21:15 this would have been a good time to tell about the high school girl that was attacked by a shark. Lost her arm but never gave up her love of surfing and became again a champion
@@kingmasterlord Poor AI. If FTL is unknown, how did the galactic races get together? If they don’t know what years are, how do they know what centuries are? Etc.
The story is boiler plate, but the Manned flight to Space flight is a fact that few really think about see below. Successful; Heavier than air powered Manned flight Dec 17 1903 to Successful manned space flight Apr 12 1961 - 57 - 4 month 9 days.. or 20,950 Days As far as FTL.. with out how did this class meet ?
Could anyoune pls, when writing keep two things in mind. 1. Keep the narrative believable in logical sense - like why is this girl even, or how, at a galactic high among aliens if humans are jus exploring beyond our solarsystem like at the fringes or just still developing FTL, or which ever drive that was, even aliens thinking its impossible. Cause none of that was explained as events in past tense. 2. Stop the repetition of same darn selection of words, reactions and generally even the ideas, per se. How in the darn reality she could always have same reaction or generally make the same statemen if bit changing the starting point, yet never saying much anything new. Yes I get that the story was built to a specific repeative style structure, but each of the variants werent told in detailed versions enough tobe actually different enough for the presisting over allmessage to work - and biggest problemwit that was theinitial lack of making her being in that situation even real and true enough, because, once again, how did she or any of those students even get to a galactic high if there is no way to travel set distances? Even crazy funny stories need a logic to stop the reader from consistently thinking 'hang on, how...' just like every advancing point along the way, even when fitted to same structure just have got to include details enough, such that it adds to the message and idea, instead of sounding as if but saying the same thing only in slightly different ways over again. Ok, now this narratie has made me too repeat myself, lol.
The Ozone layer. Another scam. The Freon Patent was about to expire. They needed a replacement. The entire ozone snafu followed just in time to make billions on the new patent. Cut me some slack.
21:15 this would have been a good time to tell about the high school girl that was attacked by a shark. Lost her arm but never gave up her love of surfing and became again a champion
Wow! So many logic holes.
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@@kingmasterlord Poor AI. If FTL is unknown, how did the galactic races get together? If they don’t know what years are, how do they know what centuries are? Etc.
Whats up with two voices narrating? It's distracting
17:50 "If it exist, then there is porn of it!"
The story is boiler plate, but the Manned flight to Space flight is a fact that few really think about see below.
Successful; Heavier than air powered Manned flight Dec 17 1903 to Successful manned space flight Apr 12 1961 - 57 - 4 month 9 days.. or 20,950 Days
As far as FTL.. with out how did this class meet ?
The AI was a little repetitive but all in all and enjoyable story!
One story one voice please
AI written. Can these please have an editor to trim and tweak.
Been asking for that, some of the sites finally discovered punctuation
Could anyoune pls, when writing keep two things in mind. 1. Keep the narrative believable in logical sense - like why is this girl even, or how, at a galactic high among aliens if humans are jus exploring beyond our solarsystem like at the fringes or just still developing FTL, or which ever drive that was, even aliens thinking its impossible. Cause none of that was explained as events in past tense. 2. Stop the repetition of same darn selection of words, reactions and generally even the ideas, per se. How in the darn reality she could always have same reaction or generally make the same statemen if bit changing the starting point, yet never saying much anything new.
Yes I get that the story was built to a specific repeative style structure, but each of the variants werent told in detailed versions enough tobe actually different enough for the presisting over allmessage to work - and biggest problemwit that was theinitial lack of making her being in that situation even real and true enough, because, once again, how did she or any of those students even get to a galactic high if there is no way to travel set distances? Even crazy funny stories need a logic to stop the reader from consistently thinking 'hang on, how...' just like every advancing point along the way, even when fitted to same structure just have got to include details enough, such that it adds to the message and idea, instead of sounding as if but saying the same thing only in slightly different ways over again.
Ok, now this narratie has made me too repeat myself, lol.
The Ozone layer. Another scam. The Freon Patent was about to expire. They needed a replacement. The entire ozone snafu followed just in time to make billions on the new patent. Cut me some slack.