Pros: Intro More story in it Disney style Sad lines Eyes fall off Impossible colours Correct timing Own story Backwards walking Walks more faster Mickey ded Lines also makes my attention span more longer because itz a size of a damn walnut Cons: Streets dont get wonky No destroyed streets either Innacurate timing for the black screen If im being honest your version of this mouse avi is amazing Rank A
Pros: 9 minutes and four seconds. (That’s an iconic saying bro.) You can tell the background loops. (Awesome) Black screen leaves at 6 min mark, roughly. Smooth smirk animation. Massive grin. Eyes fall off. Speeds the HECK up. Colors pop up! Screaming. Cons: Mickey is walking on the s t r e e t. Black screen shows up at 2 mins in. Something that wayy too many remakes miss, no gurgling moan. Nothing happens to background. Micheal Jackson. Overall? This is REALLY GREAT! Honestly you don’t get retakes- reTAKES this accurate. Or this scary.
Since this is different, I'll also tell a creative yet different story of why Mickey is depressed, this time its because of Pluto's death, which is his dog in the episode "the moose hunt"
@@mickeymousebutweird2022 that’s depressing, tho it’s probably not as bad as the Mickey in my story who discovers his entire existence is meaningless because he’s an immortal fictional Character who will never die, thus he sees his life and everyone else’s life as pointless and meaningless… but at least he still has his dog.
Yo this is actually pretty good! I like the art style and in the black screen part usually you skip but this u wanna watch the entire thing without skipping.
Pros: Intro Much more story Disney artstyle Depressing lines Eyes fall off Impossible colours Accurate timing Unique story Backwards walking Walking faster Oswald and Ortensia cameo Cons: Streets doesn't get wonky No destroyed streets Innacurate timing in black screen A great retake of old creepypasta Rank:A+ Comment inspired by Laemon Feez
She might of, she was introduced in 1937, or maybe she didn’t exist back then and this is Maroge, is she really there, or can only Mickey see her, but Mickey isn’t real, he’s a tool used for cartoons, but him being know but everyone, them being loved by thousands, does that make them real, that is the question… Understand what I’m say cause I don’t 🤷♂️
This suicidemouse retake is alright. I praise the art style and i praise the music choice and the inclusion of old disney characters But it missed the mark on several points for me. So id give this around a 6.5 / 10. Much better then versions i have seen but its not mindblowing either. I will say tho im still happy when anyone makes any kind of suicidemouse video. Cause i love this story being relevant again
It represents Mickey and his fragile mind, in the beginning when Mickey was walking his friends were there, wondering what was wrong with Mickey later however they are gone and Mickey is all by himself, when Mickey “Dieds” he sees his friend are with him, but there twisted and dead, and in reality there not actually there anymore as they had left, so in other words, there hallucination that Mickey sees with his “dying breath” but if you want to know why Mickey sees them like this well, lets just say this isn’t the end for Mickey and his friends.
@@FrankieSonic20 Last time was SNS 2.5 Retake, but SNS 2.5 Fanmade Owner snatch it which is fine bc it's kinda weird what name i put, so i decided to name it Retaken Night, as a SNS Fan-Mod
This is looks odd, why all of his friends alive and mini mouse is not cheating with other mouse? But the animation is pretty accurate. I’ll give it an -A tier
@@JaseVine2OFFICIAL I also discovered someone else name was also cheesy goblin, but no one had the name Alex the Animator, so I wanted a more original name.
@@MatiasEpicChannel-jp1ow Mickey uncovered the truth about his existence, as a fictional character who will never die. Because of that. It essentially makes Mickey realize that his whole life is meaningless since anything he does will not matter, and tho his friends want to help him, they can not, as Mickey ignores them. Thus Mickey goes for a long walk, with his head slowly becoming foggy, he even acknowledges us, (the audience) of where he’s at, after discovering the truth, his mind fades away as his whole body and world change in front of him, as he decents into madness. He dies, in front of the disheveled corpse of his friend, but he’ll be back again… for this is True Suffering… I hope that’s not to confusing but that’s what’s going on in this video.
Each and every Mickey Mouse retake is always the same old episode where Mickey is doing nothing but walking while scary music is playing in the background why can't there be something different? Like make a happy version of suicide mouse?
Well that’s kind of how this creepy pasta goes, tho with that being said, I was maybe thinking about make a happy version of this, or possible dare I say a part 2 to this, but who knows. 🤷♂️
THIS IS SUCH AN INOVATIVE LOOK IN THE PASTA!
mickey having those kinds of toughts because he isnt real is very interesting! Keep up the good work!
8:05 mickey is going so fast that i cant tell if hes going backwards or not
He’s going forward, he’s just going REALLY fast,
He does go backwards at 7:23 tho
Pros:
Intro
More story in it
Disney style
Sad lines
Eyes fall off
Impossible colours
Correct timing
Own story
Backwards walking
Walks more faster
Mickey ded
Lines also makes my attention span more longer because itz a size of a damn walnut
Cons:
Streets dont get wonky
No destroyed streets either
Innacurate timing for the black screen
If im being honest your version of this mouse avi is amazing
Rank A
Thank you
@@alextriplett9414i take back my A ranking its going to S-
Eh it's a 9.125/10
well all the cons can be explained with the fact that its a *retake* and is meant to be different from the original
@@stank_o_lanternohh sorry but thank you
I like this, great job man
One thing I love is how you take in the "loop" aspect. Great job on that.
8:25 the characters are abandoned now
This Is Very Good Retake Version!
Edit: Mouse.avi Retake Look Same Title
Pros:
9 minutes and four seconds. (That’s an iconic saying bro.)
You can tell the background loops. (Awesome)
Black screen leaves at 6 min mark, roughly.
Smooth smirk animation.
Massive grin.
Eyes fall off.
Speeds the HECK up.
Colors pop up!
Screaming.
Cons: Mickey is walking on the s t r e e t.
Black screen shows up at 2 mins in.
Something that wayy too many remakes miss, no gurgling moan.
Nothing happens to background.
Micheal Jackson.
Overall? This is REALLY GREAT! Honestly you don’t get retakes- reTAKES this accurate. Or this scary.
I like how Oswald and ortensia appear
BEST MOUSE AVI RETAKE EVER!!!
I enjoyed EVERYTHING in this retake
Good Job Dude
Thank you so much, that really means a lot to me.
@@alextriplett9414 your welcome 👍😃
This is the greatest remake I ever seen in my entire life
Thank you
Oswald is the true mickey's brother that he was really sad about mickey
This retake is hella accurate. Correct time length- colors- Mickey speeding up, eyes rolling off his face, giant curving grin, 👍🏽
8:05 bro’s turning into sonic.
Bro became faster than the speed of light 💀
Since this is different, I'll also tell a creative yet different story of why Mickey is depressed, this time its because of Pluto's death, which is his dog in the episode "the moose hunt"
@@mickeymousebutweird2022 that’s depressing, tho it’s probably not as bad as the Mickey in my story who discovers his entire existence is meaningless because he’s an immortal fictional Character who will never die, thus he sees his life and everyone else’s life as pointless and meaningless… but at least he still has his dog.
@alextriplett9414 I see
Yo this is actually pretty good! I like the art style and in the black screen part usually you skip but this u wanna watch the entire thing without skipping.
3:27 the way he looks at the camera is soo cute 😭😭
Oswald and Ortensia in the background is a nice touch
I really liked it!
I definitely want to add it to my mod
Mickey Mouse in mouse episode iswny favorite disney episod
Mickey Is Walking....Becasue He Is Gonna Get His.........§ÚÍĆÍĐÊ
Pros: Eyes falling off, Screaming audio, Impossible colors, grin gets bigger, running, Cons: Wonky grin, Backwards movement, no black screen, killing himself, Low quality at some parts the screaming audio isn't loud
Rank: A-S
The killing is actually a pro, the pro is called "mickey commits suicide"
@@Monkeduke Bro it's not in the original story.
@@JaseVine2OFFICIAL yes it is
@@Monkeduke NO IT ISN'T
@@JaseVine2OFFICIAL the name is "suicide mouse.avi" and the word "suicide" reffers to killing YOURSELF
Pros:
Intro
Much more story
Disney artstyle
Depressing lines
Eyes fall off
Impossible colours
Accurate timing
Unique story
Backwards walking
Walking faster
Oswald and Ortensia cameo
Cons:
Streets doesn't get wonky
No destroyed streets
Innacurate timing in black screen
A great retake of old creepypasta
Rank:A+
Comment inspired by Laemon Feez
The black screen timing is accurate
The end scared the hell out of me
THIS IS SO GOOD!
Daisy Duck didn't even exist in the black and white cartoons.
:/ lol
She might of, she was introduced in 1937, or maybe she didn’t exist back then and this is Maroge, is she really there, or can only Mickey see her, but Mickey isn’t real, he’s a tool used for cartoons, but him being know but everyone, them being loved by thousands, does that make them real, that is the question…
Understand what I’m say cause I don’t 🤷♂️
I Hate Mickey Mouse
@@DHARI15Kuwait :(
@@DHARI15KuwaitHow dare you
6:58 Mickey's Mouse Trap is Coming VEHICLE aw
?
this is like its own story not really going by the pasta so i like that
I still wanted to be somewhat faithful, but I also wanted to do my own thing, key term on why it’s called a retake and not a remake.
The flash
Cool retake i like the added dialogue on the part where it fades to black it makes it less boring and skipeable to see
Yooooooo That so freaking Scary
HALLOWEN TIME HEHEHEHHEEHEHHEHEHE
bro became sonic
The other kids when you sit at the wrong table at lunch 0:36
This suicidemouse retake is alright. I praise the art style and i praise the music choice and the inclusion of old disney characters
But it missed the mark on several points for me. So id give this around a 6.5 / 10. Much better then versions i have seen but its not mindblowing either.
I will say tho im still happy when anyone makes any kind of suicidemouse video. Cause i love this story being relevant again
And Mickey's monologue looks like it was written by a kindergartner, with so many spelling mistakes. What is the native language of the animator?
@@numbuh1507 No clue
@@numbuh1507 rude
@@alextriplett9414 you should have just used spell check. I'm Brazilian and even I know the difference between "your" and "you're".
@@numbuh1507 it’s a mistake, we all make them, all try not to make that mistake next time, but don’t be a dick about it.
A mouse definitely goes faster and even faster and maximum faster and... (he forget he tripped)
Can someone explain the final scene?because i didnt understand why minnie donald daisy and goofy are dead?
It represents Mickey and his fragile mind, in the beginning when Mickey was walking his friends were there, wondering what was wrong with Mickey later however they are gone and Mickey is all by himself, when Mickey “Dieds” he sees his friend are with him, but there twisted and dead, and in reality there not actually there anymore as they had left, so in other words, there hallucination that Mickey sees with his “dying breath” but if you want to know why Mickey sees them like this well, lets just say this isn’t the end for Mickey and his friends.
The depressed Mickey.
In the ending, look at minie☠️☠️☠️so creepy☠️
Mark Red Mist Retake
?
Squidward's Suicide
@@thayra767 Maybe I’ll make that in the future
I screenshooted all almost the parts, while i do the fnf mod, of this.
What's it called
@@FrankieSonic20 Last time was SNS 2.5 Retake, but SNS 2.5 Fanmade Owner snatch it which is fine bc it's kinda weird what name i put, so i decided to name it Retaken Night, as a SNS Fan-Mod
@@SanseyRevival Interesting
Mickey is zoomin
This is looks odd, why all of his friends alive and mini mouse is not cheating with other mouse? But the animation is pretty accurate. I’ll give it an -A tier
It’s not fully accurate to the original, I wanted to try some different things with it, but thanks for the -A tier
No problem, bro
8:05 me when I have diarrhea
Ewwwww 😂
Why did CheeseGoblin change his channel name?
I wanted a better name.
@@alextriplett9414 oh I thought Cheesegoblin was a better name...
@@JaseVine2OFFICIAL I also discovered someone else name was also cheesy goblin, but no one had the name Alex the Animator, so I wanted a more original name.
@@alextriplett9414 Wow they definitely had that name after yours...
Make a red mist remake
7:53 9,738,829,928 km/h
DA CORECT TIMING LOL😅😅
Imma make ur sprites fnf version ok?
@sashakvashavore1529but i need more time for those.
BRO WHY THERE NO BACKWARDS AND eye fall of to
Um
7:23
7:28
7:30
“You’re gonna die one day.”
thanks for the reminder 👁️👄👁️
Sorry for the reminder
7:28 HIS EYES MELTED!!!
8:33 ...
What’s the lore here?
@@MatiasEpicChannel-jp1ow Mickey uncovered the truth about his existence, as a fictional character who will never die. Because of that. It essentially makes Mickey realize that his whole life is meaningless since anything he does will not matter, and tho his friends want to help him, they can not, as Mickey ignores them. Thus Mickey goes for a long walk, with his head slowly becoming foggy, he even acknowledges us, (the audience) of where he’s at, after discovering the truth, his mind fades away as his whole body and world change in front of him, as he decents into madness. He dies, in front of the disheveled corpse of his friend, but he’ll be back again… for this is True Suffering…
I hope that’s not to confusing but that’s what’s going on in this video.
Each and every Mickey Mouse retake is always the same old episode where Mickey is doing nothing but walking while scary music is playing in the background why can't there be something different? Like make a happy version of suicide mouse?
Well that’s kind of how this creepy pasta goes, tho with that being said, I was maybe thinking about make a happy version of this, or possible dare I say a part 2 to this, but who knows. 🤷♂️
But why is mickey sad?
@@Masha-Allah_Brothers his minds in a dark place in this video
Oh my god....
Unhappy happy and really happy and slime
врата ада манят любопытных
FAST!
,Disney white noise,
otra vez
Otra vez que cosa xd ?
@@hbgplcountryballs suicide otra vez
@@LuisGonzalez-xo9ll A
Mickey. Eeie vug gjy tutu guyi t7t
yes i real
Go and make a mod to friday night funkin!
What’s with Oswald and Ortensia?
Felt like adding them in, might do more with them in the future.
@@alextriplett9414more like an Euthanasia Rabbit edition?