Lord of the Rings is actually really weird in many ways if you think about it. The main antagonist isn't even in the book as a character (Sauron). He just "sits" there on top of the tower and order things about and look. While the Ring, an object, is a much more active force around the main characters. It's pretty unusual and weird. But good though. :)
@@Darth_Bateman Kind of. The ring has a part of Sauron's power, and he uses it to control the other ring bearers. But the ring has some sort of will on its own.
@@Darth_Bateman yeah no that's not how it works. He put his power into it but he can't sense where it is unless you put it on. sauron in the films is portrayed as the flaming eye itself but book sauron isn't. In the book it's said he has a body specifically a "hand that looms over the world." For obvious reasons this Is too vague for a visual medium so They changed him to big flaming eye on top of tower. That is unless you take the hobbit films in account where the eye kinda morphed into his body ? I dunno everything with sauron can get very confusing.
Also worth noting, Sauron fell in the same way the ring corrupts people, he wanted to do good, to make the world more efficient and peaceful, but wasn't willing to accept the risk of failure, so he sided with Morgoth so he could gain more power.
I actually have a saying that goes along with that outline point: "writing is kind of like parkour. If you know where you want to land, it's a lot easier to plan your route."
Yeah? My saying is if you have a deep embodied understanding of your premise, your characters and the thing that powers your voice as it applies to this story - that will take you to whatever the landing is going to be, and what is required is not planning a route but cultivating an balanced attitude of exploration, of listening and intuitive decisionmaking, that’s been run through the filter of your own artistic sensibility, accumulated life experience, and instinct for story and more importantly through whatever, hopefully deep yearning or impulse in you that drives the emerging insight. The act of creative writing is a sensual moment in time drawing many complexities together guided by the necessity of voice and the emerging wisdom that voice is going to simultaneously create and unveil. The moment of writing is tactical - not strategic. Art is specific and sensual. Tactics are modes of engagement what you deploy in the moment in conversation with the circumstances of the moment. That dialogue facilitates flow, which facilitates creativity. Strategy however tends to be general and impersonal and summarising. Plot is just a pattern. It is the story spine but not the story essence. Voice and true storytelling will produce it in an organic way, as a byproduct of the main process. Storytelling on this view is discovery informed and guided more or less unconsciousless by processes in the writer and embodied craft - not deliberate contrivance. Living story does not emerge from the places in your brain that constructs blueprints. Internalise all that as craft and forget about it in the moment of creation. The “landing” is your moment of attaining the elixir. If you know the where and the why and the how of it from the start, chances are you are not doing anything new or surprising to you or to other people. Writing is creating knowledge. It’s just like science that way. If you know the answer before the research project it’s either because that research has already been done by numerous other people and so is irrelevant or it’s simply a reflection of your own initial biases. Creative writing is sensing that there is some emerging landing, and committing the jump in flow so you understand the landing IN THE PROCESS OF DOING IT and NOT in a process of preconceiving it and debating every detail in advance. How to prepare for that jump: You live, you research, you internalise craft and technique to where you don’t think of it, develop and listen for voice and necessity, you practice managing yourself in the moment of doing it, your aiming device is an embodied feeling and intuition, not a map of the area where x marks the spot.
Boromir isn't really a false ally, his character arc just led him from protagonist to pseudo antagonist, because while he attacked Frodo he died for his allies
I wouldnt say that Boromir is either any villian. He was just happy to be part of the fellowship of the ring, but he had the weakest resistance on getting the ring to himself, so he was fighting internally in wanting to take the ring from the makn protoganist. It wasent, because he was bad guy, but because he could not resist his will to take the ring for himself, like the race of men, expect Aragorn cant, because they are attracted to power. Then Boromir dies heroic death fighting, that is propably good thing, when he has so strong will to take the ring for himself.
@@bookwormaddict3933 How did Boromir think his selfish motivations are morally good ends. Some people just cant resist their lust or want to take power, while they are part of the good guys, so that makes them take immoral action and technically become the bad guy by wanting to take the ring from the main protoganist, because he cannot resist his lust for the ring. Didnt Boromir in his death still say he was sorry about wanting to take the ring from Frodo and that he could not control his lust, that made him look like bad guy, when he actually was good guy excited to kill orcs with rest of the fellowship of the ring.
@@jout738 "How did Boromir think his selfish motivations are morally good ends." I don't remember if he said this in the movie, but Boromir wanted to use the ring's power to defend Gondor against Mordor. He didn't want that power for himself, but to lead his people.
@@jout738 He didn't desire power, he just believed there was no hope in destroying the ring and believed the only way his nation and people would survive was by using the weapon of the enemy against them. Films don't quite portray it as well, but in the book he wasn't even a real member of the fellowship. His plan was just to tag along until they made it to the Gondor border from where he'd go back home. All of this of course making him really, really weak to the call of the ring and after spending too much time with it, he was eventually overcome by its manipulative powers and tried to seize it for just a short moment before immediately realising his mistake and regretting it for what little was left of his life. If he was ever an antagonist, it was for maybe 5 minutes. If anything, the ring was the antagonist and Boromir simply a victim of it.
My main issue with mistake 6 is that sometimes you just want a simple villain with simple goals, like big jack horner or dr eggman. These guys have the simple goals of get power and in the case of eggman make a wonderland of his own vision. These characters are well loved despite their simple goals, and its because of these simple goals that they work as characters, ones that are comedic yet still a force to be respected. My issue with 7 is that an antagonist can't always be opposite to their protagonist, particularly when you have multiple characters in a traveling party, because the smart guy going against someone who outdoes them with their tech is not gonna bother the big smash guy too much, so that's often hard to balance (you can also do unique things with unbalanced rivals, like big smash guy against a similarly stong guy with much higher intelligence, an outbalanced situation which requires smart thinking from big smash guy to outdo the smart guy with tech and muscles
That’s an excellent point and I think this comes down to the difference between an antagonist and a villain. Because they’re not the same thing. The antagonist is a force that acts contrarily to the protagonist. Whereas the villain is a character that opposes the hero. So in some cases you can have a story where the main antagonist is not the villain. You brought up Jack Horner and he’s a great example of this. While being the main villain of the story, death is the primary antagonist for Puss in Boots (our protagonist)
Doctor Doom is a good antagonist for the Fantastic Four because with his personal genius, technology, and magic, he is almost a match for any of them in the area that they specialize in.
it really depends on where you want your focus to land jack horner works well because hes sharing the stage with like 4-5 other character arcs which are all antagonists with puss, jack being simple not lets other characters breathe, but also lets him shine *as* a simple character because the narrative foils already exist. He can be *pure* theatrics without losing anything
Your antagonist making a mistake because they are angry, or simply shortsighted, is a perfectly acceptable reason to have them make a mistake that's obvious to the audience because the audience is more omniscient than the antagonist.
"Without a strong antagonist your story is going to be boring"-- this is only true if your story is about a character overcome a particular opponent. Stories where the protagonist's struggles are either against themselves (disease, curse, etc.) or against environmental threats don't actually need a strong antagonist to tell a compelling story. In fact, some character journeys are not really conducive to having one big bad that they have some deep-seeded personal animosity against and they are the underdog against because the character might be constantly traveling and there is no time to build up such a relationship so it would feel awfully shoe-horned in. You are limiting the kinds of stories you can write by insisting that the struggles of the main character have to be embodied in a particular antagonist.
Actually the statement holds. An Antagonist does not need to be a villain or even a character. The antogonist is simply the opposing force that creates conflict for the protagonist. In some stories it could be something like teenage angst. So yes you do need a strong antagonist, just not necessarily a strong villain.
Yep. I like to write short war stories with some sort of fantasy element. I've noticed that none of them have an antagonist. The closest thing to an antagonist may be an anonymous enemy soldier that they are forced to kill. There's no evil overlord, general, dictator, evil officer or monarch to defeat. It's all about the horrors of war, the "band of brothers" (and "sisters" in some of them), and how soldiers can give their lives for whatever reason other than "honor and fatherland". Also lots of cool action because I don't want to be depressing and boring.
I like to read fantasy novels about a heroic protagonist overcoming a personal flaw or illness... Read the title of the video, it is talking about fantasy novels - not all novels
Magneto actually fits into both Anti-Villain and Shapeshifter categories. The movies constantly had him become a friend to the heroes then turn on them.
The Evil Overlord List is extremely helpful and hilarious. It's fun to see how many clichés and oblivious villains we have in a lot of movies and books, and how easily are they fixed lol
Look up the short story "A Woman's Work" by Tanya Huff. Queen Arrabel is an Evil Overlord who lives (and doesn't die) by the Evil Overlord List. She's ruthless, genre-savvy, and adored by her citizens and her troops because she treats them fairly and actually makes their lives better. She thinks her son is a romantic idiot and not really cut out to be an heir, and when she discovers the youngest princess (and sole survivor of the royal family) of a recently conquered kingdom has a similar mindset as her and agrees to marry the prince, she fully expects them to have a very vigorous love life to produce a child as soon as possible, after which her son will probably suffer a highly unlikely and unfortunate fatal accident. And she's good with that, since it means she'll have a competent heir.
@@keith6706 I mean shouldn't she wait to see if the grand child is competent? If not the son and wife could try again until a kid pops up who has potential
You can do a lot of interesting things with that, just be sure not to be cynically deconstruct all the fun out of a potential story, if the story is meant to be fun. Don't use _or_ subvert tropes blindly, but purposefully. Sometimes the best stories are the ones that _do_ feature well-worn tropes, but remember to give them compelling reasons for them to exist in _that_ particular story.
@@michaelestrada2772 I think you've either misread the comment, or else you're replying to the wrong comment This was about the villain consulting a book or a list of advice. It's not about the hero consulting with the villain
You should try PGTE (Pratical Guide to Evil) then, its a lovely deconstruction of storytelling tropes with an Anti-Villain protagonist. Basically a huge part of the "magic system" of the setting is that it rationalizes storytelling tropes into it, and if the characters can figure out the greater "narrative" that is developing (which is enforced by some conceptual gods of good and evil) they can manipulate it to get literal plot armor. The MC has basically every heroic trait, personality and backstory you'd expect, but the "Villains" got scarily competent at stamping "Heroes" out before they become problems (like they're following the evil overlord's list), so she decides to join them because while going the usual heroic route would kinda work out in the end, it would cost far far too for her people, its better to try to sabotage the Villains from the inside. But if you decide to play for the other team, well... you dont get to keep the heroic plot armor or moral high ground. Its a great story
Voldermort, Snape are also dark reflection of Harry, they were all kids who found home at Hogwart but their stories turned out completely different from each other due to the love and suppport from other people arround them along their journey
If Voldemort counts as a force of nature, then my primary antagonist also counts as a force of nature. And an ally being replaced by an imposter would be a "false ally" archetype
Imho what can be fabtastic if done well is the rival/ third power. You have protag, antag and someone whose goals are at odds with BOTH. They can be either secret or in the open, or hilariously hidden in plain sight. The goal will be obviously not to have a copout ending where with no foreshadowing the third power snatches the mcguffin at the end or kills the antagonist.
I'd split his first category into force of nature and pure evil. Force of nature is something more broad, the classic one being death itself. It's not a person, with individual needs or desires. It's not even evil.
@@destroyerinazuma96 Came back to rewatch and saw that I got some comments on my comment, cool. To clarify, in the story I am working on, the "Big Bad" is an Emperor that the world thought was slain in a coup... 200 years ago (nobody knew he is shape shifted dragon who views humanity as his "hoard"). As he slowly recovers, he starts replacing key figures with imposters to prepare for his return to power.
Referring back to David and Goliath; the sling was once the most devastating ranged weapon on the planet, being able to hurl a stone at speed would be a KO even with helmets in some cases, so who really is the underdog, the young boy with the deadly weapon, or his massive target. The story works well as a way to demonstrate a hidden underdog, or a perception of an underdog, as in reality, it's Goliath who was actually disproportionately armed in that fight
Just so. Even today, a simple sling remains an effective and deadly weapon. It's not as useful in combat as a firearm, but its simplicity and the availability of munition are advantages that modern weapons do not have. Furthermore, despite the many major advances in weaponry, infantry protection is still not capable of stopping a fist-sized rock moving at over a hundred forty kilometres per hour.
Pretty sure David also took out bears and lions as a sheperd, and his skills were all self taught. Combine that with his unshakeable will via his faith, it was Goliath that honestly had the disadvantage.
i was planning to do a mix of dark mirror, the antivillain, and the shapeshifter This character will be very close to the mc, and have a similar goal. And instead of introducing this character as the main antagonist upfront, instead i planned to make it so this person has tried every mean and method to bring his goal humanely before he falls. The reason for his fall is the death of multiple of his comrades which drive him to the bring and desperate realization: there is only true equality in death. Eventually driving the story and becoming the main antagonist. This character tries his new immoral ways to bring about equality: Death to all or, make them band together despite their differences to face a common enemy. He then flip flops from being an ally to enemy. from spectator to actor. I know its a lot but its way more simple when explained like this
In regards to the "Dark Mirror" villain, I noticed that there is something of a "Dark Mirror" in all villains. I'll explain: They can be a "mirror" in one of two ways. One: they reflect the hero by having certain similarities to the hero. As explained in the video, this is to illustrate what the hero would be like if they went down the dark path. Two: they are the exact opposite of the hero. When you raise your right hand, your reflection raises what should be his left hand. Everything in your mirror image is flipped; it's the exact opposite. I had noticed this was a common trait of comic book villains after watching a documentary called "Necessary Evil: the Villains of DC Comics." For example: Superman enemies General Zod and Lex Luthor. Zod is an example of a villain who reflects the hero. Both are from Krypton and have similar powers, but Zod is a twisted version of Superman. Lex Luthor, meanwhile is an example of the villain being the exact opposite of the hero (a common trait for arch-villains, as pointed out by Mr. Glass in "Unbreakable"). Superman possesses incredible powers (flight, strength, speed, heat vision, etc.), and he defends those who cannot defend themselves. Luthor, on the other hand, is a mortal man who relies on his intellect, rather than superpowers, to fight his enemies, and his actions are self-serving. I then noticed that this is common outside of comic books, as well. Darth Vader from "Star Wars" and Rene Belloq from "Indiana Jones" are examples of villains who reflect certain characteristics of the hero. Meanwhile, "Alaadin" provides us with an example of the villain being the exact opposite of the protagonist (Alaadin is a street urchin with a heart of gold, while Jafar is a person with a very high social standing who is obsessed with gaining as much power as possible). Regardless of how you define a "mirror image", there is something of it in all villains, and, as pointed out in the video, this helps bring out the virtues and the character growth of the protagonist.
You can make an antagonist and a protagonist fight each other without conflicting goals, if you make the real antagonist be misunderstanding itself. They each fight to achieve their own goals while they misinterpret the actions of the other, making them see each other as a threat to their own goal. If this misunderstanding is realized, the antagonist and the protagonist suddenly have a common enemy, that they defeat by making peace with each other. But if the misunderstanding is never acknowledged: You've got yourself a tragedy. The audience knows the solution to the conflict, but they must watch as that solution is never achieved by the characters. A story like this can have the purpose of teaching the audience a moral lesson (for example).
The T-1000 from Terminator 2 is a classic Force of Nature. This also highlights a compelling way of using the Force of Nature: have it be initially unstoppable. The protagonist cannot "win" against it at all, and must escape or "play around" it until they discover a way to decisively defeat it. This averts the staleness of the Force because it puts the emphasis back on how the protagonist reacts and grows in response. Another fun thing to do with the Force of Nature is to present it initially as mindless or robotic, and later reveal that it is in fact intelligent and presumably malevolent. Readers/audiences naturally see a Force of Nature as animalistic or elemental, so this can be a very effective twist or shock. This can also be used to shift the balance back in favour of the antagonist after allowing the protagonist a brief victory, by showing that it has learned how to counter the protagonist's method of defeating it.
Are you reading my mind? I've just started to make the "mood wall" of one of my antagonists today. I don't know how familiar you are with it, it's basically about that I collect pictures from the internet that are connected to the character I'm developing and then I put them in a Word document. It helps me to feel the vibes the character gives off, to keep track of what interests them and if I haven't figured out their name yet, it makes it easier to choose one that fits their personality. Your timing is perfect, I have her pretty much figured out but help is always welcome.
Thanks so much for this, Jed! I'm only a sixteen year old girl with a powerful love for books and sees these kinds of issues in stories I've read or watched. I am currently writing my second draft of my first ever book, and it's always nice to have instructional videos like yours. I just I hope I can write something great like what you're describing.
My favourite villain is Silco from Arcane. Never played League but the shoe gripped me. He's unusually wholesome, evil, and he's so.. human. Its beautiful
Spot on! I selfishly use your videos to analyze my work. Your (what I'm referring to as) Mentorship, is a great asset to me and my work. Thank you for that.
I keep coming back to your videos. The information you present is always well-thought out and organized. Brilliant and intelligent and insightful. Thank you for taking the time to make these helpful videos, Jed! God bless.
The most underrated and the greatest villain I've ever seen that nobody is talking about is Silco from Arcane. His motivation, complexity, goals and everything was perfect. [SPOILER] [SPOILER] Tbh, in that series the saddest death was the villain's death unlike any other story out there
I'm working on a false ally on a personal revenge arc. My antagonist seems like an underdog, but that's because they're operating under false colors, hiding important abilities and facts. The MCs think they're up against a Sauron or maybe a Saruman, but in fact, it's this small-seeming person who has been around the edges of the main story all along.
Writing under this philosophy is super harmfull for your story, the labels come after, now you have to focus in creating characters that portray your themes well.
@@ricky.t.1658 I've already created the characters. I'm just describing the character who best fit the plot. I'm writing a kind of fantasy detective story. So I started with the "crime." Working out from that, my antagonist becomes the one with the means, motive and opportunity to have done it.
Great work, Jed! These videos are so ingaging and as someone who sometimes struggles with destractability, I definitely appreciate it. You are always changing the focal length of the camera, or gesturing, or showing important information on a separate screen with a moving background. Top marks, I love it!
I was worried about my story, but now I am able to see my antagonists and villains a bit more clearly. I now see I have many antagonists and two clear villians and one force of nature that all of them support and nurture, so now I need to up my interactions and clashes with them and my protagonists. Great video!
An antagonist I've been working on begins as a mentor figure to the MC after bonding over the discrimination that comes with their crystal cores (their source of mana) compared to the versions that are more common among the populace. The MC eventually discovers that their entire friendship was a facade, as all the antagonist desires is to harvest their rare crystal core for his schemes. The reason for the roundabout approach is due the nature of their crystal cores, as the elemental nature of the MC's core is the antithesis of the Antagonist's own core. The antagonist is later revealed to be attempting to break the Seals on the Calamities, ancient dragons that embody the Primal forces of the world. As an avatar of another ancient dragon, the antagonist plans to conquer and dominate the other dragons for revenge of long overdue transgressions.
Oooh, a twist villain, great! I'm working on one as well, although she's not as powerful as yours. She's a queen who is known for her generous nature, but actually she's narcissistic, and she only gives money to the poor because she loves when people are cheering for her. She's very clever and she was also quite pretty in her younger years, but her cruelty, vanity and selfishness ruins the picture. This is only getting worse, because she's now in her 50s, meaning that she's getting older and older, which she can't accept. She buys herself expensive clothes, jewelry, anything to make her look desirable, so much that it causes an economy crisis in her country. Still, this rather makes her appear ridiculous, which only frustrates her, ruining the situation even more. She has a 25 years old husband (married due to political reasons), who is a genius engineer, but thanks to her constantly criticising, gaslighting and emasculating him he is very insecure. His character arc is about how he realises with the help of the MC that this isn't okay, gains confidence in himself, breaks free, and later he'll be the love interest for the MC.
One note though: why befriend him for so long? Why not just be 'a thief in the night' and take it right away? I think it's important to make sure there isn't a plothole there. Just a tip! :) and maybe you've already worked it out, I haven't read your work ofcourse, haha.
@@jadeayla7548 In the setting, crystal cores first begin as cloudy and opaque, but when a practitioner of magic refines themselves through their studies and conquer tribulation do their crystals adopt a more desirable precious gem-like quality. The deeper hue and transparency directly translate to the purity and power of the core. The false friendship is for the sole purpose to cultivate the best quality possible for the antagonist's purposes.
I wish I could hug you for making the evil overlord handbook recommended reading. "I will not shoot the bearer of bad news. Rather, I will personally thank the messenger and give a handsome tip. Worse than something going wrong, is something going wrong and nobody telling me about it"
My outline for the current project I'm having fun with: MC starts at new job and signs a contract for a year. Meets older unfriendly and grumpy co-worker. Realizes job is highly dangerous and very unfair. Can't leave. Task, survive until the contract runs out. Toss in monsters and deaths in between. See what happens. Make it fun sometimes. In the end, MC understands the other guy he thought badly of in the beginning. End. That's pretty much as far as my outlines go. XD They are generally a little more defined than this, but usually, I have a vague idea, that fleshes itself out as I write.
Outline of my story: MC unwillingly becomes one of the rulers of their world. Is unsure about this at first but becomes more accustomed to the idea with the help from parental figure and advisor. Parental figure dies with the suspect being a mysterious masked figure. MC looks for help from other rulers and tracks down masked figure. Masked figure is revealed to be another ruler and says not to be the killer and knows the true culperate. MC goes to advisor and reveals he knows it was the advisor that killed his parental figure. MC and advisor have a battle and advisor reveals he killed parental figure to have more influence over MC. there is a moment where MC tries to help advisor not die but advisor declines Advisor dies. MC finds a new home with other rulers. End. That's the super oversimplified version.
As long as there’s some juicy internal conflict I’m sure it’ll turn out great! I’ve read stories where they get so stuck in survival-mode without a reason of why they want to survive or a goal beyond it that I fail to care about the main character haha :)
Outline of my story: mc lives alone in the woods, never interacting with anyone. He finds a mysterious bridge and crosses it, ending up in another forest which he begins to explore. He climbs a mountain to survey the land, and sees that the bridge has disappeared suddenly. The river underneath it is freezing and impossible to cross. He desperately searches for hours for something to save him , finally finding a small house which he enters and falls unconscious in. He wakes up with a fever, and meets the owner of the house, an old man who tells him that the MC is one of four races. He explains who the bridge was built by, and that the MC needs to go on a journey to find the person who built the bridge and get it restored so he can return to his land home. That's only the first two chapters, but yeah, I think it's turning out well.
Video game series called the Tales franchise, in one release, Tales of Vesperia, had a very good example of the anti-villain for the main antagonist. First he's met very early in the story by the heroes, and he's pretty much just seen as a lone mercenary contemplating something at the time. As the story goes on, he's more and more frequently crossing paths with the main cast, and it's from him they learn much about a threat to the world that is being caused by the more visible villains/threat, which short version will result in the worldly elements of earth, water, wind, and fire raging out of control and destroying all life. He is even the one who teaches the main hero of the story, Yuri, how to be a much greater swordsman and lost magic skills that vanished from common knowledge long ago. The heroes of the story eventually seek to bring the elements back into balance by summoning and enlisting the aid of elemental guardian spirits to watch over said elements, while also doing what they can to curb the tide of the technology and magic of the world that is causing the imbalance in the first place. Meanwhile the antagonist, while initially hopeful for their efforts, finally gives up on the idea, deciding the only way to prevent the world's destruction is for humanity to be gone from it, along with all their misuse of magic and technology that caused the initial imbalance. And even with that extreme of a view, when the confrontation at the grand finale, it still manages to not read as "hero vs. villain," but rather as clashing of heroes of differing ideals. It's part of the reason why Vesperia is considered one of the best games of the series by the dedicated fanbase. A lot of people who came in on that hype after the fact don't see it the same, but most of them also don't finish the game because of what is very dated combat gameplay compared to modern games of the same series.
Been looking for something like this to double check myself. I’m not a book writer but I am working on a fantasy setting for TTRPG play. I really liked what you had to say on being smart as the villain. Not just laying plans, but asking are these well thought out plans. Also how do they see themselves is something I always have liked in writing. Delving into the mind of others is always fun. For myself I really enjoy nailing down that my secondary villain and his followers, who have absolute loyalty toward the villain, would tell the players “you are not our hero’s. This is not your story, it is ours. You are the opposition to progress, a hurdle for us to overcome.” Seeing true devotion to a cause you do not agree to be correct can be interesting as you almost feel bad that someone so twisted can be so wholly devoted.
This helped a lot, I was having trouble deciding how to implement this Father-Son antagonist duo that eventually fight and split apart, and your video helped a ton
Yeah actually the whole bible is an underdog story kinda. Israel are this weak and broken people who consistently mess up, but manage to somehow overcome empires, wars and constant adversity for centuries with the help of their God.
this video is incredibly helpful! as someone with literally dozens of antagonists littered throughout several stories, this is a nice partial guide to keeping my writing consistently good even with so many stories and characters
Haha, the #40 is something every manga/anime needs to learn. Stop "powering up" after the other guy beats you down. Hit them hard and move on. lol. Makes for more dangerous villains that way. And more realistic. (One punch man comes to mind, though he's not a villain).
A lot of that is probably Dragon Ball’s influence. In Dragon Ball it makes sense because most of the characters enjoy a tough fight more than they enjoy winning, ie they intentionally hold back because they believe if they go all out the fight will be over too quickly. One Punch Man actually explores this because the main character’s motivation is actually to find an exciting fight in a world where he one hit kills everything without even trying. It can also work if there’s some sort of drawback for the character, like maybe using the super weapon will guarantee victory but it has limited ammo or making replacement ammo is a huge pain in the butt. Beyond that it’s just about padding to keep the battle exciting for as long as possible. It can also make sense from the antagonist’s point of view if their normal opponents are so weak they don’t need the powered up form (or are likely to break the rule against attacking your opponent while they’re powering up) there’s no point in taking the time to power up.
somtimes i thought of this power up as a "desperation mode" the body goes in. We know Stories where ordinary People did some crazy things out of pure necessity for their own survival (or those they love) if you meant that kind of power up. And if you meant the kind of "i wont use my full power" thing, i think there are points making this valid as well. If they dont want to kill, feel confident as they are, it takes a toll etc. (and somehow it feels so "mean" that its more like something a villain would do, the other comment did a good job too) Besides, sometimes tropes can be fun if your story allows it, or when there were enough stories where these tropes got subverted and you greet them as an old friend ;)
In Overly Cautious Hero, imho the protag kinda remains consistent insofar that his tactics always are to be as careful as possible and if needed to play dirty. Big spoilers: He actually drags a world ending boss into another dimension to set things up for the boss to bust the canvas the goddess of war is painting, so that the two get pitted against one another. Protag also uses it to gauge the goddess of war's ace in the whole, which turns out to be the ultimate move the protag ends up planning to use as a nuclear option to defeat the big bad. The kicker is that all this time the protag, who may seem like a munchkin who's after ruthless efficiency and not after being some paragon of justice, that protag turns out to be a grieving father and husband who knows what the big bad is capable of and thus wants to absolutely and irrevocably destroy the big bad to prevent further death.
I'm working on a homebrew D&D campaign, and I'm about to introduce the BBEG. This video just showed up in my algorithm. Very helpful for creating my bad guy. Thank you for the advice.
Counterpoint to number 4: Making an antagonist do a stupid thing can actually further the reader’s understanding of them in certain circumstances. Maybe they make a decision based on emotions instead of based on thought. Recently, one of my antagonists, who is traveling with the main character, was trying to keep them isolated from that main character’s best friend so he can manipulate them better. When he finds out said friend is close, in his panic, he basically destroys the area that all 3 characters are in, but puts himself at tremendous risk. It’s not calculated, it’s not smart, and he acknowledges after the fact that it was stupid, but we get to see our antagonist’s desperation to keep our main character isolated driving him to do this stupid thing.
I'm of the mind villains should be allowed to make stupid decisions if it feels true to their character, every character including the antagonist should have flaws. I.e if an antagonist gloats before finishing off the protagonist, you'd have to show that they're arrogant and or over-confident. Same with your panicking idea, I think it should work so long as you establish your antagonist as someone who's prone to it.
Wow this was really good. After watching this, it is clear to me that much of the trouble my story has given me over the past year is rooted in my antagonist. Now I gotta dig back in! Thank you Jed!
I have issue with the Frodo/sauron thing. Sauron doesn't tempt Fredo. He doesn't know where Frodo is for almost the entirety of the story. That's why he went to war with Gondor. He assumed that's where the ring would be. The ring itself is what tempted Frodo and Boramere. The ring is more like the villain of the book. Edit: Secondly, Sarumon isn't influenced by Sauron. He wants the ring for himself to take over.
You're wrong about that 2nd one (though kinda right about the 1st). Through the Palantir, Saruman was heavily influenced by Sauron. To what degree and exactly how is never made clear- but Sauron's influence through the stone was stated as such outright. From what Sauron told Pippin, it sounded like they'd been conspiring together to corrupt the peoples and land.
This video has helped me so damn much!! It's absolutely oozing with great tips that I've been setting my antagonists up against and I've already made them so much better thanks to this video. The fact that you wrote, filmed and edited this all for us to have for free is so amazing and helpful. Thank you
Interesting, I had not considered it like that but I think in terms of villains my story would feature: - one "force of nature", albeit pretty hidden till late in the story - a lesser force of nature, more "obvious" threat - a couple of anti-villains working for the latter, some even showing clear heroic traits but the situation just makes them de facto antagonists - a character who is both a false ally and a dark mirror to the second main protagonist; "you remind me of a myself, many years ago" (implied, but not understood at the time is "before I forsook my honor") - a few more false allies/anti-villains, politics is ever a nasty business - what I had not seen as such until now but what is defo a shapeshifter, albeit overall more dangerous for the antagonists - the main protagonist herself when she let herself be led astray from the "right" path. Anti-villain? Maybe I need to leave a bit of room for good guys now :P As often, thank you Jed for all your work and advicer.
Luke Castellan from Percy Jackson series is fit for twist villain character and the complex one. Though now that I reread the book one I see a lot of hint there...
Oooh, I’d kind of say that Morgana from Merlin could be considered an anti-villain in the later seasons. (I liked her wayyyyy more than the protagonist, lol, but that kept me watching. It’s also interesting, because she and Merlin had some similar goals. It did give a lot of moral ambiguity)
My villain seems to be a combination of false ally, dark mirror and anti villain. Not sure if a combination is ok or should he only have 1 of those villain traits?
Kind of boring advice from a non-professional. But why do you write? To express yourself or tell a unique story I assume, so do what you want as long as you feel like it fits. Edit:Fixed a typo
I think the combination is fine, since we can already see from it that a certain conflict, disagreement about a solution is going to escalate into an open confrontation. The question is which aspect of those three is the most important to the journey of the hero. Personally I'd think it's the dark mirror - the reflection of what the hero might have become and the highlighting what makes him different. This could also become the reason for the villain to refect from the heros ideals in the first place. Problem with this collection is, that you lose out on the strength of the "false ally", where the villain is cunningly infiltration the heroes party. By making him also an anti-villain he is also not entirely wrong just misguided in his goals, which is why he wasn't really a false ally from the get go, but came to be a traitor. Which begs the question: What forced our hero out to become a hero in the first place, when the main villain wasn't malicious at first? So the main question remains for you to figure out which role of those three is the most important of this villain at the end. The other two should enhance this role you have in mind. That's what I personally think.
@@christianstephan7301 Thank you for the feedback. The dark mirror is definitely the main aspect. I was also trying to fit the other aspects in my book. The villain is basically a illusionist, capable of changing hes appearance. In that way he is able to manipulate the MC and take back what is hes from the false villain, who starts the conflict for the protagonist. I am only worried the story might become too complicated or even bloated, but I will try my best to avoid that. Even if it means a lot of change. Hell I have been doing that for a while now as I have been learning.
theres a character ive made who combines the role of protagonist and antagonist, hes a man who simultaneously seeks redemption while also thinking its impossible, he fights to make the world a better place and succeeds greatly, but his means simply cannot be justified, but he knows no other way
I think you should’ve mentioned the Joker as an example of an antagonist that is weaker than the protagonist. Every time the Joker is in the same room as Batman, he nearly dies -and should in many cases- yet, he persists in fighting Batman.
I can think of two underdog villains that are actually pretty good, as their wit makes up for their physical defects: Leah Teabing in The Davinci Code and the Mayor in Rango. Neither of them can walk (or walk well) and yet they wreak all sorts of havoc on everyone and even are so cold that they betray their own minons (Remmy and Silas in Davinci Code and Rattlesnake Jake in Rango.)
My antagonist in my story is an army of relentless demons with zero morals or reasoning. So they are force of nature. But my approach to make it intresting is many demon types, flying ones, laser shooting ones, swimming ones, stuff like that. This legion of demons will come in mass quantity on a certain day called "armageddon", and the heroes are trying to prepare for this day to come by warning others and gathering up an army. But, dispite all the legion's smaller attacks, very few people will accept the fact that armageddon will come.
Cool stuff, but in this case, it seems closer that the ignorance of people is the real main “antagonist” and the legion is just the motivating plot device?
@@Papriqa Yeah. The main conflict of the story is the group trying to spread the word of the armageddon. (Its a note that armageddon is not immediately known about, it is something that is found out to happen from a discovery) The legion is mainly a physical combat aspect, bc this is an adventure story.
For mistake 2. I feel like if you look into anime, Attack on Titan has fight scenes of both kinds. Ok, to be fair I feel like it has no real "villains" as well. And that's why most of the times the underdog is the one you shall feel bad for when they get wrecked. Wether they are the antagonists or they aren't
Thank you for this advice, it genuinely helps a lot. I'm new to writing since I am a 3D animator, but I always had brilliant ideas that I wanted to bring to life, I'm self taught, but I understand mistakes and cliches from media, movies, book, games, etc all the time. I'm always looking for sound advice and help in writing characters, at least I don't have to worry about getting an illustrator/animator! At the moment, I'm writing a fantasy story with a load of challenges the character faces, however I want the overall villan who later in the story becomes the main antagonist to be a very special character. I wrote fear as a villan, an unstoppable, unreasonable, unpredictable Lich ravaged by madness who absorbs the physical mass, memories, and skills of his victims. I wanted him to look like a Chimera of wild animals with humanoid features. A bipedal rotting corpse who only speaks in the frightened whispers of his victims. He whispers so deafeningly loud people's ears bleed, and the very grass he walks is absorbed into his horrid frame. A skull of a horse with horns of deer, moose, ox, dragons, and the like grafted utop. The upper body and arms of an ogre, the legs of a wolf, and the bony tail of a crocodile. His archaic frame is impossibly large at 30 or so feet when he stands on two legs. The blue, necrotic skin barley clings to the countless bones that warp and morph under his skin. He commands dead flesh, he does not raise armies, he is no necromancer. For example, later in the story, he will sever his own arm and grow another as the severed arm morphs into a centipede of ribs and spines. His new arm will be that of a mighty dragon, clad in metalic scales that he uses as a shield. A long bony spike protrudes from his forearm as he greedily plunges it into the skull of his victim, killing them and absorbing their strength, he takes great sadistic pleasure in this. As a Lich, he thrives off of fear, and purposefully torments his victims to savor the taste of fear. Despite the cliche, his main goal is to gain enough souls to be worthy to make a single wish at the heart of the world. All who hear his wish are mortified, shaking uncontrollably, tears stream violently down their cheeks, yet not a sound escapes them, only shudders and whimpers, their faces solemn and in shock, they heard something so foul and truly evil, they connot comprehend it. The Lich, to me, is a very basic character, but it is his adaptability, primal and animalistic nature, yet unprecedented intelligence and sadistic strategey that makes him spontaneous and mysterious. He never has the same voice twice, and his serpentine movements are replaced with predatory heaves and low growls, pus and foam always drips from his mouth and nose, and he does not roar. He hunts with stealth, despite his large size, he is beyond silent, birds do not sing in his presence, insects do not chirp, wind ceases. The silence is key for knowing he is nearby. His wish is never known, and his reasoning remains unspoken yet truly evil. His command over his flesh allows him to shapeshift and blend in as an animal or a person, but should anyone gaze into his eyes, they'll see more than one soul within, all in torment. He is a very basic yet complex character, I definitely need help! Of course, I cant show you WHAT he looks like (its cool as shit, years of anatomy classes really paid off) nor can I give the more complex examples (because its a youtube comment, not a book) I wish I knew ways of making him less shallow, or at least gaining feedback. This is more of a basic description rather than an introduction, which I have not written in this comment, and I wont because its a comment. Y'know, if you even read this far you basically read a chapter, honestly. So, assuming you're still reading, you are either interested, bored, have nothing else better to do, or have experience and want to help this fledgling writer. I'll stop yapping, but please give me some advice if you have any, reader!
Very interesting and thought provoking video! It gave me a lot to reflect about with my own villain (who is the father to one of the protagonists) and works as both a dark mirror and sort of anti-villain where his sympathetic nature comes from trying to balance his desire to be a father with his vision of how the galaxy should be, the latter being where his villainous nature comes into play.
I reach a point where I come closer and closer to consider actually writing my story. Please do more of these videos! I have a rough outline for the plot and some inportant scenes. But I need more theory to develope characters and dialogue.
This video is extremely helpful on revising characters, thank you. I'd also add Crowley from Supernatural as the perfect Shapeshifter type Antagonist. His overall arch is him going from this spineless, oppurtunistic Devil, To selfless hero. But during this arch, he is both a reliable ally due to his ideology as being truthful while making deals, but also a menacing villain because he still guns for himself. Until he has absolutely everything he ever wanted, at which point he is redeemed by sacrificing himself for greater good.
Oh my god, the story I am working on has a total of 5 characters that work as antagonists in the grand scheme of things, and they all are a different archetype in the 5 archetypes you mentioned. I feel proud of myself man 😊
@@waddledee8387 Only when he wants to. To quite an excerpt from _Men At Arms_ : 'The Patrician heard him thump the wall outside. Vimes wasn't aware, but there were a number of barely perceptible dents in the wall outside the Oblong Office, their depths corresponding to his emotional state at the time. By the sound of it, this one would need the services of a plasterer. ... Vimes seemed in a suitable emotional state. With any luck, the orders would have the desirable effect.' So yes, Vetinari can be antagonistic, but usually only in his aim of manipulating someone (often Vimes) to do something he wants done, but can't explicitly order.
To me Homelander kind of relates to a quote, though I don't recall who said it... "To the villain's perspective, they are the hero of their story.." Homelander is a very dark and dangerous character, who is more villain than hero, but in his mind, he is the hero.
What’s your thoughts on stories where the main two characters, at conflict with each other, could be labelled as protagonist/antagonist depending on your perspective?
shoot i think that's the hole i've dug for myself (except badly). i have 3 characters and at any given point i'm not even sure who's supposed to be the bad guy. >__< How is yours set up?
@@JhadeSagrav Broadly, Its a bit of a civil war between a young ruler who wants to bring democratic reform to a absolutist monarchy, and a revolutionist who wants to overthrow the absolutist monarchy with democracy. They have the same goal, just different perspectives, and obviously, one has to defeat the other.
Question we need to ask: Is a anti hero a character with negative traits and virtues who seeks a good goal And is an anti-villain someone with good morals but a bad goal? I’m getting very confused of the difference and I used to think I understood it well😅
@YellowXylophon I like what your describing, but that clashes painfully with the examples he gives here. Magneto totally works, but their is no way Thanos qualifies as an anti-villan. He's a manipulative psychopath who wants to bang death itself (in the comics), or control the entire plane of existance so that he can get his rocks off killing half of it (in the movies). Preventing any desrtuction was never anything more than Thanos' maddened excuse to justify his nonsense, the movies themselves MAKE THAT POINT. Theirs nothing "anti-villan" about Thanos. Their is literally nothing in his actual practiced themes, traits, goals, virtues or values that is anything but manipulative and repulsive.
Thank you for making this video. As someone who is making a JRPG, this was very insightful. I'll definitely keep this in mind when designing Schwarzritter (villain turned ally/protagonist's love interest), Lucien (false ally), Kronos (dark mirror), and Aion (force of nature). You just earned yourself a subscriber.
Thanos is not an antivillain. His goals are not laudible, even if his motivation is _arguably_ to "help." That kind of "help" is not enough to make you an anti-villain. Thanos doesn't even have a good point. Not only is he mathematically incorrect about the nature of resources and population, but even if he were, the Infinity Gauntlet would have let him double the resources of the universe just as easily as he halved the population. And he could have done it again and again if needs be. Thanos is a delusional villain, at best, and a true monster in more reasonable interpretations. He justifies his omnicidal urge in a way that lets him convince himself he's the misunderstood good guy, but nothing about his plan, his methods, nor even his goal is laudible enough to give him the anti-villain's shroud of "at least he meant well." Vetinari is actually a good example of an anti-villain. Whether he's aiding or opposing or manipulating the protagonist(s), Lord Vetinari is _achieving good ends_ by his seemingly vile means. But, unlike an anti-hero, he's doing it in the ROLE of a villain. Moreover, he also uses good ends to achieve his means, while again cloaking it all in the aura of villainy.
Well said. Thanos is definitely not an anti-villian. He is a well realized Malthusian nut job. As you said, bad at math, bad at prudence, and bad at choosing goals.
One of my favorite forms of antagonists in stories are the ones you don’t really know are the antagonist until further along in the story, or you start off thinking they aren’t the bad guy.
@@erykjankowski6152 difficulty to kill doesn’t have an effect on the archetype of the villain. For example, if the protagonist has a magical weapon that can easily kill hurricanes, but the plot leads to a hurricane opposing the protagonist, then you could see that hurricane as an antagonist in the force of nature archetype. Especially in the earlier Harry Potter books, Voldemort can be viewed as a force of nature as there’s really no reasoning with him, he just wants to complete his goals.
It doesn't matter, if you can reason with him or not. Force of nature is unstoppable. It doesn't decide to kill thousands, it just happens and no one can do anything about it. Calling a single person, who isn't even that strong, a force of nature is beyond exaggerating
David wasn't even a champion before his fight, he was just a former shepherd who took on the challenge because he was confident God would be on his side.
In my book I am having trouble making the antagonist compelling, since it is the source of my protagonist's trauma that drives the plot I was thinking about making them a queer-coded villain, like in an old renaissance era Disney movie, making the antagonist feminine, flamboyant and campy male character. To balance it out, my anti heroine protagonist, who is a butch tomboy, is explicitly queer, even though the book features a heterosexual romance with a male love interest. I am someone who identifies as pansexual, so I made my main protagonist pansexual as well Edit: Because my protagonist is not meant to be a good person, and grows more corrupted and antagonistic themselves near the end of the book, my antagonist has to be a pure evil villain, since thsy must be far worse than the protagonist
tip: make them fun. disney villains often have little going for them in terms of backstory, but they’re compelling because the audience has fun watching them. alternatively, make them sexy. works every time
Thanks Jed. Your content is helping me put the pieces of my own fantasy world and story together. I’ve never written a book- boy is it hard to actually nail down a story that goes from beginning to end, let alone have it actually be any good. 😅
your identity challenges part is very helpful to me. my antagonist is coming along great (anti-villain), but i’m having trouble making the hero keep up. he’s gonna have to choose between his past life (where he would sympathize with the villain) and his current situation and friends (who oppose the villain). add in a little bit of freedom vs security, and moral ambiguity and i think i’ve got a compelling situation. it’s easier for me to make characters when i’ve made the events that shape them
With mistake two I do agree for the most part, but sometimes when the villain starts off weak and pathetic (e.g The spot from spider verse) the audience may just brush it off as a side character, so that when this weak villain becomes a overpowered big bad its a lot more intimidating for the main character and audience (like in spider verse when the spot becomes really strong, he uses miles view of him being weak for motivation)
I always called the "Shapeshifter" a "Anti-Neutral". Because if There is Hero, Villain, and Neutral. And Anti-Hero, and Anti-Villain, I think there should be an Anti-Neutral. And since Neutral is not being on neither side, Anti-Neutral is switching sides.
I am trying to write my own story for the first time and this video pointed out many things that wouldn’t have occurred to me. Something else I’ve noticed on my own when writing a story is the history. Having a mostly developed history, even if you don’t use most of it, would help prevent controversy in the plots.
a great way to do the 'secret bad guy' twist is to have it so that even the turncoat himself doesn't know he's going to turn evil until it's too late. Not because of mind control or something, but rather because the circumstance changes in such a way where the character's morals become compromised. The partner's loved one is held hostage or he's been blackmailed - or perhaps some unavoidable tragedy befalls him. He acts out of desperation, despair or disillusionment, without needing to have some big setup because we already understand his character's rationale perfectly. Examples include Harvey Dent from The Dark Knight, or Aribeth de Tylmarande from Neverwinter Nights
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Lord of the Rings is actually really weird in many ways if you think about it. The main antagonist isn't even in the book as a character (Sauron). He just "sits" there on top of the tower and order things about and look. While the Ring, an object, is a much more active force around the main characters. It's pretty unusual and weird. But good though. :)
Is Sauron not one with the ring? Meaning he's literally everywhere all at once?
@@Darth_Bateman Kind of. The ring has a part of Sauron's power, and he uses it to control the other ring bearers.
But the ring has some sort of will on its own.
@@Darth_Bateman yeah no that's not how it works. He put his power into it but he can't sense where it is
unless you put it on. sauron in the films is portrayed as the flaming eye itself but book sauron isn't. In the book it's said he has a body specifically a "hand that looms over the world." For obvious reasons this
Is too vague for a visual medium so
They changed him to big flaming eye on top of tower.
That is unless you take the hobbit films in account where the eye kinda morphed into his body ? I dunno everything with sauron can get very confusing.
@@Darth_BatemanKind of, it is more so the spirit of Sauron, it doesn't have his personality or wish to do good.
Also worth noting, Sauron fell in the same way the ring corrupts people, he wanted to do good, to make the world more efficient and peaceful, but wasn't willing to accept the risk of failure, so he sided with Morgoth so he could gain more power.
I actually have a saying that goes along with that outline point: "writing is kind of like parkour. If you know where you want to land, it's a lot easier to plan your route."
damn
That's actually a perfect quote
That is similar to habit 2 in The 7 Habits of Highly Effective People by Stephen Covey. Habit 2 is, "Begin with the end in mind."
@@elliottdavid7405that's what I thought when I saw this
Yeah? My saying is if you have a deep embodied understanding of your premise, your characters and the thing that powers your voice as it applies to this story - that will take you to whatever the landing is going to be, and what is required is not planning a route but cultivating an balanced attitude of exploration, of listening and intuitive decisionmaking, that’s been run through the filter of your own artistic sensibility, accumulated life experience, and instinct for story and more importantly through whatever, hopefully deep yearning or impulse in you that drives the emerging insight. The act of creative writing is a sensual moment in time drawing many complexities together guided by the necessity of voice and the emerging wisdom that voice is going to simultaneously create and unveil. The moment of writing is tactical - not strategic. Art is specific and sensual. Tactics are modes of engagement what you deploy in the moment in conversation with the circumstances of the moment. That dialogue facilitates flow, which facilitates creativity. Strategy however tends to be general and impersonal and summarising. Plot is just a pattern. It is the story spine but not the story essence. Voice and true storytelling will produce it in an organic way, as a byproduct of the main process. Storytelling on this view is discovery informed and guided more or less unconsciousless by processes in the writer and embodied craft - not deliberate contrivance. Living story does not emerge from the places in your brain that constructs blueprints. Internalise all that as craft and forget about it in the moment of creation. The “landing” is your moment of attaining the elixir. If you know the where and the why and the how of it from the start, chances are you are not doing anything new or surprising to you or to other people. Writing is creating knowledge. It’s just like science that way. If you know the answer before the research project it’s either because that research has already been done by numerous other people and so is irrelevant or it’s simply a reflection of your own initial biases. Creative writing is sensing that there is some emerging landing, and committing the jump in flow so you understand the landing IN THE PROCESS OF DOING IT and NOT in a process of preconceiving it and debating every detail in advance. How to prepare for that jump: You live, you research, you internalise craft and technique to where you don’t think of it, develop and listen for voice and necessity, you practice managing yourself in the moment of doing it, your aiming device is an embodied feeling and intuition, not a map of the area where x marks the spot.
Boromir isn't really a false ally, his character arc just led him from protagonist to pseudo antagonist, because while he attacked Frodo he died for his allies
I would list Boromir as an anti-hero and Scarlett O'Hara as anti-heroine. Selfish motivations for what they imagine are morally good ends.
I wouldnt say that Boromir is either any villian. He was just happy to be part of the fellowship of the ring, but he had the weakest resistance on getting the ring to himself, so he was fighting internally in wanting to take the ring from the makn protoganist. It wasent, because he was bad guy, but because he could not resist his will to take the ring for himself, like the race of men, expect Aragorn cant, because they are attracted to power. Then Boromir dies heroic death fighting, that is propably good thing, when he has so strong will to take the ring for himself.
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How did Boromir think his selfish motivations are morally good ends. Some people just cant resist their lust or want to take power, while they are part of the good guys, so that makes them take immoral action and technically become the bad guy by wanting to take the ring from the main protoganist, because he cannot resist his lust for the ring. Didnt Boromir in his death still say he was sorry about wanting to take the ring from Frodo and that he could not control his lust, that made him look like bad guy, when he actually was good guy excited to kill orcs with rest of the fellowship of the ring.
@@jout738 "How did Boromir think his selfish motivations are morally good ends."
I don't remember if he said this in the movie, but Boromir wanted to use the ring's power to defend Gondor against Mordor. He didn't want that power for himself, but to lead his people.
@@jout738 He didn't desire power, he just believed there was no hope in destroying the ring and believed the only way his nation and people would survive was by using the weapon of the enemy against them. Films don't quite portray it as well, but in the book he wasn't even a real member of the fellowship. His plan was just to tag along until they made it to the Gondor border from where he'd go back home. All of this of course making him really, really weak to the call of the ring and after spending too much time with it, he was eventually overcome by its manipulative powers and tried to seize it for just a short moment before immediately realising his mistake and regretting it for what little was left of his life. If he was ever an antagonist, it was for maybe 5 minutes. If anything, the ring was the antagonist and Boromir simply a victim of it.
My main issue with mistake 6 is that sometimes you just want a simple villain with simple goals, like big jack horner or dr eggman. These guys have the simple goals of get power and in the case of eggman make a wonderland of his own vision. These characters are well loved despite their simple goals, and its because of these simple goals that they work as characters, ones that are comedic yet still a force to be respected. My issue with 7 is that an antagonist can't always be opposite to their protagonist, particularly when you have multiple characters in a traveling party, because the smart guy going against someone who outdoes them with their tech is not gonna bother the big smash guy too much, so that's often hard to balance (you can also do unique things with unbalanced rivals, like big smash guy against a similarly stong guy with much higher intelligence, an outbalanced situation which requires smart thinking from big smash guy to outdo the smart guy with tech and muscles
That is fare reason.
That’s an excellent point and I think this comes down to the difference between an antagonist and a villain. Because they’re not the same thing.
The antagonist is a force that acts contrarily to the protagonist. Whereas the villain is a character that opposes the hero.
So in some cases you can have a story where the main antagonist is not the villain.
You brought up Jack Horner and he’s a great example of this. While being the main villain of the story, death is the primary antagonist for Puss in Boots (our protagonist)
What I feel like is that there are some villains to just serve as surface-level villains while some other villains are more complex and interesting.
Doctor Doom is a good antagonist for the Fantastic Four because with his personal genius, technology, and magic, he is almost a match for any of them in the area that they specialize in.
it really depends on where you want your focus to land
jack horner works well because hes sharing the stage with like 4-5 other character arcs which are all antagonists with puss, jack being simple not lets other characters breathe, but also lets him shine *as* a simple character because the narrative foils already exist. He can be *pure* theatrics without losing anything
Your antagonist making a mistake because they are angry, or simply shortsighted, is a perfectly acceptable reason to have them make a mistake that's obvious to the audience because the audience is more omniscient than the antagonist.
"Without a strong antagonist your story is going to be boring"-- this is only true if your story is about a character overcome a particular opponent. Stories where the protagonist's struggles are either against themselves (disease, curse, etc.) or against environmental threats don't actually need a strong antagonist to tell a compelling story. In fact, some character journeys are not really conducive to having one big bad that they have some deep-seeded personal animosity against and they are the underdog against because the character might be constantly traveling and there is no time to build up such a relationship so it would feel awfully shoe-horned in. You are limiting the kinds of stories you can write by insisting that the struggles of the main character have to be embodied in a particular antagonist.
Actually the statement holds. An Antagonist does not need to be a villain or even a character. The antogonist is simply the opposing force that creates conflict for the protagonist. In some stories it could be something like teenage angst. So yes you do need a strong antagonist, just not necessarily a strong villain.
honestly. you need a strong *conflict* (and the conflict only needs to be strong enough to challenge the mc)
Yep. I like to write short war stories with some sort of fantasy element. I've noticed that none of them have an antagonist. The closest thing to an antagonist may be an anonymous enemy soldier that they are forced to kill.
There's no evil overlord, general, dictator, evil officer or monarch to defeat. It's all about the horrors of war, the "band of brothers" (and "sisters" in some of them), and how soldiers can give their lives for whatever reason other than "honor and fatherland".
Also lots of cool action because I don't want to be depressing and boring.
I like to read fantasy novels about a heroic protagonist overcoming a personal flaw or illness...
Read the title of the video, it is talking about fantasy novels - not all novels
I was thinking this but you put it in better words than i could@@robertdrash1105
Magneto actually fits into both Anti-Villain and Shapeshifter categories. The movies constantly had him become a friend to the heroes then turn on them.
Magneto does that quite often anyways
This made me realize most mooks are basically forces of nature, they're more of a light drizzle than a storm though
What is a mook?
@@eow4317 Common term referring to very minor and weak antagonists who serve a bigger one, aka minions.
@@eow4317I thought it was that one alien enemy from Earthbound lol
Haha😂
The Evil Overlord List is extremely helpful and hilarious. It's fun to see how many clichés and oblivious villains we have in a lot of movies and books, and how easily are they fixed lol
It's a great resource
Look up the short story "A Woman's Work" by Tanya Huff. Queen Arrabel is an Evil Overlord who lives (and doesn't die) by the Evil Overlord List. She's ruthless, genre-savvy, and adored by her citizens and her troops because she treats them fairly and actually makes their lives better. She thinks her son is a romantic idiot and not really cut out to be an heir, and when she discovers the youngest princess (and sole survivor of the royal family) of a recently conquered kingdom has a similar mindset as her and agrees to marry the prince, she fully expects them to have a very vigorous love life to produce a child as soon as possible, after which her son will probably suffer a highly unlikely and unfortunate fatal accident. And she's good with that, since it means she'll have a competent heir.
That sound absolutely awesome lol@@keith6706
@@keith6706 I mean shouldn't she wait to see if the grand child is competent? If not the son and wife could try again until a kid pops up who has potential
Also useful if you intentionally want to write a silly story where the antagonist does all those things xD
I love the idea of an antagonist that basically has a copy of the Evil Overlord List, or a fictional equivalent, that they constantly consult.
You can do a lot of interesting things with that, just be sure not to be cynically deconstruct all the fun out of a potential story, if the story is meant to be fun. Don't use _or_ subvert tropes blindly, but purposefully. Sometimes the best stories are the ones that _do_ feature well-worn tropes, but remember to give them compelling reasons for them to exist in _that_ particular story.
I did something like that using Dracula. Where it was less they were consulting a list and more learning from their mistakes
@@michaelestrada2772 I think you've either misread the comment, or else you're replying to the wrong comment
This was about the villain consulting a book or a list of advice. It's not about the hero consulting with the villain
@@douglaswolfen7820 thanks
You should try PGTE (Pratical Guide to Evil) then, its a lovely deconstruction of storytelling tropes with an Anti-Villain protagonist.
Basically a huge part of the "magic system" of the setting is that it rationalizes storytelling tropes into it, and if the characters can figure out the greater "narrative" that is developing (which is enforced by some conceptual gods of good and evil) they can manipulate it to get literal plot armor.
The MC has basically every heroic trait, personality and backstory you'd expect, but the "Villains" got scarily competent at stamping "Heroes" out before they become problems (like they're following the evil overlord's list), so she decides to join them because while going the usual heroic route would kinda work out in the end, it would cost far far too for her people, its better to try to sabotage the Villains from the inside.
But if you decide to play for the other team, well... you dont get to keep the heroic plot armor or moral high ground.
Its a great story
Voldermort, Snape are also dark reflection of Harry, they were all kids who found home at Hogwart but their stories turned out completely different from each other due to the love and suppport from other people arround them along their journey
Snape is the true hero of the Harry Potter series. His redemption comes at the end. Harry was just a vehicle to get him there.
If Voldemort counts as a force of nature, then my primary antagonist also counts as a force of nature. And an ally being replaced by an imposter would be a "false ally" archetype
I would replace Voldemort with death from puss in boots
Imho what can be fabtastic if done well is the rival/ third power. You have protag, antag and someone whose goals are at odds with BOTH. They can be either secret or in the open, or hilariously hidden in plain sight. The goal will be obviously not to have a copout ending where with no foreshadowing the third power snatches the mcguffin at the end or kills the antagonist.
I'd split his first category into force of nature and pure evil. Force of nature is something more broad, the classic one being death itself. It's not a person, with individual needs or desires. It's not even evil.
@@trafalgarlaw8373 Yeah. A giant freaking tsunami, unless clearly shown to the reader otherwise, doesn't have intentions, emotions, goals or morality.
@@destroyerinazuma96 Came back to rewatch and saw that I got some comments on my comment, cool.
To clarify, in the story I am working on, the "Big Bad" is an Emperor that the world thought was slain in a coup... 200 years ago (nobody knew he is shape shifted dragon who views humanity as his "hoard"). As he slowly recovers, he starts replacing key figures with imposters to prepare for his return to power.
Referring back to David and Goliath; the sling was once the most devastating ranged weapon on the planet, being able to hurl a stone at speed would be a KO even with helmets in some cases, so who really is the underdog, the young boy with the deadly weapon, or his massive target.
The story works well as a way to demonstrate a hidden underdog, or a perception of an underdog, as in reality, it's Goliath who was actually disproportionately armed in that fight
Just so. Even today, a simple sling remains an effective and deadly weapon. It's not as useful in combat as a firearm, but its simplicity and the availability of munition are advantages that modern weapons do not have. Furthermore, despite the many major advances in weaponry, infantry protection is still not capable of stopping a fist-sized rock moving at over a hundred forty kilometres per hour.
Its a slingshot beo
@@ussinussinongawd516 A slingshot is a different weapon. David used a sword and a sling, not a slingshot.
@@ussinussinongawd516slingshots can still kill small animals, but also you're wrong
Pretty sure David also took out bears and lions as a sheperd, and his skills were all self taught. Combine that with his unshakeable will via his faith, it was Goliath that honestly had the disadvantage.
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Heh, Codex Alera 101 😂
When I heard False Ally I immediately thought of Luke Castallen from percy jackson
Ethan too
i was planning to do a mix of dark mirror, the antivillain, and the shapeshifter
This character will be very close to the mc, and have a similar goal. And instead of introducing this character as the main antagonist upfront, instead i planned to make it so this person has tried every mean and method to bring his goal humanely before he falls.
The reason for his fall is the death of multiple of his comrades which drive him to the bring and desperate realization: there is only true equality in death.
Eventually driving the story and becoming the main antagonist. This character tries his new immoral ways to bring about equality: Death to all or, make them band together despite their differences to face a common enemy.
He then flip flops from being an ally to enemy. from spectator to actor.
I know its a lot but its way more simple when explained like this
That sounds really cool!
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love it ❤
In regards to the "Dark Mirror" villain, I noticed that there is something of a "Dark Mirror" in all villains. I'll explain:
They can be a "mirror" in one of two ways. One: they reflect the hero by having certain similarities to the hero. As explained in the video, this is to illustrate what the hero would be like if they went down the dark path. Two: they are the exact opposite of the hero. When you raise your right hand, your reflection raises what should be his left hand. Everything in your mirror image is flipped; it's the exact opposite.
I had noticed this was a common trait of comic book villains after watching a documentary called "Necessary Evil: the Villains of DC Comics." For example: Superman enemies General Zod and Lex Luthor. Zod is an example of a villain who reflects the hero. Both are from Krypton and have similar powers, but Zod is a twisted version of Superman. Lex Luthor, meanwhile is an example of the villain being the exact opposite of the hero (a common trait for arch-villains, as pointed out by Mr. Glass in "Unbreakable"). Superman possesses incredible powers (flight, strength, speed, heat vision, etc.), and he defends those who cannot defend themselves. Luthor, on the other hand, is a mortal man who relies on his intellect, rather than superpowers, to fight his enemies, and his actions are self-serving.
I then noticed that this is common outside of comic books, as well. Darth Vader from "Star Wars" and Rene Belloq from "Indiana Jones" are examples of villains who reflect certain characteristics of the hero. Meanwhile, "Alaadin" provides us with an example of the villain being the exact opposite of the protagonist (Alaadin is a street urchin with a heart of gold, while Jafar is a person with a very high social standing who is obsessed with gaining as much power as possible). Regardless of how you define a "mirror image", there is something of it in all villains, and, as pointed out in the video, this helps bring out the virtues and the character growth of the protagonist.
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You can make an antagonist and a protagonist fight each other without conflicting goals,
if you make the real antagonist be misunderstanding itself.
They each fight to achieve their own goals while they misinterpret the actions of the other, making them see each other as a threat to their own goal.
If this misunderstanding is realized, the antagonist and the protagonist suddenly have a common enemy, that they defeat by making peace with each other.
But if the misunderstanding is never acknowledged: You've got yourself a tragedy.
The audience knows the solution to the conflict, but they must watch as that solution is never achieved by the characters.
A story like this can have the purpose of teaching the audience a moral lesson (for example).
The T-1000 from Terminator 2 is a classic Force of Nature. This also highlights a compelling way of using the Force of Nature: have it be initially unstoppable. The protagonist cannot "win" against it at all, and must escape or "play around" it until they discover a way to decisively defeat it. This averts the staleness of the Force because it puts the emphasis back on how the protagonist reacts and grows in response.
Another fun thing to do with the Force of Nature is to present it initially as mindless or robotic, and later reveal that it is in fact intelligent and presumably malevolent. Readers/audiences naturally see a Force of Nature as animalistic or elemental, so this can be a very effective twist or shock. This can also be used to shift the balance back in favour of the antagonist after allowing the protagonist a brief victory, by showing that it has learned how to counter the protagonist's method of defeating it.
another example of "the shapeshifter" is Hondo Onaka from Star Wars the clone wars.
Omg that’s exactly what iv’e been thinking too! Also an example of an anti hero is so gerrera
Probably one of the most entertaining characters on the show.
Is Hisoka from HxH also shape shifter
@@tasiashiraori I was just about to mention him and yes, definitely. He fits the mold more than some of his examples like Snape
Are you reading my mind? I've just started to make the "mood wall" of one of my antagonists today. I don't know how familiar you are with it, it's basically about that I collect pictures from the internet that are connected to the character I'm developing and then I put them in a Word document. It helps me to feel the vibes the character gives off, to keep track of what interests them and if I haven't figured out their name yet, it makes it easier to choose one that fits their personality. Your timing is perfect, I have her pretty much figured out but help is always welcome.
Thanks so much for this, Jed! I'm only a sixteen year old girl with a powerful love for books and sees these kinds of issues in stories I've read or watched. I am currently writing my second draft of my first ever book, and it's always nice to have instructional videos like yours. I just I hope I can write something great like what you're describing.
Good luck!
My favourite villain is Silco from Arcane. Never played League but the shoe gripped me. He's unusually wholesome, evil, and he's so.. human. Its beautiful
Spot on! I selfishly use your videos to analyze my work. Your (what I'm referring to as) Mentorship, is a great asset to me and my work. Thank you for that.
So simple yet so important for a story - great acting by the way my man! 9:56
Crowley from Supernatural is another great example of a Shapeshifter character.
Every antagonist in that shows dark era (everything after Season 5) has shapeshifters because they forgot how to write actually evil villains.
I keep coming back to your videos. The information you present is always well-thought out and organized. Brilliant and intelligent and insightful. Thank you for taking the time to make these helpful videos, Jed! God bless.
The most underrated and the greatest villain I've ever seen that nobody is talking about is Silco from Arcane. His motivation, complexity, goals and everything was perfect.
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Tbh, in that series the saddest death was the villain's death unlike any other story out there
I'm working on a false ally on a personal revenge arc. My antagonist seems like an underdog, but that's because they're operating under false colors, hiding important abilities and facts. The MCs think they're up against a Sauron or maybe a Saruman, but in fact, it's this small-seeming person who has been around the edges of the main story all along.
Writing under this philosophy is super harmfull for your story, the labels come after, now you have to focus in creating characters that portray your themes well.
That sounds cool. Good luck!
@@ricky.t.1658 I've already created the characters. I'm just describing the character who best fit the plot. I'm writing a kind of fantasy detective story. So I started with the "crime." Working out from that, my antagonist becomes the one with the means, motive and opportunity to have done it.
@@celebenarinya Thank you!
@@jenfries6417 then that’s alright, are you publishing it?
Great work, Jed! These videos are so ingaging and as someone who sometimes struggles with destractability, I definitely appreciate it. You are always changing the focal length of the camera, or gesturing, or showing important information on a separate screen with a moving background. Top marks, I love it!
Thanks Heather! You can thank my editor Andrew for all his excellent work with that :)
I was worried about my story, but now I am able to see my antagonists and villains a bit more clearly. I now see I have many antagonists and two clear villians and one force of nature that all of them support and nurture, so now I need to up my interactions and clashes with them and my protagonists. Great video!
An antagonist I've been working on begins as a mentor figure to the MC after bonding over the discrimination that comes with their crystal cores (their source of mana) compared to the versions that are more common among the populace.
The MC eventually discovers that their entire friendship was a facade, as all the antagonist desires is to harvest their rare crystal core for his schemes. The reason for the roundabout approach is due the nature of their crystal cores, as the elemental nature of the MC's core is the antithesis of the Antagonist's own core.
The antagonist is later revealed to be attempting to break the Seals on the Calamities, ancient dragons that embody the Primal forces of the world. As an avatar of another ancient dragon, the antagonist plans to conquer and dominate the other dragons for revenge of long overdue transgressions.
Oooh, a twist villain, great! I'm working on one as well, although she's not as powerful as yours. She's a queen who is known for her generous nature, but actually she's narcissistic, and she only gives money to the poor because she loves when people are cheering for her. She's very clever and she was also quite pretty in her younger years, but her cruelty, vanity and selfishness ruins the picture. This is only getting worse, because she's now in her 50s, meaning that she's getting older and older, which she can't accept. She buys herself expensive clothes, jewelry, anything to make her look desirable, so much that it causes an economy crisis in her country. Still, this rather makes her appear ridiculous, which only frustrates her, ruining the situation even more. She has a 25 years old husband (married due to political reasons), who is a genius engineer, but thanks to her constantly criticising, gaslighting and emasculating him he is very insecure. His character arc is about how he realises with the help of the MC that this isn't okay, gains confidence in himself, breaks free, and later he'll be the love interest for the MC.
This sort of reminds me of the villain in Tales of the Abyss.
One note though: why befriend him for so long? Why not just be 'a thief in the night' and take it right away? I think it's important to make sure there isn't a plothole there. Just a tip! :) and maybe you've already worked it out, I haven't read your work ofcourse, haha.
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In the setting, crystal cores first begin as cloudy and opaque, but when a practitioner of magic refines themselves through their studies and conquer tribulation do their crystals adopt a more desirable precious gem-like quality.
The deeper hue and transparency directly translate to the purity and power of the core.
The false friendship is for the sole purpose to cultivate the best quality possible for the antagonist's purposes.
Your bad guy is too evil!!! Make him more human!!! Make him sad that he betrayed his friend but too driven to stop himself from dragon revenge!!!
I wish I could hug you for making the evil overlord handbook recommended reading.
"I will not shoot the bearer of bad news. Rather, I will personally thank the messenger and give a handsome tip. Worse than something going wrong, is something going wrong and nobody telling me about it"
My outline for the current project I'm having fun with: MC starts at new job and signs a contract for a year. Meets older unfriendly and grumpy co-worker. Realizes job is highly dangerous and very unfair. Can't leave. Task, survive until the contract runs out. Toss in monsters and deaths in between. See what happens. Make it fun sometimes. In the end, MC understands the other guy he thought badly of in the beginning. End. That's pretty much as far as my outlines go. XD They are generally a little more defined than this, but usually, I have a vague idea, that fleshes itself out as I write.
Outline of my story: MC unwillingly becomes one of the rulers of their world. Is unsure about this at first but becomes more accustomed to the idea with the help from parental figure and advisor. Parental figure dies with the suspect being a mysterious masked figure. MC looks for help from other rulers and tracks down masked figure. Masked figure is revealed to be another ruler and says not to be the killer and knows the true culperate.
MC goes to advisor and reveals he knows it was the advisor that killed his parental figure.
MC and advisor have a battle and advisor reveals he killed parental figure to have more influence over MC. there is a moment where MC tries to help advisor not die but advisor declines
Advisor dies.
MC finds a new home with other rulers. End.
That's the super oversimplified version.
As long as there’s some juicy internal conflict I’m sure it’ll turn out great! I’ve read stories where they get so stuck in survival-mode without a reason of why they want to survive or a goal beyond it that I fail to care about the main character haha :)
Outline of my story: mc lives alone in the woods, never interacting with anyone. He finds a mysterious bridge and crosses it, ending up in another forest which he begins to explore. He climbs a mountain to survey the land, and sees that the bridge has disappeared suddenly. The river underneath it is freezing and impossible to cross. He desperately searches for hours for something to save him , finally finding a small house which he enters and falls unconscious in. He wakes up with a fever, and meets the owner of the house, an old man who tells him that the MC is one of four races. He explains who the bridge was built by, and that the MC needs to go on a journey to find the person who built the bridge and get it restored so he can return to his land home.
That's only the first two chapters, but yeah, I think it's turning out well.
@@cox2060 ooh I like that premise.
@@cox2060 Sounds interesting. It has potential to be really original. Depends what you do with it, of course. Just like with all stories. :)
Video game series called the Tales franchise, in one release, Tales of Vesperia, had a very good example of the anti-villain for the main antagonist. First he's met very early in the story by the heroes, and he's pretty much just seen as a lone mercenary contemplating something at the time. As the story goes on, he's more and more frequently crossing paths with the main cast, and it's from him they learn much about a threat to the world that is being caused by the more visible villains/threat, which short version will result in the worldly elements of earth, water, wind, and fire raging out of control and destroying all life. He is even the one who teaches the main hero of the story, Yuri, how to be a much greater swordsman and lost magic skills that vanished from common knowledge long ago.
The heroes of the story eventually seek to bring the elements back into balance by summoning and enlisting the aid of elemental guardian spirits to watch over said elements, while also doing what they can to curb the tide of the technology and magic of the world that is causing the imbalance in the first place. Meanwhile the antagonist, while initially hopeful for their efforts, finally gives up on the idea, deciding the only way to prevent the world's destruction is for humanity to be gone from it, along with all their misuse of magic and technology that caused the initial imbalance. And even with that extreme of a view, when the confrontation at the grand finale, it still manages to not read as "hero vs. villain," but rather as clashing of heroes of differing ideals.
It's part of the reason why Vesperia is considered one of the best games of the series by the dedicated fanbase. A lot of people who came in on that hype after the fact don't see it the same, but most of them also don't finish the game because of what is very dated combat gameplay compared to modern games of the same series.
Saving this for my D&D campaign
Been looking for something like this to double check myself. I’m not a book writer but I am working on a fantasy setting for TTRPG play.
I really liked what you had to say on being smart as the villain. Not just laying plans, but asking are these well thought out plans.
Also how do they see themselves is something I always have liked in writing. Delving into the mind of others is always fun.
For myself I really enjoy nailing down that my secondary villain and his followers, who have absolute loyalty toward the villain, would tell the players “you are not our hero’s. This is not your story, it is ours. You are the opposition to progress, a hurdle for us to overcome.” Seeing true devotion to a cause you do not agree to be correct can be interesting as you almost feel bad that someone so twisted can be so wholly devoted.
I'm working on a story. Your videos have been very helpful.
This helped a lot, I was having trouble deciding how to implement this Father-Son antagonist duo that eventually fight and split apart, and your video helped a ton
I love that you used David and Goliath as an example!
Yeah actually the whole bible is an underdog story kinda. Israel are this weak and broken people who consistently mess up, but manage to somehow overcome empires, wars and constant adversity for centuries with the help of their God.
this video is incredibly helpful! as someone with literally dozens of antagonists littered throughout several stories, this is a nice partial guide to keeping my writing consistently good even with so many stories and characters
The banana part had me dying 😂😂😂😂😂😂 This guy never fails to make great thumbnails
Haha, the #40 is something every manga/anime needs to learn. Stop "powering up" after the other guy beats you down. Hit them hard and move on. lol. Makes for more dangerous villains that way. And more realistic. (One punch man comes to mind, though he's not a villain).
A lot of that is probably Dragon Ball’s influence. In Dragon Ball it makes sense because most of the characters enjoy a tough fight more than they enjoy winning, ie they intentionally hold back because they believe if they go all out the fight will be over too quickly. One Punch Man actually explores this because the main character’s motivation is actually to find an exciting fight in a world where he one hit kills everything without even trying. It can also work if there’s some sort of drawback for the character, like maybe using the super weapon will guarantee victory but it has limited ammo or making replacement ammo is a huge pain in the butt. Beyond that it’s just about padding to keep the battle exciting for as long as possible. It can also make sense from the antagonist’s point of view if their normal opponents are so weak they don’t need the powered up form (or are likely to break the rule against attacking your opponent while they’re powering up) there’s no point in taking the time to power up.
somtimes i thought of this power up as a "desperation mode" the body goes in. We know Stories where ordinary People did some crazy things out of pure necessity for their own survival (or those they love) if you meant that kind of power up. And if you meant the kind of "i wont use my full power" thing, i think there are points making this valid as well. If they dont want to kill, feel confident as they are, it takes a toll etc. (and somehow it feels so "mean" that its more like something a villain would do, the other comment did a good job too)
Besides, sometimes tropes can be fun if your story allows it, or when there were enough stories where these tropes got subverted and you greet them as an old friend ;)
In Overly Cautious Hero, imho the protag kinda remains consistent insofar that his tactics always are to be as careful as possible and if needed to play dirty. Big spoilers:
He actually drags a world ending boss into another dimension to set things up for the boss to bust the canvas the goddess of war is painting, so that the two get pitted against one another. Protag also uses it to gauge the goddess of war's ace in the whole, which turns out to be the ultimate move the protag ends up planning to use as a nuclear option to defeat the big bad. The kicker is that all this time the protag, who may seem like a munchkin who's after ruthless efficiency and not after being some paragon of justice, that protag turns out to be a grieving father and husband who knows what the big bad is capable of and thus wants to absolutely and irrevocably destroy the big bad to prevent further death.
Catch me writing out and summarising my antagonists in the lens of some of these mistakes to see if I'm on the right track
I'm working on a homebrew D&D campaign, and I'm about to introduce the BBEG. This video just showed up in my algorithm. Very helpful for creating my bad guy. Thank you for the advice.
Counterpoint to number 4: Making an antagonist do a stupid thing can actually further the reader’s understanding of them in certain circumstances. Maybe they make a decision based on emotions instead of based on thought.
Recently, one of my antagonists, who is traveling with the main character, was trying to keep them isolated from that main character’s best friend so he can manipulate them better.
When he finds out said friend is close, in his panic, he basically destroys the area that all 3 characters are in, but puts himself at tremendous risk. It’s not calculated, it’s not smart, and he acknowledges after the fact that it was stupid, but we get to see our antagonist’s desperation to keep our main character isolated driving him to do this stupid thing.
I'm of the mind villains should be allowed to make stupid decisions if it feels true to their character, every character including the antagonist should have flaws. I.e if an antagonist gloats before finishing off the protagonist, you'd have to show that they're arrogant and or over-confident.
Same with your panicking idea, I think it should work so long as you establish your antagonist as someone who's prone to it.
Wow this was really good. After watching this, it is clear to me that much of the trouble my story has given me over the past year is rooted in my antagonist. Now I gotta dig back in! Thank you Jed!
I have issue with the Frodo/sauron thing. Sauron doesn't tempt Fredo. He doesn't know where Frodo is for almost the entirety of the story. That's why he went to war with Gondor. He assumed that's where the ring would be. The ring itself is what tempted Frodo and Boramere. The ring is more like the villain of the book.
Edit: Secondly, Sarumon isn't influenced by Sauron. He wants the ring for himself to take over.
You're wrong about that 2nd one (though kinda right about the 1st). Through the Palantir, Saruman was heavily influenced by Sauron. To what degree and exactly how is never made clear- but Sauron's influence through the stone was stated as such outright.
From what Sauron told Pippin, it sounded like they'd been conspiring together to corrupt the peoples and land.
This video has helped me so damn much!! It's absolutely oozing with great tips that I've been setting my antagonists up against and I've already made them so much better thanks to this video. The fact that you wrote, filmed and edited this all for us to have for free is so amazing and helpful. Thank you
Interesting, I had not considered it like that but I think in terms of villains my story would feature:
- one "force of nature", albeit pretty hidden till late in the story
- a lesser force of nature, more "obvious" threat
- a couple of anti-villains working for the latter, some even showing clear heroic traits but the situation just makes them de facto antagonists
- a character who is both a false ally and a dark mirror to the second main protagonist; "you remind me of a myself, many years ago" (implied, but not understood at the time is "before I forsook my honor")
- a few more false allies/anti-villains, politics is ever a nasty business
- what I had not seen as such until now but what is defo a shapeshifter, albeit overall more dangerous for the antagonists
- the main protagonist herself when she let herself be led astray from the "right" path. Anti-villain?
Maybe I need to leave a bit of room for good guys now :P As often, thank you Jed for all your work and advicer.
lol good guys do help.
Great video! I guess that Loki from the MCU would also be a shapeshifter villain
Luke Castellan from Percy Jackson series is fit for twist villain character and the complex one. Though now that I reread the book one I see a lot of hint there...
One of the best examples of a false ally is in the Lighting Thief By Rick Riordan.
Oooh, I’d kind of say that Morgana from Merlin could be considered an anti-villain in the later seasons. (I liked her wayyyyy more than the protagonist, lol, but that kept me watching. It’s also interesting, because she and Merlin had some similar goals. It did give a lot of moral ambiguity)
I’m using this to help me flesh out my villains for my homebrewed D&D campaign. Thanks for the advice.
My villain seems to be a combination of false ally, dark mirror and anti villain.
Not sure if a combination is ok or should he only have 1 of those villain traits?
Kind of boring advice from a non-professional. But why do you write? To express yourself or tell a unique story I assume, so do what you want as long as you feel like it fits.
Edit:Fixed a typo
I think the combination is fine, since we can already see from it that a certain conflict, disagreement about a solution is going to escalate into an open confrontation. The question is which aspect of those three is the most important to the journey of the hero. Personally I'd think it's the dark mirror - the reflection of what the hero might have become and the highlighting what makes him different. This could also become the reason for the villain to refect from the heros ideals in the first place.
Problem with this collection is, that you lose out on the strength of the "false ally", where the villain is cunningly infiltration the heroes party. By making him also an anti-villain he is also not entirely wrong just misguided in his goals, which is why he wasn't really a false ally from the get go, but came to be a traitor. Which begs the question: What forced our hero out to become a hero in the first place, when the main villain wasn't malicious at first?
So the main question remains for you to figure out which role of those three is the most important of this villain at the end. The other two should enhance this role you have in mind. That's what I personally think.
@@christianstephan7301 Thank you for the feedback. The dark mirror is definitely the main aspect.
I was also trying to fit the other aspects in my book. The villain is basically a illusionist, capable of changing hes appearance.
In that way he is able to manipulate the MC and take back what is hes from the false villain, who starts the conflict for the protagonist.
I am only worried the story might become too complicated or even bloated, but I will try my best to avoid that.
Even if it means a lot of change. Hell I have been doing that for a while now as I have been learning.
theres a character ive made who combines the role of protagonist and antagonist, hes a man who simultaneously seeks redemption while also thinking its impossible, he fights to make the world a better place and succeeds greatly, but his means simply cannot be justified, but he knows no other way
I think you should’ve mentioned the Joker as an example of an antagonist that is weaker than the protagonist. Every time the Joker is in the same room as Batman, he nearly dies -and should in many cases- yet, he persists in fighting Batman.
@user-gt7vi9jm9m I don’t think I’ve ever seen the Joker be as physically powerful as Batman.
@@swxqt6826 only in The Batman 2004 series.
I can think of two underdog villains that are actually pretty good, as their wit makes up for their physical defects: Leah Teabing in The Davinci Code and the Mayor in Rango. Neither of them can walk (or walk well) and yet they wreak all sorts of havoc on everyone and even are so cold that they betray their own minons (Remmy and Silas in Davinci Code and Rattlesnake Jake in Rango.)
My antagonist in my story is an army of relentless demons with zero morals or reasoning.
So they are force of nature. But my approach to make it intresting is many demon types, flying ones, laser shooting ones, swimming ones, stuff like that.
This legion of demons will come in mass quantity on a certain day called "armageddon", and the heroes are trying to prepare for this day to come by warning others and gathering up an army.
But, dispite all the legion's smaller attacks, very few people will accept the fact that armageddon will come.
I'm going on with this idea...😂
@@elyam. Yeah I think it's cool! Feel free to use it!
Cool stuff, but in this case, it seems closer that the ignorance of people is the real main “antagonist” and the legion is just the motivating plot device?
@@Papriqa Yeah. The main conflict of the story is the group trying to spread the word of the armageddon.
(Its a note that armageddon is not immediately known about, it is something that is found out to happen from a discovery)
The legion is mainly a physical combat aspect, bc this is an adventure story.
My story is the exact same. Weird
The Dark mirror reminded me of the villian from Aladdin(2019), he is like Aladdin in alot of different ways, but he is a dark version of him
For mistake 2. I feel like if you look into anime, Attack on Titan has fight scenes of both kinds. Ok, to be fair I feel like it has no real "villains" as well. And that's why most of the times the underdog is the one you shall feel bad for when they get wrecked. Wether they are the antagonists or they aren't
Thank you for this advice, it genuinely helps a lot. I'm new to writing since I am a 3D animator, but I always had brilliant ideas that I wanted to bring to life, I'm self taught, but I understand mistakes and cliches from media, movies, book, games, etc all the time.
I'm always looking for sound advice and help in writing characters, at least I don't have to worry about getting an illustrator/animator!
At the moment, I'm writing a fantasy story with a load of challenges the character faces, however I want the overall villan who later in the story becomes the main antagonist to be a very special character.
I wrote fear as a villan, an unstoppable, unreasonable, unpredictable Lich ravaged by madness who absorbs the physical mass, memories, and skills of his victims.
I wanted him to look like a Chimera of wild animals with humanoid features. A bipedal rotting corpse who only speaks in the frightened whispers of his victims. He whispers so deafeningly loud people's ears bleed, and the very grass he walks is absorbed into his horrid frame.
A skull of a horse with horns of deer, moose, ox, dragons, and the like grafted utop. The upper body and arms of an ogre, the legs of a wolf, and the bony tail of a crocodile.
His archaic frame is impossibly large at 30 or so feet when he stands on two legs. The blue, necrotic skin barley clings to the countless bones that warp and morph under his skin.
He commands dead flesh, he does not raise armies, he is no necromancer. For example, later in the story, he will sever his own arm and grow another as the severed arm morphs into a centipede of ribs and spines. His new arm will be that of a mighty dragon, clad in metalic scales that he uses as a shield.
A long bony spike protrudes from his forearm as he greedily plunges it into the skull of his victim, killing them and absorbing their strength, he takes great sadistic pleasure in this.
As a Lich, he thrives off of fear, and purposefully torments his victims to savor the taste of fear.
Despite the cliche, his main goal is to gain enough souls to be worthy to make a single wish at the heart of the world.
All who hear his wish are mortified, shaking uncontrollably, tears stream violently down their cheeks, yet not a sound escapes them, only shudders and whimpers, their faces solemn and in shock, they heard something so foul and truly evil, they connot comprehend it.
The Lich, to me, is a very basic character, but it is his adaptability, primal and animalistic nature, yet unprecedented intelligence and sadistic strategey that makes him spontaneous and mysterious.
He never has the same voice twice, and his serpentine movements are replaced with predatory heaves and low growls, pus and foam always drips from his mouth and nose, and he does not roar.
He hunts with stealth, despite his large size, he is beyond silent, birds do not sing in his presence, insects do not chirp, wind ceases.
The silence is key for knowing he is nearby. His wish is never known, and his reasoning remains unspoken yet truly evil. His command over his flesh allows him to shapeshift and blend in as an animal or a person, but should anyone gaze into his eyes, they'll see more than one soul within, all in torment.
He is a very basic yet complex character, I definitely need help! Of course, I cant show you WHAT he looks like (its cool as shit, years of anatomy classes really paid off) nor can I give the more complex examples (because its a youtube comment, not a book)
I wish I knew ways of making him less shallow, or at least gaining feedback.
This is more of a basic description rather than an introduction, which I have not written in this comment, and I wont because its a comment.
Y'know, if you even read this far you basically read a chapter, honestly. So, assuming you're still reading, you are either interested, bored, have nothing else better to do, or have experience and want to help this fledgling writer.
I'll stop yapping, but please give me some advice if you have any, reader!
Well explained jed.
Very interesting and thought provoking video! It gave me a lot to reflect about with my own villain (who is the father to one of the protagonists) and works as both a dark mirror and sort of anti-villain where his sympathetic nature comes from trying to balance his desire to be a father with his vision of how the galaxy should be, the latter being where his villainous nature comes into play.
I reach a point where I come closer and closer to consider actually writing my story.
Please do more of these videos!
I have a rough outline for the plot and some inportant scenes. But I need more theory to develope characters and dialogue.
This video is extremely helpful on revising characters, thank you.
I'd also add Crowley from Supernatural as the perfect Shapeshifter type Antagonist. His overall arch is him going from this spineless, oppurtunistic Devil, To selfless hero.
But during this arch, he is both a reliable ally due to his ideology as being truthful while making deals, but also a menacing villain because he still guns for himself.
Until he has absolutely everything he ever wanted, at which point he is redeemed by sacrificing himself for greater good.
Omg I needed this so much thank you!
You're so welcome!
3:24 ! Never realized!!
13:50 Noble demon characters : nah I don't think I will
Oh my god, the story I am working on has a total of 5 characters that work as antagonists in the grand scheme of things, and they all are a different archetype in the 5 archetypes you mentioned. I feel proud of myself man 😊
So are you gonna get back at me about that writing cohort application or?
Or
These are good tips for new dungeon masters.
Vetinari as an antagonist? Which Discworld book have _you_ been reading?
To be fair Vetinari does have antagonistic tendencies
@@waddledee8387 Only when he wants to. To quite an excerpt from _Men At Arms_ :
'The Patrician heard him thump the wall outside. Vimes wasn't aware, but there were a number of barely perceptible dents in the wall outside the Oblong Office, their depths corresponding to his emotional state at the time.
By the sound of it, this one would need the services of a plasterer.
...
Vimes seemed in a suitable emotional state. With any luck, the orders would have the desirable effect.'
So yes, Vetinari can be antagonistic, but usually only in his aim of manipulating someone (often Vimes) to do something he wants done, but can't explicitly order.
@@GoranXII which is why he still fits in the shape shifter category
@@waddledee8387 Except that he's _not_ an antagonist. A manipulative boss perhaps, but generally one on the side of the protagonist.
@@GoranXII fair enough
To me Homelander kind of relates to a quote, though I don't recall who said it... "To the villain's perspective, they are the hero of their story.." Homelander is a very dark and dangerous character, who is more villain than hero, but in his mind, he is the hero.
What’s your thoughts on stories where the main two characters, at conflict with each other, could be labelled as protagonist/antagonist depending on your perspective?
shoot i think that's the hole i've dug for myself (except badly). i have 3 characters and at any given point i'm not even sure who's supposed to be the bad guy. >__<
How is yours set up?
@@JhadeSagrav Broadly, Its a bit of a civil war between a young ruler who wants to bring democratic reform to a absolutist monarchy, and a revolutionist who wants to overthrow the absolutist monarchy with democracy.
They have the same goal, just different perspectives, and obviously, one has to defeat the other.
This was a great breakdown. Very organized
Question we need to ask:
Is a anti hero a character with negative traits and virtues who seeks a good goal
And is an anti-villain someone with good morals but a bad goal? I’m getting very confused of the difference and I used to think I understood it well😅
@YellowXylophon I like what your describing, but that clashes painfully with the examples he gives here. Magneto totally works, but their is no way Thanos qualifies as an anti-villan.
He's a manipulative psychopath who wants to bang death itself (in the comics), or control the entire plane of existance so that he can get his rocks off killing half of it (in the movies).
Preventing any desrtuction was never anything more than Thanos' maddened excuse to justify his nonsense, the movies themselves MAKE THAT POINT.
Theirs nothing "anti-villan" about Thanos. Their is literally nothing in his actual practiced themes, traits, goals, virtues or values that is anything but manipulative and repulsive.
Thank you for making this video. As someone who is making a JRPG, this was very insightful. I'll definitely keep this in mind when designing Schwarzritter (villain turned ally/protagonist's love interest), Lucien (false ally), Kronos (dark mirror), and Aion (force of nature). You just earned yourself a subscriber.
Thanos is not an antivillain. His goals are not laudible, even if his motivation is _arguably_ to "help." That kind of "help" is not enough to make you an anti-villain. Thanos doesn't even have a good point. Not only is he mathematically incorrect about the nature of resources and population, but even if he were, the Infinity Gauntlet would have let him double the resources of the universe just as easily as he halved the population. And he could have done it again and again if needs be. Thanos is a delusional villain, at best, and a true monster in more reasonable interpretations. He justifies his omnicidal urge in a way that lets him convince himself he's the misunderstood good guy, but nothing about his plan, his methods, nor even his goal is laudible enough to give him the anti-villain's shroud of "at least he meant well."
Vetinari is actually a good example of an anti-villain. Whether he's aiding or opposing or manipulating the protagonist(s), Lord Vetinari is _achieving good ends_ by his seemingly vile means. But, unlike an anti-hero, he's doing it in the ROLE of a villain. Moreover, he also uses good ends to achieve his means, while again cloaking it all in the aura of villainy.
Well said. Thanos is definitely not an anti-villian. He is a well realized Malthusian nut job. As you said, bad at math, bad at prudence, and bad at choosing goals.
Cool to see these all laid out together. Gives me a lot to think about
Ramsay Bolton is great example of dark mirror. More you see, more you realize he is just like Jon snow but wicked.
One of my favorite forms of antagonists in stories are the ones you don’t really know are the antagonist until further along in the story, or you start off thinking they aren’t the bad guy.
Voldemort a force of nature? VOLDEMORT?!?!
You’ve got a point
He can’t be reasoned with.
But he can be killed. Pretty easily at that.
@@erykjankowski6152 difficulty to kill doesn’t have an effect on the archetype of the villain. For example, if the protagonist has a magical weapon that can easily kill hurricanes, but the plot leads to a hurricane opposing the protagonist, then you could see that hurricane as an antagonist in the force of nature archetype. Especially in the earlier Harry Potter books, Voldemort can be viewed as a force of nature as there’s really no reasoning with him, he just wants to complete his goals.
It doesn't matter, if you can reason with him or not. Force of nature is unstoppable. It doesn't decide to kill thousands, it just happens and no one can do anything about it.
Calling a single person, who isn't even that strong, a force of nature is beyond exaggerating
“The Nothing” is a force of nature, or the winter storm and storm king from Memory, Sorrow and Thorn.
David and Goliath weren't gladiators, they were champions of their respective armies, I'm just saying.
Sounds like the same thing to me
@@dannywilkins6567 Hardly. For one thing, gladiators were fighting for sport, and not usually to the death.
David wasn't even a champion before his fight, he was just a former shepherd who took on the challenge because he was confident God would be on his side.
Not currently writing a Fantasy novel, but what is talked about here still applies
In my book I am having trouble making the antagonist compelling, since it is the source of my protagonist's trauma that drives the plot
I was thinking about making them a queer-coded villain, like in an old renaissance era Disney movie, making the antagonist feminine, flamboyant and campy male character. To balance it out, my anti heroine protagonist, who is a butch tomboy, is explicitly queer, even though the book features a heterosexual romance with a male love interest.
I am someone who identifies as pansexual, so I made my main protagonist pansexual as well
Edit: Because my protagonist is not meant to be a good person, and grows more corrupted and antagonistic themselves near the end of the book, my antagonist has to be a pure evil villain, since thsy must be far worse than the protagonist
tip: make them fun. disney villains often have little going for them in terms of backstory, but they’re compelling because the audience has fun watching them. alternatively, make them sexy. works every time
Thanks Jed. Your content is helping me put the pieces of my own fantasy world and story together. I’ve never written a book- boy is it hard to actually nail down a story that goes from beginning to end, let alone have it actually be any good. 😅
Got my primary Antagonists set up. They are the final boss.
Also got a past Dark Mirror.
your identity challenges part is very helpful to me. my antagonist is coming along great (anti-villain), but i’m having trouble making the hero keep up. he’s gonna have to choose between his past life (where he would sympathize with the villain) and his current situation and friends (who oppose the villain). add in a little bit of freedom vs security, and moral ambiguity and i think i’ve got a compelling situation. it’s easier for me to make characters when i’ve made the events that shape them
With mistake two I do agree for the most part, but sometimes when the villain starts off weak and pathetic (e.g The spot from spider verse) the audience may just brush it off as a side character, so that when this weak villain becomes a overpowered big bad its a lot more intimidating for the main character and audience (like in spider verse when the spot becomes really strong, he uses miles view of him being weak for motivation)
I always called the "Shapeshifter" a "Anti-Neutral". Because if There is Hero, Villain, and Neutral. And Anti-Hero, and Anti-Villain, I think there should be an Anti-Neutral.
And since Neutral is not being on neither side, Anti-Neutral is switching sides.
I am trying to write my own story for the first time and this video pointed out many things that wouldn’t have occurred to me.
Something else I’ve noticed on my own when writing a story is the history. Having a mostly developed history, even if you don’t use most of it, would help prevent controversy in the plots.
a great way to do the 'secret bad guy' twist is to have it so that even the turncoat himself doesn't know he's going to turn evil until it's too late. Not because of mind control or something, but rather because the circumstance changes in such a way where the character's morals become compromised. The partner's loved one is held hostage or he's been blackmailed - or perhaps some unavoidable tragedy befalls him. He acts out of desperation, despair or disillusionment, without needing to have some big setup because we already understand his character's rationale perfectly. Examples include Harvey Dent from The Dark Knight, or Aribeth de Tylmarande from Neverwinter Nights
I like a lot of your videos, but I feel this one was most helpful for my particular project. Thank you.
Great video! Loved the skits! Next time you should definitely put the types as their own chapter.
As a new fantasy writer, that was very useful
This is good advice for any type of villain not just fantasy
The greenscreen was the very best thing I’d seen all day