It was awesome and when he said "If a girl beats me, I'd be hers in that moment" this line reminded me of "Falling into your smile" drama. Loved it, pls make a bonus❤❤❤❤
One of the best ffi have read in a while... My tears literally fell when he said "I want to be yours Y/n would you let me" 😭 I'm gonna save this and re-read it again on my periods or something when I want to read a good ff
I was literally a blushing mess during the whole ff but I couldn't help it and the ending made me to burst into tears...that was so good ❤ even your every ff holds a different place in my heart your ffs really gives comfort to many people you're just an amazing author and I'm sure that you always will....we all love you so much.........🌷💕
I have never comment on your channel but today's video forced me to...please please please make a bonus of this please iI nearly beg you I dont know why I desperately want to have thier moments further...please make a bonus part of it
This is just like a documentary to me.. I was really good sprinter and had participated in many races but I gave up on my dreams just for studies.. But watching this brought tears in my eyes.. This so sweet!!! Really good writing author 🥹💜🙌✨
As soon as I clicked on this video, my period cramp hit me like a truck 😭😭🤌🏻... Ye video bhi hamesha ke trh acchi hogi, I have this feeling about it without any doubt..
This is the first time iam commenting on an ff. This is just heartmelting!!! Each and every sentences filled with emotions. I'll definitely save this for re-reading. I dont think that i can get out of it easily...Thank you dear, thank you so much for making this masterpiece😘😘😘😘
This ff was so amazing, like every was so smooth and vwry pleasant to read 💗😍 i loved it so much, idk why but i got a different kind of inspiration, peace and determination after reading this ff☺️ thank you author for this ❤️
I don’t like that some of it is AI generated, it is honestly cringy. Would sound much better if was written by hand. Any way except for that the storyline plus the intimacy they had was really good. Would be cool if you could do a bonus part for this. Their dynamic is super great.
![[ 𝗕𝗼𝗻𝘂𝘀 ] 𝗪𝗵𝗲𝗻 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗰𝗿𝗮𝗺𝗽𝘀 𝘄𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝗮𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗶𝗿 𝗽𝗲𝗮𝗸 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗰𝗼𝗮𝗰𝗵 𝘀𝗰𝗼𝗹𝗱𝗲𝗱 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗳𝗼𝗿 𝗯𝗲𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗹𝗮𝘇𝘆｡](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/RalnmAP5qAM/mqdefault.jpg)
![[ 𝗕𝗼𝗻𝘂𝘀 ] 𝗪𝗵𝗲𝗻 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗰𝗿𝗮𝗺𝗽𝘀 𝘄𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝗮𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗶𝗿 𝗽𝗲𝗮𝗸 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗰𝗼𝗮𝗰𝗵 𝘀𝗰𝗼𝗹𝗱𝗲𝗱 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗳𝗼𝗿 𝗯𝗲𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗹𝗮𝘇𝘆｡](/img/tr.png)
![[𝐎𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐭] 𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐞𝐱𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐦𝐞 𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐫 𝐢𝐬𝐬𝐮𝐞𝐬 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐥𝐞𝐭 𝐢𝐭 𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐨𝐧 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐚𝐫𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐝 𝐡𝐮𝐬𝐛𝐚𝐧𝐝.](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/OQT5ZqfiVn8/mqdefault.jpg)
![[ 𝗢𝗻𝗲 𝘀𝗵𝗼𝘁 ] 𝗪𝗵𝗲𝗻 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝘀𝗶𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗿'𝘀 𝗳𝗹𝗶𝗿𝘁𝘆 𝗯𝗿𝗼𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿-𝗶𝗻-𝗹𝗮𝘄 𝘀𝗲𝗲𝘀 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗼𝗻𝗹𝘆 𝗶𝗻 𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝘁𝗼𝘄𝗲𝗹🥀](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/cprAtq1fu-Q/mqdefault.jpg)
![[ 𝐎𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐭 ] 𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐩𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐨𝐝 𝐜𝐫𝐚𝐦𝐩𝐬 𝐛𝐨𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐬𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐞𝐥𝐲, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐬𝐢𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐫'𝐬 𝐛𝐫𝐨𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫-𝐢𝐧-𝐥𝐚𝐰 𝐭𝐮𝐜𝐤𝐞𝐝..](/img/n.gif)
Bonus 👇👇
ua-cam.com/video/RalnmAP5qAM/v-deo.html
It was awesome and when he said "If a girl beats me, I'd be hers in that moment" this line reminded me of "Falling into your smile" drama.
Loved it, pls make a bonus❤❤❤❤
True ,,,, lu si cheng and tong yao's solo match proved that they made for each other 😅😊
Yeah true😊
Damn if only coaches were this handsome and young😂😂
One of the best ffi have read in a while... My tears literally fell when he said "I want to be yours Y/n would you let me" 😭 I'm gonna save this and re-read it again on my periods or something when I want to read a good ff
Very soothing to read on my periods already 😢 thank you
Us 👯♀️
Now go and get a coach to run😂
@@Moonlight_NS dhashi run run run 🏃♀️😅😉💜
I was literally a blushing mess during the whole ff but I couldn't help it and the ending made me to burst into tears...that was so good ❤ even your every ff holds a different place in my heart your ffs really gives comfort to many people you're just an amazing author and I'm sure that you always will....we all love you so much.........🌷💕
I have never comment on your channel but today's video forced me to...please please please make a bonus of this please iI nearly beg you I dont know why I desperately want to have thier moments further...please make a bonus part of it
Yes Please 😢😢😢🙏🙏
The lines in this ff 😩😩😩😩😩😩😩❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
This is just like a documentary to me.. I was really good sprinter and had participated in many races but I gave up on my dreams just for studies.. But watching this brought tears in my eyes.. This so sweet!!! Really good writing author 🥹💜🙌✨
It will be awesome if they have a blushing competition while running😂
As soon as I clicked on this video, my period cramp hit me like a truck 😭😭🤌🏻... Ye video bhi hamesha ke trh acchi hogi, I have this feeling about it without any doubt..
A MASTERPIECE 🌷😭
This is the first time iam commenting on an ff. This is just heartmelting!!! Each and every sentences filled with emotions. I'll definitely save this for re-reading. I dont think that i can get out of it easily...Thank you dear, thank you so much for making this masterpiece😘😘😘😘
And author-nim indian series ko update kr do plz 😢😢.. mujhe acha lagega jab kuch bhi acha nhi lag raha hai..
This ff was so amazing, like every was so smooth and vwry pleasant to read 💗😍 i loved it so much, idk why but i got a different kind of inspiration, peace and determination after reading this ff☺️ thank you author for this ❤️
This is a really great story.. I feel so soft and can feel the love throughout the story.. I love it so much❤❤❤ keep it up
I read another coach jungkook ff before, so I was a little bit reluctant to give it a go...But my ohhh my ....this is ❤❤❤❤❤❤
Ah, it made me cried.. 😭😭😭 why is your writing skills so good 😢.. This masterpiece deserves a special bonus.. and ur hand deserve a chef kiss 💕💕✨😩😌
This is cool.i really like it thanks for the late night story btw
Very nice story... ❤ A bonus please🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️
Caught u in 45 sec😂🎉
I WAS IN TEARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's so beautiful man
It is sooo good plz make a bonus part ❤❤❤
This is so beautiful. I love it so much 🦋
Tyyy I was js abt to ask smth like periods 😂and u gave it tyyyy❤❤❤❤
Part2.....plzzzz
Can we get a bonus
Awesome storyline ❤
Bonus please❤❤❤❤
Bonus please
BONUS
Too good and unique ❤
Perfect like always ❤
Bons part bitte ❤❤❤❤
It was good❤👍🏻
Cute
Sooo Good I loved it
It's so good!!!❤️❤️❤️
Wowwwwwwwww niceeeeeeeeee uniiiiii i really loved itttt❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Awesome
Love it❤❤❤❤❤❤
I don’t like that some of it is AI generated, it is honestly cringy. Would sound much better if was written by hand. Any way except for that the storyline plus the intimacy they had was really good. Would be cool if you could do a bonus part for this. Their dynamic is super great.
Plesent
I dont think i can say anything now . The way u portrayed your characters emotions. I mean im speechless ❤❤❤
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