Yeah totally dude. I’m trying to watch was much as possible to get inspo for delivery techniques but also trying to keep it as organic and “me just talking about my pickups” as possible. Any thoughts on vids to watch to improve delivery
@@joelbrooks6013 I think you can still keep it organic and conversational but be a bit more concise with your topics. You don't have to develop a full-on script, but I think you could refine your points to keep things moving. Your delivery also could just use a little more energy, especially to emphasize your points. Your cadence is pretty one-note, so I could see some people just zoning out. Incorporating more B-roll of your fits and the shoes will help mix things up instead of just a one-shot in the background. You do have some of this but you choose to keep them on the screen while you're still talking in the background instead of just switching out the shot entirely while you continue to talk. I think there's a niche audience for you to reach since you come across as authentic and don't appear to just buy clothes and shoes for the clout. I think Chris from Weartesters could be a good starting point and then make it your own.
@@waterofvitamins really appreciate that dude. I share many of your thoughts (especially the energy part 😂), and have been thinking of ways to improve there… but hadn’t thought about using more b-roll and pic-in-pic to break things up. I’ll definitely try all of this next time
They’re all 021 Originals dude. My favorite tshirt brand - www.021originals.com/collections/t-shirts/Dropcut?page=1 - I’m 6’4” and 255lb and wear a XXL
Very good video...well detailed 👍
Thanks dude. Always up for feedback, whether it be positive or constructive. Lots more non pickup vids coming too
I think your content is actually pretty solid, but your delivery could use some work if you're really looking to grow.
Yeah totally dude. I’m trying to watch was much as possible to get inspo for delivery techniques but also trying to keep it as organic and “me just talking about my pickups” as possible. Any thoughts on vids to watch to improve delivery
@@joelbrooks6013 I think you can still keep it organic and conversational but be a bit more concise with your topics. You don't have to develop a full-on script, but I think you could refine your points to keep things moving. Your delivery also could just use a little more energy, especially to emphasize your points. Your cadence is pretty one-note, so I could see some people just zoning out. Incorporating more B-roll of your fits and the shoes will help mix things up instead of just a one-shot in the background. You do have some of this but you choose to keep them on the screen while you're still talking in the background instead of just switching out the shot entirely while you continue to talk. I think there's a niche audience for you to reach since you come across as authentic and don't appear to just buy clothes and shoes for the clout. I think Chris from Weartesters could be a good starting point and then make it your own.
@@waterofvitamins really appreciate that dude. I share many of your thoughts (especially the energy part 😂), and have been thinking of ways to improve there… but hadn’t thought about using more b-roll and pic-in-pic to break things up. I’ll definitely try all of this next time
@@joelbrooks6013 Yeah man you have a really solid foundation and I can tell you actually enjoy making these. Keep that energy.
@@waterofvitamins I definitely do. Thanks again for all the feedback. It’s really helpful
Where do you get your tshirts from?? The ones you have on while you are showing the shorts..
They’re all 021 Originals dude. My favorite tshirt brand - www.021originals.com/collections/t-shirts/Dropcut?page=1 - I’m 6’4” and 255lb and wear a XXL
Thank You!! I’ll have to check them out..
@@silentagent0069 deffo worth it