Kahani ka shirshak swamini Puri Puri tarah Sarthak hai aur kahani Ko Puri tarah rekhankit karta hai pahle rampyari parivar aur kutumb ki swamini thi per per bad mein Apne jivan ki swamini banti hai yahi kahani ka yatharth aur kahanikar ka Lakshya bhi hai sat sat Naman Munshi Premchand
अनुपम भावपूर्ण लेखन है 👌👌
Adbhuta 😊
Kahani ka shirshak swamini Puri Puri tarah Sarthak hai aur kahani Ko Puri tarah rekhankit karta hai pahle rampyari parivar aur kutumb ki swamini thi per per bad mein Apne jivan ki swamini banti hai yahi kahani ka yatharth aur kahanikar ka Lakshya bhi hai sat sat Naman Munshi Premchand
Bahut khub
Mahan lekhak shree Prem chandra ji ko bhavpoorn shradhanjali.
यथार्थ और भावनाओं का मिश्रण❤❤
बहुत सुंदर । मैंने भी हिंदी साहित्य की सौ से ज्यादा कहानी रेडी किया है। प्रेमचंद की बारह कहानी चैनल पर हैं 🙏😊
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Bahoot sundar
बहूत अच्छा लेखन। अंतमें बात आधी छोडना बहूत भा गया।
Lekin mujhe n bhaya.. uske age v hona chahiye tha
बहुत सुन्दर🙏💕🙏💕
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Second part😊❤
Complete hai sir
Fine story
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Bahot hi acchi kahani
Bad me dono ne jarur sadi kr li hogi ..
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aty sunderkahani
Kahani adha chhod diye..🥺 pet me dard kr raha hai.. age kya hua.... Shabd nhi hai batane k liye... Kahani kitna achha hai
kahani puri hai
❤na mai kishi ka mera na koyi...... Samghona koyi.....❤
Ye mahan lekhak end kyu nahi karte hamesa adhura hi chhod dete h sochne ke liye
Aise dayaneeya haal me thi phir bhi log unse jalte the. Haye re kathor ta
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Bhut acha ❤❤pr second part kha h???
Complete story yahi hai sir
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Or next part kaha h
Ye abhi to puri hui nhi
complete ho gaya sir
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Second part
Jay shree ram ❤ 1 september 2024 4:21 p dek tha hu 😅
Ji
Sabse bekar kahani
Munshi Premchand ki kahaniyon Ke Samne to Garud Puran bhi fail hai use Samay ki marmikta ko jo spasht Darshan dikhaya hai😢😢😢😢