Beautiful story. Two things where I felt absent from that could have refined the story are: 1. What exactly about the man's hand on Eloise's lower back that caused such discomfort? Did someone do something to her in the past? 2. Are both ladies orphans with zero knowledge of any biological family members? None was mentioned for either of them. I comprehend that friends are the family we choose, however, we are progenitated from 2 different individuals of male and female which have their own histories... A few minutes could have been spent expanding on these areas for both ladies to give a more complete background on their coming out stories when these areas were brought up. Other than the two areas above, I enjoyed the simplicity and beauty of these two women falling in love with each other, especially that Eloise felt no indicated shyness in consummation of her first time with a woman as implicated by the story. Thanks for sharing!
Fate brings two people together that has a very special love connection that will last forever 🌹🫶❤️😘
Beautiful story. Two things where I felt absent from that could have refined the story are:
1. What exactly about the man's hand on Eloise's lower back that caused such discomfort? Did someone do something to her in the past?
2. Are both ladies orphans with zero knowledge of any biological family members? None was mentioned for either of them. I comprehend that friends are the family we choose, however, we are progenitated from 2 different individuals of male and female which have their own histories... A few minutes could have been spent expanding on these areas for both ladies to give a more complete background on their coming out stories when these areas were brought up.
Other than the two areas above, I enjoyed the simplicity and beauty of these two women falling in love with each other, especially that Eloise felt no indicated shyness in consummation of her first time with a woman as implicated by the story.
Thanks for sharing!
i liked the fact there wasnt a lot of complications 😊