Your Story Lines are always interesting but you should change your writing Style it, s to chaotic and confusing. Zry to write calmer and don, t skip things that happened like in this Story Jack slapped Tae and want to force him for divorce. Why? When this happened? It, s unclear you never wrote when it happened suddenly Tae tell this to Jungkook and that is it all.
Good story. A bit confusing in the beginning but then slowly became fine
Glad to know that
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Your Story Lines are always interesting but you should change your writing Style it, s to chaotic and confusing. Zry to write calmer and don, t skip things that happened like in this Story Jack slapped Tae and want to force him for divorce. Why? When this happened? It, s unclear you never wrote when it happened suddenly Tae tell this to Jungkook and that is it all.
Thnx for opinion 🫀 next time I try to satisfied you 🫶🏻