are female the gae is around 24 to 34 year old .all are in positive mood . My central character is Rajan .he is 17 year old . Rajan is a student of class 12 at DAV Public school in Dhanbad .on reaching in school .he heard that state sport authority organised marathon race .2 student can be participated from every school.he was selected .he returned to home for prepared routine for running .he awake at 5's clock for going in the track of ground .he did excercise both time evening and morning.he took proper diet.he went to participate in marathon.he was started to run and won the race he received first price 10k and madel from chief guest
Yatendra pratap singh 20 year old pursuing graduation from ms university also he is a faculty representative in his faculty he got the responsibility to organize a inter athletic championship between science commerce and arts faculty. Firstly he decided the date and venue by concerning the dean of college and teachers. Then make a banner for athletics championship. Motivate students to participate.took care of medical emergency and clean the stadium with his team put flag and with help of limestone made lines.arranged refreshment for participants and also arrange prizes for winners finally the day came and championship conducted well and yatendra appreciate his team work.
Exam CDS Age 22 All characters in +ve mood Hero - Rachit -age 15 Theme- never give up Rachit, a student of class 10 was a athelete. He always won races while organise in the school. So the school management thought to send him for state level. He practiced alot. He made his routine so strict and disciplined. He used to got up early and went to track. Day by day he tried to minimize the time to cover 400m distance. He not only practised in morning but also in evening. Finally the day of tournament came. He represented his district over there. All the competitors were very well. The race began and he was doing very well. But suddenly he fall down . But Everyone was cheering for him and his mother was also so worried for him. He stood up and ran. Finally he won the race. He was very happy while receiving the medal. Thanks
Rohit was a 12th student n athletic also.he has just finished his exam then his school sports authority wanted to organised a competition in athletics. They informed all who want participate. Rohit registered his name and starts preparation for it.he did regular exercise in early morning,did running parctice,follow proper diet plan,he was totally prepared himself and the day of competition he run with full power and got a position all were applauded and he was also very happy.
Ram was a businessman and he had a good incom to his business. So he wanted to spend money in his village development.he observed in his village many boys and girls preparing for 100 meter and 200 meter race .but without proper resources and guidence they were not selected any state as well as district level.ram provided them running shoes and zeem metarials also arrange a trainer for them. after two months a state level tournament orgnised.many boys and girls participated in and perform good and got state level certificate.
There are lot of characters in my story. But one main character is Aditya of age 35 years . He is a pardhan of Rajnagar village. He is organising a 1600 meter race competition in village's school ground. All the parents of participents and villagers came there to see the competition . We all know the boys of village background are very tough physically as well as mentally, and they also are very hard working.The main reason of conducting the competition is to show the capabilities and strength of indivisual participants in sports field. The race begun and everyone performing well. Aditya is very impress from all participants and he also gave prize to winner. Sir please check this story .
Ravi the sports captain in dav public school was shocked to know that his principal was not sendind his school team for upcoming sprts meet in mk stadium meerut. Due to last year bad performance. He immediately with tha sports teache meet tha principal and got the chance to perform. He immediately with the vice captain organised a trial and select some new talent, scheduled 2 time training, advised his team to take proper diet, took help from yutube video how to inc performance, played league matches with each other, due to this effort they able to perform in tournament
Entry- Afcat Age -23 Theme- Inter school competition Story- Navneet was in class 12th,Delhi public school,Noida. He was the sports captain of the school.Every year there is an inter school competition of racing held from 200 meters to 800 meters in Noida stadium.As the sports teachers were aware of sports passion of navneet they selected him to represent the school in 800 meters race.Navneet prepared a plan on daily basis practice,timings etc.He fairly evaluated the time he was consuming for 800 meters & for more improvement he increased the number of sprints with ankle weights to maximise his speed In a time bound manner.On the day of competition his hard work paid off with the first prize.The school felt was proud on him.
I have taken 5 no.s of characters all are in 20 to 24 age group and they all are in positive mood Action of my story is organizing the relay race event Rakesh was an engineering student studying in final year civil. Also he was in student council committee. now council had given him a task to complete the event successfully. So firstly he made a team of four to five people and maida work list like procurement of medals, bouquets for judges marksheet for judges, prepare guest list, invitation cards, Seating arrangements, first aid kids for normal injury and ambulance for serious injury with to compounder having stretcher. also set the security guards on entry and exit gates to restrict unwanted entries from outside. in this way the event had finished well without any mishaps or accident. sir will you please evaluate my story My SSB interview is on 26th august
No of character - crowd Mood- + Age - 20 Action - Reena won the 400 meter race in state championship The picture I observed that Reena was a athelete and she come to take part in mp state championship. The championship was helding in lal pared ground bhopal there was a lot of people to come to see the challenge Reena and 5 other participants in the race the race started and Reena was at last position till the 3rd round and after 4th round she take the lead and won the race and everybody was cheering her winning and she was very happy
Action: Coordination and team work always leads to greater results. I perceive 5 characters, all are male of age group 20-23 and all are in positive mood. Devan was pursuing graduation from Bishop Moore College and each year the annual sports are being conducted by the college itself. This year the management decided to give a chance to students. Devan along with his four friends - Anand, Adersh, Jobin, Anandhu came forward and said they could organise the event. Management agreed but insisted four conditions - time bounded, fairly evaluated, distribution of prizes and cleanliness of their stadium. So Devan assigned Anand for charting the list of events, and expected time of its completion, also considering the weather conditions. Adersh was assigned to contact judges and who has enough experience and knowledge in the field, he was also suggested to take help from the Physical education sir and the concerned authorities. Jobin got the task of gathering sponsorships from well-wishers and sports enthusiasts for the prize amount. Ananthu, as he was assigned to maintain the stadium clean took help from the college National Service Scheme and National Cadet Corps of the college. Devan maintained and evaluated the process and progress of his members and he did the advertisement part. As a result the event was done successfully and the five members were appreciated by the management for their organising skills and social interaction abilities.
Sir I am a defence aspirant and I do not have much exposure to the ssb criterias. Please evaluate my story and give necessary instructions whether positive or negative.. I need to know the areas where I need to improve... Please reply sir...
Maine 2017 m 12th pass out hua par mere maths m 37 number the or physics m 60.or usi sal sal maine BSc m admission le liya.. or next year 2018 m maths k improvement diya or usmr 67 number aye... kya afsb m ye approve hogi ya nhi? Maine afcat 1 2020 clear kar liya.... please help
Good mrng frnds.pic shown to us their are many characters but my lead character rishi age of 20-25year old and male.all are in +mood. Rishi was studying in govt junior college of 11th standard.In his district their is a running tournament.he participated in that.He was practised more with determination.with his hardwork,determination he won the running championship and district collector awarded trophy with prize money of 5000.he donated 5000 rupees for welfare of his school playground.
Good Morning Friends The picture shown to us i perceived 10 characters was there 6 males and 4 females was there Age group 20 to 45 years All are in +ve mode. Action of my story is Practice Makes A Man Perfect. And my story goes like ----> Geeta was a btech cs second year student of Kanpur Institute Of Technology (University AKTU) she was too good in studies as well as in sports also, She always gets top rank in her branch , one day the dean of academics announced that there will be a university level racing competition after 10 days which will be held in the capital’s Babu Ram stadium and the winner will be awarded with a gold medal and prize money of 10k rs. Geeta was so happy to hear this she immediately went to deans office and registered herself for this competition and she went to home and started practicing for that because her college timing was 9 to 5 so that she awake at 5 am and runs 5 km daily which increases her stamina first day she completed 5 kms in half an hour later on she completing this distance only in 15 mins and then at the day of racing she was only girl participent among all of the 10 candidates race starts (distance was 10 kms) and she runs steadily and completed the race in 20 mins she came first and got the medal and prize of 10k rs from the Chief Minister's hand, geeta lighted her college’s name her family and college mates proud on her.
Sir please read my story and give me your guidance for improvement because this is the first time i'm going to attend ssb (SSC TECH) after my btech completion...... thanks :)
My story goes like : Rashi is a really talented girl, who is good at sports and studies. She studies in school on the basis of the scholarship she got because of her sports achievement. But one day she met with an accident while going for her regular athletics practice. She was not able to participate in the sport event and lost her scholarship because of that. She was very sad, as she thought she might have to leave the school since she will not be able to pay the school fees and her parents could not afford it after the money they spent on hr treatment. Her school friends got to know about this and informed their parents about rashi's condition. All the villagers decided to help rashi achieve her dream and get back on her feet. They decided to contribute for her school fees and also for the training which she will require once she gets better. After a few months she got better and was able to run again and also secured 1st position in the state level race. Let me know how is the story and the mistakes or how can I improve it. Thanks and Regards.
SSB Interview Selection Thank you sir, could you also please point out the mistakes in this story?? Or how I can improve it so that my story will be good enough for ppdt.
Your story will not get accepted because the hero did show any officer like qualities. Their friend contributed the money . Moreover the story that you wrote has one one line of description in the last i.e she ran and secured first position.
There has to be one hero , you could modify that she helped her friend in recovering or she continued practicing , recover faster and perform better than later , won the tournament or represent her school
Good morning friends picture shown to us l have seen many cherecter but Ram is men charecter in this picture age between 18 to 60 years all in positive mood. Action Ram was 35 years a young man he was a social worker in village he organised a 1600m race compitition in his village and wining student to give a prize . He was developing his villages people and he was active sincere and intelligent. He always help to the villagers all villagers enjoyed the compitition and they were feeling happy and Ram was starting the race and waiting for winner and finally a boy win the race and got a prize for 5000 thousand money finally Ram's developed his village and he feel not a work be hard and he thinks that if you works hard and get succed and he was very happy. And finally he gets a school in his village .
afcat action : coordination between member of group make impossible task possible their are 4 character main character is nitin age 24 he is 100m national player in athele so their interstate college tornament happening in which nitin colLege iet is taking a participate so nitin is national player so he is deciding a player for relay race of 400 m though he is good runner in 100 m so he need good team so he take lokesh ramesh and harish from his batch and start training for competition after sometime they get to know harish and rameah running is slow for competition but no other option so he decided that during the sarting of race lokesh which good in running will take a charge and ramesh and harish will run after him and in last nitin will run though he is good in 100m according to plan they work and take a participate anD in relay race their plan workout .they win a race and people in stadium are cheering up for their coordination ..after winning a race they all selected to perform in national .and they are awarded with goverment scholarship scheme ..so their coordination make imPossible task possible
Sanjeet Kumar ACC Candidate Age 23 years Character-3 All are in positive mood Sanjeet was the student of Government polytechnic college purnea. On day he was detailed for modification of Indira Gandhi stadium in purnea. He went to site and know about the stadium construction. He gave soil for testing and made plan of stadium according to testing result. He showed plan to executive engineer and finally they agreed with that plan. He made chart of materials using for modification and within a month stadium was ready. He requested to higher engineer for visiting stadium. Accordingly he was appreciated by them.
Maine 2017 m 12th pass out hua par mere maths m 37 number the or physics m 60.or usi sal sal maine BSc m admission le liya.. or next year 2018 m maths k improvement diya or usmr 67 number aye... kya afsb m ye approve hogi ya nhi? Maine afcat 1 2020 clear kar liya.... please help
Maine 2017 m 12th pass out hua par mere maths m 37 number the or physics m 60.or usi sal sal maine BSc m admission le liya.. or next year 2018 m maths k improvement diya or usmr 67 number aye... kya afsb m ye approve hogi ya nhi? Maine afcat 1 2020 clear kar liya.... please help
Rajiv was 32 year old was working under rajul builders as civil engineer and was given a task build a multi sport complex within 2 years Rajiv investigated the land and started his construction with his labour and he build the stadium within 18 months and now only the final touch up was remaining like electricity connection ,drinking water connection, installment of tracks and seats which was also done within 2 months and the construction was over in time . When tournament was held all were amazed to see such stadium in there city all gave good reviews about stadium . After which Rajiv was given more construction to do by his boss.
I have perceived no of characters but my lead character is ram of age 35 yrs old with positive mood.
Action - helping tribal children for there career in sports.
So my story runs like this
Ram is a social worker. He got to know that there are some tribal children who are good runner but they don't get any chance to prove themselves. So he decided to help them by organising an event in his city's stadium. He also invited some members of state sports authority. All children did a good performance in running. Audience as well as members of authority also get impressed by their performance. They promised ram that they will definitely help them to join state's sports academy to train themselves. They also appreciate the efforts taken by ram to organize event. Everyone wishes ram for his future work.
Sir pls review it.
Good brother
Impressive Aditya,
I really impressed by your story. Would you help me to write a story well like your.
If you help ke it would be very kind of you.
Instagram : Amit.pal01
Theme is good but execution is not up to the mark. Show how your main character trained those tribal children what instructions he gave him to participate in event. Avoid giving appreciation to hero. Is event ka future outcome kya hua wo b btao like after the success of those children many others tribal children started taking interest in sports and other physical activities.
All the best wishes to u.
@@sumitdhatterwal4304 thanks brother. I will definitely take care about ur points
@@THESKIPPER01 definitely brother but i am also a aspirant like u so it is not necessary that my points are always good. But still u can msg me
Ramprasad is a senior PT instructor in navodaya vidyalaya. He decided to organise a inter school athletic meet. The principal of the school appointed Ramprasad as an organiser. Then he conduct a meeting with other school PT and collect fund and decided to organise it next month.he then make the ground repair and also arranged seats for audience. He also decided to call chief guest. And he also arranges energy drinks and snacks for the participants. He bought a trophy and certificates for the competition. On the day of competition, Ramprasad gave a first speech at ground and welcomed all the guest, judges. The competition went well and all enjoyed and at the end of it all principals appriceiated Ramprasad for organising meet.
Good morning friends, picture shown to us. This picture is a ground for running. I have seen one boy whose name Ram, he student of SSS school and a lot of odienece those are enjoy win of its favorite runner . Ram get first position in this match. Some odienece are disappointed because h
Its runner has faced defeat.
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Deepak, age 20,college athlete, on getting the news of state level running championship, Deepak decided to participate in my running championship. Firstly he registered his name. He started to improve his performance. Then he made a vedio and saw he was lagging in stamina so he hired a coach. In the guidance of coach . He went for running daily to increase stamina and went for swimming to increase better breathe system. He did diet and not ate junk food. He did physical exercise and yoga . Because of his practise he became fully confidensd and he performed well in championship and won the championship
Story kaisi thi feedback dena sit❤
I perceive 4 characters all are male , positive mood and are in agr group of 20-25yrs .
Prakash came to know abt a relay race to be organised a week later. He wanted to participate in it. As it required 4 participants in a team so he called his 3 friends who are good in running. He told them abt the relay race participation to which all agreed. Later Prakash made a strategy of initiating the race and gave responsibility to another to end the relay(as he knew they both were quicker than the other two) and told the other two to complete the relay in between. On D-Day when he his team mates implemented the strategy they swiftly got an advantage over the opponents and won comfortably.
🎖️
Ramesh was 18 years old, studying 12th standard at kuppam. He was preparing for agniveer rally past 3 months with proper diet and practice. After completion his college returning home he saw a poster(pamphlet )related to Marathon which will held in next month. That pamphlet mentioned interested candidates registered their names as soon as possible limited seats only. Without wasting time a registered his name. Ramesh increased his practice performance morning and evening finally the day came. He participated in that competition with full Josh and won the 1st prize 🏆, Ramesh felt happy.
My story action is marathon race
According to my perception in this picture.
I have seen 20 character.14 of them are male .the age is around 20 to 38 year old .other 6 are female the gae is around 24 to 34 year old .all are in positive mood .
My central character is Rajan .he is 17 year old .
Rajan is a student of class 12 at DAV Public school in Dhanbad .on reaching in school .he heard that state sport authority organised marathon race .2 student can be participated from every school.he was selected .he returned to home for prepared routine for running .he awake at 5's clock for going in the track of ground .he did excercise both time evening and morning.he took proper diet.he went to participate in marathon.he was started to run and won the race he received first price 10k and madel from chief guest
Yatendra pratap singh 20 year old pursuing graduation from ms university also he is a faculty representative in his faculty he got the responsibility to organize a inter athletic championship between science commerce and arts faculty. Firstly he decided the date and venue by concerning the dean of college and teachers. Then make a banner for athletics championship. Motivate students to participate.took care of medical emergency and clean the stadium with his team put flag and with help of limestone made lines.arranged refreshment for participants and also arrange prizes for winners finally the day came and championship conducted well and yatendra appreciate his team work.
Exam CDS
Age 22
All characters in +ve mood
Hero - Rachit -age 15
Theme- never give up
Rachit, a student of class 10 was a athelete. He always won races while organise in the school. So the school management thought to send him for state level. He practiced alot. He made his routine so strict and disciplined. He used to got up early and went to track. Day by day he tried to minimize the time to cover 400m distance. He not only practised in morning but also in evening. Finally the day of tournament came. He represented his district over there. All the competitors were very well. The race began and he was doing very well. But suddenly he fall down . But Everyone was cheering for him and his mother was also so worried for him. He stood up and ran. Finally he won the race. He was very happy while receiving the medal.
Thanks
pls add he conducted timing trails in presence of PT instructor
@@DefenceAnalysiss ok sir
Thank u
hey simrun .....did you get your recommendation ? ......
or i have to sayy ja simrun jele apni zindagi
Impractical story
Rohit was a 12th student n athletic also.he has just finished his exam then his school sports authority wanted to organised a competition in athletics. They informed all who want participate. Rohit registered his name and starts preparation for it.he did regular exercise in early morning,did running parctice,follow proper diet plan,he was totally prepared himself and the day of competition he run with full power and got a position all were applauded and he was also very happy.
Sir give me ur feedback please
Ram was a businessman and he had a good incom to his business. So he wanted to spend money in his village development.he observed in his village many boys and girls preparing for 100 meter and 200 meter race .but without proper resources and guidence they were not selected any state as well as district level.ram provided them running shoes and zeem metarials also arrange a trainer for them. after two months a state level tournament orgnised.many boys and girls participated in and perform good and got state level certificate.
There are lot of characters in my story. But one main character is Aditya of age 35 years . He is a pardhan of Rajnagar village. He is organising a 1600 meter race competition in village's school ground. All the parents of participents and villagers came there to see the competition . We all know the boys of village background are very tough physically as well as mentally, and they also are very hard working.The main reason of conducting the competition is to show the capabilities and strength of indivisual participants in sports field. The race begun and everyone performing well. Aditya is very impress from all participants and he also gave prize to winner.
Sir please check this story .
Ravi the sports captain in dav public school was shocked to know that his principal was not sendind his school team for upcoming sprts meet in mk stadium meerut. Due to last year bad performance. He immediately with tha sports teache meet tha principal and got the chance to perform. He immediately with the vice captain organised a trial and select some new talent, scheduled 2 time training, advised his team to take proper diet, took help from yutube video how to inc performance, played league matches with each other, due to this effort they able to perform in tournament
Entry- Afcat
Age -23
Theme- Inter school competition
Story- Navneet was in class 12th,Delhi public school,Noida. He was the sports captain of the school.Every year there is an inter school competition of racing held from 200 meters to 800 meters in Noida stadium.As the sports teachers were aware of sports passion of navneet they selected him to represent the school in 800 meters race.Navneet prepared a plan on daily basis practice,timings etc.He fairly evaluated the time he was consuming for 800 meters & for more improvement he increased the number of sprints with ankle weights to maximise his speed In a time bound manner.On the day of competition his hard work paid off with the first prize.The school felt was proud on him.
Bhai brilliant story according to me.
I have taken 5 no.s of characters all are in 20 to 24 age group and they all are in positive mood
Action of my story is organizing the relay race event
Rakesh was an engineering student studying in final year civil. Also he was in student council committee. now council had given him a task to complete the event successfully.
So firstly he made a team of four to five people and maida work list like procurement of medals, bouquets for judges marksheet for judges, prepare guest list, invitation cards, Seating arrangements, first aid kids for normal injury and ambulance for serious injury with to compounder having stretcher. also set the security guards on entry and exit gates to restrict unwanted entries from outside. in this way the event had finished well without any mishaps or accident.
sir will you please evaluate my story
My SSB interview is on 26th august
No of character - crowd
Mood- +
Age - 20
Action - Reena won the 400 meter race in state championship
The picture I observed that Reena was a athelete and she come to take part in mp state championship. The championship was helding in lal pared ground bhopal there was a lot of people to come to see the challenge Reena and 5 other participants in the race the race started and Reena was at last position till the 3rd round and after 4th round she take the lead and won the race and everybody was cheering her winning and she was very happy
Sir pls take a loot to my story i am going to attend my first psb and tell me what things i need to improve
Action: Coordination and team work always leads to greater results.
I perceive 5 characters, all are male of age group 20-23 and all are in positive mood.
Devan was pursuing graduation from Bishop Moore College and each year the annual sports are being conducted by the college itself. This year the management decided to give a chance to students. Devan along with his four friends - Anand, Adersh, Jobin, Anandhu came forward and said they could organise the event. Management agreed but insisted four conditions - time bounded, fairly evaluated, distribution of prizes and cleanliness of their stadium. So Devan assigned Anand for charting the list of events, and expected time of its completion, also considering the weather conditions. Adersh was assigned to contact judges and who has enough experience and knowledge in the field, he was also suggested to take help from the Physical education sir and the concerned authorities. Jobin got the task of gathering sponsorships from well-wishers and sports enthusiasts for the prize amount. Ananthu, as he was assigned to maintain the stadium clean took help from the college National Service Scheme and National Cadet Corps of the college. Devan maintained and evaluated the process and progress of his members and he did the advertisement part. As a result the event was done successfully and the five members were appreciated by the management for their organising skills and social interaction abilities.
Sir I am a defence aspirant and I do not have much exposure to the ssb criterias. Please evaluate my story and give necessary instructions whether positive or negative.. I need to know the areas where I need to improve... Please reply sir...
good but i think u can write your whole story in 4 minutes so make it short
@@DefenceAnalysiss ok sir
Sir g ap ny
WAT test ky practice negative words ki video send ni ki
Jo ap ny video may kaha tha k mai 1 word pr 4,4 sentence bna kr doon ga
ok sure i will make
Maine 2017 m 12th pass out hua par mere maths m 37 number the or physics m 60.or usi sal sal maine BSc m admission le liya.. or next year 2018 m maths k improvement diya or usmr 67 number aye... kya afsb m ye approve hogi ya nhi? Maine afcat 1 2020 clear kar liya.... please help
ni hoga bhai at a tim 1 degree is valid
Good mrng frnds.pic shown to us their are many characters but my lead character rishi age of 20-25year old and male.all are in +mood.
Rishi was studying in govt junior college of 11th standard.In his district their is a running tournament.he participated in that.He was practised more with determination.with his hardwork,determination he won the running championship and district collector awarded trophy with prize money of 5000.he donated 5000 rupees for welfare of his school playground.
Good Morning Friends
The picture shown to us i perceived 10 characters was there 6 males and 4 females was there
Age group 20 to 45 years
All are in +ve mode.
Action of my story is Practice Makes A Man Perfect.
And my story goes like ---->
Geeta was a btech cs second year student of Kanpur Institute Of Technology (University AKTU) she was too good in studies as well as in sports also,
She always gets top rank in her branch , one day the dean of academics announced that there will be a university level racing competition after 10 days which will be held in the capital’s Babu Ram stadium and the winner will be awarded with a gold medal and prize money of 10k rs.
Geeta was so happy to hear this she immediately went to deans office and registered herself for this competition and she went to home and started practicing for that because her college timing was 9 to 5 so that she awake at 5 am and runs 5 km daily which increases her stamina first day she completed 5 kms in half an hour later on she completing this distance only in 15 mins and then at the day of racing she was only girl participent among all of the 10 candidates race starts (distance was 10 kms) and she runs steadily and completed the race in 20 mins she came first and got the medal and prize of 10k rs from the Chief Minister's hand, geeta lighted her college’s name her family and college mates proud on her.
Sir please read my story and give me your guidance for improvement because this is the first time i'm going to attend ssb (SSC TECH) after my btech completion......
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good pls write one line that she gave his medal to his dean
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thank u so much sir u replied it means a lot for me thank u sir :)
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My story goes like : Rashi is a really talented girl, who is good at sports and studies. She studies in school on the basis of the scholarship she got because of her sports achievement. But one day she met with an accident while going for her regular athletics practice. She was not able to participate in the sport event and lost her scholarship because of that. She was very sad, as she thought she might have to leave the school since she will not be able to pay the school fees and her parents could not afford it after the money they spent on hr treatment. Her school friends got to know about this and informed their parents about rashi's condition. All the villagers decided to help rashi achieve her dream and get back on her feet. They decided to contribute for her school fees and also for the training which she will require once she gets better. After a few months she got better and was able to run again and also secured 1st position in the state level race.
Let me know how is the story and the mistakes or how can I improve it.
Thanks and Regards.
SSB Interview Selection Thank you sir, could you also please point out the mistakes in this story?? Or how I can improve it so that my story will be good enough for ppdt.
Your story will not get accepted because the hero did show any officer like qualities. Their friend contributed the money . Moreover the story that you wrote has one one line of description in the last i.e she ran and secured first position.
There has to be one hero , you could modify that she helped her friend in recovering or she continued practicing , recover faster and perform better than later , won the tournament or represent her school
A good one..keep it up
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Good morning friends picture shown to us l have seen many cherecter but Ram is men charecter in this picture age between 18 to 60 years all in positive mood.
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Ram was 35 years a young man he was a social worker in village he organised a 1600m race compitition in his village and wining student to give a prize . He was developing his villages people and he was active sincere and intelligent. He always help to the villagers all villagers enjoyed the compitition and they were feeling happy and Ram was starting the race and waiting for winner and finally a boy win the race and got a prize for 5000 thousand money finally Ram's developed his village and he feel not a work be hard and he thinks that if you works hard and get succed and he was very happy. And finally he gets a school in his village .
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their are 4 character main character is nitin age 24 he is 100m national player in athele so their interstate college tornament happening in which nitin colLege iet is taking a participate so nitin is national player so he is deciding a player for relay race of 400 m though he is good runner in 100 m so he need good team so he take lokesh ramesh and harish from his batch and start training for competition after sometime they get to know harish and rameah running is slow for competition but no other option so he decided that during the sarting of race lokesh which good in running will take a charge and ramesh and harish will run after him and in last nitin will run though he is good in 100m according to plan they work and take a participate anD in relay race their plan workout .they win a race and people in stadium are cheering up for their coordination ..after winning a race they all selected to perform in national .and they are awarded with goverment scholarship scheme ..so their coordination make imPossible task possible
Sanjeet Kumar ACC Candidate
Age 23 years
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All are in positive mood
Sanjeet was the student of Government polytechnic college purnea. On day he was detailed for modification of Indira Gandhi stadium in purnea. He went to site and know about the stadium construction. He gave soil for testing and made plan of stadium according to testing result. He showed plan to executive engineer and finally they agreed with that plan. He made chart of materials using for modification and within a month stadium was ready. He requested to higher engineer for visiting stadium. Accordingly he was appreciated by them.
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a student never detail for modification for stadium
Maine 2017 m 12th pass out hua par mere maths m 37 number the or physics m 60.or usi sal sal maine BSc m admission le liya.. or next year 2018 m maths k improvement diya or usmr 67 number aye... kya afsb m ye approve hogi ya nhi? Maine afcat 1 2020 clear kar liya.... please help
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Maine 2017 m 12th pass out hua par mere maths m 37 number the or physics m 60.or usi sal sal maine BSc m admission le liya.. or next year 2018 m maths k improvement diya or usmr 67 number aye... kya afsb m ye approve hogi ya nhi? Maine afcat 1 2020 clear kar liya.... please help