A coworker listens to audiobooks every day while working and ultimately convinces me to listen to one as well. I found a free book to listen to, and for the past 6 months, I too listen while I'm working, cleaning the house, grocery shopping, I've even fallen asleep at night with my earbuds in..😊 Long story short...(sorry) I've tried finding a werewolf shifter story, and nothing sparked my interest.... Until now... Thank you!! I loved this story!! I wish I knew for certain exactly what happened, but oddly enough, I'm satisfied with the ending. They're together, wherever they are... Thank you for sharing...😊
Oh what a lovely comment that’s so kind of you to say! I love how you feel about the ending which was what I was trying to convey ❤️ And comments give me life so no apologies for the length necessary haha ❤️❤️❤️
Wow!! I just finished it. I am an eternal romantic and I am convinced it ended as only my heart could take it. You are such a great writer. The plot , the dialogue. Your characters they are perfect and flawed and just a complete delight. I can only assume you are reading your story as well and your voice is beautiful and soothing . Thank you for writing and entertaining me. I have shared your stories with other friends. Thank you again.
Thank you so much for your kind words 🥹🥹🥹! It means a lot to receive encouragements and it’s sooo motivating so thank you from the bottom of my heart! Ps : no no not my voice though ! I personally sound horrible 🤣🤣
These books😅... really good! I just get surprised that Adrian is supposed to take the thing that's most loved by wish makers, but the wish maker always seems to end up better off than they were before the wish. But Adrian still seems so tortured by having to grant these wishes. I think even Iris being linked to him a a good thing because they care for each other like family, it seems.
Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed! For Adrian, i think he has lots of different clients, not just the couple ones he meets in the stories here. And also, sometimes it ends well for them because he kind of breaks the rules to help them... which makes him sick, which Iris doesn't like haha
Hahaha so there’s actually a little hint about their fate within the story! Iris says Daphne tells her the entire story later (implying they did get out to be able to tell her!) so they’re fine !! ❤️
I liked the story, but the beginning and ending are equally frustrating. In the end, Jade gets more than she deserves (she should have had a more severe punishment than becoming the new alpha and losing her baby daddy), and we learn nothing of Grey's feelings for Daphne. The story has potential but is equally forgettable. As this is my first short story, I'm not sure if that is the intent.
Hi! Thank you for your feedback! In terms of intent, regarding Jade my aim was absolutely to be frustrating. i wanted to show Daphne's complete disillusion with the world (or at least with the world she used to be a part of) and, through her experience, how sometimes life is just unfair because not every villain gets punished (coming from personal experience haha that's how i feel personally). But I also wanted to show that there is hope, through grey because, despite not being able to hide away in this magical castle with him, she still loves him enough to want to take a chance on 'real life' again (aka life outside the safe space they'd found), as long as she's with him she's willing to risk it. And about Grey's feelings for her, that's the question i wanted to pose with the open ending: does he love her enough to want to try again, despite being so scarred by life in the past? (though i did give a little hint that pointed to yes 🙂)
@lilywritesstuff sorry for the delay. I just got the noti. Thanks for the response. I watch a lot of Korean dramas where the villians always get away with it, so I'm a little bitter everytime. But you're right. Life isn't always fair. 😭
My goodness I'm sitting here trying to listen to the whole beginning part I'm getting so angry I would have walked out I would have never married some a******and it bothers me that she's bowing down to their demands. Me personally, I would have said f you and left and let them figure it out. The story is making me so angry in the very beginning😅 thank God I read some of these comments in here so I went back to the story to listen to it I'm so happy she ran away from that di you know what
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed ! Yes there are others from this same series though they star other characters (only the magician and Iris are recurring). Here are a couple if you’d like to try them: ua-cam.com/video/K3IGx9TW1gw/v-deo.htmlsi=dEOSKUuQkQEbrGiB ua-cam.com/video/5XzmzDHZxMk/v-deo.htmlsi=afJnKVULds3RPRDj
I just lessoned to Rejected by my mate before this one. I know it's probably out of order but it was nice to hear about Iris and Adrian again. I can guess why Iris wasn't effected and hope to hear more about those two. Thanks for sharing
Thank you so much!! And don’t worry about the order all the stories from the ‘magician assistant series’ can be listened to as standalone even though there are recurring characters (Adrian and iris)! I’ll conclude it with their own story (one day!) 🤗
I was totally into the story and really enjoying it until the end… You can’t just end a story in the middle of the next phase of the story! I hate not knowing what happens to Grey and Daphne, as well as Aiden and Iris! Come on finish the whole story don’t just leave us hanging!
@@tanniswalker510 it is finished ! 😊It’s an open ending but it’s the ending and I’m not planning to write more about grey or Daphne ! Iris and Adrian are recurring characters which appear in all stories from this series!
@@lilywritesstuff well I have to admit that’s a bit disappointing. But is there one of your stories that pick up iris and Adrian story and tells what happens with them? You also said that they are in all of the stories I’m not sure what that means, so are you saying that this is a series and if so, which is the first in the series, and then the order of the rest of the series?
@@tanniswalker510 Sorry about that! I know many people don't love open endings, so I did hint in the story that they do make it out (iris saying daphne would tell her the fulls story later) if that helps :) ! About Adrian and Iris, they appear in what I call my 'Magician Assistant' series, basically in all these videos here: ua-cam.com/video/5XzmzDHZxMk/v-deo.html ua-cam.com/video/K3IGx9TW1gw/v-deo.html ua-cam.com/video/x5JsNrfG2fs/v-deo.html You don't need to watch them in any particular order. They just appear in them, they're. not the main character, exactly like in this one you just watched. I plan to write a full story about them in the future though, but it will conclude this series so not for a little while still. :)
Did they make it out? Do they meet Adrian and Iris at the shop? I really enjoy these stories, but the cliffhangers are killing me. I want to know what happens next.
Haha sorry if you were frustrated! I tried to do an open ending more than a cliffhanger ending, but there is a hint in the story that they did in fact made it out (Iris says Daphne told her her story later)! So 'off camera' happy ending! 😅
It would be good if we know in witch order are this books? I'm trying to follow the order, but it doesn't say in the books title.. It doesn't seems that they are standalone because of magician...
they are standalone, the magician is a recurring character but you don’t have to watch in any particular order to follow along. This is the order I wrote them in though if that helps : Rejected mate is claimed by the alpha’s brother The alpha’s forbidden mate The alpha’s rejected mate Betrayed by the alpha
@@danielafernandes417 aaaa I thought you were asking if this was abriged! So I tried to do an open ending more than a cliffhanger ending, but there is a hint in the story that they did in fact made it out (Iris says Daphne told her her story later which implies they did)
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed!! ❤️ There are others from the same series with recurring character (the magician and iris) but Daphne and grey’s story is over though!
Man does not own a phone, he's been living in isolation since way before they were ever created remember? At one point, Daphne explains some of the outside world's technological advancement to him. Also, even if he did have one and knew how to work it, he probably wouldn't pick up (he purposely didn't retrieve Daphne. He doesn't want her back there wasting her life away with him). And finally even if he did have a phone and did pick up, he probably wouldn't leave the castle (it's falling apart around him and he stays right there for a reason). At least not without Daphne physically present to drag him out. Hope that makes more sense :)
Let me do my summary version of the ending. Grey and Dafne do end up getting out of the castle but Grey has lots of believing in her love problems. It is also the story of the young man in the mirror that was Grey before becoming a vampire he did was killed by his beautiful brother and his finance the store he told was true but he told Dafne it wasn't so she'll eat. Iris is a descendent of the god Isis that makes her immune to Gray, she's secretly in love with Adrian so that's the second reason why she didn't become infatuated Gray and Dafne decide to stay in the pack and they face the garage of Jedi that give birth to a baby girl and Hunter becomes the crazy alpha and Jedi husband. Finally Grey learns that after drinking Dafne blood he becomes half vampire half shifter also he learns Dafne's mind and sentiments since they become automatic mates. In the end Dafne becomes pregnant and they live happily ever after ❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉😁😁😁
So….what happened to them? Did they get out in time? Also, she flew there, right? Isn’t she supposed to be naked when she gets inside the crumbling castle? And why is Iris not affected?
Hi! So to answer your questions: Iris says that Daphne told her her story later (and notably she knows about the castle part) so this implies or at least I tried to imply that they did get out. Daphne was indeed naked ! And Adrian explains that Grey’s power doesn’t work if you’re in love with someone already! So it means that Iris is in love essentially. 😉
Try this story if you enjoyed:
ua-cam.com/video/rhopX33MW5E/v-deo.html
Thanks so much for sharing. Sometimes one simply needs to escape and enjoy an interesting adventure. This perfectly suited. ❤
Thank you so much! I totally get that feeling and I’m glad this story helped you escape! ❤️❤️
A coworker listens to audiobooks every day while working and ultimately convinces me to listen to one as well. I found a free book to listen to, and for the past 6 months, I too listen while I'm working, cleaning the house, grocery shopping, I've even fallen asleep at night with my earbuds in..😊
Long story short...(sorry)
I've tried finding a werewolf shifter story, and nothing sparked my interest....
Until now...
Thank you!!
I loved this story!!
I wish I knew for certain exactly what happened, but oddly enough, I'm satisfied with the ending. They're together, wherever they are...
Thank you for sharing...😊
Oh what a lovely comment that’s so kind of you to say! I love how you feel about the ending which was what I was trying to convey ❤️
And comments give me life so no apologies for the length necessary haha ❤️❤️❤️
These are really good, but have you tried the Ava Benton audiobooks? Wolf, Lion, Bear... all kinds of shifters.
"freeze"
Oh thank God!!!!! I was so stressed when listening to that scene
A very beautiful story ❤
I'm so glad i kept going after the beginning few chapters 😅 (while gritting my teeth). Thank you Lily, it's amazing story ❤
@@deviyanatiwaskar7051 haha thank you for not giving up! Glad you enjoyed !! ❤️
A very enjoyable story. Author, narrator and everyone else involved in creating this audio book, did great work. Thank you for sharing it.
Thank you so much ❤️❤️
Wow!! I just finished it. I am an eternal romantic and I am convinced it ended as only my heart could take it. You are such a great writer. The plot , the dialogue. Your characters they are perfect and flawed and just a complete delight. I can only assume you are reading your story as well and your voice is beautiful and soothing . Thank you for writing and entertaining me. I have shared your stories with other friends. Thank you again.
Thank you so much for your kind words 🥹🥹🥹! It means a lot to receive encouragements and it’s sooo motivating so thank you from the bottom of my heart!
Ps : no no not my voice though ! I personally sound horrible 🤣🤣
It's kind of beauty and the beast meets howl's moving castle! loved loved loved!
And I love that you made a howl’s moving castle connection because I adore this film! Thank you for watching ❤️
These books😅... really good! I just get surprised that Adrian is supposed to take the thing that's most loved by wish makers, but the wish maker always seems to end up better off than they were before the wish. But Adrian still seems so tortured by having to grant these wishes. I think even Iris being linked to him a a good thing because they care for each other like family, it seems.
Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed! For Adrian, i think he has lots of different clients, not just the couple ones he meets in the stories here. And also, sometimes it ends well for them because he kind of breaks the rules to help them... which makes him sick, which Iris doesn't like haha
Ahhhhhhhhhh I need to know what happend to them both 😢 no what a cliff hanger 😢 I loved it ❤
Hahaha so there’s actually a little hint about their fate within the story! Iris says Daphne tells her the entire story later (implying they did get out to be able to tell her!) so they’re fine !! ❤️
This man needs a Lorraine bobbit moment!
I had to google that and then went like 😮🤣
Uh-oh! Sister of my heart,you just gave away our age! But I fully agree!!! All my best to the Sisterhood! Great series MS Lily!☺
@@darlenechadwick375 thank you so much ! ❤️
Lorena
Lol! 😅
Omg I loved it! It's like a fairy tale but it also hits very 'real' ❤
Glad you enjoyed !! ❤️❤️
I'm optimistic like Iris, this story gave me a lot of hope... thank you
I’m glad it did! Thank you for watching ❤️
I liked the story, but the beginning and ending are equally frustrating. In the end, Jade gets more than she deserves (she should have had a more severe punishment than becoming the new alpha and losing her baby daddy), and we learn nothing of Grey's feelings for Daphne. The story has potential but is equally forgettable. As this is my first short story, I'm not sure if that is the intent.
Hi! Thank you for your feedback! In terms of intent, regarding Jade my aim was absolutely to be frustrating. i wanted to show Daphne's complete disillusion with the world (or at least with the world she used to be a part of) and, through her experience, how sometimes life is just unfair because not every villain gets punished (coming from personal experience haha that's how i feel personally). But I also wanted to show that there is hope, through grey because, despite not being able to hide away in this magical castle with him, she still loves him enough to want to take a chance on 'real life' again (aka life outside the safe space they'd found), as long as she's with him she's willing to risk it. And about Grey's feelings for her, that's the question i wanted to pose with the open ending: does he love her enough to want to try again, despite being so scarred by life in the past? (though i did give a little hint that pointed to yes 🙂)
@lilywritesstuff sorry for the delay. I just got the noti. Thanks for the response. I watch a lot of Korean dramas where the villians always get away with it, so I'm a little bitter everytime. But you're right. Life isn't always fair. 😭
OMG, havent started the audiobook but its already starting to sound sad😢 Can't wait until they fall hopelessly in LOVE! ❤
Haha hopefully the ending doesn’t disappoint ❤️
@@lilywritesstuff NEVER! Even if it ends sad, it's the good kind of sad!
You’re too kind ❤️❤️
Beautiful book, TY. I'm visually impaired, really hurts to read unless 28pt or greater. So audiobooks like yours is a blessing. Again, TY
You’re very welcome!! ❤️ glad you enjoyed !!
Guys I want a castle ! 😂
Hahahaha
Great story!
Thank you!!❤️❤️
Ok now what’s the secret? 😮
Your stories are getting better every time 😅
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My goodness I'm sitting here trying to listen to the whole beginning part I'm getting so angry I would have walked out I would have never married some a******and it bothers me that she's bowing down to their demands. Me personally, I would have said f you and left and let them figure it out. The story is making me so angry in the very beginning😅 thank God I read some of these comments in here so I went back to the story to listen to it I'm so happy she ran away from that di you know what
Haha trust the process ! 😊 Glad you ended up coming back to it and liking it! ❤️
I came to the comments just to make sure he wasn't the male leads so far I'm hearing good things!!
@@9cathouse oh definitely not! do people actually write male leads that are so horrible ? 😮
@@lilywritesstuffdepends have you read the first book in the consequence series lol
@@kimberlydavis6838 haha nope ! Is it good?
Interesting to come across the magician Adrian again 🤩 i am enjoying this story. Very intriguing 📚📚😎
Thank you!! ❤️
Same I want to know more about the magician!!
Loved it ❤
@@TeaganKisa thank you ❤️❤️
Beautiful love story!! ❤ thank you!
Thank you glad you enjoyed ! ❤️
This story is so different! Loved it! Is there others that further the story
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed ! Yes there are others from this same series though they star other characters (only the magician and Iris are recurring). Here are a couple if you’d like to try them:
ua-cam.com/video/K3IGx9TW1gw/v-deo.htmlsi=dEOSKUuQkQEbrGiB
ua-cam.com/video/5XzmzDHZxMk/v-deo.htmlsi=afJnKVULds3RPRDj
❤ beautiful story
Thank you so much ❤️
Thank you.
Thank you for listening ! ❤️❤️
Love this series 😍
Glad to hear it thank you ❤️❤️
Now that's what I call romantic! ❤❤***swoon*** ❤❤❤
Thank you so much! ❤️❤️
I just lessoned to Rejected by my mate before this one. I know it's probably out of order but it was nice to hear about Iris and Adrian again. I can guess why Iris wasn't effected and hope to hear more about those two. Thanks for sharing
Thank you so much!! And don’t worry about the order all the stories from the ‘magician assistant series’ can be listened to as standalone even though there are recurring characters (Adrian and iris)! I’ll conclude it with their own story (one day!) 🤗
@@lilywritesstuffgood luck if you start with her dad alive making his wish. You'll have to find a way to put all these stories in.... won't you?
@@kimberlydavis6838 yes!! Haha but I have a plan already… somewhat 😛
Thoroughly enjoyed the story!
Yay!! Glad you enjoyed !! ❤️
Thank you I love this story.
I’m glad!! thank you for watching ❤️
Love this ending could have been A better closure and I would have loved for them to end up together.But other than that the story was amazing
Thank you glad you enjoyed! ❤️❤️
I was totally into the story and really enjoying it until the end…
You can’t just end a story in the middle of the next phase of the story! I hate not knowing what happens to Grey and Daphne, as well as Aiden and Iris! Come on finish the whole story don’t just leave us hanging!
@@tanniswalker510 it is finished ! 😊It’s an open ending but it’s the ending and I’m not planning to write more about grey or Daphne ! Iris and Adrian are recurring characters which appear in all stories from this series!
@@lilywritesstuff well I have to admit that’s a bit disappointing. But is there one of your stories that pick up iris and Adrian story and tells what happens with them? You also said that they are in all of the stories I’m not sure what that means, so are you saying that this is a series and if so, which is the first in the series, and then the order of the rest of the series?
@@tanniswalker510 Sorry about that! I know many people don't love open endings, so I did hint in the story that they do make it out (iris saying daphne would tell her the fulls story later) if that helps :) ! About Adrian and Iris, they appear in what I call my 'Magician Assistant' series, basically in all these videos here:
ua-cam.com/video/5XzmzDHZxMk/v-deo.html
ua-cam.com/video/K3IGx9TW1gw/v-deo.html
ua-cam.com/video/x5JsNrfG2fs/v-deo.html
You don't need to watch them in any particular order. They just appear in them, they're. not the main character, exactly like in this one you just watched. I plan to write a full story about them in the future though, but it will conclude this series so not for a little while still. :)
Very unusual story
oh so good :)
Did they make it out? Do they meet Adrian and Iris at the shop? I really enjoy these stories, but the cliffhangers are killing me. I want to know what happens next.
Haha sorry if you were frustrated! I tried to do an open ending more than a cliffhanger ending, but there is a hint in the story that they did in fact made it out (Iris says Daphne told her her story later)! So 'off camera' happy ending! 😅
It would be good if we know in witch order are this books? I'm trying to follow the order, but it doesn't say in the books title.. It doesn't seems that they are standalone because of magician...
they are standalone, the magician is a recurring character but you don’t have to watch in any particular order to follow along.
This is the order I wrote them in though if that helps :
Rejected mate is claimed by the alpha’s brother
The alpha’s forbidden mate
The alpha’s rejected mate
Betrayed by the alpha
Is this it the hole story or is there more parts to this ???? ❤
This story is concluded but it’s part of a series with recurring characters (the magician and iris)! 😊
@@lilywritesstuff awesome Ty 🫵🏾 🥇💯📢
Has the story ended ?If not what's next book...
Yes this story is over! It is part of a series of standalone stories with recurring characters though (the magician and iris!)
How does this end?
Like it did!
@@lilywritesstuff What do you mean? We dont know what Happens to them. Did they get out of the Castle? End up together?
@@danielafernandes417 aaaa I thought you were asking if this was abriged! So
I tried to do an open ending more than a cliffhanger ending, but there is a hint in the story that they did in fact made it out (Iris says Daphne told her her story later which implies they did)
Wait wait wait.... how was iris able to do what others couldn't?
Spoiler..... do not go any further down this comment!!
Is it bc she loves Adrian?
Hahaha first of all LOVe that you thought of including a spoiler warning, thank you so much!! And second of all: YES!
is there a follow on to this one please loving your stories
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed!! ❤️ There are others from the same series with recurring character (the magician and iris) but Daphne and grey’s story is over though!
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Good book, however a little to innocent for me🤭
i didnt understand the ending, what happed to Daphne and Grey? did they die in the castle or what?
It’s meant to be sort of open-ended but I did ‘hide’ a hint that they did get out in the story 🙂
Is there another book in this ?
No this one is finished. There will be more episodes of the same series though (with the magician/iris) but grey and Daphne’s story is done.
The end doesn't make sense they could have just called grey without having too grant the wish
Man does not own a phone, he's been living in isolation since way before they were ever created remember? At one point, Daphne explains some of the outside world's technological advancement to him. Also, even if he did have one and knew how to work it, he probably wouldn't pick up (he purposely didn't retrieve Daphne. He doesn't want her back there wasting her life away with him). And finally even if he did have a phone and did pick up, he probably wouldn't leave the castle (it's falling apart around him and he stays right there for a reason). At least not without Daphne physically present to drag him out. Hope that makes more sense :)
Is there a part 2
No, this is a standalone story! Though it’s part of series with recurring characters (the magician and Iris).
I like this voice..
Good to know because I’ve head complaints and I’m thinking of changing it! We’ll see !
Why can't there be videos 😭😭😭😭
You mean like an actual video with paid actors and stuff ? friend I’m a struggling writer who can barely afford rent 🤣! No budget!! 🥲
Did they escaped? Is there a sequel to this story
The answer is ´hidden’ within the story! 😉
@@lilywritesstuff❤
Iris says when she takes over the story that she heard everything from Daphne later on…. So yes I’m holding on to that
Yaaaay you caught it!!! Exactly! 🥰😊
Let me do my summary version of the ending. Grey and Dafne do end up getting out of the castle but Grey has lots of believing in her love problems. It is also the story of the young man in the mirror that was Grey before becoming a vampire he did was killed by his beautiful brother and his finance the store he told was true but he told Dafne it wasn't so she'll eat. Iris is a descendent of the god Isis that makes her immune to Gray, she's secretly in love with Adrian so that's the second reason why she didn't become infatuated Gray and Dafne decide to stay in the pack and they face the garage of Jedi that give birth to a baby girl and Hunter becomes the crazy alpha and Jedi husband. Finally Grey learns that after drinking Dafne blood he becomes half vampire half shifter also he learns Dafne's mind and sentiments since they become automatic mates. In the end Dafne becomes pregnant and they live happily ever after ❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉😁😁😁
It really drags out to long.
So….what happened to them? Did they get out in time? Also, she flew there, right? Isn’t she supposed to be naked when she gets inside the crumbling castle? And why is Iris not affected?
Hi! So to answer your questions:
Iris says that Daphne told her her story later (and notably she knows about the castle part) so this implies or at least I tried to imply that they did get out.
Daphne was indeed naked !
And Adrian explains that Grey’s power doesn’t work if you’re in love with someone already! So it means that Iris is in love essentially. 😉
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