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A الكتابة باللغة الانجليزية: Descriptive Paragraph كتابة فقرة وصفية

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  • In a descriptive paragraph, you have to use sensory details such as sights, sounds, smells, tastes and feelings to create clear images in the imagination of your reader. Here is how to write it easily!

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  • @AhmedElrhazi
    @AhmedElrhazi  4 роки тому +29

    شكرا على تعليقاتكم المشجعة...اتمنى لكم كل خير في مسيرتكم الدراسية

  • @Mestafa6268
    @Mestafa6268 7 місяців тому +2

    جزاك الله خيرا ❤

  • @user-rn6tj1fj7h
    @user-rn6tj1fj7h 6 місяців тому

    than you sir for your effort

  • @moussatigui5314
    @moussatigui5314 4 роки тому +4

    Thank you. your expression is great. You take us in another world in which you the king ❤❤❤ really I expressed. Congratulations

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  4 роки тому

      M O U S S A T I G U I
      Thanks a lot for your comment. I'm glad that you have learned from it.

  • @ARISA.k65
    @ARISA.k65 Рік тому

    أفضل استاذ يشرح module ta3 writing 🖤

  • @Anasskallali
    @Anasskallali 4 роки тому +3

    We were waiting for this teacher thanks a lot

  • @zinebvoice9964
    @zinebvoice9964 8 місяців тому

    Amazing teacher I liked your style of writing

  • @naimabenyahlou4093
    @naimabenyahlou4093 Рік тому

    your lessons helped me a lot, thank you sir.

  • @abdoyou3380
    @abdoyou3380 2 роки тому

    Thannks a lot teatcher

  • @user-jr2ty3mj6p
    @user-jr2ty3mj6p 2 роки тому +1

    May Allah bless you teacher.
    This evening I have the exam of paragraph writing At Caddy Ayad University .

  • @khawlaa7652
    @khawlaa7652 3 роки тому

    The best professor for me👏

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому

      Thanks a looot Soufia. I am happy you are learning from my lessons ^^

  • @saidaaouardi4951
    @saidaaouardi4951 3 роки тому

    هلا اخطيك علينا ااستاذ ...ربي لي اجازيك...الفرحة لي كتدخل لقلوبنا منقدروش نوصفوها

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому +1

      بارك الله فيــــــــــــــــــك

  • @oussama28010
    @oussama28010 4 роки тому +1

    Good luck khoya and thanks for your help 🙏😅

  • @ultrasmaroc7409
    @ultrasmaroc7409 3 роки тому

    You are blessing teacher 💚

  • @saidosofficial217
    @saidosofficial217 4 роки тому +1

    Thanks teacher

  • @user-ru5yw9bu9d
    @user-ru5yw9bu9d 2 роки тому

    Thanks

  • @bachiryouness3622
    @bachiryouness3622 3 роки тому

    الله ينورك استاذي الكريم

  • @ilhamhimed4996
    @ilhamhimed4996 3 роки тому

    I tried to follow your example as you said and i hope that you will correct my mistakes thank you so much

  • @matarna77
    @matarna77 4 роки тому

    Thank you 😊 🌹

  • @user-ge1ig9fg2o
    @user-ge1ig9fg2o 3 роки тому

    good explanation 👍

  • @ilhamhimed4996
    @ilhamhimed4996 3 роки тому +1

    I would like to tell you about my room. It is the place where i feel comfortable and warm. It has a dark brown wooden door. Its walls are all painted grey. When you open the door , you see a blackboard .I like to write quotations in it because it gaves me more positive energy. On the right side of the room there is my bed. On the bed there are three bright purple pillows and one blanket. the blanket color is dark purple.I love to mix between colors because it makes me fell happy.Next to my bed , there is a table where i put all my cosmetic products. I prefere to apply my skin care routine before i sleep. My room has a big window and a balcony . every morning i open both of theme to get some fresh air. On the left side of my room , i have a small refrigerator where i put my snacks . I like to eat snacks at night . I have a small and simple room. however , it is warm and cosy . All in all , my room is my kingdom in which i am the queen .

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому +1

      I would like to tell you about my room. It is the place where i =(always capitalized) feel comfortable and warm. It has a dark brown wooden door. Its walls are all painted grey. When you open the door , you see a blackboard .I like to write quotations in it because it gIves me more positive energy. On the right side of the room, there is my bed. On the bed there are three bright purple pillows and one blanket. the blanket is dark purple. I love to mix colors because it makes me FEEL happy. Next to my bed , there is a table where i put all my cosmetic products. I prefer to apply my skin care routine before i sleep. My room has a big window and a balcony . Fvery morning, i open both of THEM to get some fresh air. On the left side of my room , i have a small refrigerator where i put my snacks . I like to eat snacks at night . I have a simple, small room. however , it is warm and cosy . All in all , my room is my kingdom in which i am the queen .
      ----Well done (y)

    • @ilhamhimed4996
      @ilhamhimed4996 3 роки тому

      @@AhmedElrhazi thank you

  • @charafaelkhaoua377
    @charafaelkhaoua377 3 роки тому

    تبارك الله عليك

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому

      بارك الله فيك...مرحبا

  • @user-mh8qr4gh2v
    @user-mh8qr4gh2v Рік тому

    بارك الله فيك...
    واش فهاد النوع من essays كنكتبو العرض على شكل فقرة وحدة مكنفرقوش بيناتهم بحال narrative essay؟

  • @mchaouarnezhaimane2753
    @mchaouarnezhaimane2753 3 роки тому

    Thank u so much

  • @mouradouzzine873
    @mouradouzzine873 3 роки тому

    شكرا جزيلا

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому

      بارك الله فيـــــــــــــك

  • @MaysanNSaeed
    @MaysanNSaeed 4 роки тому

    Niceeee

  • @jihanmisbah92
    @jihanmisbah92 3 роки тому

    Thank you

  • @TheQueen-so9td
    @TheQueen-so9td 3 роки тому +1

    Would you help me in this question that I have please? ?☺
    what is the way of spatial order used in the paragraph about "My "Room"
    and where is the topic sentence ??
    I think it's "My room is my lovely place in our house"
    Am I allright??

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому

      Salam...is this the paragraph in the video?

    • @TheQueen-so9td
      @TheQueen-so9td 3 роки тому

      @@AhmedElrhazi yes, of course.
      all my questions are about your paragraph in this video please can you answer me ☺

  • @hamzaart6960
    @hamzaart6960 3 роки тому +1

    Can we use metaphors and similies in descriptive paragraph or descriptive writing in general?

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому +1

      Sure; that will pour more beauty into your writing, those figures of speech will make it easy for your readers to imagine what you describe.

    • @hamzaart6960
      @hamzaart6960 3 роки тому

      Thank you teacher i appreciate it

  • @ichrakankaik5138
    @ichrakankaik5138 3 роки тому

    I like it

  • @haeseries6354
    @haeseries6354 3 роки тому +1

    أستاذ بغيت نسولك إلى كان ممكن
    واش ف descriptive paragraph واش ممكن تدير describe لل history ديال city , وتدير معاه supporting details عليها
    بحال مثلا
    Fes the old history of Morocco, first of all .....etc

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому

      I haven't understood you clearly. Write a few sentences to see what you mean. Thanks

    • @haeseries6354
      @haeseries6354 3 роки тому

      @@AhmedElrhazi
      Like this one
      Fes some of the old history of Morocco. first of all, the city is known as the home of the oldest university in the world "alqrawiyyin", which was established in 859. Also, the city there is the old city, and it's called Fes El Bali, last but not least, the city was the capital of Morocco until 1925..finally, when we talk about Fes the first thing that comes to mind is history, that's because the city has a lot of heritage and that's why it considered one of the important cities in morocco.

  • @khadijaaitallal2079
    @khadijaaitallal2079 3 роки тому

    thaaaaank youu so much we need ur precious videos.I have a question if you don't mind , what level do you teaching ??

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому

      You are most welcome Khadija. Which videos you mean?
      -Well, I teach English for beginners and sometimes for university students (not yet an official teacher :D )

    • @bachiryouness3622
      @bachiryouness3622 3 роки тому

      الله يسر ليك أخي الفاضل تاخد الدكتوراه بإذن الله.تستاهل

  • @salmald5023
    @salmald5023 3 роки тому +2

    Hello sir
    I hope this comment finds you well. I'm writing it as an example of what i had acquired from your video and would much appreciate it if you could correct it for me
    My best friend, Samia, posses so many amazing qualities that a lot of people, including me, appreciate about her. She is very healthy, hence the fact that she's slim and tall. Her face is square with big blue eyes and a beautiful mole next to her mouth. One thing about her is that she is very smart and interested in helping the environment. For example, she has joined every environmental campaign she could find and would always give me a hard time for throwing plastic on the ground. Another thing about her is her kindness as she always goes by a principal where she would either say kind words or stay quiet not to hurt others feelings. Samia is such a wonderful person and I am very blessed to call her my best friend and very grateful to have met her.
    Thank you for your time

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому +1

      ---Good start ;)
      My best friend, Samia, POSSESSES so many amazing qualities that a lot of people, including me, appreciate about her. She is very healthy, WHICH EXPLAINS WHY she's slim and tall. Her face is square with big blue eyes and a beautiful mole next to her mouth. One thing about her is that she is very smart and CARES ABOUT THE environment. For example, she has joined every environmental campaign she could find and would always give me a hard time for throwing plastic on the ground. Another thing about her is her kindness. She LIVES by a principal THAT MAKES HER EAITHER say kind words or stay quiet not to hurt others' feelings. Samia is such a wonderful person and I am very blessed to call her my best friend, and very grateful to have met her.

    • @salmald5023
      @salmald5023 3 роки тому

      @@AhmedElrhazi thank you so much for your help sir

  • @HajarHas-vj4og
    @HajarHas-vj4og 2 місяці тому

    غذا اندوز عاد جايا نفهم😅❤

  • @atlasjackson8192
    @atlasjackson8192 3 роки тому

    Teacher in the topic of describe your friend qualities, you describe his physical and character but in other videos the describe should include just the character of the friend , so what should I do.

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому

      Welcoe my student. Whatever you include in your description is all right as long as you can present it in a clear organized way.
      If you are unsure on the day of the exam, please ask your prof about that. Best of luck!

  • @abdelkarimrami9710
    @abdelkarimrami9710 3 роки тому

    Is it necessary to use liking words in writing a descriptive paragraph ?

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому

      If you're good at playing with words to produce smooth writing, then linking words don't matter. Otherwise they're helpful to put you on the track

    • @abdelkarimrami9710
      @abdelkarimrami9710 3 роки тому

      Thanks teacher I appreciate your help

  • @Kk-rg4qb
    @Kk-rg4qb 3 роки тому

    Where did you find the passage of "My Best Friend" I can't figure out the major support sentences in it.

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому

      I wrote it. And in the outline of the paragraph I wrote the supporting sentenes

    • @Kk-rg4qb
      @Kk-rg4qb 3 роки тому

      @@AhmedElrhazi ok thank you very much

  • @Anasskallali
    @Anasskallali 4 роки тому +1

    Is it in composition?

  • @user-ge1ig9fg2o
    @user-ge1ig9fg2o 3 роки тому

    Sorry but I have some ambiguity state about paragraph '' my best friend "
    if I want to find out the support sentences and classify them into major and
    minor sentences in the paragraph I don't know how to do that may you help me please? ??

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому

      Salam..Please explain to me more clearly I am afraid I did not get your point

    • @user-ge1ig9fg2o
      @user-ge1ig9fg2o 3 роки тому

      @@AhmedElrhazi ealaykum alsalam. ..
      I mean we have supporting sentences in your paragraph which is about "My best friend", so I want to find out these supporting sentences in the paragraph and how many supporting sentence do we have ?? After that I want to classify them into major and minor support sentence in other words which supporting sentences are major and which ones are minor? ?
      I hope you get my question !
      And I apologize for you . I asked more questions and it was something a little overrated 😓

    • @TheQueen-so9td
      @TheQueen-so9td 3 роки тому

      @@user-ge1ig9fg2o I think we have same question but different paragraph I hope he will answer us in few days. ..☺☺☺

  • @user-jk6yp6nz3w
    @user-jk6yp6nz3w 3 роки тому

    اوه معليش احسب ٤٥ دقيقة طلع ١٢ دقيقة بس 🌚 ، يالله نحطها ع الاختبارات هي السبب ماخلتني اركز

  • @nouhailaharakat6714
    @nouhailaharakat6714 3 роки тому

    In descriptive essay we dont leave spaces between paragraphs?

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому +1

      INDENTING the first line of each paragraph is obligatory. Other things are not necessary

    • @nouhailaharakat6714
      @nouhailaharakat6714 3 роки тому

      @@AhmedElrhazi thank u so much

  • @be__te_raelv3248
    @be__te_raelv3248 2 роки тому

    We say taller than me or taller than i'am???

  • @llllmanin9755
    @llllmanin9755 2 роки тому

    I need a pragraph from 8 lines about a place I visited 🥺

  • @Kawtar-stars
    @Kawtar-stars 3 місяці тому

    But why we dont have 3 paragraphe or so

  • @user-jm8dy4tk7e
    @user-jm8dy4tk7e 3 роки тому

    In paragraph ( my best friend )
    where are the support sentences a may you help me ?

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  3 роки тому

      Each supporting sentence is found under each IDEA

    • @user-jm8dy4tk7e
      @user-jm8dy4tk7e 3 роки тому

      @@AhmedElrhazi are there any sentences can I considered them as a minor sentences in this paragraph ( my best friend )

  • @charafaelkhaoua377
    @charafaelkhaoua377 3 роки тому

    ممكن فيديو على phonics s1

  • @abdellahmad2412
    @abdellahmad2412 4 роки тому +2

    مول الديسلايك بغيتي تبان اولا شنو ؟؟؟

  • @wissamhassani4163
    @wissamhassani4163 2 роки тому

    شحال نكتبو فقرة واش منفتوش 10

    • @AhmedElrhazi
      @AhmedElrhazi  2 роки тому

      Less than 10 (8 hakak) if the teacher limits the number of lines

  • @user-jk6yp6nz3w
    @user-jk6yp6nz3w 3 роки тому

    مرا طويل المقطع كنسلت اتفرج علية😨

  • @LovelySafa7
    @LovelySafa7 2 роки тому

    Can i have your contact ? Please sir