Wow, this story gives me chills! It's amazing how sometimes the most unexpected people can change our lives in ways we never imagined. The connection between the cleaning lady and the millionaire is a beautiful reminder that kindness and honesty can truly turn the tide. 💖 I can't help but wonder what happened next! This video made my day - thank you for sharing such an inspiring tale! 🚗✨
It’s not at all believable. James just happened to know Emily’s father? A cleaning lady will keep her job by not speaking up. An employer won’t give away an apartment. Rich people are notoriously tight with their money, they are very, very seldom generous. A rich wife has her lawyer doing any dirty work, she won’t get her hands dirty by being involved with a cleaning lady.
I just listened to a wonderful story, written well, a good voice telling us, not completely new but a lot was, a rare gem tough to find online. Six minutes into this one, it’s far more than just an ok and enjoyable. From comments here, you all have given me high hopes. Thank you commenters. Finished. So, it’s tough to give this story an accurate grade. It’s definitely in the top 3. I would not be surprised if I have read or heard 2000 stories, maybe twice or 3 times that many? Whatever, since 1989, Ive read or heard, an outrageous number since I started reading online stories. That computer did not have windows, Im not sure windows was out in the public domain. That was about another year? For me it was anyway. To find stories, I kept a list of websites. So Ive been reading online stories for about 32 years. This story, still top 3. So, yeah, thank you! If this had been sci-fi, I’d hope for a HUGO or Nebula or others awards in that genre.
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Well, that is exactly what I was thinking, it says millionaire and then billionaire but either way, shouldn’t he have private security/ body guards especially since he found out Amanda was trying to kill him? He should have gone with private security/body guards to get the files.
Quick question... how can Emily be nervous about a shadow crossing her window? She is on the FIFTEENTH FLOOR... and a helicopter would be heard long before the shadow would be seen... a drone? Hm.🤔 Sorry, but this thought interrupted my viewing...
I'm a household assistant I have a home and allowance by God not something I aspired to in fact complete opposite. 🎉I've cared for homes since childhood ...homes loved made beautiful homey loved so I was gifted with one needing care. ❤️
As i was 10 years old i was the boy bring ou wares to customers from the grocery store, and the owner tought meto deal with customers behind the desk he tought me to measure by weight grounded coffee, and tought me finally allways give some extra ( significant extra) the 10 year old boy relized quicker it would give red figures in the final result, oh no the wise old “kaufman said my customerspread the word that in my shop. They are treated fair and i do not ned to ad vertise in thr newspapers (motto allways condider to give significantly more than expected!
Why the heck would they go to the estate on their own and without including the detective. The police or FBI could get a warrant and go in legally. Dumbed it down for the drama.
Emily’s warning wasn’t a simple thing. It sounds as if it was a Life saving event. She should put that type of weight on her action. That might help put it in perspective for her.
This must be a really old story! Because nobody has used a cell phone at all! The millionaire could've hired men to go and retrieve the information and well everything else is just...
I'm sorry but Amanda would not have allowed them to leave that ABANDONED, SECLUDED mansion alive. All that conversation would not have happened. And Ryan would have disappeared as well for betraying her. James, being a very wealthy man, would have had the FBI involved immediately, not local NYPD alone if at all and there is no way he, himself, would have gone to get those files. I'm sorry but this story was not believable.
It's fiction and need more work... I thought in one moment... When they visited low class bar with guards, police, walking down the night streets alone... Then going to mansion without escort... And in many incidents without calling police.... There are alot of common sense omission which takes away alot... How Emily turned out to be the daughter of another person involved with Amanda's dirty....that was also off... Amanda's call to Emily was un justified.... So many things...didn't go well....
She did the right thing and good always prevails over evil , and she finally had peace and this bridge harmony in God's eyes ,so glad that Ryan decided to help and do the right thing as well even though he didn't get off totally but received a lesser sentence. he was a man about it and done his fine so when he gets out he can to live a guilt free life,THANK GOD FOR TRUTHFUL PEOPLE 🙏. sentence
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Wow, this story gives me chills! It's amazing how sometimes the most unexpected people can change our lives in ways we never imagined. The connection between the cleaning lady and the millionaire is a beautiful reminder that kindness and honesty can truly turn the tide. 💖 I can't help but wonder what happened next! This video made my day - thank you for sharing such an inspiring tale! 🚗✨
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The rich and powerful aren't untouchable when people like Emily stand up for what's right. ❤
Finally a believable and enjoyable story. 👍
It’s not at all believable. James just happened to know Emily’s father? A cleaning lady will keep her job by not speaking up. An employer won’t give away an apartment. Rich people are notoriously tight with their money, they are very, very seldom generous. A rich wife has her lawyer doing any dirty work, she won’t get her hands dirty by being involved with a cleaning lady.
A tremendous story, a great one.
The stories are good. The narration more so, BUT, the stories are toooo long winded
You're quite right I'm in total agreement. What would've been done in a few seconds is dragged into a long story.
they want viewers to be able to watch the video for as long as possible
THANK GOD HE LISTEN TO HER. AND GOD IS WATCHING HER ALSO.😮❤🎉
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I just listened to a wonderful story, written well, a good voice telling us, not completely new but a lot was, a rare gem tough to find online. Six minutes into this one, it’s far more than just an ok and enjoyable. From comments here, you all have given me high hopes. Thank you commenters.
Finished. So, it’s tough to give this story an accurate grade. It’s definitely in the top 3. I would not be surprised if I have read or heard 2000 stories, maybe twice or 3 times that many? Whatever, since 1989, Ive read or heard, an outrageous number since I started reading online stories. That computer did not have windows, Im not sure windows was out in the public domain. That was about another year? For me it was anyway. To find stories, I kept a list of websites. So Ive been reading online stories for about 32 years. This story, still top 3.
So, yeah, thank you! If this had been sci-fi, I’d hope for a HUGO or Nebula or others awards in that genre.
Good story 😊
Nice story - thank you.
Amazing story
Thank you for ur beautiful narrated story.
Thank you ! For such a great story
Love the narrator.. so well spoken. Loved the story. ❤
It’s AI…hello..?
A lovely story ❤so well told
It's a very good story - I enjoyed it.
Beautiful story, at least the victors did not become lovers. ❤
Thanks for this beautiful story of courage in the face of eminent danger and fear. Love the positive outcome ❤
The positive outcome is there because it’s a fictional piece.
ooh woow what a courageous story..Emily is a hero
Good story
Thanks for the story!
Beautiful story I love it❤
A very nice story ❤
I enjoyed the reader on this story, it didn’t sound mechanical with errors.
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Woooh, what a lovely story thanks to Emily for her powerful courage, and she takes after her dad cleaver girl indeed
Emily truly showed remarkable strength and courage in this story; it's so inspiring how she takes after her father. What part of her journey resonated with you the most?
Your story is wonderful.I really love this story
Awesome story 🎉🎉
Great story...i love it
Power of truth overcome everything
Good story!❤❤
(05:14) -The way Emily courageously approaches James, knowing he might not believe her, is powerful. She’s risking everything to protect a stranger.
Enjoyable,interesting story. Thank you!
Excellent story I don’t remember but I have seen old move just like this story. Very nice and touching.
Thank you for the good and useful story,I learn something from it,looking forward for your story.GBY always.
Greate story ❤❤
Good story, good narrator, some inconsistencies, overall enjoyed it.
Watching from Alexandria, Eastern Cape, South Africa.
The story is AWESOME 😎! AND the narrator is WONDERFUL AND the narrator did a GREAT job ! he Thank you for sharing! Looking forward to your next post 😊
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Billionaire who cauld not afford to hire a private detective to get the files.
This is not real, where is the detective??
Well, that is exactly what I was thinking, it says millionaire and then billionaire but either way, shouldn’t he have private security/ body guards especially since he found out Amanda was trying to kill him? He should have gone with private security/body guards to get the files.
🥰(04:55)Great story
Good but too many inconsistencies. I won’t bother naming them all. Just ask yourself, how did Amanda’s men know to go to that warehouse?
Intresting but slightly unrealistic fiction. still enjoyable
Beautiful stroy
It sounds like when James came to visit Amanda in the new place, she didn't let James know that his wife had called to threaten her.
How did Amanda know Emily was the one who warned james
I have the same question.
Thank you for your story telling it was very enjoyable I look forward too many more I just subscribed to your channel
"Mix of fear and confusion" mix of relief and dread,
Very, very, very long story. It’s good though, interesting
Who told Amanda that it was Emily who warned James Wilson about his trip!
What a story !Emily sure had tenacity Beautiful ending Very Courageous
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Very touching,well written and very. Believable and, deep. .
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Overall a good story even with some of the inconsistencies.
Quick question... how can Emily be nervous about a shadow crossing her window? She is on the FIFTEENTH FLOOR... and a helicopter would be heard long before the shadow would be seen... a drone? Hm.🤔
Sorry, but this thought interrupted my viewing...
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Interesting story.
Beautiful story. The courage of Emily is amazing.
An interesting story😢
Stories about millionaires always have some profound lessons about life 👍👍👍
lol Amanda also played Ava with the cosmetic company & Emma her house maid
Who knew keeping a room tidy could lead to a luxury car and a new apartment?
Lots of scenes were missing anyway. Some contradictions here and there... But to those who don't mind the loss details... The plot is good!
I'm a household assistant I have a home and allowance by God not something I aspired to in fact complete opposite. 🎉I've cared for homes since childhood ...homes loved made beautiful homey loved so I was gifted with one needing care. ❤️
So stupid, she keeps asking her self why would he do this, HELLOOOOOO you saved his life
Never mentioning her mother. Fiction should balance a little.
Wonderful story
Great story
one of the best i have watched for awhile, just reciently the stories have been rubbish
Great story watching from Brighton in the uk
As i was 10 years old i was the boy bring ou wares to customers from the grocery store, and the owner tought meto deal with customers behind the desk he tought me to measure by weight grounded coffee, and tought me finally allways give some extra ( significant extra) the 10 year old boy relized quicker it would give red figures in the final result, oh no the wise old “kaufman said my customerspread the word that in my shop. They are treated fair and i do not ned to ad vertise in thr newspapers (motto allways condider to give significantly more than expected!
Wow nice story
What a beautiful story & a nice ending😅😊🎉😂❤
AMANDA GETS THE LIFE SHE DESERVES
Why the heck would they go to the estate on their own and without including the detective. The police or FBI could get a warrant and go in legally. Dumbed it down for the drama.
Stupid story.
My thoughts
I actually was thinking Martinez was in it with Amanda
03:47 a pretty good audio clip that I enjoyed the most, nice
good story
Emily’s warning wasn’t a simple thing. It sounds as if it was a Life saving event. She should put that type of weight on her action. That might help put it in perspective for her.
Awesome ❤
Why not hire private detective
This must be a really old story! Because nobody has used a cell phone at all! The millionaire could've hired men to go and retrieve the information and well everything else is just...
So stupid, she keeps asking her self why would he do this, HELLOOOOOO you saved his life........
Exciting
I'm sorry but Amanda would not have allowed them to leave that ABANDONED, SECLUDED mansion alive. All that conversation would not have happened. And Ryan would have disappeared as well for betraying her. James, being a very wealthy man, would have had the FBI involved immediately, not local NYPD alone if at all and there is no way he, himself, would have gone to get those files. I'm sorry but this story was not believable.
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A nice agathea Christy murder novel an light story keeps ones attenfion
It's fiction and need more work...
I thought in one moment...
When they visited low class bar with guards, police, walking down the night streets alone...
Then going to mansion without escort...
And in many incidents without calling police....
There are alot of common sense omission which takes away alot...
How Emily turned out to be the daughter of another person involved with Amanda's dirty....that was also off...
Amanda's call to Emily was un justified....
So many things...didn't go well....
💙🇺🇲 Good story buttttttt...it would have been a cool ending if Emily & James had hooked up!!!😅💕💕💕
Nuts! James and Emily’s father were childhood friends so James is at least 20 years older than Emily.
Not everything is about sex!
❤ it.nice story.
Sometimes learning to let go and move forward is the best thing to do, thank for sharing ❤❤
She did the right thing and good always prevails over evil , and she finally had peace and this bridge harmony in God's eyes ,so glad that Ryan decided to help and do the right thing as well even though he didn't get off totally but received a lesser sentence. he was a man about it and done his fine so when he gets out he can to live a guilt free life,THANK GOD FOR TRUTHFUL PEOPLE 🙏. sentence
❤ the story thank you
4th. Emily as I remembered😂
The story shows us that if we keep trying and putting our heart into everything we do, eventually we will be rewarded appropriately.
The story was ok until the stupid envelope with the keys to a luxury apartment.
Trying to make it like a James Bond movie but very amateur...nice try though
Good story! Love it!
How did James and Amanda get together
For sure this world,u need to trust urself,and believe in ur self.
I wish people would STOP giving away the endings. Some of us would like to find out for ourselves !
East solution, stop reading the comments before you listen to the story I learned that a long time ago😂😂😂😂😂
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As long as her name and contact # is in the police system....SHE too, is in danger
Thanks for the wonderful story
This is like Haloween movie
Good narrator but story was ridiculous!
How did James know that Amanda had threatened her just before he came to her apartment....??????
My question exactly!😅😅😅
Emily told him about it as he was warning her about Amanda about other things. Relisten to that part of the story.
Better to send this story writer a book containing other names.
That's an incredibly detailed and thrilling story. It carries the reader through a maze of tension, betrayal, and justice with strong emotional hooks. If you would like me to revise, add drama, or condense parts of this narrative, please let me know which aspects to refine. This story has the potential to engage and captivate an audience thoroughly.
They needed to contact Detective Martinez to get the records, or tp steal them.
Why doesn't she immediately call the police as she gets Amanda's call?
Fear. She didn’t think she would be believed.
Thought so too
Because they had the place bugged and she knew it. Didn't you catch that part?
James knew about the call from Amanda without being told.
Some people are born wicked and dangerous and they can do anything for money.
Sounds too familiar as if from someone else’s prior work? A good story, however.
The commercials are too many!