They seem to be becoming good friends. Lola is a genuine human being who is not willing to become between a married couple. This shows her maturity and respect for the feelings of others. ❤❤
Interesting and original take on a hackneyed theme. Loved it. With better editing this can be a great short story. The audio is easier to follow than the script. The narration could be a bit slower.❤
They seem to be becoming good friends. Lola is a genuine human being who is not willing to become between a married couple. This shows her maturity and respect for the feelings of others. ❤❤
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I liked your story it was excellent since it didn’t sound like all the other stories on You Tube. Keep up the good work.
Interesting and original take on a hackneyed theme. Loved it. With better editing this can be a great short story. The audio is easier to follow than the script. The narration could be a bit slower.❤
I listen on 2X speed sounds better,
I ate when you end a story when there’s so much more to the story need to work on that
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