Author don't get me wrong but the first scene in this ff didn't make any sense because a five year old kid will never say something like that .. they both were literally talking like a mature person, it didn't seem like a five years old kid.... Otherwise the story was really good 👍
That's why this a fan fiction. Everything is possible, and nothing is impossible in this fandom. At least they are 5 years old, I have read stories that 2-year-old kids give life development lectures to their parents... Making impossibilities possible = ARMY Fan Fiction 🙂↕️🫡
@@straweey_spaceship0613 That doesn't justify anything if that author portrayed a 2 years old child like that . That author must be an baby army/ author or a new author. I know it's a ff but still everything is not possible. Maybe most of the thing is possible in ff but not everything . And I'm telling this to author so that he/she don't make this silly mistakes in future, it's for her own good writing . But still if the author felt bad about my words then sorry for that . Otherwise I already said the story is obviously good, there's no doubt
Hey I'm not saying you wrong but kids are innocent and they can learn something like this from parents also I have a cousin she is also five years old and she also talk like a mature person plus it also depends on mental age like you see some people talk or behave like kids in a mature age and some people talk and behave like mature in immature age so it's completely fine
What bullshit was the first scene 🤣 5 years old talking like they're 20 ... please don't come to justify that saying it's a fan fiction.... Good fiction writers always tries to create a world portraying the originality. That's a skill to make the readers feel like they're in the story.
Author the first scene that was unimaginable for me when i was of five i dont know the meaning of love and kiss and these kids omg you know i was really innocent bit after coming in this fandom i don't know where my innocent went i think that kids also watch bts like us am i right?😂😂😂😂
Umm.....unnie this ff was nice but the starting scene do these 5 year old actually beheave like this when they are alone but whatever it is I'm assouming them as atlest 10-12 years old coz these 10-12 year old are having bf gf soooo yeah
Unnie I'll put you one requst 2 weeks ago but you didn't make it 😢😢😢that ff is when tae slip in to his littel space and ask for breast milk to yn and first time touch his wife him as yn cold husband
![||KTH||when your husband's uncle tries to r@]-
First here pin please 🎉
Done! 💯👍🏻
Second 🎉❤. Pls unnie make another ff we will wait.🫶🏻💗🎀
When i was 13 or 14 i didn't even know how kids born or why people kiss i just hate kisses and this FF said love at age 5😂😂
Author don't get me wrong but the first scene in this ff didn't make any sense because a five year old kid will never say something like that .. they both were literally talking like a mature person, it didn't seem like a five years old kid.... Otherwise the story was really good 👍
Yess 😂
That's why this a fan fiction. Everything is possible, and nothing is impossible in this fandom. At least they are 5 years old, I have read stories that 2-year-old kids give life development lectures to their parents...
Making impossibilities possible = ARMY Fan Fiction 🙂↕️🫡
@@straweey_spaceship0613 That doesn't justify anything if that author portrayed a 2 years old child like that . That author must be an baby army/ author or a new author. I know it's a ff but still everything is not possible. Maybe most of the thing is possible in ff but not everything . And I'm telling this to author so that he/she don't make this silly mistakes in future, it's for her own good writing . But still if the author felt bad about my words then sorry for that . Otherwise I already said the story is obviously good, there's no doubt
Hey I'm not saying you wrong but kids are innocent and they can learn something like this from parents also I have a cousin she is also five years old and she also talk like a mature person plus it also depends on mental age like you see some people talk or behave like kids in a mature age and some people talk and behave like mature in immature age so it's completely fine
Next level
What bullshit was the first scene 🤣 5 years old talking like they're 20 ... please don't come to justify that saying it's a fan fiction.... Good fiction writers always tries to create a world portraying the originality. That's a skill to make the readers feel like they're in the story.
Author the first scene that was unimaginable for me when i was of five i dont know the meaning of love and kiss and these kids omg you know i was really innocent bit after coming in this fandom i don't know where my innocent went i think that kids also watch bts like us am i right?😂😂😂😂
Ofc you are right 😊🤭🤭
Umm.....unnie this ff was nice but the starting scene do these 5 year old actually beheave like this when they are alone but whatever it is I'm assouming them as atlest 10-12 years old coz these 10-12 year old are having bf gf soooo yeah
Unnie I'll put you one requst 2 weeks ago but you didn't make it 😢😢😢that ff is when tae slip in to his littel space and ask for breast milk to yn and first time touch his wife him as yn cold husband
Seriously🙄🤣🤣🤣🤣
It was soo good unnie ❤😊
I have a request if you can't pronounce the words rightly and not fullfill the sentences so pls don't do voiceover i hope you understand 🙂
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10 pls pin l will cry if you dont