okay, I get that this is a team 7 family fic. Fine with it, but why does every character have their flaws fixed except Naruto? Why is Naruto so immature? Kami, it gets annoying.
@@NolimitRj-yt like, the author didn’t change Naruto’s ignorance or anything. He just gave him a couple powers, turned him into a willing killer and instead of saving an 8-year-old he kills her and absorbs her soul? I mean, the author claimed that it is a crack fic but it is a pet peeve of mine when everyone gets development ahead of Naruto. And the ‘big brother’ crap with Sasuke is annoying. Add Sakura into that mix and I clocked out.
Oh, OH, i know this story. Yeah, this is a good one! Please, you gotta post the sequal story when you finish with this
Yes
If part two is as good as part one I will be very happy
OH MY GYAAAAAT I GOTS SEE THIS
I would love to see part 2❤❤❤🥰😍
Thank god this guy is one of the very few people who actually complete these. Too many people just do 1 part then move onto some other fanfic
Ok I watched it was amazing and I give it 9.5/10
Wow 😮 now their family this is definitely going to be interesting 🤔🙂😁
I havent seen much on jinchurikis brother is a really good story😊
Already know this is gonna be another great story thank you bro keep up the good work
Love this story please I need another part
It was awesome please what about the snake obsession
PT2
Pls
God I'm going to love this story
Hopefully you make part 2
its HERE
Hey what about the Kami's Experiment.
are you going to continue the series ❤❤
ofc. next should be out in the following days
Well can't wait till the next part
Whoa 😮 this looks amazing
this is pretty solid
This is the most wholesome what if I've seen ever and I love it
I absolutely love this fic bro keep up the good work😁
@darksage are you going to also upload the sequel to this?
Please part two this is awesome
did he call it a crack fic?
The bones on his wrists remind me of the hidden blade from assassin's creed
Theres another one I cant find it was really good can you do that it one too?
okay, I get that this is a team 7 family fic. Fine with it, but why does every character have their flaws fixed except Naruto? Why is Naruto so immature? Kami, it gets annoying.
That’s what I’m saying
@@NolimitRj-yt like, the author didn’t change Naruto’s ignorance or anything. He just gave him a couple powers, turned him into a willing killer and instead of saving an 8-year-old he kills her and absorbs her soul? I mean, the author claimed that it is a crack fic but it is a pet peeve of mine when everyone gets development ahead of Naruto. And the ‘big brother’ crap with Sasuke is annoying. Add Sakura into that mix and I clocked out.
sasuke being the proficient one in seals has me almost dumping this fic
how do you get ai to read the fanfics