First Burn: Hamilton Animatic
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- Опубліковано 15 жов 2024
- I don't own the music. I only own the drawings. The credits go to Lin-Manuel Mirand and the singers: Arianna Afsar, Julia Harriman, Lexi Lawson, Rachelle Ann Go & Shoba Narayan
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Eyyy, I'm back from the grave :p
Ever since I first heard this song, I wanted to create an Animatic for it although I kept on procrastinating and almost gave up on the thought of making one.
(After all, the last time that I made something similar to this is... 3 or 4 years ago lol. And that video has a copyright strike fml)
Soooo, yeah! Here you are!
To my subscribers, sorry this is not anime related hahaha.
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"we are your legacy"
Hamilton was chasing around his legacy his whole life never realizing that it was right there being neglected
Frances Buckle and soon would be forgotten
That's my favorite line
there's 666 likes, i wont like ur comment sorry
Please don't come at me but I think she should've said "we WERE your legacy " because he already screwed up with himself and his family
@@gayglassanimation7482 In a way they are still his legacy. His decendants and the way he treated them is a part of how people remember him. Not coming at you
“Your enemy whispers so you have to scream!” Pretty good summary of Alexander throughout the play.
Quinntus79 Yeah, I love the line
Throughout *life. The real-life Hamilton was a hella intense person. He wrote a 14,000-word letter pretty much just shit talking John Adams. You can find and read it if you want, it's published on a few sites. It's pretty funny.
Quinntus79 it gave me chills
also the icarus line killed me bc i love mythology like that and jesus that harmony was _good_
Quinntus79 those vocals gave me chills
@@sparrow.6392 Are you talking about an especial letter or the Adams' pamphlet? Btw, actually THIS pamphlet destroyed his career, because he shit-talked not only Adams, but his whole party. And Adams and Hamilton were in one party. But honestly I can imagine Hamilton writing a dozen of letters such as these.
straight line: ________
dashed line: - - - - - - -
Iconic line: *I see how you look at my sister*
Straight things don't exist in Hamilton hunny-
AWeirdAndBurntPieceOfToast PFFFT-
@@Cryonically
Am I wrong?
@@burntbread12 nope
@@PrincessOfTheWholeUniverse
Exactly
“Dearest Eliza,”
ALEXANDER YOU DIDN’T PUT A COMMA AT DEAREST YOU LITTLE SH-
Cindy the monster lol
I'm still waiting for youtube to have hearts instead of likes. I wanna give it to this comment cuz its so underrated.
Cindy the monster You don’t put a comma after dearest.....did you not go to English class?
Edit: THANK YOU TO YASASHII for helping me understand this joke 11 months ago. During those 11 months I watched the entire play, I was going off of 0 information on the play and I shouldn’t have been rude. I am now actually a huge Hamilton fan and I realized I was rude af. Please forgive me.
Elipsaun Films It’s an inside joke from another song (forgot what it was called) but Angelica says that Alexander put the comma at dearest and it like made her think about the meaning or something. (Sorry if I’m wrong I haven’t listened in a while)
@@sharkie9975 Uhm....A:He did B:You don’t any way but this was still funny
Elisa has the hair style of every anime mom that dies...👀👀
tru
Fr
*sAy tHAt aGaiN*
And yet, she is the one who lives the longest.
Omg I didnt even notice that hahaha
Eliza: "I see the way you look at my sister"
Alexander: And I oop-
Sksksk
-_-
Save the turtles
So Is Hamilton A Vsco Boi Now- ?
@@sinnamaruchch1397 XD
My Dear Eliza
My Dearest,Angelica
My Friend,John Lauren's
I mean, c'mon Alexander.
Lol i wonder who he likes the most xD
He needs to be more original
Robo Studios Lams ftw
My Dear Evan Hansen. Jaja k creisi, perdón por meter mi cuchara
u mean what the in the poop world XD
Why nobody is talking about how beautiful he draw her eyes?
ikr
I think it’s a she
I am obsessed with her facial expressions
“Do you know what Angelica said when I told her what you’d done” she said “don’t worry sugar I’ll get Dads gun”.
"Don't worry, my Dear Eliza, I'll go fetch daddy's gun from his wardrobe."
Well
HEY ALEXANDER YOU BETTER GET YOUR ASS OFF THAT CHAIR AND START RUNNING CUZ ANGELICA WENT FULL ON PROTECTIVE MOTHER MODE
Oh yeah she also has a gun with your name on it
I guess you could say Angelica I’d bringing....
Guns and ships to kick hammys ass
Yeah I know,I’m not funny
She said "Oh, I guess I dodged a bullet with that whole liking him thing-" **OBNOXIOUSLY LOUD COUGH**
"I MEAN you have married an Icarus..."
Yasssss
**eliza's voice** when will you learn that -
**shrill pre-pubescent boy voice** THAT YOUR ACTIONS HAVE CONSEQUENCES!! !
Pfftt-hahahaha
YOU FRICKIN’ FRICKS!!!!!!! YOU GUYS KILLED THE SONIC SERIES!!!!!!!
IM LOSING MY MARBLES
OOF
Mariposita Lmao 😂😂
"Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart,"
Damn.
This is *deep*
But seriously that was savage!!
Ikr and I'm the 666 like
I'm actually wondering how she reacted irl ._.
Yeah like, jezus, you didn't have to kill the man lol
I just realized why I like First Burn more than Burn.
Throughout the musical, Eliza is wanting to settle down and is a bit ignorant when it came to love. She trusted a man with a foundation made of his love letters. She was in love with the Alexander presented on a page he wrote to her. Eliza built an emotional wall with the letters to shield herself from the arrogant jerk Alex really was.
In Burn, she tears down the wall inside. In her mind, burning the letters was seeing the truth about the man she had fallen for. Nobody but her needed to know her feelings, not even Alex. She only kicked him out of her bed. She's not the powerful yet ignorant Elizabeth Schyler we were introduced to. Her emotional stability was literally and figuratively burned in the fires of sadness and rage.
But, in First Burn, she doesn't hold back. Eliza confronts Alex, not to mock him or make him feel more guilty, but to give him a reality check and tell him how she feels and felt throughout their marriage. She was emotional, of course, but she stood her ground. She removed the rose-colored glasses she had been wearing since Helpless. Eliza destroyed not just the letters, but the man who wrote them to build her trust. She finally realized who Alex was. This song kinda explains the line "Why do you assume you're the smartest in the room" from Non-Stop. He thought he was smart. He saw a beautiful legacy being built up around him. When Maria came to him, a wrecking ball crashed into his future. That wreaking ball was Eliza's words telling him he was being dumb. His legacy wasn't something he did, but someone he was close with. Eliza told him his legacy wasn't his, but his children's.
Thank you! That's all. Did I get an A+ on my essay?
Beautiful 😔👌
I agree with everything you said other then the "the man he really is". I wouldnt say he was absolutely horrible for this but he made a huge mistake. He honsestly was a pretty normal man in the renaissance living his life he made that mistake lost his wifes trust but other then that he was nothing else but a hard-working straight forward nice guy.
How about.
A++++++++++++
Wait,.
Eliza has glasses?
@@mjelizabethhu No, its an expression. It means she loved Alex so much that every red flag went unnoticed by her.
Angelica: grab my gun.
*t poses to alexander*
**mcfucking steals your pfp**
D o m i n a n c e
Kastuki Bakugou omG BAKUGo
@@venti757 oMG TODOROKI
Alexander: *is like your pfp lmao*
2:17
I love how her face went from apathy to sorrow and then into anger.
And the to friggin ATTACK MODE
Hamilton is watching how his wife is becoming the most powerful fire mage which will burn all his letter
and probably their house too
Yep
World Dominator 101 But it’s quiet uptown
Tele Maniac probably him too
I was about to cry while listening to this song and the art who made it but this makes me happy xD
this comment*
1:10 can we just acknowledge the fact that the animator literally wrote out a letter, not just squigglies.
Fr
This clearly proves that hamilton would be an amazing anime
FINALLY SOMEONE SAID IT
yes
Someone start the movement
If this was an anime id watch the shit out of this
True true very true....
Eliza: Alexander cheated on me...
Angelica: Hold on, I think I have a gun with his name on it
Angelica: Gun is what I call the dull knife well use to disembowel him
Unfortunately Burr was the one with bullet with Alexander's name not Angelica nor Eliza
Guess he must've stolen it at some point.
Omg 😂😂😂
Why would you want to kill one of the best founding fathers?
Lauri Törni It’s.A.Joke.
“Did you hear what Angelica said when she heard what you’d done?”
“She said ‘You have married and icarus now go get my gun’”
OOP- 😳😳🤭🤭
I’M DIEING-
LMAOO
When it’s your 16 time watching this and it still hasn’t gotten old
Ha that’s preschool level. I have watched it 50 times and it hasn’t gotten old. I’m being sirius
I'm watching this for the 100th time and I just started to watch it yesterday ( on replay)
OMG YESSSSSSS! I AM 11 AND I CRY EVERYTIME I WATCH THIS EVEN THO ITS MY 26 TH TIME ( I kept count )
Accurate.
Fr tho
the way the outline of angelica sort of popped out from behind eliza was so cool. i also thought the way angelica looked so angry fro her sister while eliza just looks so resigned was really powerful and very demonstrative of their dynamic and relationship.
1:44 This part is savage. " SO YOU HAVE TO SCREAM " That part is really cool with the two switching and then the girl says Scream. Its so cool
-The girl's name is Eliza, though I'm pretty sure you already know.
- And the mans name is Alexander, but I'm sure you already know his name aswell
and the ultimate warrior's name is Paper Mario, but I'm also sure you know this dude aswell.
"Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart"
Historians: F in the chat to pay respects
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“We are your legacy” - that line always makes me choke up, I wish they kept it in the final cut
I know! For me it's the most powerful line.
I’m surprised the anime style works so well for a Hamilton animatic. This is honestly beautiful. Everything looks so clean and professional
I feel they should of kept this version. A lot of peoplr say its jot like eliza but this song shows Eliza as strong and despite wanting to be with alexander and being both sad and angry. Also Eliza is sometimes seen (not too often but ive seen quite a few people say it) as a pushover kind of charecter and this song would eliminate that view
While this is a great song, it wouldn’t have played nearly as well on stage. It’s a version that would work excellently in an animated medium where reality can be stretched and exaggerated, but it’s not suited for a stage performance or even a live action film version.
Also, this version plays more as Eliza reacting to Hamilton, rather than her taking control of her own narrative.
I do prefer this version of the song for listening and singing along to on its own, but I prefer The regular burn in the context of the show and onstage.
The reason it didn't make the cut is probably because it's hard to find 4 more Elizabeths
I think the reason why they used Burn instead is because this doesn’t fit Eliza’s gentle and sweet nature. I mean sure she’s mad when she finds out about the affair, but instead she knows that it’s better to voice it out carefully than to yell it all out. Speaking quietly makes someone listen rather than yelling for their attention (Alex I’m looking at you-)
From now on im gonna edit how many times i watch this bc this is my 17th time already.
Two years later and I’m still watching this
Hit the hundreds yet?
Yo me too though!!
This should honestly be illegal, it's just too beautiful. My small brain is exploded. T^T I love this so much T^T
I’m at my 5th time watching
Eliza: *I see how you look at my sister...*
Angelica: [looks at Peggy]
Peggy: [hurriedly tears off red dress and puts on yellow one]
Both: [tries to look innocent]
Both: [*SWEATS NERVOUSLY*]
Angelica Schuyler heh I get the joke 😂
Allora Jones what’s the joke I know nothing bout the musical
Babyfacenai the joke was that the actor who played Peggy was the same actor as the girl in the red dress aka Maria (I think) which was the woman who tricked Alexander to cheat on Eliza
That’s all I know if I’m wrong someone please correct me :)
@Allora Jones you’re right
@@nai3216 and Angelica was Eliza's other sister who Hamilton had feelings for
Alexander: Okay, imma write about how I cheated on my wife. It's not like she'll find out!
Eliza: HIPPOTY HOPPITY, ILL GIVE OUR HEARTS A CHOPITY.
Lol
Paper Mario: Consider yourself not alive. *Scissors noises*
do you know what angelica said, when I told her what you had done? She said you have married a idiot, now run and go get my gun
IT FREAKING RHYMES AND FITS PERFECTLY
@Galaxy Gachas Best older sister xD
A roast to the groom (To the groom, to the groom, to the groom)
From the Bride! (From the briiddeeee)
You said "a roast to the groom"
Iris Lavender)) thats the point...
The bride roasted the groom
TO YOUR SISTER
:3
Also you said a roast to the groom and yeah
She roasted him XD
Saeranie Salazar
From the sisters!
Empress Sketch oh
I'm just going to point out the real letter at 1:09. This is a real letter that Hamilton sent to Eliza on the 8th of August, 1780 and is one of his most well-known letters to Eliza in the middle of their courtship. But this is a sign of an artist who does their research for weird people like me who enjoy historical accuracy - so thank you for that.
The pain on her face at 1:35... I felt that. Amazing work ❤️
IKR!!!!!
yeah amazing
OMG i'm your 1000th like
So satisfying watching the number change to 1k
Fun Fact I got from the Hamilton book Lin was inspired by:
Eliza loved Hamilton so much that she actually kept his letters he sent her and burned the ones she sent to him
💖💖💖
Sugar Sweetz AWWWWWWWWW 😭😭😭😭
Sugar Sweetz Aww
Ooooh, this makes so much sense! "I'm erasing myself from the narrative" - In a way she really did erase herself if she burned her own letters
*GASP*
Oh my heart
*I can’t*
Alex why
Just why
I'm in love with the last 40 seconds because it shows Alex trying to kiss/hug her but Eliza is resisting and right in the end I thought he would succeed from how close he was to her, but then BAM, she pushed him away like no tomorrow
Holy HECC you noticed me
Nina Momochi
ahahahhaa ^^ I love reading the comments :) (for better or for worse hahaha)
Thanks so much for watching!
kurowoof Are you kidding? I saw the thumbnail and I was like "...Youve already seen too much Hamilton...SCREW IT IT LOOKS G UUD, and I have no regrets cuz this animation is amazing, so is the art and everything else. This practically begged me to see it!
Nina Momochi
Eliza: Bby, I still love you but I can't even believe you'd too that too your own wife.
Your terrible, don't kiss or hug me...but I still wuv you for all the mistakes you did.
Honestly by the end just give her a knife, she looks like she's ready about to kill/stab a bitch 😂😅
FYI:
It wasn't Maria's fault that the affair happened.
1. It was Hamilton's fault for letting it happen.
2. It was her husband's fault for making Maria
do it so he could get more money.
Wait I thought she did it for a random reason in her head o-O
Not to get more money
Finally someone said it! I’ve seen so many people shame Maria even tho it was her husband who made her do it
I would say it is all three of their faults. Regardless of who says what, and what happens, it is up to each person to make the right choice. As you favorite saying goes "you are responsible for you". It is Alexander's fault for being unfaithful. Despite any plot against him, he absolutely could have chosen to not be that man, but he didn't. Maria did not have to do it. She could have chosen to say "despite my husband and the troubles we may have, I will not be that women. I will not be unfaithful, nor will I be a homewrecker. Let that fate fall on another women" but she didn't. Yes, it is a hard choice to make in her position, but no one ever said the right thing was the easy thing to do. And her husband is of course at fault for being a piece of trash for even daring to think it was ok to plot something like that. To use his wife as a whore and blackmail a man. The three share the blame equally for all making the choice to engage in this affair.
Exactly Eliza never showed any resentment or anger towards Maria because Alexander ruined her life too
@@roxannabellkuehn4645 Maria HAD no choice in it. Her daughter would've been harmed by Reynolds if Maria didn't comply. She was a victim of both of these men, and she doesn't deserve the reputation that she has. Maria was a victim who had little support to save herself.
*looks like the letters weren't the only thing roasted to a crisp.*
ALEXANDER WAS ROASTED!!!
oof.
*He's roasted ham.*
Alexander's dignity and pride.
*Someone call 911 cause i can't breathe out of the shookness i got from watching this im too speechless i can't breathe its too perfect lord please take my soul and i can die happily omg this is the best thing ever send help please i can't stop raping the replay button*
Miyuki Sakuraba you said raping the replay button:/
OPEN UP ITS THE FBI !
Miyuki Sakuraba OPEN UP THIS IS THE POLICE
U-uh
Miyuki Sakuraba I think we should call 911 not because of your amazement, but because of all the fire… But it still is really pretty🤗
Angelica: He’s a great man Eliza...
Eliza: Aww he makes me feel so helpless.
Peggy: (puts on red dress)
Alexander: I cheated on you.
Eliza: I see how you look at my sister!
Ha YEIT! Right though!
...which sister?
Peggy"s dead my then RIP
@@samanthaguerranunez7303 Peggy is actually very much alive. The Reynolds Pamphlet was published around 1797, and Peggy died in 1801, 8 months prior to Philip Hamilton's death.
Beatrize Margaux oh yeah sorry for getting that wrong, thanks for the correction
Eliza: I see how you look at my sister
Alexander: Peggy?
Eliza: . . .
Peggy: [sweats nervously]
This was honestly so powerful to watch. You can see the balance of sorrow and anger coming from Eliza, but there’s something else I’ve noticed as well that I don’t see. There was this perfect mix of her knowing she couldn’t, _shouldn’t_ be walking back into Alexander’s arms, but yet longing for it despite the ache. It’s the moments like 2:08 that really demonstrate how much she misses the way her husband was before the war, before his employment as Secretary, before the dreaded Reynolds Pamphlet scandal. She loves and wants him again, but she can’t even recognize him anymore.
Alexander also plays a big part in this too, and while not noticeable at first, you can sense and feel the pain and regret in his own eyes too. The sight of his wife falling to pieces because of his own wrongdoings is breaking him, and you demonstrated so well how he longs to try and explain himself, but gets cut off, because this was irreversible, and was life-changing to the point where even the tolerant Eliza couldn’t take it. You can see the heartbreak in his eyes, the fear of all of those memories disappearing of the sweet Schuyler sister, only leaving the despondent and broken Eliza he sees before him, knowing it was his fault in the first place.
And then the climax. Oh my god, that last chorus. That still image at 2:27, especially with the fluid movements is absolutely gorgeous and dare I say, breathtaking. Alexander desperately reaching for the disappearing and burning memories before him, but failing to grasp at them. The children seeing the broken down state of their mother, the tears flowing from both of their eyes. The anger, sorrow, longing, regret, bitterness was laced into just forty seconds. Every bit of that ending was absolutely jaw-dropping, and I’m in love with your take on “First Burn”.
It’s heart-wrenching, yet for all of the right and wrong reasons. Thank you for your hard work, and well done on this 💛
Oh. Oh woooow~ Thank you so much! This comment. I will pin it. Not just here. I will print it and pin it on my wall!!!!
I love your commeeeennttt. Reeaaally! Thank you for noticing 2:08 T_T I wanted to show that Eliza herself was one of the women who were charmed by Alex and the inner conflict she feels.
Thank you again!
BriGoesVocal please do more . I love your work so I keep watching it over again and your drawing you did on everything in this video ☺️😉🎶🎶
kurowoof Awwww!! You’re so sweet ahh! Thank you again for making this; I’m glad I was able to make you happy with my ramblings ahah ; v ;
Keep up the great work!!
BriGoesVocal u
kurowoof can you make videos this please
There is something about this animatic that I just keep coming back to. I know everyone is discussing Eliza, but I want to discuss Hamilton at the start. We open up on a scene where Eliza is sitting with the lantern, looking at the letters and in comes a rather... empty looking Hamilton. He knew what he was doing, he knew after the fact that he had hurt Eliza much more than he had known, and that is the most realistic part about his expression at the start. It goes from the numbing realization to the tragic, painful recognition of just how much he had hurt her. What he had lost in publishing those letters. It was not just a political loss, but a very personal one. He never believed that he would be satisfied, but as he watches Eliza during this sequence, you can tell that he is slowly deteriorating and the mask he wears to try and hide what he feels finally breaks when he realizes that his legacy, his family, his wife, and his life was affected by the publication. You have shown this flawlessly, and I cannot stop watching it.
Eliza... wow. I always felt that no matter how sweet and kind you are, having something like this revealed after so long... you would be angry and lash out, so the regular Burn held less of an effect than First Burn and this animatic shows exactly why. Eliza flips through her sorrow and anger so quick, so readily, that it shows her conflict. Simply starting out, when she says "Don't take another step in my direction" you can tell that she's angry, immediately dissolving into a pained expression of her sorrow. What Alexander had done to her was a betrayal, a pain, she never believed he would have, or could have, done. At 1:34, you can see the shock and pain in her eyes and it is a punch in the gut.
But one of my favorite parts of this animatic is the sequence where she starts with "Heaven forbid," because the flashing between Eliza and Alexander draws a parallel that I find extremely interesting. She is justified in her anger, she is justified in her words, and at 1:46 you can clearly see where anger leads you: on the lines of screaming be it for the right reasons (Eliza) or for the wrong reason (Alexander). And the spine chill that I got at 1:52?! Ouch, my heart. Especially since you see Alexander attempt to respond, only to be cut off. He had his time to talk, he had ample time to say something, and now it was Eliza's... and he would hear it.
Of course, that's not my favorite part, but definitely a contender. The animatic is just a pure piece of art and I watch it almost daily! I really hope to see more from you, and your art, sometime in the future!!! ♥
Aelthya Games Wooowww~ Thank you! i love your comment! ❤️ I really appreciate it when people enumerate their favorite scenes ☺️ It makes me feel that they really paid attention to my efforts. THANK YOU AGAIN! 😚
Wow same :333
1:34-?.. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Nicole ;-;
@@nat-hp3pk Lol... That reaction...
Eliza can wear a scrunchie better than all of us.
FACTS
Periodt.
Eat your draino out, Heather Chandler!
@@hopper8514 *puts on red scrunchie*
@@comegeturapplesauce
*takes your scrunchie*
*replaces my green scrunchie with your red one*
Honestly I love the Hamilton musical, but if i walk into a room one more time and my friends scream "Angelica, Eliza, and Peggy"..... mom you have forever cursed me with the name Angelica
WOW.
I'm so happy that I stumbled on this because holy COW I'm in love with your art style!!
Your shading. Your lineart. The way you draw your expressions. This is absolutely GORGEOUS and you should be really proud of it!!
I especially love the shadow of Eliza's hair on her face aaaa!!!! 2:26 had me STUNNED, but honestly every single frame of this animatic looks amazing!! I also LOVED the part at 1:47 when it switches between Eliza and Alexander, with the colors switching too and just ahjifihujegyhuiwffnjiwefgyhiweghuifiwehfiw I can't imagine how long this must have taken you, but your hard work really REALLY shows!
I hope I see more content from you! You're incredibly talented and I'm LIVING for your art !!
Emirichu
Oh wow! Thanks so much! It means a lot coming from you~ ❤️❤️
Emirichu OMG HI EMIRICHU! Also i just came back from ur version of first burn wow coincidence XD
Hamilton fans unite
Emirichu :0 EMIRICHU I LOVE YOU! NOTICE ME SENPAI EVEN THO IM IRELEVANT SO YOU WONT NOTICE ME
Emirichu OML I JUST WATCHED YOUR FIRST BURN ANIMATIC!!! I so wish that u could see this but I really don't mean anything so i'll just have to do with being unnoticed :)
Honestly that eye roll is giving me so much life lmao. And when she references whispering the look on her face is almost smug in my opinion which I love because she's trying to show she's not some moonstruck idiot like she feels Hamilton was making her out to be with the affair. A beautifully done piece of artwork codos to you my dear :)
She got some sass
Your not the only one I love it to.!!
Yezzie's Place 2:18
Yezzie's Place np!!
Kids: Mummy, what are we having for dinner tonight?
Eliza: *RoAsTeD hAm.*
edit: Wow, thanks for all the likes I am shooketh ❤️
Yes but also no
XD
And I oop...
Roasted HAM-ilton
Mooshi Mello woah that’s a good one
1:09 Letter. I found this on an article and immediately after reading the first sentence realised these were the same letters, so here, if you wanna read all the letter then it's right here.
Immediately after dinner, I stole from a crowd of company to a solitary walk to be at leisure to think of you, and I have just returned to tell you by an express this moment going off that I have been doing so. You are certainly a little sorceress and have bewitched me, for you have made me disrelish every thing that used to please me, and have rendered me as restless and unsatisfied with all about me, as if I was the inhabitant of another world, and had nothing in common with this. I must in spite of myself become an inconstant to detach myself from you, for as it now stands I love you more than I ought-more than is consistent with my peace. A new mistress is supposed to be the best cure for an excessive attachment to an old- if I was convinced of the success of the scheme, I would be tempted to try it- for though it is the pride of my heart to love you it is the torment of it to love you so much, separated as we now are. But I am afraid, I should only go in quest of disquiet, that would make me return to you with redoubled tenderness. You gain by every comparison I make and the more I contrast you with others the more amiable you appear. But why do you not write to me oftener? It is again an age since I have heard from you. I write you at least three letters for your one, though I am immersed in public business and you have nothing to do but to think of me. When I come to Albany, I shall find means to take satisfaction for your neglect. You recollect the mode I threatened to punish you in for all your delinquen[c]ies.
I wrote you a long letter by your father. I suppose you will wait his return before you write. If you do I shall chide you severely and if you do not write me a very long and fond one by him, I shall not forgive you at all. I have written you a short letter since that.
We are now at Dobbes ferry.
I would go on but the General summons me to ride. Adieu My Dear lovely amiable girl. Heaven preserve you and shower its choicest blessings upon you. Love me I conjure you.
A Hamilton
A. Ham
@@gangrenousgandalf2102 A Ham
@@operaspaceopera A.Burr
I love 1:42 because you see everyone doubting him and in the back you can see Jefferson, orchestrating it all, showing how truly paranoid Hamilton was of him
(But then later he still promotes jefferson over burr so that shows just how much of a dick move that was, burr was justified in being pissed)
not gonna lie, your animatic popped up on my recommended and i watched it and became obsessed with hamilton. you are the reason i got into this amazing fandom and you are the reason i was able to learn a large piece of history. thank you for making this.
your work is amazing and your art is GORGEOUS!
emycheu OMG SO TRU
Yes it’s true
Does anyone know how to know the full story of the musical?
Omg same!!!
@@kadoosca Disney plus
"Do you know what Angelica said, when I've told her what you've done? She said:"
*IMMA BEAT HIS ASS SO HARD HE'S GON' CRY TO HIS MAMA!!!*
Eliza: Angelica, Alexander has no mom..
I wish that was what it said
Well, heck everyone! You don't have to make it sound so harsh!
@@novalia6824 yes I agree with that maybe Alexander didn't know what he was doing until he realised how much power hungry he had become. Guys he's also a person and everyone makes mistakes so don't be so harsh on him
@@girishmahadev713 aww thank you :3
Look, Eliza's wearing the anime hairstyle of death!
Omg lol, underated, I get it XD
*will they tell your story?*
Funny how she is the last to die.
Please tell me someone noticed the dead look in the daughter's eyes as the children stood in the background! That is pure resentment!
Queen Raiza I noticed it too . This animatic is amazing.
Wow. Her pain at 2:53 *shook*
2:53 ?
That last frame was so good though
Don't forget about 2:55 tho-
2:56
This seriously gave me more chills than some of the other animatics of this. Especially the final parts of the song
Eliza: Did you know what Angelica said when I told her what you'd done?
Angelica:
*You married an idiot, let me go get dad's gun-*
W h e e z e-
This is hands down the best animatic of this song I've seen to date. There's so many correlations and connections being drawn, and done beautifully so with smooth motion and a video that builds narrative over the pre-existing source material. I get chills a number of times through the video, finding myself pity Alexander, but never able to forgive.
I think what really speaks to me is that Alex in this video is a dynamic character. In other versions I've watched, Alex is either static or never really shows up. In this, you can see how hollow he begins. He knows he's messed up, but he doesn't understand the scope of his mistakes. The implications of his actions slowly fill him when Eliza rightfully doesn't give him the time of day to try and explain himself, and he realizes it's too late to stop the fires he's put himself into. At the end, he wants to console her. But by seeing the way he's breaking at the seams, I want to believe it's at least partially because he wants forgiveness (can you imagine), but it's something that Eliza doesn't give him. This whole situation is too far gone and no words, spoken or written, can possibly atone for the things that has transpired due to Alex's recklessness.
Now don't get me started on Eliza. She is superbly realistic in this video. I saw so much conflict in her. Other videos portray her to be some fiery ball of vengeance after a little bit of sadness in the beginning. Not here. She's so wracked with grief through the entire ordeal. She's crying through the whole thing. The amount of willpower she's putting forth to destroy any semblance of retribution for Alex isn't something she takes lightly. It was her life too. One that she shared with someone who she devoted herself to. But she goes through. She needs to teach him a lesson. Eliza is determined to make this the penultimate moment. She's done with the bullshit and Alex will feel how she's felt: betrayed, lost, and filled with doubt. These words that he wrote were his story to her, his way of expressing his feelings in the way that he knew best, and it's gone. All gone. And they both know it.
Goddamit. I'm gonna watch it again
I 100% agree with everything you said the emotion and the story telling of there faces, Alexander doesn’t even need to say anything and yet we get so much from his facial expressions honestly this whole thing is a masterpiece this girl needs to get a job working on an anime or something like outstanding work!
I love how at first her hairstyle was a neat (dead mom hairstyle 😂😂) and as she was moving her hair became messy! Genius!!
Kira Kamui
She looked like Carla from AOT
Both beautiful women.
That ending expression was STUNNING. Every emotion comes across beautifully in this animatic, but the sheer anger in the last frame blew me away. You can see all of Eliza's raw pain in this, and they way it just culminates at the end is just *chef's kiss* perfect.
Well done!
Ok, here we go!
0:44 - I'm not entirely sure why I like seeing the fire go out right then, I guess it just looks nice? But I also think it goes along beautifully! I really like it!
1:22 - the reflection in his eye! Whoa! I love it, it's beautiful! Like, whoa, idk what else to say! It's so beautiful!
1:46 - I love how it switched between the two of them and even switched colors! 💕
2:08 - I really liked seeing that in there! It's like her wanting to go back but remembering she shouldn't so she's trying to perish the thought of it! 💙
2:18 - I really liked seeing the eye roll, again, not entirely sure why. Maybe it's because if I did this I would probably make an eye roll there too so I really liked seeing it!
2:28 - I've seen quite a few comments about this being beautiful and I entirely agree! Like how could I not love this? It looks so pretty! Even the hair! Like whoa!!❤❤
*2:46**, that scene is drawn so well and demonstrates all the emotions going on and the reaction of the children so greatly. i love it.* 💖
I love what you did for the "I don't know who you are." This is a great animatic, so keep up the good work!
Eliza in burn: Don’t do that again ok
Eliza in first burn: lister here hamiltrash sit on those thumb tacks over there and when you cry those tears will be your only sustenance for a week
this isn't my comment I just thought it applied here. It's from emirichu's video on First Burn
I feel like there would be a lot more angry swearing.
@@gangrenousgandalf2102 tru
@@gangrenousgandalf2102 GODD** IT ALEX,
Paper Mario: How many Elizas do I need to disintegrate?
@@havocadvent2 i-
I love how you can see so much pain in Eliza by even the smallest details. Like.. the light illuminating her eyes. And even her hair slowly falling out of place from her coming undone. Showing how she longs to be there with him, but she knows for a fact it would be a mistake Wonderfully made.
One of the best Hamilton animatics I’ve ever seen (Even though it makes me depressed) 😭😭
It makes you sad, not depressed
Why have i watched this over 10 times on repeat...
Oh wait it’s because it’s beautiful
But I know, I know, I know,
Life can be beauti-
Oh wait, wrong musical, sorry. Have a nice day, we can talk later, just not today.
@@professoroffaeology *heathers club!!*
I'm watching it to feel better about my own failed relationship
Excuse me, but... umm... only 10?!
I listen to it everyday, no seriously 😆😆
Eliza: when will you learn that they are your legacy we are your legacy
Later...
Hamilton: Legacy. What is a legacy? It is planting seeds in a garden you never get to see.
Me: guess he never learned.
@Shimoi K ALEX YOU DUMBBELL
Paper Mario: Hey Hamilton, I've just come to say that, your ex-wife, supposedly, invaded MY world, so I killed her.
Beautiful animatic! Love the way you draw the eyes, so much emotion
ChloeCanary love your prophile picture!!
Lyrics
[Lexi Lawson]
I saved every letter you wrote me
From the moment I saw you
I knew you were mine
You said you were mine
I thought you were mine
[Julia Harriman]
Do you know what Angelica said
When I told her what you'd done?
She said
[Julia Harriman & Shoba Narayan]
"You have married an Icarus
He has flown too close to the sun"
[Rachelle Ann Go]
Don't take another step in my direction
I can't be trusted around you
Don't think you can talk your way
Into my arms, into my arms
[Arianna Afsar & (Julia Harriman)]
I'm burning the letters you wrote me
You can stand over there if you want
I don't know who you are
I have so much to learn
I'm re-reading your letters
And watching them burn (burn)
[Rachelle Ann Go & (Lexi Lawson)]
I'm watching them burn (burn)
[Shoba Narayan]
You published the letters she wrote to you
You told the whole world
How you brought this girl into our bed
In clearing your name, you have ruined our lives
[Julia Harriman]
Heaven forbid someone whisper
[Julia Harriman & Arianna Afsar]
"He's part of some scheme"
[Lexi Lawson]
Your enemy whispers
[All]
So you have to scream
[Arianna Afsar & Shoba Narayan]
I know about whispers
[Rachelle Ann Go]
I see how you look at my sister
[All]
Don't
[Shoba Narayan]
I'm not naive
[All]
I have seen women around you
Don't
[Arianna Asfar]
Think I don't see
[All]
How they fall for your charms
All your charms
I'm erasing myself from the narrative
Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted
When you broke her heart
You have thrown it all away
Stand back, watch it burn
Just watch it all burn
[Julia Harriman]
And when the time comes
[Shoba Narayan]
Explain to the children
[Arianna Afsar]
The pain and embarrassment
[Lexi Lawson]
You put their mother through
[Rachelle Ann Go]
When will you learn
[All]
That they are your legacy?
We are your legacy
If you thought you were mine (mine, mine)
Don't
Appreciate this. I actually thought it was one person the whole way, but now i could kinda distinguish the differences a little between their voices.
Wow you took that time to write it just wow
I sung it and cried halfway through.
rose, my loyal servant Aww, are you okay now?
@@heather533 yeah I'm pretty sure
*Alexander n Elisa having a fight*
/Burr at the background/
Burr: Well, you've done *oof* my friend.
HANDS DOWN! THIS IS MY MOST FAVORITE ANIMATIC OF BURN 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
This is absolutetly beautiful, the expression of Eliza is amazing it says how she felt in that moment
I see how you look at my sister... wow that was SAVAGE!!!!!
Honestly that really points how how tolerant she was up to this point. She had been seeing other women fawning over him, even saw him pine after her own sister. And she put up with it. But this was the straw that broke the camels back.
Welcome to Hamilton the anime
Also the ponytail of death-
This animation was beautiful it shows Eliza’s true character and how strong she is! You did a brilliant job with showing all the different emotions!
Bella Garson true!
I have an unhealthy obsession with this
I watched it like 25 times today h e l p
100% Normal reaction. I’ve done the same😭
Omg ur wallpaper tho 😍👌
Same😅
... It's the same with Emrichu's version
Same😅
... Also with Emirichu's version
Milk Ncookies That’s not unhealthy, I do it too............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... I need help
I cried when Alexander tries to reach and take the letters in 2:31
Is it weird I kinda feel bad for him?
no, it's not. He screwed up big time and he knows it. Seeing her like this makes him suffer and blames himself. I could literally see in his eyes "what the hell was I thinking by doing this?!?", the way he shakes his head shows that he doesn't want to loose his family: kids and wife and by the end when he desperately tries to reach for her just gets me.
@@fynchan11 Agreed, either way this person did a great job for making me feel bad for him.
@@gisele5708 true, he was an orphan and his dad ran away so he didn't have role model to look up to while growing up. It's so and so miracle that he achieved a lot of things. He was just a human and we all make mistakes. You're right, this is the first animation that I could see emotions from both sides and not only Eliza's.
I do feel bad but he deserved it having an affair with someone else is *SO* messed up....
@@jaimebuenaventura8541 I know it's messed up I just have mixed feelings AHHH this is so good!!
The song “first burn” always gets to me. You know why? It reminds me of my family.
Not because my dad sees other women (he doesn’t)
But because you can sense the pain in her voice. It reminds me of all the times my mam had to scream just to get my dad to understand
It also reminds me of how many times my mam was told not to marry him
Great work Xx
This was so good? Like holy heck the attention to detail at 1:24 and throughout is mind blowing. Blah everything about this was great 👍🏻
Wtf? I'm actually shaking. This is so amazing! Where are your views? You're so under-rated
I love this song. Just because Hamilton is ignorant, arrogant, and ignores EVERY FRICKING THING HIS WIFE SAYS, doesn’t make Eliza a pushover. It makes Hamilton a bad husband and, he liked Eliza’s sister, and John Laurens more than he loved Eliza. I feel like that says a lot about that man and this animatic displays it very well!! Thank you for making this.
I literate man like Hamilton wasn't ignorant.
That doesn't mean what he did wasn't stupid, but his own brightness was what led him to be this proud. And his pride destroyed his marriage.
i love at 1:56 where you made it so the “don’t” was her telling him not to talk. like he was about to defend himself or something but she didn’t wanna hear it.
*MY WIGS BEEN SNATCHED*
**wig teleports**
I love how at 1:47 you transition words between Eliza and Hamilton. It shows how Eliza knows what he's feeling but she is much more hurt than he is. And it is all drawn so beautifully. The emotions are portrayed so so well, showing betrayal, anger, dissapointment, and mostly the sadness of a relationship falling apart and burning because of Hamilton's regretful acts.
It shows Eliza for the first time pushing away Hamilton's attempts at affection or comfort when usually she is willing to find the silver lining and keep their relationship happy. I can see the torment of being betrayed but also losing Hamilton forever on her face. He's screwed up so badly that Eliza is almost a different person now. Good job Hamilton.
But anyways, this animatic is probably one of the best I've ever seen! Can't stop watching!!! Incredible job.
THIS NEEDS MORE ATTENTION OMG ITS SO GOOD AND THE EMOTIONS AND i'm crying😭😭😭 good job! You earned a sub and a like 💓
I've been binge watching different animatics and actings of First Burn, and I when I watched this I knew nothing else could match up to the emotion and storytelling you have displayed in the video. You are a wonderful artist and this song was a great canvas for your work. The colors were beautiful and the stops and movement were incredible. As I've said before, I've been watching all the First Burn songs I could get my hands on just for the feeling and one of the favorite lines in the play (1:41 - 1:56). The whole reason I started watching First Burn was because of a extraordinary tictoc on this part. You have topped that and all expectations when I first clicked this video. Continue the good work. :)
This is the most powerful thing I’ve ever watched. Especially when she said “your enemies whisper, so you have to scream”
THERE ARE SO MANY ANIMATIONS OF THIS SONG BUT THIS IS MY FAVORITE ONE WOW
WOW
WOW
YES.
Bruh! I almost broke into tears. Your art is amazing and I love how you exaggerated it. You really put the emotion in it. It really brings out Eliza's outcome to her husband. I also loved 1:14 where you made the words on the letter speak out. Along with the different women that's been around him.
For someone who has been cheated on, this is such a powerful song. It's strong with emotion. While I feel the pain of remembering, I feel empowered and understood at the same time. Eliza was a strong, beautiful woman. @kurowoof amazing work!
"I SEE HOW YOU LOOK AT MY SISTER"
AND I OOP-
Moooooood
This was my first introduction to the music from Hamilton and I loved it. The smooth anime-like lines for Alexander in such an American story surprised me a little at first, but I was quickly caught up by how beautiful all the images and movements were. The colors popped amazingly, and Eliza's hair and teary eyes were done so well. The power of the voice singing meshed so well with the images, especially the flashback/shadows and Eliza's skirts flaring out and paper raining down. The last bit of Eliza backing away and Alexander trying to follow her to hold her, the images still but disappearing and being replaced a bit of distance away, was my favorite. Amazing!
"I see how you look at my sister"
OK, NOW RUN FOR YOUR LIFE, HAMILTON!
Hahahahaha 😂
“I don’t know who you are” really got to me. The fact that this person created this image so perfectly of how Eliza felt about Alexander. About how she felt when she find out about him bringing a woman to their bedroom and making love as if she was never there for him personally. The fact that they created this image of innocence and then lust of power really spoke to me. Congratulations !
This was so beautifully portrayed!
The lineart, the shading, the FIRE EFFECTS IS JUST BEAUTIFUL, and your expressions are GORGEOUS???? I LOVE how you drew Eliza- I also love at the 'all your charms' bit, how it showed Angelica and Maria next to Eliza, then showed Alex hugging her and she hugged him back for a moment before realising-
I don't have the words but this is absolutely gorgeous! I have high hopes for you!
This was the start of my Hamilton obsession
same for me
Mine was obedient servant when Hamilton first came out. Now I know all the songs by heart and the mixtape songs.
This is literally the most beautiful animatic for Burn I've ever watched, like, Eliza's expressions, the letters burning, Alex's reactions to her, the entire bloody thing is just A M A Z I N G
I was listening to this song when I was 13 years old, and now I am 18, and I came back to listen to it from the same video. I am really addicted to it.
In the ends shes like ‘EXCUSE ME WHAT ARE YOU DOING’
To me she's like "It's OVER"
To me, that face was exactly what the lyrics said. That is an enraged "Don't you dare touch me" face.
3:02?
She’s like “BISH CAN’T YOU SEE I’M TRYING STEP AWAY FROM YOU?!”
True
That’s really a beautiful art!!!!! I luv it!
Yan Yan谚谚 I'm a big fan of you =D
Yan Yan谚谚 YAN YAN!
OMGG YAANIEE!!
HAIIII
hi, yanyan!