Ma'am the plan for story writing was explained very well and clearly understood by me. A fabulous job ma'am. Requesting you to please make a video on how to write a formal invitation & poster making. Thank you for all your support & guidance. Stay home & Stay Safe.
Ma'am, in class 10th we get a question on story writing which has a starting line and they ask us to write furter. Ma'am, I just wanted to know that if it has a very simple start or if it hasnt given us any point from which we can start on thinking , then how we would be able make the story interesting?
The story starter allows you to take the story in any direction as long as the starting line fits. So you can write an adventure story and you need to show what circumstances caused that starting line to happen. It's like writing the story in flashback. Just make sure the elements of the story are kept in mind and you adhere to the word limit. Use good vocabulary. Good luck.
I am preparing for my story writing competition currently and this video will really gonna to help me a lot to bag the success. After watching your educational videos, (very specially this one), a type of critical attitude towards story writing is created in me. So, thanks a lot ma'am.
That is easy. Take any panchatantra tale and you will get a moral. Moral and conclusion are not the same. Every story has a conclusion, every story need not have a moral.
So I have a copy like that book so it’s not that book which you told us to get if u want. The book which I have got it’s name is banish boring words. The book which u told us to get and which book I have got are mostly the same
Hello ma'am! 8th grader here. I've been watching your videos for a long time now and thanks to them, I got 38 out of 40 in my previous exam! Can you please suggest some good vocabulary for horror stories? Thanks again!
Congratulations. I am deeply delighted. Keep it up. Do get my book Writing with Ease from Amazon. It has the vocabulary for your target genre (and heaps more) Good luck.
Wholeheartedly thanks ma'am, I heard first time such type of instructions which were being given by you, may almighty give more power in your respected pen
Mam actually my grammar is so so week........ Actually muje 80 marks exam m aata toh sb h but mai ussai likh ya express nhi kar pati hu..... Plz plz help meeee🙏🙏🙏🙏
Thank you so much ma'am, I followed your tips and tricks and won 1st prize in short story contest ( in intercollegiate)today... Last time I got third prize by following your advice, this time i wrote a crime mystery story... I'm very grateful to you, from the depth of my heart.. And those who are reading my comment all the best to you too, you are going to rock
Mam, for my exam i was given a starting line and then asked to complete the story. How can i write a story if i am given "When sam looked at the mirror, he realised that it was not him". as the starting line? Pls help maam....how do we write a reasonable story?
sounds like a ghost story to me. Or science fiction where someone has altered his appearance. So you could use an accident, being unconscious, no memory. How he gets back his identity.
Hello mam, I'm in 8the Standard and I am participating in Story writing Competition from my School where on the spot we will get topic or theme and we have to create a story there only .I was Searching for a good video which can give me tips, ideas and way to present a story in a creative manner so that learning person or reader will also be excited and intrested during the story time I really appreciate your work Mam and Thank you So much 😊 i am surely going to keep this tips in my mind. Problem then setting making characters from early so that I can fix them in my story , Plot and solution .
I liked your videos very much this helped me to get full marks in story but could you please make the videos of article writing and letter to editor and like if you believe that mam is the best teacher★♥♥
Ma'am I am 9th grade.. And Mam I have also followed all the rules of story writing but still got 4out of 10..please help me..... My final exam are approaching....
Wonderful video mam! Can you please make a video on how to write poems and pictures compositions. I would be a great help. Love and support from india 😊
Mam thank you mam u said very beautifulllly mam My English teacher said to write a neat story, ur explanation had helped me a lot ,once again thank you mam for explaining.
Tomorrow is my English exam and I am watching this video mam . I will you tomorrow is this helpful or not . In my class my teacher you have written a fabulous story in front of my class and I felt very happy . But I am watching this video so that I can do much better.
Mam please make more videos on this topic.I have interest in writing stories and poems. I am your new subscriber, loved your video and your style of explaining . Hope you'll fulfil my request.
Mam i liked your tips thanku for your idea And i have exam next day So iwilll defnetlly telll you what happened in the exam if this tips help me or not😊😊😊
Plz tell me How will I add a problem, adventurous actions, events and solutions, if I'm asked to elaborate a story titled "My first Birthday- Advent of celebration to my parents" ? Plz answer,! :(
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher why not? Wasn't that a time of celebration to you when you got your first child? And why can't it be a question? Can't one be asked to write a story of his/her first birthday celebration? What if I was a baby, I do remember that story!
@@bluecastor9345 The question is grammatically incorrect and hence does not make any meaning. If the topic is 'My first birthday', and you are writing, it has to be your point of view in first person and you cannot possibly have a memory of it as you are an infant. Therefore, this topic is faulty. Your parents can write about their joy at the birth of a child. There is no need to get personal over this @ weren't you happy etc. Advent is related to the arrival of the baby, "advent of celebrations" is clearly wrong, besides, advent is an archaic word. Overall, a very ambiguous topic.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher I googled and translated ''advent of celebration " into Hindi & I got "खुशियों का आगमन" and I don't think anything is odd in it! And, sorry, I don't want to argue anymore! After all you are a teacher, off course elder than me, so u know better!
@@bluecastor9345 khushiyon ka aagman is "heralding of joy". You want to use advent of celebrations, it needs to be predicated by 'on the birth of a newborn child.' Hence, the questions is ambiguous. I always give you explanations. I do not simply say it is wrong. But if you find answers on google, that you trust, you should do that in the first place. Good luck.
Goodmorning Ma'am Should we strictly use past tense while writing a story? My kids are asking why not present tense. When a picture is given and ask the students to do picture composition,should they follow strictly present tense like This is a picture of a park.children are playing etc.some children have written like this was a picture of a park and children were playing.How can I reason this? Please help
Stories use the narrative past. You are narrating a story that happened, aren't you? Hence past tense. You cannot write it in the present tense. When you describe a picture you use the present tense because you cannot use the past. There was a picture? Now it is not there? If so, how are you going to describe it? That is illogical. What is there to reason? Isn't it clearly absurd?
You will have to choose the words for the child. By Grade 5 they can use on their own. No harm in buying it a bit early if you are working with the child.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Firstly I must admit that I've never received a reply from a UA-camr this fast.. 🙂 thank you so much.. Well I do know that a story is a story and the way to weave it also won't be much different.. still i was looking for a confirmation. Thank you once again.
Really mam the video is very helpful for me . Cause I'm in 10th STD and my education stop for 2 year reason was corona. But now I am learning that thing quickly
It was useless for my coz I was searching for creative beginning for story writing I know everything that you tought don't think I am rude I do appreciate your hardwork
Respected mam, I like to write about the artifacts, like ceramic vases and old buildings, for this purpose what I need to complete the story is the typical and appropriate vocabulary, would you please guide me , how can I get rid of this hurdle, Regards
If you don't have my book Writing with Ease please buy. It has got an entire chapter on just descriptions of every kind. There is one video on physical descriptions. ua-cam.com/video/PfIyHMcle1U/v-deo.html
I learnt that
1.setting places
2.talking characters
3. Oh, a problem
4. Resolving problem
5. Yay a solution
Yes - the basic elements of a story.
Fantastic ideas with the writing stories. Tnx a lot
Welcome Monomoy. Glad you liked it.
Ma'am to get full marks, should we focus more on idioms and the style of writing too?
Not necessary. Keep your sentences grammatically correct.
Thanks a lot!! This helped me so much. I have an English exam tomorrow and this was really a life saver
Best of luck!
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Thanks!
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Ma'am the plan for story writing was explained very well and clearly understood by me. A fabulous job ma'am. Requesting you to please make a video on how to write a formal invitation & poster making. Thank you for all your support & guidance. Stay home & Stay Safe.
You should get my writing book Writing with Ease for all writing needs. Available on Amazon.
Ma'am, in class 10th we get a question on story writing which has a starting line and they ask us to write furter. Ma'am, I just wanted to know that if it has a very simple start or if it hasnt given us any point from which we can start on thinking , then how we would be able make the story interesting?
Right
Ha yes
The story starter allows you to take the story in any direction as long as the starting line fits. So you can write an adventure story and you need to show what circumstances caused that starting line to happen. It's like writing the story in flashback. Just make sure the elements of the story are kept in mind and you adhere to the word limit. Use good vocabulary. Good luck.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher thank you so much mam. Your encouragement and guidance means a lot to me 😊
I am preparing for my story writing competition currently and this video will really gonna to help me a lot to bag the success. After watching your educational videos, (very specially this one), a type of critical attitude towards story writing is created in me. So, thanks a lot ma'am.
Good luck Saswat. Hope you do well and win the competition.
hello mam! I am in 10th grade, how can we frame a moral in the story or conclude the story
That is easy. Take any panchatantra tale and you will get a moral. Moral and conclusion are not the same. Every story has a conclusion, every story need not have a moral.
Thanking
Thanks for teaching me this ma’am now I will be able to ace my exams 😊
All the best. Keep watching.
Bai kasa kasa saamaj aa gai aap ko
So I have a copy like that book so it’s not that book which you told us to get if u want. The book which I have got it’s name is banish boring words. The book which u told us to get and which book I have got are mostly the same
Writing with Ease is a 600 page book. I have reviewed it on my channel. Do watch.
Thanks madam.Indeed you are teacher of extra ordinary caliber.You have a good Skil to teach English language.
Thank you Abdul.
Mam is it necessary to add some kind of moral ending on some basic life lesrning?
No harm in doing so if it is expected in your examinations.
Hello ma'am! 8th grader here. I've been watching your videos for a long time now and thanks to them, I got 38 out of 40 in my previous exam! Can you please suggest some good vocabulary for horror stories? Thanks again!
Congratulations. I am deeply delighted. Keep it up. Do get my book Writing with Ease from Amazon. It has the vocabulary for your target genre (and heaps more) Good luck.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher this book is a prized possession
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Ma'am l have understood the story writing very clearly.
You are very good ma'am.
Thank you
It's my pleasure
mam which (tense) is used in story
and also at the time of writing (article)
Always the past tense. Articles can be written in the present or the past tense.
Wholeheartedly thanks ma'am, I heard first time such type of instructions which were being given by you, may almighty give more power in your respected pen
Thanks Aaqib. Glad you liked it :)
I really appreciate you sharing this video with me, mam
It's my pleasure. Good luck.
Miss.. Do you take English tution classes??
No. I do not.
Mam actually my grammar is so so week........ Actually muje 80 marks exam m aata toh sb h but mai ussai likh ya express nhi kar pati hu..... Plz plz help meeee🙏🙏🙏🙏
Mere hindi wale playlist me 10 Tips to make your English better hai hindi me. Zaroor dekhiye aur usme jo tips hai who practice kijiye.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher mam mujhe ni mila???😕😑
Ma'am your videos are awesome and I scored full marks in my exam after watching your video.....
Thanks ma'am
That's great news Gurpreet. Congratulations. And thanks for watching.
Ola
Ur English words and pronauncation was good mam
Ur explain very properly
Thanks alot mam
Thanks Mamta. Glad you liked it.
You are the best teacher whom I have ever seen for grammar. Like my granny . Thankyou mam
It's my pleasure
Madam your explanation is awesome I hope I will score well because of this video and thanks a lot madam
All the best
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Thankyou madam
Mam what do you suggest to improve the vocabulary
My book Writing with Ease has a section on Word formation and has 75 word lists categoried in genres. Buy on Amazon or our website www.mindsprings.in
Mam , you are the best !! I understood very well to write stories after hearing your advices.
Glad to hear that
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Thank you mam.
Nice 😊 but i have one problem please write farm story
Mam now i understood how to attend a story, this vidio was very help full to me thank you mam 😄😄
Most welcome 😊
I want ask a question that if how to start the writing with like problem or once upon a time
Watch the video again. I've given you tips on how to start.
Mam where can we get the book
The books is available on Amazon, Flipkart and on our website - www.mindsprings.in
Thank you so much ma'am, I followed your tips and tricks and won 1st prize in short story contest ( in intercollegiate)today...
Last time I got third prize by following your advice, this time i wrote a crime mystery story... I'm very grateful to you, from the depth of my heart..
And those who are reading my comment all the best to you too, you are going to rock
Wow! Am i delighted to hear this. Well done. I am glad this helped.
Mam, for my exam i was given a starting line and then asked to complete the story. How can i write a story if i am given "When sam looked at the mirror, he realised that it was not him". as the starting line?
Pls help maam....how do we write a reasonable story?
sounds like a ghost story to me. Or science fiction where someone has altered his appearance. So you could use an accident, being unconscious, no memory. How he gets back his identity.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher marvellous
Hello mam, I'm in 8the Standard and I am participating in Story writing Competition from my School where on the spot we will get topic or theme and we have to create a story there only .I was Searching for a good video which can give me tips, ideas and way to present a story in a creative manner so that learning person or reader will also be excited and intrested during the story time I really appreciate your work Mam and Thank you So much 😊 i am surely going to keep this tips in my mind. Problem then setting making characters from early so that I can fix them in my story , Plot and solution .
Is you from dav i am also
Awesome Jarmit. Good luck. Let me know how it went.
Are you from DAV is the correct way to ask the question. (not Is you...)
I have loved this teacher because she is teaching so good
I liked your videos very much this helped me to get full marks in story but could you please make the videos of article writing and letter to editor and like if you believe that mam is the best teacher★♥♥
Noted. :)
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher thankyou mam
Thank you Mam u are an excellent teacher 👩🏫,the moment I saw this video I was absolutely perfect in story writing ✍️🤩
Welcome Srisandhya. Glad you liked it :)
😊
It's wonderful! Next part please do the reverse ; from example to principle.
Mam u r an excellent teacher
Ma'am I am 9th grade.. And Mam I have also followed all the rules of story writing but still got 4out of 10..please help me..... My final exam are approaching....
Check your grammar, vocabulary, ideas, sequencing. Ask your teacher where you are losing marks.
Mam i fill short of words when I write a story and I am in class 10 and I don't have much time to give for one subject. Pls give your opinion.
*feel
Plan a story and if you have picture description use it by making an intelligent connection to the picture.
Wonderful video mam! Can you please make a video on how to write poems and pictures compositions. I would be a great help. Love and support from india 😊
Thanks. First learn how to analyse and appreciate poems before planning to write. Picture compositions I will try and do.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher thanks a lot mam
Please create videos on the punctuation so that we take benefit from holistic approach you have applied marvellously.
Will do.
Amazing mam thanks for aploding this video my daughter is cleared with story writing
Welcome Rupali :)
Ma’am I am writing a story on the topic ‘the furious day’ . Ma’am how should I begin it?
You can start with the setting if 'furious' mean the weather.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Thank you Ma'am. I will try my best in making this story.
Mam thank you mam u said very beautifulllly mam
My English teacher said to write a neat story, ur explanation had helped me a lot ,once again thank you mam for explaining.
Most welcome 😊
Tomorrow is my English exam and I am watching this video mam . I will you tomorrow is this helpful or not . In my class my teacher you have written a fabulous story in front of my class and I felt very happy . But I am watching this video so that I can do much better.
All the best
Thankyou mam
Mam please make more videos on this topic.I have interest in writing stories and poems.
I am your new subscriber, loved your video and your style of explaining .
Hope you'll fulfil my request.
There are a lot of videos on poetry in my playlist. Do take a look. And thank you.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Sure mam
Maam ,you have given me solution of my problem that makes my story complete.you are the Best teacher 😇
Thnx a lot ma'am! Really appreciable ... Happy women's day
Most welcome 😊
The way you explain was excellent thanks ma'am . In my previous exam I got 48 out of 50 again I repeat thanks ma'am 🙏 it is very helpful to us
Well done. Good luck.
Thanku mam...... * 🙏
You was teaching very well...... 😀
It's my pleasure
Mam I like story and I written story but I don't know to end it
Same
@@userrrrr849 bro in an engain point just stop it and make a sequel for it and u may get an idea
@@userrrrr849😊
Jk*in
@@mohid.s1847😢😢😢😢😢😮
Mam apne words mein answer kaise bnaiye aache vocabulary words se?? Pls reply
achche vocab seekhne padte hai. Sentences grammatically sahi honi chahiye
Fantastically explained
It will prove very very very helpful for all those students who want to write good stories . Thanks a lot mam .
It's my pleasure
Thanks mama
Your teaching is very good
Welcome Gayathri :)
Mam i liked your tips thanku for your idea
And i have exam next day
So iwilll defnetlly telll you what happened in the exam if this tips help me or not😊😊😊
All the best. Do let me know.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
Mam thanku i got fulll in the story👏👏👏👏
Mom you have explained very nicely thank you ma'am
What is your name ma'am
Most welcome 😊
Please join our school mam! It wouldn't help me but my younger friends! Very well explained 🙏
Thanks Dhruv :)
Mam I have an assignment to analyse the story .can I analyse in this way?
Yes you can.
Plz tell me
How will I add a problem, adventurous actions, events and solutions, if I'm asked to elaborate a story titled "My first Birthday- Advent of celebration to my parents" ?
Plz answer,! :(
Advent of celebrations? what does that mean? Your question is faulty. In your first birthday you are a baby besides.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher why not? Wasn't that a time of celebration to you when you got your first child? And why can't it be a question? Can't one be asked to write a story of his/her first birthday celebration? What if I was a baby, I do remember that story!
@@bluecastor9345 The question is grammatically incorrect and hence does not make any meaning. If the topic is 'My first birthday', and you are writing, it has to be your point of view in first person and you cannot possibly have a memory of it as you are an infant. Therefore, this topic is faulty. Your parents can write about their joy at the birth of a child. There is no need to get personal over this @ weren't you happy etc. Advent is related to the arrival of the baby, "advent of celebrations" is clearly wrong, besides, advent is an archaic word. Overall, a very ambiguous topic.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher I googled and translated ''advent of celebration " into Hindi & I got "खुशियों का आगमन" and I don't think anything is odd in it!
And, sorry, I don't want to argue anymore! After all you are a teacher, off course elder than me, so u know better!
@@bluecastor9345 khushiyon ka aagman is "heralding of joy". You want to use advent of celebrations, it needs to be predicated by 'on the birth of a newborn child.' Hence, the questions is ambiguous. I always give you explanations. I do not simply say it is wrong. But if you find answers on google, that you trust, you should do that in the first place. Good luck.
I am not able to find a PDF of the book on Amazon.
Which book are you looking for? You will get hard copies on Amazon.
Goodmorning Ma'am
Should we strictly use past tense while writing a story? My kids are asking why not present tense.
When a picture is given and ask the students to do picture composition,should they follow strictly present tense like This is a picture of a park.children are playing etc.some children have written like this was a picture of a park and children were playing.How can I reason this? Please help
Stories use the narrative past. You are narrating a story that happened, aren't you? Hence past tense. You cannot write it in the present tense.
When you describe a picture you use the present tense because you cannot use the past. There was a picture? Now it is not there? If so, how are you going to describe it? That is illogical. What is there to reason? Isn't it clearly absurd?
Thanku
Lot of ideas to give for story writting
Most welcome 😊
Ma'am please tell how to produce the story with few given lines?????
Basic elements and structure does not change. These may be given to you. Keep the conflict central and find a solution.
I always spend my most of the words in the start. So the end was very fasty and conjested. How to solve this problem !???
Begin at the problem then you will be in the thick of it.
This book is suitable for 3 class students?
You will have to choose the words for the child. By Grade 5 they can use on their own. No harm in buying it a bit early if you are working with the child.
I understood it very nicely
Thank u thank u so much ma'am
Most welcome 😊
Mam you are full of talent but not getting popularity so its my request to all plz share the video as much you can
Thanks a lot satyavati .. :)
Ma'am it was a brilliant one.. but let me request you to discuss the same topic as per ICSE curriculum
Thank you. But how is a story different for ICSE or IB or SSC curriculum? A story is a story.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher Firstly I must admit that I've never received a reply from a UA-camr this fast.. 🙂 thank you so much.. Well I do know that a story is a story and the way to weave it also won't be much different.. still i was looking for a confirmation. Thank you once again.
Ma'am I'm sure that because of this video I gonna get a good result in my story writing competition. Thank you ma'am
All the best. I am sure you will do well.
Thank you mam very well explained. This might give me more than 6 marks for sure.👍
All the best. Keep watching
Mam can you please teach how to write a blue print i dont understand how to write it
pls it would be really helpful.
You will have to find someone who teaches business English for that.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher mam i am class 7 it is for story writing i have exam and that is compulsary that is why
Mam,do we have to write Moral???
Only if asked to.
Thanks a lot mam
Most welcome 😊
thank u maam this really helped a lot
Most welcome 😊
Really mam the video is very helpful for me . Cause I'm in 10th STD and my education stop for 2 year reason was corona. But now I am learning that thing quickly
Excellent. I have done a lot of videos. Watch them several times and practice. Good luck.
Excellent 👌👌
Thanks
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacherA fantastik idea of teaching mam Thank u mam
Thank you ma'am for this video today is my English exam I am sure I will score good thank you ma'am
All the best
Thanks mam please explain with example
Noted.
It was useless for my coz I was searching for creative beginning for story writing I know everything that you tought don't think I am rude I do appreciate your hardwork
Sorry I couldn't help more. If you know all this then you are already well trained. Congratulations. But that is not the case with most.
Thanku so much mam .i also know how to write a story on english mam .But when do i write story then few mistake in grammar.
keep writing and reading. Correct mistakes one by one. Be mindful
By this video my story writing improved a lot........ thank you very much
Also do we have to improve on adjectives and adverbs in order to write a good story?
Yes certainly
Thank you..
You're welcome
Tq soo much ma'am 🙏😊
Welcome :)
Good evening ma'am
how I correct my spelling mistakes in English
Here you go. ua-cam.com/video/tJwgNE8un5A/v-deo.html
Ma'am kese english writing stepwise tik karna hai. Mai english medium school mei nehi hu. Aur muje koi english teacher bhi accha nehi mil raha he.
Aap yeh video dekhiye aur follow kijiye.
ua-cam.com/video/6DUFs7ykKQw/v-deo.html
Mam we should not always use the name of character??
Yes you should
it is for 5th
Yes the strategies can be used for any class at their level.
Superb explanation Ma'am.... thank you so much 😘
You are most welcome.
Thanks for giving the tips how to write story writing
My pleasure 😊
Thank you mam for mindful answer 😇
Most welcome 😊
One of the best videos with complete and manageable tips..
Glad you liked it Leena.
ma'am this video was superb/amazing I have my final exam's coming soon, this video will help me a lot. Thank U very much!
All the best
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher thank u
is there any video on report writing
Just check my playlist. I remember making one so it might be loaded soon
When I had not saw your video I got only 20/14 but when I saw your video I got 20/19 so thank you a lot ma'am 😊😊
Well done
It’s very helpful. Thanks a lot.
You are welcome!
Thank you I got full Mark's because of your teachings
Great job!
Respected mam,
I like to write about the artifacts, like ceramic vases and old buildings, for this purpose what I need to complete the story is the typical and appropriate vocabulary, would you please guide me , how can I get rid of this hurdle,
Regards
Buy my book Writing with Ease. It has a full section on description which will help you.
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher
Yes it's descriptive writing,, I will find your book in Dubai ,,
Regards
Thank you mam 😊
Most welcome 😊
Thank you ma'am
Most welcome 😊
Hi maam . Can you provide some samples to write a story
My books are full of stories. Look for Empowering English Grades 1 to 8.
Please explain descriptive paragraph mam .☺
If you don't have my book Writing with Ease please buy. It has got an entire chapter on just descriptions of every kind.
There is one video on physical descriptions. ua-cam.com/video/PfIyHMcle1U/v-deo.html
@@TheMindspringsEnglishTeacher ok mam . Thank you
Tq mam it was easy to understand