Thank you so much sir, all of your videos has been a great help for me. I'm not that great in english and i'm not confident enough when taking the celpip.However, i'd actually passed with 7 in all aspect which i only need 4 .hehe God bless you!!!
I have a question, what about the addresses; either formal or informal letters are supposed to have addresses but no one talks about them, doesn't Celpip deduct marks from exclusion of addresses?
TRANSCRIPT CONTINUED: get a chance talk to you soon exclamation mark is important the more you have of exclamation marks you hear in task one informal the better because it shows expressions and that is how you actually talk to people in real life um and instead of just saying uh i please get this letter please respond i'm hoping this letter finds you well fans here phrasing same as this one do you get back to me whenever you get a chance instead of uh just finishing with talk to you soon and then you have your exclamation mark okay intro conclusion can be copy pasted again every informal letter and then paragraph two three and four are simply going to cover the first bullet point second bullet point and third bullet point all right so that is in these uh the question you will see the bullet points now obviously you define them in the body paragraphs the template does not cover body paragraphs because the bullets are always different so focus on the intro and conclusion memorize them and then improvise on the body parts but there are lessons on in this course on body parts how they should be done so that'll be covered in another lesson for now have a look at the formal lesson it was basically a situation where you're exercising in a gym and you're not satisfied and you're complaining people when this start i'm telling you 95 percent maybe 99 but let me just you know say realistic numbers 95 of the times they say i'm writing this letter because you my friend are not going to do that you're going to go in the exam by saying the purpose of my writing today is to inform you about you're going to be different because the what examiners want to see is you getting to the point right away in the formal letter so we are getting to the point but we're also using a different wording and also again showing the purpose is this so getting to the point right away once again the next three paragraphs will cover the three bullet points in sequence and you have two versions of your conclusion here uh this one i'm looking forward to seeing how my suggestions translate into prompt actions from your side so you have the questions that describe the problem and make suggestions so in this case you can use this first conclusion i'm looking forward to seeing how many suggestions translate into prompt actions from your side your kind cooperation would be most appreciated in this situation you are making suggestions so you use that what if you're not making suggestions that's why we have said here in different cases you can use a more a general conclusion where for example you're just uh telling someone about a as a request you have but not really making suggestions or complaints go with this your cooperation in this matter is greatly appreciated furthermore an open line of communication from your side in this case would greatly help out once again fancier wordings instead of just saying i'll talk to you soon okay an open line of communication would be appreciated and this whole paragraph is about fancier wordings uncommon phrases and vocabulary so use any version before or after this or depending on your question you get great marks so remember memorize these templates they are mistake proof bulletproof they are going to give you marks for vocab phrases they're going to save you time on the exam from thinking and they're going to make sure you reach the word count comfortably given that you fill in nice words here in the three body paragraphs so body paragraphs will cover in some other lesson but this was a refresher and if it's your first time this is the lesson you need for writing templates in CELPIP
Thanks to your templete I got 8 in my CELPIP Writing exam. Thank you bro.
Thank you so much sir, all of your videos has been a great help for me. I'm not that great in english and i'm not confident enough when taking the celpip.However, i'd actually passed with 7 in all aspect which i only need 4 .hehe God bless you!!!
This writing template gives clear understanding for the format and eventually assist to achieve the score.
Thanks a ton sir for your guidance.
I was able to score 10 in writing 😊
Congrats!
Hi, I would like to ask wheather informal letter starts with hi or dear.
I have a question, what about the addresses; either formal or informal letters are supposed to have addresses but no one talks about them, doesn't Celpip deduct marks from exclusion of addresses?
You don't need addresses in CELPIP.
TRANSCRIPT CONTINUED: get a chance talk to you soon exclamation mark is important the more you have of exclamation marks you hear in task one informal the better because it shows expressions and that is how you actually talk to people in real life um and instead of just saying uh i please get this letter please respond i'm hoping this letter finds you well fans here phrasing same as this one do you get back to me whenever you get a chance instead of uh just finishing with talk to you soon and then you have your exclamation mark okay intro conclusion can be copy pasted again every informal letter and then paragraph two three and four are simply going to cover the first bullet point second bullet point and third bullet point all right so that is in these uh the question you will see the bullet points now obviously you define them in the body paragraphs the template does not cover body paragraphs because the bullets are always different so focus on the intro and conclusion memorize them and then improvise on the body parts but there are lessons on in this course on body parts how they should be done so that'll be covered in another lesson for now have a look at the formal lesson it was basically a situation where you're exercising in a gym and you're not satisfied and you're complaining people when this start i'm telling you 95 percent maybe 99 but let me just you know say realistic numbers 95 of the times they say i'm writing this letter because you my friend are not going to do that you're going to go in the exam by saying the purpose of my writing today is to inform you about you're going to be different because the what examiners want to see is you getting to the point right away in the formal letter so we are getting to the point but we're also using a different wording and also again showing the purpose is this so getting to the point right away once again the next three paragraphs will cover the three bullet points in sequence and you have two versions of your conclusion here uh this one i'm looking forward to seeing how my suggestions translate into prompt actions from your side so you have the questions that describe the problem and make suggestions so in this case you can use this first conclusion i'm looking forward to seeing how many suggestions translate into prompt actions from your side your kind cooperation would be most appreciated in this situation you are making suggestions so you use that what if you're not making suggestions that's why we have said here in different cases you can use a more a general conclusion where for example you're just uh telling someone about a as a request you have but not really making suggestions or complaints go with this your cooperation in this matter is greatly appreciated furthermore an open line of communication from your side in this case would greatly help out once again fancier wordings instead of just saying i'll talk to you soon okay an open line of communication would be appreciated and this whole paragraph is about fancier wordings uncommon phrases and vocabulary so use any version before or after this or depending on your question you get great marks so remember memorize these templates they are mistake proof bulletproof they are going to give you marks for vocab phrases they're going to save you time on the exam from thinking and they're going to make sure you reach the word count comfortably given that you fill in nice words here in the three body paragraphs so body paragraphs will cover in some other lesson but this was a refresher and if it's your first time this is the lesson you need for writing templates in CELPIP
As we start the letter by Dear xyz, so what can we write at the end after talk to you soon?
Yours Sincerely
Full name
@@hzadeducation-coachingcent986 Thanks. This is for Formal right? And what for informal?
Can this be used for any type of informal letters like complaints/dissatisfaction etc.?
The first version is for informal letters.
When is task 2 survey template coming ?
Any video for writing task 2 sample?
Can we write like this?
This letter is being written to inform you....
Sure! It's good.
@@hzadeducation-coachingcent986 thanks much with love.
Thank you for this
Informal End: "I am hoping this finds you well." - Don't we usually write this at the start ?
Either is fine.