i really liked your fan fiction. But i have some things you could do better maybe make the text a little bit longer because i think there are some people who can't read all of the text it is really fast
anyways keep up the good work, and now i'm just saying do don't make fan fiction but my friend does she has told me some things about making them(: just so you don't get angry
This is actually pretty good but for some feedback, maybe give the viewer more time to read the texts and make the story in your own unique way because most stories just go like “y/n meets Yeosang and all of a sudden they confess and become in a relationship”. Add some of your own flavor to the story, add a twist, also add some drama in it so that it entertains the viewer and can help with your channel. NOT TRYING TO OFFEND YOU AT ALL WHATSOEVER!!! I loved this ff but I just wanted to give you some tips but again I AM NOT TRYING TO OFFEND YOU❤️
Hey the ff was really good but it was Hard for me to read because englisch isnt my First Language so the Tempo of the writing and understanding in the time is Hard to get. I had to read it Twice. So Maybe u Slow the Text down. But Great Idee. Thanks
!["Better than he can" [ATEEZ - Yeosang OneShot]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/hU9nsFT2WqY/mqdefault.jpg)
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!['Pressure' [Kang Yeosang Oneshot/ff]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/os1MOiss2fI/mqdefault.jpg)
i really liked your fan fiction. But i have some things you could do better maybe make the text a little bit longer because i think there are some people who can't read all of the text it is really fast
Thank you! I know I have a other ff and I’m working on making them better
You deserve more like and view🥺✌🏻
Thank you🥺
QUEEN KAM OMGOMGOMG
N o
Am I the only one pretending y/n is Emma Watson 😂
LOL
I like it but i think the words go to fast i had to keep going back and pausing it but after that it was really good
Yes I know people have told me about that I have worked on that with my other ff but thank for liking it
I say you did a awesome job on u first oneshot
Thank you!😊
anyways keep up the good work, and now i'm just saying do don't make fan fiction but my friend does she has told me some things about making them(: just so you don't get angry
Haha I don’t get angry
Fast, and short, but realy nice. I think the romance is too easy, stereotype. Good luck for the next, fighting!
Haha yes it was my first ff but I improved me writing with ff! And thank you encouraging me!! :)
Ok, whenever I listen to Daddy from PSY, it sound like Chan singing at the beginning kinda
Oop
This is actually pretty good but for some feedback, maybe give the viewer more time to read the texts and make the story in your own unique way because most stories just go like “y/n meets Yeosang and all of a sudden they confess and become in a relationship”. Add some of your own flavor to the story, add a twist, also add some drama in it so that it entertains the viewer and can help with your channel. NOT TRYING TO OFFEND YOU AT ALL WHATSOEVER!!! I loved this ff but I just wanted to give you some tips but again I AM NOT TRYING TO OFFEND YOU❤️
Haha it’s ok it was my first ff so I didn’t know what to do but thank you!❤️
Wait friend i don't excpect that 💖💖💖
Haha❤️
What is the name of ateez song in the video when they perform ???
The intro?
@@lovebugseungkwan8067 no,,when they dance
Ateez performance video |
I can send the link if u want?
@@lovebugseungkwan8067 yes tq 😘🙌
Hey the ff was really good but it was Hard for me to read because englisch isnt my First Language so the Tempo of the writing and understanding in the time is Hard to get. I had to read it Twice. So Maybe u Slow the Text down.
But Great Idee. Thanks
Thank you for saying that this was my first ff and I was still learn but I have gotten better at doing the text:)
Ok OMFG SO NOT RELATED I CANT HELP BUT NOTICE HOW U USED JAES COVER OF CANT TAKE MY EYES OFF YOU AND IM ENJDKDKDKKDKD
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GOT TO LOVE JAE 😌🤚🏽