2 MAP WIPs (Poor George and Revision)

Constructive criticism is welcome.
POOR GEORGE
Part: 18
Script:
“Poor George”
Early Morning
Darkstalker is now in his bed, angrily crying and holding his scroll
MAP Call (OPEN): • Poor George Darkstalke...
REVISION
Part: 7
Script: She [Wasp] takes a step forwards, and Hawthorn recoils. Cut to just her eyes (or one eye if that’s easier to do), and in the reflection is his scared expression.
MAP Call (OPEN): • Done! See desc - REVIS...

[@Duckbeanz-has-moved]

Woa nice!! :O

[@itsdappleagain]

Thank you!