I like the concept of this video, but I think you need to re-work the production. The artwork should be stationary so the viewer isn't distracted by other elements. I would suggest a time-lapse approach instead of fast playback (which is what it appears to be) of video. I would be really cool for it to just evolve without the hand even being visible. The audio is good but I feel like the highs are getting clipped. The song has a very minimalist, Phillip Glass, feel to it and I like that very much.
I like the concept of this video, but I think you need to re-work the production. The artwork should be stationary so the viewer isn't distracted by other elements. I would suggest a time-lapse approach instead of fast playback (which is what it appears to be) of video. I would be really cool for it to just evolve without the hand even being visible. The audio is good but I feel like the highs are getting clipped. The song has a very minimalist, Phillip Glass, feel to it and I like that very much.
+Stephan Cleaves thank you for the positive & constructive feedback!