OMFG you horrible person! THIS KIND OF CLIFFHANGER SHOULD BE MADE ILLEGAL! I'm serious you're hurting me with the suspense... on the other hand I loved it so keep it up! :)
SHITSHITSHIT!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MR STYLES CAN NOT KNOW ABOUT HARRY AND LOU! ! ! ! NOOOOO! YOU NEED TO UPDATE FAST, DON'T LEAVE US HANGING!!! PLEASE MAKE MR STYLES GO AWAY OR SOMETHING! O^O
Zayn and Louis never seem to have money and never go shopping but always have a box of cereal.
When they say "i love you" i just cry. I really hope Mr. Styles goes away or something
AHHH Harry's dad knows!!! Great chapter!! I love this story!!
Harry's dad is going to be pissed.
omg no mr styles is going to ruin everything... :(((
but amazing work :)
This is like my 5th time reading this series. And tbh now every single song about young love makes me think that it's made for this series like no lie
Thank God, I thought that they were gonna kiss and Mr Styles was gonna find out... Phew!
ohh shit mr styles's gonna fuck louis up, didn't expect that at all
*super dramatic gasp* Oh my god!! AAAHH!! But...but...but...ahhh!!
no no no no no noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
OMG Mr. Styles will kill harry or something
PART TWO, WHEN IS IT GOING TO BE UPLOADED???!?!?!?!?! Please don't make us all wait!!!
(sees last part about Mr. Styles.)
Me: O_O .....
OOOHHH SHIIITTTTT O_O O_O O_O
NOOOO
You're an amazing writer! Keep up the good work!. Shit, I want more
I love this, i hope Louis takes harry to the prom, it would be so cute 3
Omg you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Have to update soon with a end like this I could die if you don't update soon!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE
:-0 its about to go down in episode 21 part 2
IM SCREAMING
Always an excellent job!! Good work!
saw comments 1st then was shivering cause what is gonna happen and now u have 2 make the next real fast please xx
I CAN SEE THAT MY REACTION WAS LIKE PRETTY MUCH EVERYONE: SSSHHHIIITTT!!!
HOLY CRAP
OMFG you horrible person! THIS KIND OF CLIFFHANGER SHOULD BE MADE ILLEGAL! I'm serious you're hurting me with the suspense... on the other hand I loved it so keep it up! :)
sHIT JUST GOT REAL KINDA FREAKING OUT HERE
Holy shit I need an updatessssjsjs
ahhhhhhhhhh not mr stylesssssssssss, shiiiiiiiit
you know we so have a love hate relationship.
SHIYUT!!! 😤😤THEY GOT FUCKING CAUGHT. 😈😈😈
OMG MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!
I,NEEED MOOIRRREEEE
I NEED MOOOORRREE!!!!
Omfg whyyy whhy are you doing this to me I can't function right now c xjsjdnJWJDHj
why does the dad always have to ruin the relationtips
Noooooooooo mr styles noooo!
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! Love this
I CANT
OH MY GOD! NOW WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAT D:
Did they get caught
WOAH WOAH WPAH HOLD DA PHONE
Sombody kill Mr.Styles please.. And that scene in the beginning, i'm in love *O*
SHIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTT
*falls to the ground and dies*
YA
SHITSHITSHIT!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MR STYLES CAN NOT KNOW ABOUT HARRY AND LOU! ! ! ! NOOOOO! YOU NEED TO UPDATE FAST, DON'T LEAVE US HANGING!!! PLEASE MAKE MR STYLES GO AWAY OR SOMETHING! O^O
Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope Nope
*takes away Harry and Louie*
YOU CAN HAVE THEM BACK WHEN YOU LEARN TO PLAY NICE ;^;
WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK JUST HAPPENED NOOOOOO
OH MY FUCKING GODDDDDDDDDDDD I KNEW IT BUT THEN I DOUBTED MYSELF AND THEN IT SHOWED UP AT THE VERY FUCKING END
FUCK OH MY GOD
NO! Fucking Mr. Styles! WHY?
Ahhhhhhh omfg!!
OMG
FUCKING DRAMA!! AAAHH!!!
2 more
Omg!!!!!!! Shiz they are so screwed. I hate mr styles ugh!!!!!
OH MY GOD IM GONNA PEE MYSELF
SHIT.SHIT.SHT. WHY.
UPLOAD FASTER PLZ
IENQDKW
OMG