Very nice premise to this story. Props to the author for the original thought. I do wish the scenes were longer and that he didn’t bounce around as much. It gets distracting and takes away from key moments. I get that it is his writing style, but as I said, it is distracting.
Very nice premise to this story. Props to the author for the original thought. I do wish the scenes were longer and that he didn’t bounce around as much. It gets distracting and takes away from key moments. I get that it is his writing style, but as I said, it is distracting.
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