Edit : explanation of this oneshot - ua-cam.com/video/WmwtZAIWpkY/v-deo.html Did you guys able to take one character's side? Honestly I couldn't. Both were right at their own place yet both were wrong. NOTE - DO NOT TAKE DECISIONS IN LIFE LIKE THEY DID ESPECIALLY YN'S LAST ACTION. If you see carefully you would find both neglected each other's mental health . She did it by saying hurtful words to him again and again . And he did it denying her leaving him . Both characters were Grey.
I don't understand, y did she had to commit suicide? Taehyung will suffer so much. I also understand yn's side that living with a Mafia is very hard, but this behavior of hers is ridiculous. The pain of losing someone u love that too this way is very excruciating. He won't be able to live again, he will be just like a living corpse. She literally took his soul away from him, leaving a deep wound and a lots of guilt. I m very disappointed with yns character.
Itss heartbreaking but a beautiful story...... u did a great job by reminding us that sad endings do exist in real lifee..... the beauty of this ff is that its more realistic...❤
First of all yn didn't even love him, cuz when your in love u don't just leave a person when u find out something about them, i get it that tae being a mafia is very dangerous, but if she really loved him she would've convinced him to leave this occupation, instead of just running away saving her own tail. If your truly in love with someone u would do anything and everything instead of RUNNING AND LEAVING your partner alone in the game of life(that's the last thing someone in love thinks to do). Now ik ya'll gonna be like " but tae deceived her and lied to her meh meh meh" but he did that for her own sake, and protection, or well maybe it's just that he knew this bitch very well, and knew what this bitch is going to do. What i don't get it that when u fall in love u accept each and every flaw, she didn't just possibly fall out of love just because of his work right, it could've been sorted out, or they could just figure something out. She didn't even love him and just used the mafia thingy as an excuse. At this point i really wonder why did taehyung keep her, she's nothing but a waste of money resources and OXYGEN. DID SHE REALLY JUST FALL OUT OF LOVE JUST BECAUSE HER HUSBAND WAS MAFIA. ( author Nim, i'm not criticising your story or spreading hate, i liked the story and ending like this are my comfort zone, not even kidding, i always look for ff with sad ending but, just an improvement note u need to really IMPROVE AND WORK on the DEPTH and the CRUST of the story, this is a true master piece i won't lie, but again the DEPTH of the story is what really matters) I'M NOT WRITING WITH THE MEANS TO DEMOTIVATE YOU, I ALWAYS READ YOUR STORIES. If i did i didn't mean to hurt u, this was the ideal story i can look for and the perfect tragic end. LOVE U, IF I HURT U I'M TRULY SORRY
"Till death do us apart" It's painful but this is real... You know whenever if i read Ff about this type of Mafia story it reminds me of Turkish movie 'Water and Fire'
Unnie don't end this story like this yn should also understand Teahyung feelings if she love him truly then why she is thinking about his identity please don't end this story like this
Will you able to live with a criminal . If you are a saver a doctor... Absolutely not . .... She loves him but can't accept him... And he's work is the reason
Well yeah she is a criminal but taehyung said that are they family generations yn need to sacrify everyone need. Yeah its the reality the reality that yn is selfish😊 she only care. know. His own feeling right😡
Damm!! It's f****ng good man 😭😭 I got imotional 😣 but for the first time I'm hating y/n 😔 why she did that to my baby 🐻 he loved her so much 🥺🤧 she could have understand him but..........😓😓
@@scfictions i wont mind since my exams are till may 10 . its just simple obsession series , taehyung ff , taehyung is a mafia boss having a facade of business man and yn is a surgeon , they were in relationship for since college and loved each other a lot . yn thought everything in her life is going too good cause she had a healthy relationship and a well paying job , she just didnt know about taehyung . he married her and toxically killed all the men who tormented her in life and manipulated her into leaving others , he manipulated her against her friend ( who was in a way taking advantage of yn ) . he manipulated her into thinking noone but he will protect her and be her safe place . basically obsession series like this oneshot you wrote but yn just doesnt die remains clueless 😅😅also would u mind making it a little erotic too , please . you dont really write a lot of stuff for that part but little would be fine
@@aeiaemily3162 will try to make it . But won't have erotica 😅. As it's a fanfiction. It should have those boundaries.... But will try to make erotica in wattpad with original characters ✊🏼
Amm it's soooooo good but 1 year ago I also saying and agree this this but now I understand why everyone wants happy ending. Happy together. Thank you bcz happyness is ultimate things. It's ok love it's okay
Bonus pls i want yn survive i dont wanna die my anger why yn just can accep taehyung job its eligal but why she need to leave taehyung in world alone yn is selfish i know she stressed but if i am him i would never do such a things like that she knew taehyung love him alot!...😡
Unnie pls made a bonus part I need a happy ending plsss otherwise I'll cry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭I'm still crying because of this story and you still don't made bonus part 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Author, The thing I don’t like about you is you never complete your story fully. Most of your ff are unfinished.. You leave them in the middle and start writing new story..but then again you leave them unfinished . And truly speakimg It's really very disturbing.. That's why I never read any of your story from the start. I read it when I see it’s actually Completed. Like : Obsession Mute girl Under the influence Your story line is good but I will suggest you please try to complete one story then start another one.
Honestly I can't deny your words, I'm truly sorry but in my defense I will say .... Obsession- I got huge writer's block on that series . I don't want to write just anything for that ... so I'm taking break from that Under the influence - none watched it actually, Mute girl - I don't know
@@scfictions I started my journey with you by reading Mute girl....I actually found you by it. Then suddenly you stopped it midway.. I thought it’s ok it’s not a big deal. Let's wait for the next. Then I started reading your other stories. When you started writing your obsession I also started reading it. Then again you stopped it midway... I was like ''uh ah..So the Author hardly completes his series. Well, let's just see his/her oneshots and the rest can wait.'' I even had a talk with my 2 friends.. They told me the same. But the difference is they stopped seeing your stories. But I sometimes check your channel. 🙃 And about "the influence " as I am a Taehyung ff reader so I didn’t check it. But I think this way you are losing your viewers. By the way, it was totally a friendly talk with you. I hope you won't mind.
This is the story but we know YN still alive in his and physically with him bcz his love power is soooooooooooooooooo so .... Enough to alive her. Suiside is not solution. specially when someone madly love you.
Please bonus part or part 2 it can't end like this,i am really crying seeing this ff and tomorrow is my birthday also so please make my wish come true 🥲🥲🥲🥲
What a bullshit is this... She is too much i mean it's understandable that she can't accept the fact that he is mafia but that doesn't mean his feelings for her is true and did treat her well.. and she was having problem with him being a mafia who did illigal work but what she did kill herself with the baby (and don't tell me that she didn't know that she was pregnant because she knows that's why she said we loved you) such a immature and crazy woman who talks about right wrong and legal illigal and crime but she herself a criminal
Unnie when will you make the next part of obsession mafia series and the second part of evil prince raped you,i am eagerly waiting for your work Pleaseeeeee upload them
I literally have no words right now to praise this beautiful story 💟 You've really made me feel speechless by portraying such a beautiful masterpiece 👏👏❤❤
Btw if she was pregnent then how they can do sex.. in pregnent situation sex is really so dangerous for baby thats mean she was already pregnent before doing sex but how is it possible please explain author ? 🤔🤔 btw your this ff is really so much different I love it ❤️❤️
![You kissed an stranger to save yourself but he turned out your new boss [TAEHYUNG ONESHOT]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/0JnPEfEIG3I/mqdefault.jpg)
Edit : explanation of this oneshot - ua-cam.com/video/WmwtZAIWpkY/v-deo.html
Did you guys able to take one character's side? Honestly I couldn't. Both were right at their own place yet both were wrong.
NOTE - DO NOT TAKE DECISIONS IN LIFE LIKE THEY DID ESPECIALLY YN'S LAST ACTION.
If you see carefully you would find both neglected each other's mental health . She did it by saying hurtful words to him again and again . And he did it denying her leaving him . Both characters were Grey.
Its absolutely perfect..plzz dont make a bonus part....
@@hadimalik2670 no pls
Pls make next part plsssss
That's the reality. Accept it, readers... some stories do have a happy ending, but some don't we should accept no matter what the ending is
I don't understand, y did she had to commit suicide? Taehyung will suffer so much. I also understand yn's side that living with a Mafia is very hard, but this behavior of hers is ridiculous. The pain of losing someone u love that too this way is very excruciating. He won't be able to live again, he will be just like a living corpse. She literally took his soul away from him, leaving a deep wound and a lots of guilt. I m very disappointed with yns character.
Itss heartbreaking but a beautiful story...... u did a great job by reminding us that sad endings do exist in real lifee..... the beauty of this ff is that its more realistic...❤
Definitely, we need a bonus where Y/N survived with the baby but just fake a death to leave Taeyhung 🙏🏽 please
It doesn't need a happy ending... Bcoz it is perfect... Even in real life no one likes to be a partner of criminal... And that's the fact..
Without y/n there is a no story for tae right 😒
First of all yn didn't even love him, cuz when your in love u don't just leave a person when u find out something about them, i get it that tae being a mafia is very dangerous, but if she really loved him she would've convinced him to leave this occupation, instead of just running away saving her own tail. If your truly in love with someone u would do anything and everything instead of RUNNING AND LEAVING your partner alone in the game of life(that's the last thing someone in love thinks to do). Now ik ya'll gonna be like " but tae deceived her and lied to her meh meh meh" but he did that for her own sake, and protection, or well maybe it's just that he knew this bitch very well, and knew what this bitch is going to do. What i don't get it that when u fall in love u accept each and every flaw, she didn't just possibly fall out of love just because of his work right, it could've been sorted out, or they could just figure something out. She didn't even love him and just used the mafia thingy as an excuse. At this point i really wonder why did taehyung keep her, she's nothing but a waste of money resources and OXYGEN. DID SHE REALLY JUST FALL OUT OF LOVE JUST BECAUSE HER HUSBAND WAS MAFIA. ( author Nim, i'm not criticising your story or spreading hate, i liked the story and ending like this are my comfort zone, not even kidding, i always look for ff with sad ending but, just an improvement note u need to really IMPROVE AND WORK on the DEPTH and the CRUST of the story, this is a true master piece i won't lie, but again the DEPTH of the story is what really matters) I'M NOT WRITING WITH THE MEANS TO DEMOTIVATE YOU, I ALWAYS READ YOUR STORIES. If i did i didn't mean to hurt u, this was the ideal story i can look for and the perfect tragic end. LOVE U, IF I HURT U I'M TRULY SORRY
I totally agree with you the story was amazing but what yn did at the last was not a good action
I agrée with you 100%
"Till death do us apart" It's painful but this is real... You know whenever if i read Ff about this type of Mafia story it reminds me of Turkish movie 'Water and Fire'
Unnie don't end this story like this yn should also understand Teahyung feelings if she love him truly then why she is thinking about his identity please don't end this story like this
Will you able to live with a criminal . If you are a saver a doctor... Absolutely not . .... She loves him but can't accept him... And he's work is the reason
Well yeah she is a criminal but taehyung said that are they family generations yn need to sacrify everyone need. Yeah its the reality the reality that yn is selfish😊 she only care. know. His own feeling right😡
I read FF to be happy and escape the reality and here we have this FF .....
Taehyung---- 25:12
Was so heart touching ❤❤
Just speechless... Unique story line... I really loved it
Yn never deserved taehyung.
If YN ever really cherished Taehyung, she would not have run away or committed suicide just to get away from him.
It was actually good because it's very rare to see writers making yn a strong woman...
Yeah a strong woman that suicied
Damm!! It's f****ng good man 😭😭 I got imotional 😣 but for the first time I'm hating y/n 😔 why she did that to my baby 🐻 he loved her so much 🥺🤧 she could have understand him but..........😓😓
It's really crushed 😭 my heart 💔..... can't stop crying.....but appreciate your work... awesome story dear author
i love these toxic mafia stories of yours , please bless us more . would u mind if i request some series with the same genre
Obviously I won't mind . Just I will make them in mid May ☺
@@scfictions i wont mind since my exams are till may 10 . its just simple obsession series , taehyung ff , taehyung is a mafia boss having a facade of business man and yn is a surgeon , they were in relationship for since college and loved each other a lot . yn thought everything in her life is going too good cause she had a healthy relationship and a well paying job , she just didnt know about taehyung . he married her and toxically killed all the men who tormented her in life and manipulated her into leaving others , he manipulated her against her friend ( who was in a way taking advantage of yn ) . he manipulated her into thinking noone but he will protect her and be her safe place . basically obsession series like this oneshot you wrote but yn just doesnt die remains clueless 😅😅also would u mind making it a little erotic too , please . you dont really write a lot of stuff for that part but little would be fine
@@aeiaemily3162 will try to make it . But won't have erotica 😅. As it's a fanfiction. It should have those boundaries....
But will try to make erotica in wattpad with original characters ✊🏼
@@scfictions yessss, then i will read it on both . original character as in taehyung and yn . so youtube one wont have erotica but wattpad will right?
@@aeiaemily3162 yes , try to make erotica on wattpad.
Original character means characters like general fiction [ Asher , Sarah etc ]
Amm it's soooooo good but 1 year ago I also saying and agree this this but now I understand why everyone wants happy ending. Happy together. Thank you bcz happyness is ultimate things. It's ok love it's okay
Plz make a bonus part of this in which yn survives and they lead a happy life🙏🙏 this was so heart touching ff🥺🥺
Bonus pls i want yn survive i dont wanna die my anger why yn just can accep taehyung job its eligal but why she need to leave taehyung in world alone yn is selfish i know she stressed but if i am him i would never do such a things like that she knew taehyung love him alot!...😡
Heart breaking story but heart touching story 💔
Unnie pls made a bonus part I need a happy ending plsss otherwise I'll cry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭I'm still crying because of this story and you still don't made bonus part 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Mas magulo pa 'to kesa sa math ko >
please make a bonus part please it's my humble request
Author, The thing I don’t like about you is you never complete your story fully. Most of your ff are unfinished.. You leave them in the middle and start writing new story..but then again you leave them unfinished . And truly speakimg It's really very disturbing.. That's why I never read any of your story from the start. I read it when I see it’s actually Completed.
Like :
Obsession
Mute girl
Under the influence
Your story line is good but I will suggest you please try to complete one story then start another one.
Honestly I can't deny your words, I'm truly sorry
but in my defense I will say ....
Obsession- I got huge writer's block on that series . I don't want to write just anything for that ... so I'm taking break from that
Under the influence - none watched it actually,
Mute girl - I don't know
@@scfictions I started my journey with you by reading Mute girl....I actually found you by it. Then suddenly you stopped it midway.. I thought it’s ok it’s not a big deal. Let's wait for the next. Then I started reading your other stories. When you started writing your obsession I also started reading it. Then again you stopped it midway... I was like ''uh ah..So the Author hardly completes his series. Well, let's just see his/her oneshots and the rest can wait.'' I even had a talk with my 2 friends.. They told me the same. But the difference is they stopped seeing your stories. But I sometimes check your channel. 🙃
And about "the influence " as I am a Taehyung ff reader so I didn’t check it.
But I think this way you are losing your viewers.
By the way, it was totally a friendly talk with you. I hope you won't mind.
This is the story but we know YN still alive in his and physically with him bcz his love power is soooooooooooooooooo so ....
Enough to alive her.
Suiside is not solution. specially when someone madly love you.
Plz i dony want this ending plz plz. Plz make a happy ending plz
You know dear author i want it to be tae -tae dream so badly please borahae 💜💜 please
plzzzzzz can you do bonus for this oneshot
So what if he was a mafia
U think a normal man can love you like he do ???
Author plz make a bonus part
Want bounus part😢❤❤
Too much drama ..... I'm not saying it in negative way ...but this is too much
Don't judge
This is my opinion
Please bonus part or part 2 it can't end like this,i am really crying seeing this ff and tomorrow is my birthday also so please make my wish come true 🥲🥲🥲🥲
Bonus part plssss🙏🙏
hey can you upload the next part of evil prince jungkook ff
I know it's re-uploaded 😌
What a bullshit is this...
She is too much i mean it's understandable that she can't accept the fact that he is mafia but that doesn't mean his feelings for her is true and did treat her well.. and she was having problem with him being a mafia who did illigal work but what she did kill herself with the baby (and don't tell me that she didn't know that she was pregnant because she knows that's why she said we loved you) such a immature and crazy woman who talks about right wrong and legal illigal and crime but she herself a criminal
Unnie when will you make the next part of obsession mafia series and the second part of evil prince raped you,i am eagerly waiting for your work
Pleaseeeeee upload them
In mid May ✊🏼
@@scfictions okay 👌
Jaankmeeyoupis🐻🐻👀😳
U deserve more popularity dear❤😊
litrealy it is a great story 👏
bonusss.....please
I Don't like it.just bcz of his work,how could she kill her own bby
Bonus part please 💜💜💜💜💜💜
Uniee plz make happy ending 😢 plz
She never loved him......the story was messy 🙂
I literally have no words right now to praise this beautiful story 💟
You've really made me feel speechless by portraying such a beautiful masterpiece 👏👏❤❤
Hey c'mon dude don't make this type of ff,you know at night I will get dreams of this ff with my c****😂😂😂😂😨
Btw if she was pregnent then how they can do sex.. in pregnent situation sex is really so dangerous for baby thats mean she was already pregnent before doing sex but how is it possible please explain author ? 🤔🤔 btw your this ff is really so much different I love it ❤️❤️
No it's not like that Sex is not dangerous for babies it depends on pregnant woman condition you can do Sex while pregnancy
Just why 😢
Next partttttttttt
Yn is too cruel for tae. Her suicide is worse than death for him .