I like the writing. I understand the description. I don't understand why it's being told and up to two white guys after an unexplained brawl. It's an interesting premise, but reminds me of the film "Nothing" instead of a full back and forth of "actual" racism and not a Caucasian outlook.
Totally love it, great work!
I’m a professor of science 🔬and this all checks out👍
I think it shut down just fine.
I like the writing. I understand the description. I don't understand why it's being told and up to two white guys after an unexplained brawl. It's an interesting premise, but reminds me of the film "Nothing" instead of a full back and forth of "actual" racism and not a Caucasian outlook.
How did you determine they're two white guys, or is it obvious?
Amazing! Well done!! What in gods name happened at the bar before?!