Comments Section Investigation Day 4: The admiralty informs us that they decided it was safer not to bombard blue Larissa from orbit. Instead they detonated the nearest star. Day 4 Addendum: Blue Larissa persists. The priest caste insists that we stop our course of action and instead pay tribute in the form of "+1 Like"
We need more good human narrators. You’ve provided a decent base startup. But again, there should be more than just the narration as it is a bit jolting. A good intro and some royalty free tune in the background, something spacey or something. It has to do with gearing up for the story. But what you’ve given has added pretty well to these story narrations. Far too many use shitty AI voices to spout out nonsense crap. Our cyber friends aren’t as advanced as the ones we tell one another amongst these Star circles.
You should have more subscribers, just because you aren’t AI. You pronounce things right, or correct yourself, instead of trying a different way each time and still getting it wrong 😂😂
5:33 “yep, it’s cancer”
Hmmm this one short story could turn into quite a series!
New sub here. Good reading. Nice to have a real life reader who doent have a million adverts, too!
Thank you!
Lunch story. Perfect. I mean, story released right at my lunch time. I don’t think he aliens are going to make potted meat sandwiches
Are you sure? :)
Comments Section Investigation Day 4: The admiralty informs us that they decided it was safer not to bombard blue Larissa from orbit. Instead they detonated the nearest star. Day 4 Addendum: Blue Larissa persists. The priest caste insists that we stop our course of action and instead pay tribute in the form of "+1 Like"
Excellent narration as always, but I do have to say that the audio is a bit too low.
Decent story but the repeated mispronunciation of “freighter” with a long ī sound and not the normal long ā sound was excruciating.
If her name is Larissa shouldn't this be first person narration?
I'll be sure to try some first person stuff don't worry!
We need more good human narrators. You’ve provided a decent base startup. But again, there should be more than just the narration as it is a bit jolting. A good intro and some royalty free tune in the background, something spacey or something. It has to do with gearing up for the story.
But what you’ve given has added pretty well to these story narrations. Far too many use shitty AI voices to spout out nonsense crap. Our cyber friends aren’t as advanced as the ones we tell one another amongst these Star circles.
Freighter. Pronounced Frayter. Sounds like Hater.
Freight is another word for Cargo.
Cargo-Hauler.
You should have more subscribers, just because you aren’t AI. You pronounce things right, or correct yourself, instead of trying a different way each time and still getting it wrong 😂😂