Call me a naughty boy if you must, but a little suggestion of hanky panky would’ve spiced up this sickly sweet story to adult level. Maybe a real person should add a chapter about the REAL connection we all crave, and this story is screaming for it!
Helluva story! But I do feel that since this WAS a mating ritual, the ending would have been better if they had stood there together contemplating the new, hybrid life she was now carrying within her. If it's going to be a love story, we don't need nasty details, but we do need a child of this strange new union.
very nice, but going forward in their intimacy would have been more satisfying. Still great storytelling, great characterizations. I look forward to more of your work.
Fake title xD until the end their was no mating at all ^^" Apart from that, except for the human brain and Thea's species brain they keep talking about biology but since it's only about psionic fusion... Not sure it's related to biology. What would've been fun would be that Thomas gained some psionic abilities too aside from that connection(a connection that already started to exist since they met it seems) since it was said his whole energy signature or whatever changed
Enjoy listening!
you have to be healthy to be around these female aliens .
Call me a naughty boy if you must, but a little suggestion of hanky panky would’ve spiced up this sickly sweet story to adult level. Maybe a real person should add a chapter about the REAL connection we all crave, and this story is screaming for it!
She opened the covered scales of her trap door on full display, ready for his ship to come if for docking.... But his ship had shipfilis
beautiful story of bonds and connecting 😊
This reminds me of a certain character undergoing Pon Farr, but with far more positive results.
Helluva story! But I do feel that since this WAS a mating ritual, the ending would have been better if they had stood there together contemplating the new, hybrid life she was now carrying within her.
If it's going to be a love story, we don't need nasty details, but we do need a child of this strange new union.
Excellent story! Thank you! 😊
Glad you enjoyed it!
Yes the best romance story on line of this kind.
Boom Thomas, ur pregnant.
haha oh no...I came here to study physics but my boss wants to fxk me to death
Excellent story!!!
Excellent story I fully enjoyed listening to
Excellent story! 👍😊
How come the one who creates the picture doesn't listen to the audio? They do match!!!!
very nice, but going forward in their intimacy would have been more satisfying. Still great storytelling, great characterizations. I look forward to more of your work.
Thank you!
Cool strot
you mean "as he scrolled through Google and watched some more UA-cam videos..." lol.
ie she's on her period
Greetings from Egypt
You know what I never understood this. If there are near- human, why do they have mateing season?
LOL. Think Star Trek and the Vulcan pon-far. Being near human doesn't mean human.
You know humans have “mating season” too right? You ever hear of ovulation lol?
@@scythianking7315not quite a season, more of a cycle.
Ya more detail in the mating please
Love wins !
Your best story so far... (Figures it was one I hesitated to watch-).
Cool story 👍
Thomases brown eyes🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Gee, he's not too smart about life. Why didn't he do the right things weeks ago.
I hope that's not all of the story
why doe these videos always have the alien with a wide open mouth?
And most are blue
This brings to mind a Bible verse, Matthew 19:6. Anyone interested can look it up.
Fake title xD until the end their was no mating at all ^^"
Apart from that, except for the human brain and Thea's species brain they keep talking about biology but since it's only about psionic fusion... Not sure it's related to biology. What would've been fun would be that Thomas gained some psionic abilities too aside from that connection(a connection that already started to exist since they met it seems) since it was said his whole energy signature or whatever changed
No SOUND ??
Apparently the problem is on your side, there is sound in the video!
@@SciFiLoreVault I THINK YOUR RITE. I RELOADED IT. AND I GOT THE SOUND . THANK YOU 😃👍🏽
The title appears to have nothing to do with the story line. I'm outta here. Otherwise, this might have been an interesting story
How many more spellings of the "" elicit"" could you find ????? 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🏴🏴🏴🏴