Although, when he kill his also brainwashed former Stormtrooper comrades with such a glee while screaming "YEAH", he is SOOOO hot! If he killed more Stormtroopers like that, he would be hotter than Kylo!
@@LiteratureDevil Brother, I gotta level with you. The fix you did could actually make Reylo good. Why is it when even if you sound like you're not even trying, you can write circles around Rian and JJ like a Beyblade?
@@wojak-sensei6424 Really, when he gave the description of his changes near the end it was like I was watching the movies in my head and it worked really well, even the shakespearean prose coming out of Kylos mouth only at key points. Giving him some more knightly qualities would have served well to differentiate the Knights of Ren from the Sith Order as distinct factions. The only issue is with the end of episode 9 as this ends the movie in its middle and removes every single lightsaber fight or final battle. Though even if Hux and Kylo kill each other, logic dictates that General Pryde and the fleet still exist. A villain without force powers really should have taken centerstage at some point during the sequel trilogy, Hux and Phasma running around as side villains isn't really what Tarkin/Piett/Veers were. Let Pryde take over the fleet as a throwback to Tarkin having been the main villain of ANH, give him some greater motivation beyond being a fascist by having him want to outlaw force users out of the galaxy since they are responsible for the downfall of every faction and government. Maybe also don't kill the Knights of Ren together with Kylo and let them appear during the finale. Their ghoul like outfits and conventional weapons would have been a great visual representation of depression for Rey to fight against as she basically agrees with them since she wanted Kylo not to die and feels responsible for it, maybe even agreeing in the back of her mind with Prydes views on Force users being a plight on the populace. That way we could have still kept the eerie atmosphere of Sheevs Sith temple without having to bring him back as the Sith god. It could have been the same movie but without all the contempt against every element that gives Star Wars its identity, just with contempt for the old hero cast.
"Star wars is a movie about space wizards intended for children. Anyway, as Anakin's flesh was melting off on Mustafar after having all of his limbs violently amputated by his best friend..." Simply perfect.
@@hughvonramdass8957 Well you're clearly biased for using the word "based" instead of "biased." Okay, how 'bout I play by those rules. Tell me, are you biased in the USA? What does your homebias look like? Does it have a biasment, if so how deep and big is it? Have you ever played Biasball or watched a game of it? Biased on the fact that you comment here, are you a Lit. Devil subscriber too? Sarcastically speaking, Lit. Angel's video is totally biased on reality and is not an April Fool's Joke.😏
@@weirdofromhalo Miscommunication is the death of Civilization, And many a nation fall prey to this infestation, It is therefore my declaration, That there must be a fixation, On Sentence-Subject correlation, Without losing concentration, On a specific destination, Without hesitation, For 'twill be a great elation, To witness the operation, Of perfect communication, That results in cooperation, Without much compllication, Being part of all creation. If you have no idea what I'm saying, then you probably don't value the importance of words. (Sorry if that's mean) Words are like people and bullets. Though some look, sound, and feel the same, ultimately they are different and have different meanings. Once you "fire" a word, it can't be taken back, and many slangs in the past have become modern words. As a result, wars have been fought because of miscommunication and thousands have been killed. ( I know it sounds crazy, but it's true.) So if you value words and in your POV, "proper slang," then go ahead and keep using them. I, on the otherhand, am going to keep using words the way they're supposed to be used. I know what slang is, I've invented many myself, and many of them don't detract from the original meaning. But whatever, it probably doesn't matter to you anyway😔. I just hope I've given you a peek into the POV of a person different from you and (I. M. O.) a nice rap poem😒. Have a safe time online!!!🤗
And then Kylo dropped dead for no reason. It was such a shame too, they had the perfect chance to give Rey the boot there, but she was doomed to continue this miserable existence.
"and as anyone who respects women knows: real women aren't attractive" Why does this sound like something that I've heard someone say unironically? Brilliant video
I'm starting to think the reason SJW girls like toxic relationships in fiction is because it validates their warped views of men/women dynamics in reality
half right. They have been fed their entire lives that they should be "the one who wears the pants" When most women would prefer the skirt. So they become attached in media to any dominant man/submissive woman dynamic regardless of its health. Women who are in healthy relationships for them are less likely to find this appealing, even if they are sjws, or the boomer version. Edit: In my experience as a bi woman who is more naturaly dominant interacting with lesbian and bi women, I don't necissairly know the straight dynamic perfectly there.
i thought it was the power fantasy of being so zomg pretty cute awesome the bad boy becomes a good boi by the power of her vag. Also he is leik really cute and has a lot of money/power.
It’s more that a subset of girls is attracted to villains in stories. It might be because they want to rebel against the world and see the villain as a way to do so vicariously. Alternatively it might be women who feel trapped by life secretly yearn for someone to save them, which may come in the form of abduction. Remember kids, when you play as the hero you’re not saving the princess you’re abducting her from the villain who abducted her first. The only difference between a hero and a villain from the princess’s perspective is one will let her go if she asks and the other won’t, this is why the scene in Beauty and the Beast where Belle begs the Beast to let her return home and he does so is so important, and why her family trying to return her to the confinement she’d been stuck in at the beginning of the story shows her that the Beast is truly the hero she wants.
The sad thing is this parody performance is still infinitely more impressive than the actual thing being parodied. This is the version of them from the late Aughts, when their content was at least compelling and competently written.
All of a sudden after hearing the Romeo and Juliette reference several times I heard in my head, "I ship Romiette." Imagine if that were a concept back in older times, fragmented history, Historians trying to figure out who "Cleoantanony" was and how they fit into things.
In case anyone was wondering where Kylo's new lines are from: 17:45: "As the World Falls Down" by David Bowie 19:46: "The Point of No Return" by Andrew Lloyd Webber 20:49: "All I Ask of You (Reprise)" by Andrew Lloyd Webber 22:54: "No One Would Listen" by Andrew Lloyd Webber All of them were in The Phantom of the Opera, except for the Bowie song, which was in Labyrinth.
I can't get over how this sarcastic version of the story is actually a whole lot better than the real thing. It's a wonder what having a clear theme and letting the characters take center stage can do.
"There is a certain Literature Angel, a wise man, who thinks about what's in the heavens and who has investigated all things below the earth and who makes the weaker argument appear to be the stronger." -some ancient Greek guy, probably, at least 10 years ago
That hurts so much And I am only halfway through... I will listen to the whole thing Ok I am finished. And I have to say his Romance Version is better then the Disney movies
I can't wait till someday in the near future someone uses this as a defense of Disney Star Wars without remembering what significance the day it was put up on has.
This is perfect satire. He uses sound logic to advance ridiculous assumptions to ludicrous conclusions, while interspersing the occasional truth. Edit: HA! Quoting Bowie in Labyrinth, and Phantom of the Opera. Unbelievable.
@@manticoraus They're both things Kylo says, the first one is lyrics from "As the World Falls Down," one of the songs from Labyrinth ("As the pain sweeps through, makes no sense for you..." etc.) There are two Phantom references, I can't remember the exact ones, but they're also times when Kylo waxes particularly insufferable.
You have pleased the Vaush, he will now slumber for another 40 years in his streaming cave and feast on his lizards until they day he hears an opposing view point.
I like how this parod... TOTALLY serious analysis of reylo, gave suggestions that would unironically make the sequel trilogy better. (Albeit, making sequel trilogy better is as hard as walking tbh) Or Literature Devil just can't give bad advice :p
Should I be concerned that this video has convinced me that the Disney Trilogy would have been a million times better had it been a competent rehash of Romeo and Juliet in the Star Wars Universe?
LD you truly are a devil, since you can deliver the lines of your script without loosing your mind or break out in hysterical madness and laughter. Chapeau!
The reylo pairing could work if there were actually characters in the show. However, as there are no characters, simply copyrighted marketing placements; none of the character relationships feel real or fleshed out. Even the straight forward hierarchy of a command structure escapes the set of relations. If the disney star wars saga did anything novel in terms of writing, it was produce a sequence of scenes onto which the audience could project both plot and characters. Arguably, they should have just stripped all dialogue as the present set excludes rational people from participating in the plot projection and this constricts the marketability notably.
An ironic video made as a prank from LD managed to basically fix the Sequel trilogy from a romance standpoint making Rey and Kylo Ren become interesting characters. Even as a prank, LD can write cricles around JJ Abrams and Ryan Johnson.
Y'know, despite just being an April Fools video, this format has some potential. A sarcastic criticism of a decent amount of modern film critics who are politically charged by social justice and will attack anyone who disagrees with them or their favored material with a high amount of zeal. This angel has potential.
It is clear what you are doing here and it is masterfully done. Intentionally disregarding the actual narrative of Disney Star Wars movies, and inserting the narrative as seen by Reylos. And highlighting just how stupid that is. I love you, Literature Devil. Edit: I love the subtle message in the "rewrite" telling the audience to abandon logic. Masterpiece!
The funniest thing is that even as bad as the result of following his advice in this video would be - abandoning Stars Wars' traditional adventure structure for a trilogy more focused on romance - it would still be better than what we actually got.
Some people once decided what is high and what is low. About words, foods, clothes, books, looks and so on. In truth, it is just matter and different temperaments. Still, sound - from objects, voices, utility & construction devices, musical instruments, transmits certain feelings and reactions, almost universal, scary, gentle, sad, passionate energic, and so on. But sure, design is nice, perfume is a great invention, clean spacious bathrooms are lovely :)
"Finn hasn't committed nearly enough genocide to be attractive."
Brilliant. Simply brilliant.
Fucking killed me 😂
@@C_0_N not only you
Brilliant indeed!
Although, when he kill his also brainwashed former Stormtrooper comrades with such a glee while screaming "YEAH", he is SOOOO hot! If he killed more Stormtroopers like that, he would be hotter than Kylo!
@Spare Slipstreamz actually, Kylo Ren was the only decent character in the sequels. Both Rey and Finn deserve a hyperspace crash, if anything.
Your sarcastic defense of the sequels is more compelling than real ones.
Thanks lol
@@LiteratureDevil Brother, I gotta level with you. The fix you did could actually make Reylo good. Why is it when even if you sound like you're not even trying, you can write circles around Rian and JJ like a Beyblade?
@@wojak-sensei6424
Because he isn't an idiot, nor is he lazy.
@@wojak-sensei6424 Really, when he gave the description of his changes near the end it was like I was watching the movies in my head and it worked really well, even the shakespearean prose coming out of Kylos mouth only at key points. Giving him some more knightly qualities would have served well to differentiate the Knights of Ren from the Sith Order as distinct factions.
The only issue is with the end of episode 9 as this ends the movie in its middle and removes every single lightsaber fight or final battle. Though even if Hux and Kylo kill each other, logic dictates that General Pryde and the fleet still exist. A villain without force powers really should have taken centerstage at some point during the sequel trilogy, Hux and Phasma running around as side villains isn't really what Tarkin/Piett/Veers were.
Let Pryde take over the fleet as a throwback to Tarkin having been the main villain of ANH, give him some greater motivation beyond being a fascist by having him want to outlaw force users out of the galaxy since they are responsible for the downfall of every faction and government. Maybe also don't kill the Knights of Ren together with Kylo and let them appear during the finale. Their ghoul like outfits and conventional weapons would have been a great visual representation of depression for Rey to fight against as she basically agrees with them since she wanted Kylo not to die and feels responsible for it, maybe even agreeing in the back of her mind with Prydes views on Force users being a plight on the populace. That way we could have still kept the eerie atmosphere of Sheevs Sith temple without having to bring him back as the Sith god. It could have been the same movie but without all the contempt against every element that gives Star Wars its identity, just with contempt for the old hero cast.
Me: Dad, can we have literature Devil?
Dad: we have literature Devil at home
Literature Devil at home:
It's ok, parents just don't understand. 😆
"Wenches love psychopaths" really sounded like Abridged Alucard talking about canons.
I see, you're familiar with the fine aspects of culture
Wenches love canons
Abridged and Canon Alucard are both psychopathic and are also my type of guy
As the great Williambo Backpackins once said:
"These hoes ain't loyal."
Ironic.
I snorted. That's hilarious.
"Star wars is a movie about space wizards intended for children.
Anyway, as Anakin's flesh was melting off on Mustafar after having all of his limbs violently amputated by his best friend..."
Simply perfect.
Perfect indeed!
holy shit, I was reading this just as he said it
Brilliant.
Don't forget trade negotiations and taxes. Children love taxes.
@@GameLeaderR and the murder of children slavery, genocide etc etc
Based Scripture Angel.
You mean "biased".
This Angel is Biased for Reylo and biased against Logic.
@@ellugerdelacruz2555 based
@@hughvonramdass8957
Well you're clearly biased for using the word "based" instead of "biased."
Okay, how 'bout I play by those rules.
Tell me, are you biased in the USA?
What does your homebias look like?
Does it have a biasment, if so how deep and big is it? Have you ever played Biasball or watched a game of it?
Biased on the fact that you comment here, are you a Lit. Devil subscriber too?
Sarcastically speaking, Lit. Angel's video is totally biased on reality and is not an April Fool's Joke.😏
@@ellugerdelacruz2555 Learn what slang is nerd.
@@weirdofromhalo
Miscommunication is the death of Civilization,
And many a nation fall prey to this infestation,
It is therefore my declaration,
That there must be a fixation,
On Sentence-Subject correlation,
Without losing concentration,
On a specific destination,
Without hesitation,
For 'twill be a great elation,
To witness the operation,
Of perfect communication,
That results in cooperation,
Without much compllication,
Being part of all creation.
If you have no idea what I'm saying, then you probably don't value the importance of words. (Sorry if that's mean) Words are like people and bullets. Though some look, sound, and feel the same, ultimately they are different and have different meanings. Once you "fire" a word, it can't be taken back, and many slangs in the past have become modern words. As a result, wars have been fought because of miscommunication and thousands have been killed. ( I know it sounds crazy, but it's true.)
So if you value words and in your POV, "proper slang," then go ahead and keep using them. I, on the otherhand, am going to keep using words the way they're supposed to be used. I know what slang is, I've invented many myself, and many of them don't detract from the original meaning.
But whatever, it probably doesn't matter to you anyway😔. I just hope I've given you a peek into the POV of a person different from you and (I. M. O.) a nice rap poem😒.
Have a safe time online!!!🤗
"But living a life alone on a hostile planet has acquired her to develop a natural intuition when reading people" funniest line in this video.
Reylo confused me so much that after watching the kiss, I had to process their past moments to remember how they get to this point.
I've seen the first movie and heard about the second. When I saw a clip of that i was stupified. Still can't believe it.
And then Kylo dropped dead for no reason. It was such a shame too, they had the perfect chance to give Rey the boot there, but she was doomed to continue this miserable existence.
Finally, a love story that can rival Twilight.
"Living alone on a hostile planet has required her to develop a natural intuition when reading people"
I woke up my family laughing at this
I look forward to Literature Angel's next video: Mark Waid Did Nothing Wrong
That's a good idea, actually lol. Maybe for next time
"and as anyone who respects women knows: real women aren't attractive"
Why does this sound like something that I've heard someone say unironically?
Brilliant video
Neckbeards? Incels? Weebs, who are too detached from reality?
Because people actually say that.
It's understandable, but something to overcome lest it becomes too late.
As a professional neckbeard incel weeb myself, I can attest to this statement.
Depends on the context.
@@nnnnmhughuuhhjiijj9457 hey, don't promote your 3d girl propaganda!
LD long time ago: "Before I became Literature Devil I was one of Literature Angels"
Literature Angel:
He wasn't banished, he chose to jump ship
He did say he gave bad advice as a joke
@@DreadnoughtFiend You know, I forgot about that. Everything makes so much sense now!
the LD lore goes deep, man...
@@2dollarchickenwings689 D E E P E S T L O R E
Never thought I'd see the dreaded love triangle outside of a Terrible Writing Advice video.
true
The Love Triangle is a sum of many bad things.
You know what this comment section needs? A LOVE TRIANGLEs!😃
Oh no ... It is spreading!
@@gabeskai no no no we need a Love Hexagon.
I died inside when I saw the title and it got reinvigorated when I remembered the date
I'm starting to think the reason SJW girls like toxic relationships in fiction is because it validates their warped views of men/women dynamics in reality
half right. They have been fed their entire lives that they should be "the one who wears the pants" When most women would prefer the skirt. So they become attached in media to any dominant man/submissive woman dynamic regardless of its health. Women who are in healthy relationships for them are less likely to find this appealing, even if they are sjws, or the boomer version. Edit: In my experience as a bi woman who is more naturaly dominant interacting with lesbian and bi women, I don't necissairly know the straight dynamic perfectly there.
Or because they just want to be submissive but cope with it by over compensation towards their surroundings.
i thought it was the power fantasy of being so zomg pretty cute awesome the bad boy becomes a good boi by the power of her vag. Also he is leik really cute and has a lot of money/power.
Yes.
It’s more that a subset of girls is attracted to villains in stories. It might be because they want to rebel against the world and see the villain as a way to do so vicariously. Alternatively it might be women who feel trapped by life secretly yearn for someone to save them, which may come in the form of abduction. Remember kids, when you play as the hero you’re not saving the princess you’re abducting her from the villain who abducted her first. The only difference between a hero and a villain from the princess’s perspective is one will let her go if she asks and the other won’t, this is why the scene in Beauty and the Beast where Belle begs the Beast to let her return home and he does so is so important, and why her family trying to return her to the confinement she’d been stuck in at the beginning of the story shows her that the Beast is truly the hero she wants.
I’m not versed in sarcasm enough for this...
"...I taught him wrong. As a joke. Aaaaand now I'm here."
In a strange way, this fits canon.
LD shall forever pay for his mistakes, I guess
Be honest, how many times did you burst out laughing or was unable to keep a straight face? This is just brilliant.
The one that really got me was “loose drink and heavy women”
This is very serious. I think I like the sequel trilogy now. Thank you literature Angel for showing me the beauty that is Reylo.
The sad thing is this parody performance is still infinitely more impressive than the actual thing being parodied. This is the version of them from the late Aughts, when their content was at least compelling and competently written.
I agree with you.
Agreed!
"The dork side" 🤣
"Anything uttered in a British accent must be true." - Gary Stotle, philosopher and inventor of the Beer Helmet
The Literature Angel is what the Literature Devil was before the Fall
"Emperor Palpatine does not return"
This alone makes the rewrite a 300% better movie than the actual rise of Skywalker
All of a sudden after hearing the Romeo and Juliette reference several times I heard in my head, "I ship Romiette." Imagine if that were a concept back in older times, fragmented history, Historians trying to figure out who "Cleoantanony" was and how they fit into things.
Cleoantanony? Who are you referring to?
Cleopatra and Mark Antony
it’s a VERY good day.
The amount of effort that seems to have gone into this is both completely astounding and terrifying at the same time.
>"Literature Angel"
>"Literature Devil" graphic
Ya can't fool me, demonmin
Not today Satan
What are you talking about? Literature Angel has a halo, which makes him entirely unique from Literature Devil.
In case anyone was wondering where Kylo's new lines are from:
17:45: "As the World Falls Down" by David Bowie
19:46: "The Point of No Return" by Andrew Lloyd Webber
20:49: "All I Ask of You (Reprise)" by Andrew Lloyd Webber
22:54: "No One Would Listen" by Andrew Lloyd Webber
All of them were in The Phantom of the Opera, except for the Bowie song, which was in Labyrinth.
I was wondering about that xD I thought it mightve been Phantom, but it'd been a while since I last watched it
Actually....this COULD have been the story, and if it had been, it would have been wonderful.
It would still have to be competently handled, but I get what you're saying.
I always thought reylo was just tweens handling the figurines of rey and kylo forcing them together and saying "and now kiss"
Ah yes, tweens and former Twilight tweens pretending to understand relationships.
I can't get over how this sarcastic version of the story is actually a whole lot better than the real thing. It's a wonder what having a clear theme and letting the characters take center stage can do.
At the beginning, I was digging the sarcasm. By the end, I was actually on board with this story proposition.
IS Glib voicing the famous philosopher Gary Stotle? that's perfect
Just like the accent that keeps switching from Cockney to Irish to Austrailian
There's even a card linking to his channel in the upper right corner if anyone wants to check it out
“Finn hasn’t committed nearly enough genocide to be attractive.”
Me, the Sephiroth fangirl: he also hasn’t blown up enough planets. 😂
Who?
"There is a certain Literature Angel, a wise man, who thinks about what's in the heavens and who has investigated all things below the earth and who makes the weaker argument appear to be the stronger."
-some ancient Greek guy, probably, at least 10 years ago
I salute you for hurting yourself at this amount
Much appreciated lol
You’ve won by making the April fools joke but at what cost
@@swimmingdrop9557 everything
The best part is, you know someone is going to watch this, not realizing it was released April 1st, and be like, "Yes! Finally, someone who gets it."
This is a glorious day
First Morning Nonsense, the GDELB, and now a Lit Devil video
Do you mean Lit Angle?
Next up would be First Edition to top it off.
I'm disappointed Literature Angel didn't mention the wombs during the MOST ROMANTIC SCENE IN STAR WARS.
Such important themes missed
Lol!
You didn't need to go this far for an April Fools' joke, but I'm glad you decided to
Lolol I freaking died laughing when he said, "Real women aren't attractive"
... I am convinced now.
whether you hate it or not
this man did a 180 for just this one day for our entertainment. you gotta respect that. love the video, keep it up!
I don't think anyone actually hates it? Everyone knows that it's farce.
An angel playing devils advocate, Ironic.
...where am I? Last I remember I clicked on a video and suddenly my eyes glazed over so hard I passed out
This looks like a fine tradition to go along with Mooper's GDELB. I look forward to another one next year.
Finally some good content. This is the most insightful video you have ever made
Man, you and that Gdelb fella should really think about working together against Literature Devil and Efap.
The moment you realize the depth of the comparisons no amount of flagrant mockery or spoofing can hide their true feelings
Had me in the first half, ngl......
"Proving once and for all that logic is only for immature man-children"
Best line I've heard this month xD
That hurts so much
And I am only halfway through...
I will listen to the whole thing
Ok I am finished. And I have to say his Romance Version is better then the Disney movies
I had to pause when he started quoting songs. I was laughing too hard. How dare you use Bowie against me so effectively
I can't wait till someday in the near future someone uses this as a defense of Disney Star Wars without remembering what significance the day it was put up on has.
The Gary Stotle bit legitimately had me burst into laughter. I was not prepared and the delivery was perfect!
Only an angel could present this because it must have truly taken an act of God to not die laughing reading this script.
Loose drink and heavy women.... someone once told me I had it all mixed up but now I realize I did it exactly right!
@Greg Elchert Get on your fancy cloths I'm taking you to an all you can eat buffet!
Genius just from the very start when you say "It's Objectively good - that's my opinion!"
Also the statue with the beer helmet was quite funny as well
This is perfect satire. He uses sound logic to advance ridiculous assumptions to ludicrous conclusions, while interspersing the occasional truth.
Edit: HA! Quoting Bowie in Labyrinth, and Phantom of the Opera. Unbelievable.
I didn't get all the references someone make this transparent to me?
@@manticoraus They're both things Kylo says, the first one is lyrics from "As the World Falls Down," one of the songs from Labyrinth ("As the pain sweeps through, makes no sense for you..." etc.)
There are two Phantom references, I can't remember the exact ones, but they're also times when Kylo waxes particularly insufferable.
@@somosUS thanks
So this is what happens when a Demon Falls
To make the stories better, let's add "the LOVE TRIANGLE!" 🤣😀👍🏽
I'm happy that finally someone else understands the subtle parallels between Reylo and the greatest works of Shakespeare.
They didn't teach me in Sunday school that angels are liars... I'm getting confused here
It's not necessarily a lie... From a certain point of view.
Sorry, couldn't resist the quote opportunity.
Don't devils/Fallen Angels sometimes put on a glamour that makes them appear divine so as to deceive people in Christian canon?
@@GodOfOrphans oh yeah
The reason he got turned into a devil was for teaching people wrong as a joke
I just realized that Gary-Stotle is secretly Gary Stu.
Best Plot Twist of 2021.
This is brilliant. So, so brilliant. And you actually had me convinced that Reylo worked until I reminded myself that this was satirical.
I disagree
Ok racist.
Clearly you need to have a bachelor's in film study to appreciate this.
You're just a man baby that hates women. Rey is just awesome.
My mind is still wreaked with confusion on how you were able to do this without failing. Just mind-boggling.
You have pleased the Vaush, he will now slumber for another 40 years in his streaming cave and feast on his lizards until they day he hears an opposing view point.
Thank goodness, was really shocked
14:12 I can't. That's perfect. Also, nice use of the Plinkett Maneuver.
Oh, this made my day!!
I like how this parod... TOTALLY serious analysis of reylo, gave suggestions that would unironically make the sequel trilogy better.
(Albeit, making sequel trilogy better is as hard as walking tbh)
Or Literature Devil just can't give bad advice :p
Yeah, it's becoming sad, how incompetent sequels are.
I absolutely adore how you sound like you’re genuinely having fun in this video!
Yeah, no matter how it ultimately turned out, I had A LOT of fun making this lol
Should I be concerned that this video has convinced me that the Disney Trilogy would have been a million times better had it been a competent rehash of Romeo and Juliet in the Star Wars Universe?
Stretched so small he snapped.
And like percussive maintenance, he eventually beat the thing so hard it *actually worked.*
Not gonna lie that troll April fool take seems better then what we got.
nerver again please, i almost broke my phone after forcing myself to watch this
Yeah, this guys sucks. I need to do a response!
LD you truly are a devil, since you can deliver the lines of your script without loosing your mind or break out in hysterical madness and laughter. Chapeau!
Jokes aside, the white suite actually does look damn good.
Alternate title: Kissing your uncle is secretly genius.
Even if this was just an April Fool's prank, this was surprisingly well-thought out, and perhaps even offers some genuine constructive criticism.
Simply genius, you just made my day LOL you should make this a running joke.
Awesome! Glad to hear it
You know you will get a terrible writing advice when you see the Love Triangle.
You know what this comment section is lacking, a LOVE TRIANGLE!!!
What a wonderful April fools day joke!
The reylo pairing could work if there were actually characters in the show. However, as there are no characters, simply copyrighted marketing placements; none of the character relationships feel real or fleshed out. Even the straight forward hierarchy of a command structure escapes the set of relations.
If the disney star wars saga did anything novel in terms of writing, it was produce a sequence of scenes onto which the audience could project both plot and characters. Arguably, they should have just stripped all dialogue as the present set excludes rational people from participating in the plot projection and this constricts the marketability notably.
An ironic video made as a prank from LD managed to basically fix the Sequel trilogy from a romance standpoint making Rey and Kylo Ren become interesting characters. Even as a prank, LD can write cricles around JJ Abrams and Ryan Johnson.
Y'know, despite just being an April Fools video, this format has some potential. A sarcastic criticism of a decent amount of modern film critics who are politically charged by social justice and will attack anyone who disagrees with them or their favored material with a high amount of zeal.
This angel has potential.
This is the best April Fool's video that I've ever seen.
It is clear what you are doing here and it is masterfully done. Intentionally disregarding the actual narrative of Disney Star Wars movies, and inserting the narrative as seen by Reylos. And highlighting just how stupid that is.
I love you, Literature Devil. Edit: I love the subtle message in the "rewrite" telling the audience to abandon logic. Masterpiece!
Man, this "Literature Angel" is built different.
The funniest thing is that even as bad as the result of following his advice in this video would be - abandoning Stars Wars' traditional adventure structure for a trilogy more focused on romance - it would still be better than what we actually got.
Drink some Reylo tears, Lit Dev. You turn back into your Angel form when its Aprils Fools.
You've made your Opus Magnum with this! truly a work of art.
Not even twenty seconds, and we have "objectively" and "opinion" in the same page. That was quick.
"Raylo is secretly genius"
That is what a rage spell sounds like.
I'd honestly watch the sequels if kylo exclusively spoke in phantom of the opera lyrics
The best way to improve Reylo is to have Kylo try to woo her with his deep hatred & distaste for sand, and explain why to her.
Glad to hear you're english accent is worse than my american.
Some people once decided what is high and what is low. About words, foods, clothes, books, looks and so on. In truth, it is just matter and different temperaments. Still, sound - from objects, voices, utility & construction devices, musical instruments, transmits certain feelings and reactions, almost universal, scary, gentle, sad, passionate energic, and so on. But sure, design is nice, perfume is a great invention, clean spacious bathrooms are lovely :)
I kept expecting LD to break character and burst out laughing at some of his lines, its IMPRESSIVE he could say all of that with a straight face.