COMMONWEALTH DEVELOPMENT IMPACT ESSAYS ---- WINNING ESSAY TEMPLATE!!!

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  • @mfonisoudoh
    @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому +7

    Here is the second part of the Essay. COMMONWEALTH SCHOLARSHIP ESSAYS: PROPOSED STUDY PLAN IN THE UK; QN 5 & 6 -- WINNING ESSAY TEMPLATE: ua-cam.com/video/XOceWQqSDbo/v-deo.html Best wishes.

    • @muhammadhamadanghani
      @muhammadhamadanghani 2 місяці тому +1

      Thanks a lot

    • @ememoses1413
      @ememoses1413 2 місяці тому

      Please what of your personal statement, volunteering and leadership: commonwealth scholarship essay?

  • @Ines_Kambou
    @Ines_Kambou Рік тому +8

    Hello Mfoniso, thank you for this insightful video. You have inspired me during my application process and by God's grace I have been selected for the 2023 Commonwealth Shared Scholarship. Thank you and be blessed!

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому

      Thank you dear Ines, for this valuable feedback, it feels so fulfilling and humbling to hear.
      Congratulations on your offer and welcome to the scholarly lifestyle. Best wishes in your stay in the UK.
      Let’s keep tabs alright 👍

  • @KahaniSonu
    @KahaniSonu Рік тому +4

    One of the most underrated video.
    Thank you from Pakistan.

  • @adaezebest6404
    @adaezebest6404 2 місяці тому +1

    Highly Impactful!!!
    Thank you.

  • @dorcasonakofa5863
    @dorcasonakofa5863 Рік тому +2

    Thanks a million @journal with Mfonisoudoh I really appreciate. I was wondering how and where to begin my essays from even though I have watched a video from someone else. Nothing like hearing it directly from beneficiaries of the scholarship. Keep the good work

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому +1

      I’m glad it was helpful…
      All the best in your essay.

    • @dorcasonakofa5863
      @dorcasonakofa5863 Рік тому

      ​@@mfonisoudohI want to ask about who to address the reference letter to? I have searched the CSC page but there's no info regarding that. Pls help me so that I can submit my application as that's the only thing left before I click the submit button

  • @NnekaNneka-kk5qv
    @NnekaNneka-kk5qv Рік тому +1

    Thanks for sharing and impactful. This is really helpful. Looking forward to being awarded by God's grace

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому

      I’m glad I was of help.
      I’m rooting for you dear Nneka.

  • @yrnEddy
    @yrnEddy 2 місяці тому +1

    I learned a lot. It was very informative, thanks!

  • @IVORYPICTURES
    @IVORYPICTURES Рік тому +1

    One of the thee most helpful videos on the particular scholarship

  • @Phenomenal_Brian
    @Phenomenal_Brian 2 місяці тому +1

    Excellent guide.
    Thank you.

  • @oluwasolakemmy
    @oluwasolakemmy 2 місяці тому +1

    Thank you for Sharing .

  • @enduranceedoka6923
    @enduranceedoka6923 2 роки тому +1

    Great

  • @muhammadaminu6585
    @muhammadaminu6585 2 роки тому +1

    Very helpful tips Mfoniso! 💯

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  2 роки тому +1

      I’m glad they will be of help to your application journey

  • @muhammadaminu6585
    @muhammadaminu6585 2 роки тому +1

    Waiting for the coming videos!

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  2 роки тому +1

      I will upload them within the week

  • @viswanathanv5954
    @viswanathanv5954 2 роки тому +1

    Very useful. When can we expect the second video? It will be very useful if we get it in a day or two.

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  2 роки тому

      I am currently working on this videos, they will soon be released

  • @ozoemenablessing9802
    @ozoemenablessing9802 18 днів тому

    Thanks for the tips Mfonisoh, I have a question though. Must one have up to 10 publications as stated in their site to apply?

  • @ndapewadawid4699
    @ndapewadawid4699 Рік тому

    Very Helpful thank you👏👏👏

  • @Sir_Dynamic
    @Sir_Dynamic 2 місяці тому +2

    I have drafted my essays but after watching your video, I must say I myself will disqualify me 😂. But the video is very helpful. I pray we attained the heights you attained Insha Allah.

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  2 місяці тому +1

      All the best

    • @Sir_Dynamic
      @Sir_Dynamic 2 місяці тому

      @@mfonisoudoh thank you ma’am. Your videos were very informative and inspiring. May God bless you and progress you more as you help others in their journey.

    • @chinazamogechukwu
      @chinazamogechukwu 2 місяці тому

      @@Sir_DynamicI would love to ask please, is it that those question being asked is the Essay or is it that I'll draft an essay related to the theme? I will appreciate an answer.

    • @Sir_Dynamic
      @Sir_Dynamic 2 місяці тому

      @@chinazamogechukwu sorry for my late response pls. You have to draft an essay in relation to those questions. Get a pen and highlighter and figure out the hidden questions there. The essay can be narrative or descriptive. Just be very clear, honest and intentional. Good luck to us.

    • @chinazamogechukwu
      @chinazamogechukwu 2 місяці тому +1

      @@Sir_Dynamic Thank you so much, how do I connect with you, please.

  • @qauvlogsbyaamo2995
    @qauvlogsbyaamo2995 2 місяці тому

    pls upload video about statement of purpose and why did you choose this course+ uni.. for commonwealth

  • @vincentpaul6817
    @vincentpaul6817 Рік тому

    You are awesome dear

  • @NnekaNneka-kk5qv
    @NnekaNneka-kk5qv Рік тому

    Thanks Dearie, I can't get over this video, my only problem is how to sour e for statistics. And the no 4 development essay.
    How do I know the indicators.

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому

      You source for statistics by doing some deep and intensive research.

  • @amnakhan4430
    @amnakhan4430 Рік тому +1

    it was helpful. can you please mention the word limit for each of the four parts?

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому +2

      The word limit is attached to the question on CSC website.

  • @MutualConnect_Podcast
    @MutualConnect_Podcast 2 роки тому +3

    I have ND in computer science, HND in Computer Science and PGD in information Technology, are my eligible to apply for Commonwealth Scholarship with my degrees, pls I need your urgent response thanks.

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  2 роки тому +1

      Yes, you are eligible, and can give it a shot

    • @MutualConnect_Podcast
      @MutualConnect_Podcast 2 роки тому +1

      @@mfonisoudoh thanks, but at the CSC website, at academic Record option the Qualifications Awarded is not showing my degree like ND, HND or PGD to select from, so in this case what should I do.

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  2 роки тому +2

      @@MutualConnect_Podcast I’m this case, add an equivalent of your grade, if you attached your transcript, they will understand.

    • @MutualConnect_Podcast
      @MutualConnect_Podcast 2 роки тому +1

      @@mfonisoudoh thanks

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  2 роки тому

      @@MutualConnect_Podcastyou’re must welcome

  • @baboucarrjallow973
    @baboucarrjallow973 2 місяці тому

    Thank you a lot Madam 💓

  • @akanimoasuquo3635
    @akanimoasuquo3635 2 місяці тому

    Hello Mfoniso. I am Akanimo. I'm interested in applying for this year's commonwealth schorlaship and your videos have been of great help so far. Please if its possible, i would love for you to proofread my essays when I'm done🙏🙏

  • @MUZALAMASAHA-cn3gu
    @MUZALAMASAHA-cn3gu 2 місяці тому

    Excuse me Im new to your channel ...im in my final year doing a Bachelors in Civil Engineering...I want to apply for the commonwealth masters scholarship 2025-2026 intake now because the deadline is next month on the 15th of October ...thank you so much for this video...i understand on the essay part now....but im still confused on the personal statement...and also if you could do a whole video on the whole process of the application please🙏....especially the part where we have to apply to a University first before you apply to the commonwealth

  • @toobaaqeel1425
    @toobaaqeel1425 Рік тому +1

    I'm graduated in Biochemistry and want to pursue masters in biotechnology or biochemistry. What theme and 3 sub them should select? Please help..i was thinking of " science and technology for development".

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому +1

      Hello,
      Science and technology for development works here, however, depending on the problem you want to solve and the tone of your essay, you will need to compare strengthening health systems and capacity theme as well.

    • @toobaaqeel1425
      @toobaaqeel1425 Рік тому

      @@mfonisoudoh and what about the sustainability sub themes?

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому +1

      Good health and well-being is definitely going be part of it. You could do well to research the others…🤩

  • @aqsariaz4870
    @aqsariaz4870 Рік тому +1

    I can apply in 3 universities right? Do i need to submit 3 commonwealth scholarship applications ... Quite confused here... Plus do i need to get offer letter from university before applying to scholarship... Do i need to apply on university portal and commonwealth porta separately? Please reply to all questions if possible... I'll be thankful 🌼🌼

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому +2

      You can apply to as many universities as possible.
      For all universities you apply to, you have to put in a different essay for the scholarship.
      You do not need an offer letter before applying, however ensure to get an unconditional offer before nominations start coming in.
      Absolutely, you have to apply to each site separately. I have a video on how to go about the application on the site, check my videos to see them .
      I hope this answer your questions.
      Best wishes.

    • @aqsariaz4870
      @aqsariaz4870 Рік тому +1

      @@mfonisoudoh yup perfectly...
      Thanku so much

  • @eshaalfatima557
    @eshaalfatima557 Рік тому

    You can only choose one course and university in one application and if you want to apply for more than one you'll have to submit another application.
    My question is, can I use the same essays in both the applications as the course that I'm applying for are same????
    Please it will be of great help if someone answers this. ThAnk you

  • @eshaalfatima557
    @eshaalfatima557 Рік тому +1

    I have not received my degree yet as I am a fresh graduate but i have my transcript. Is it okay if i just provide my transcript? Please help

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому +1

      Yes, your transcript is an important requirement, also, if you can get statement of degree from your school stating why your certificate is not yet ready, that would go a long way to acknowledge your ingenuity.
      Rooting for you 👏

    • @eshaalfatima557
      @eshaalfatima557 Рік тому +1

      @@mfonisoudoh ThAnk you so much ❤️

  • @profpat24
    @profpat24 Рік тому

    Thank you🤩

  • @samiwijegunarathne129
    @samiwijegunarathne129 2 місяці тому

    Please reply urgently I Intend to apply phd cours I have normal degree but my research experience similar to 1 st class degree as a research officer and this 2024 december I will successfully complete my masters degree can I apply 2024 October phd common wealth scholarship program let me know your idia

  • @qauvlogsbyaamo2995
    @qauvlogsbyaamo2995 2 місяці тому

    are you recipient??of commonwealth
    as I'm new on your channel

  • @PrinceGeorge-ih1wt
    @PrinceGeorge-ih1wt 11 місяців тому

    I applied to the common wealth shared scholarship without my academic transcript cos is not yet available will I still be considered

  • @wisdomobinna
    @wisdomobinna 2 роки тому +1

    Can the same approach be used for other Scholarships

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  2 роки тому +1

      Nope, this is only peculiar to commonwealth scholarship

  • @sherifatoyindamola5620
    @sherifatoyindamola5620 2 місяці тому

    Good morning please I will like to ask can someone with HND degree apply for commonwealth scholarship

  • @kaza-shim
    @kaza-shim Рік тому

    Does this scholarship allow you to work part time while studying in the uk?

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому

      You are not permitted to work as a scholar.

  • @PrinceGeorge-ih1wt
    @PrinceGeorge-ih1wt Рік тому

    Please can I apply for the common wealth shared scholarship if I graduated and my academic transcript and results are not yet out?

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому

      Quite tricky to say the least.
      But you can give it a shot, however if the CSC does not ask for it, your intended schools will.
      So try and get it ready.
      GOODLUCK

  • @ebubekenneth5654
    @ebubekenneth5654 2 місяці тому

    Honesty, I could not understand some words you were dictating. I don't know if it was your ascent or what.

  • @shaukatzaman6594
    @shaukatzaman6594 Рік тому

    I'm graduated in Zoology
    Which theme and 3 sub theme I should select?

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому

      The theme is dependent on which course you want to choose for your post graduate study.

  • @jidepomary9224
    @jidepomary9224 Рік тому

    can the course of study link to two CSC Themes

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому

      Words can always be interlink in a way, however, it is advisable to stick to one theme in an essay, that way you can communicate articulately.

  • @adaezebest6404
    @adaezebest6404 2 місяці тому

    Can a person without admission apply for Commonwealth scholarship for 2025 fall?

  • @pratibhagupta8310
    @pratibhagupta8310 Рік тому

    hello mine is Msc Marketing course and theam is "promoting global prosparity " mam please help me with writing essay on this , so confuised

    • @mfonisoudoh
      @mfonisoudoh  Рік тому

      Being confused is part of the competition, and it is totally okay to feel like that. However, you will have to write your essays by yourself because post graduate school is all about writing.
      Thus your work begins here.