Write TUM SOM essay as TUM expects it

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  • The TUM essay is part of the second stage of getting accepted. Here are some tips to pay attention to.
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    CHAPTERS
    0:00 What I'll cover
    0:53 General information
    1:52 Get an Overview
    2:12 Literature Research
    3:48 Writing the essay
    4:37 Structure of the Essay
    4:56 cover page
    5:16 Introduction
    5:59 main body
    7:02 Citing
    7:34 Conclusion
    8:05 Bibliography
    9:25 Personal Tipps
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 70

  • @markus_rut
    @markus_rut  Рік тому

    Mistakes in this video:
    At 9:46: IEEE ist the shorter one with numbers in brackets [1] and APA ist the longer version.

  • @rodrigoanjos6256
    @rodrigoanjos6256 Місяць тому

    3:07 - read only abstract, conclusion, and maybe introduction of each paper
    3:18 - keep track of info you gather from papers and citations
    4:37

  • @nnh6795
    @nnh6795 Рік тому +5

    Great video, great tips! I wish there would be more content like that for my university’s requirements for their essays. Good luck for all the TUM-essay-writers :)

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому

      Great Feedback! Highly appreciated :)

  • @davidmartinezsansano9907
    @davidmartinezsansano9907 Місяць тому

    Hi Markus, great video!! You didn't talk about using passive or active style, which is more appropiate?

  • @user-nq5dk2id1c
    @user-nq5dk2id1c 5 місяців тому

    Thanks Markus for the guidance!
    Hope we can connect at TUM this winter semester.

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  4 місяці тому

      hope it worked out for you!

  • @zhannattoleubekova6581
    @zhannattoleubekova6581 7 місяців тому

    Thank you for your video! Very helpful 🙌 I hope I will study at TUM 🙌

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  7 місяців тому

      Glad it was helpful :)

  • @jacochong
    @jacochong Рік тому +1

    Nice video! 👍🏻👍🏻

  • @smilefaxxe2557
    @smilefaxxe2557 Рік тому +2

    Thank you for this video!
    I hope to get into TUM for a Master after I finished my Bachelor's degree 🔥

  • @fernandotabora
    @fernandotabora Рік тому +1

    happy to know a fellow otter fan!

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому +1

      Hahaha. They're just way to cute

  • @rishiksarkar9293
    @rishiksarkar9293 Рік тому +1

    Hey Markus, thanks a lot for this video. Although I finished my essay before this video was out, it was still really helpful and clarified many things.
    Can you please clarify one more thing:
    Are the admissions for the MiM program on a rolling basis. If yes, how long does it take to get an admission decision after the date of application submission?
    I am asking this since I am clearing the cutoff in stage 1 itself and my esaay won't supposed be evaluated except plagiarism check.

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому +1

      Hey Rishik! :) I don't know how long it takes for them to make the decision🤐 but fingers crossed!

  • @edomedom4858
    @edomedom4858 7 місяців тому

    Hi Markus,
    Thanks for the very informative video. I have a question: While writing an essay, do I need to follow all necessary steps, including the data collection and analysis procedures, similar to a formal research paper or thesis?

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  7 місяців тому

      I think it's fine if you simply look into some literature and get an overview :)

  • @grelllestrange
    @grelllestrange 17 днів тому

    Hi Markus, I will apply to the chemistry bachelor program and I already finished my essay.
    Strangely enough, your essay may only consist of one page at max (I used times new roman 11 since it was a bit too "long" but I didn't want to leave out vital examples) and, at least how I understood it, it will not be graded or relevant in the first stage of the Studienorientierungsverfahren (from what I've understood, I will automatically be accepted in the first stage because of my grades). I personally didn't include sources (I mainly relied on a book from oxford press and knowledged I acquiered during my freetime) since we could write about something we already covered at school and I didn't know how to incorporate sources if the source should basically be your schoolwork (it wasn't exactly the case for me but still).
    Would you suggest that I still try to add some sources or should I leave it as it is?

  • @chigoziriokeke1201
    @chigoziriokeke1201 Рік тому +1

    Hello Markus, thank you for this piece. Is it a no no to ever cite from relevant blogs or online articles? Secondly, do tables count for words in the essay? Thank you.

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому

      Hey! :)
      I mean if it is very relevant and you cannot find the information otherwise it should be okay if the website seems legit. And I am not sure about tables unfortunately...
      Good luck! :)

  • @kushagrakirtiman3292
    @kushagrakirtiman3292 2 місяці тому

    Hi Markus should we include Abstract

  • @denizerdemozkan
    @denizerdemozkan Рік тому +1

    I hope you would make a video about Motivation Letter too 🎉

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому +1

      Haha. Unfortunately that is so long ago... 😅 I don't know too much how to write it. My guess would be to state why you are suited and why you want to do the program. :)

  • @annast.1923
    @annast.1923 5 місяців тому

    Thank you for your video Markus. I have a question, is there any way to find the subject given for past essays in TUM website?

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  5 місяців тому

      Not that I know of.... sorry

  • @TheGabiAlf
    @TheGabiAlf Рік тому

    Hi Markus Thank you so much, this was very helpful :) , I was wondering about the abstract and table of contents, if they are mentioned in the instructions do I have to use it? I think for such a short essay it takes so much space:
    Language: English
    o Style: Essay / Paper, please base your work on an appropriate number of scientific sources
    and include a bibliography
    o Quoting style: your choice, please use one quoting style consistently
    o Font: Times New Roman o Font Size: 12 o Word count: max. 2000 words
    o Essay length: maximum 8 pages (including cover page, figures, table of contents and
    bibliography)
    o Margins: 2 cm
    o Line spacing: 1.5

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому

      You don't have to do an abstract and a table of contents, when it is not mentioned in the instructions :)

    • @TheGabiAlf
      @TheGabiAlf Рік тому

      @@markus_rut I have another question please, in the instructions it says Max 2000 words, but it also says Max 8 Pages, right now I have less than the max words and have just enough left for the conclusion, however with the cover page and references it shows 10 pages. Here, which rule stands?, the Max number of words (which I am following), or the max number of pages?

  • @phamdieuhuong8783
    @phamdieuhuong8783 2 місяці тому

    I wonder for master program the cost issue just hundred eur. Where can I check the exact full program cost?

  • @samu_giabardo
    @samu_giabardo Рік тому +1

    Hi, thank you for your video, I wanted to know:
    1) do you think that an abstract is necessary?
    2) do you think it is useful to add all the additional sources to gain an initial knowledge about a certain topic, for example TED speeches, youtube videos or podcasts?
    Thank you so much

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому

      Hi Samu! :)
      Imo an abstract is not necessary and I would not add the additional sources :)

    • @samu_giabardo
      @samu_giabardo Рік тому +1

      @@markus_rut Thank you, and do you think that I can copy and past a graph from another source if I am practically unable to access the raw data and create the graph by myself?

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому

      @@samu_giabardo you can normally just copy it, but make sure to put the reference there ;)

  • @m.slim002
    @m.slim002 3 місяці тому

    Can you also share a real sample for tum

  • @smokajs9053
    @smokajs9053 Рік тому +1

    Hello :) thank you very much for this video, helped me a lot to calm a bit and structure the work more!
    I have a question due to finding guidelines for essays at different faculties (namely architecture - for the Urbanistik Programme). There is unfortunately very little information/guidance given on the website.
    → Basicaly: "ein in englischer oder deutscher Sprache nach wissenschaftlichen Standards abgefasster Aufsatz von mindestens 3000 Zeichen zu einem urbanistischen Thema; oder ein in englischer oder deutscher Sprache nach wissenschaftlichen Standards abgefasstes Exposé von mindestens 3000 Zeichen zu einer eigens gewählten urbanistischen Fragestellung" = citation from the Description of the Aptitude Assessment and nothing more to find :/
    I understand it so, that topic is very much up to us to choose and the writing standart is probably expected similar to the one you showed us in the video (Times New Roman, font 12 size,..) Would you say it is safe to think about it this way or should i rather try to contact someone for further informations?

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому +1

      Hey! :)
      I am pretty sure that it is the way you just said, but ob the other hand an Email takes only 1 Minute to write, so.... :D just ask them ;))
      But I understand it the way you explained it :)

    • @smokajs9053
      @smokajs9053 Рік тому +1

      @@markus_rut Thank you :))

  • @mayureshkulkarni99
    @mayureshkulkarni99 Рік тому

    Hey, for Master in Management program, the maximum points for essay are 40. How much on average do students score for their essay. I need a minimum of 20 points given my GPA.

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому +1

      Unfortunately I don't know what the average is. Sry!

  • @thuongphan470
    @thuongphan470 Рік тому +1

    I was a bit confused how to structure my essay, they require discussion from companies and customer perspective, and also from technical, economic and social perspective. What will be your approach in this case?

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому +1

      I am not applying so I am not very deep in this context, but from a first glance, I personally would structure it in tech, econ and social perspectives and then include Information from both comoanies and customers in each of these fields, but that would just my spontaneous answer :)

    • @thuongphan470
      @thuongphan470 Рік тому

      @@markus_rut Thanks, nice video btw

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому

      @@thuongphan470 love to hear that!

  • @selin6872
    @selin6872 4 місяці тому

    It is mentioned as essay, but would you consider it to be a short research paper or as a proposal for research?

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  3 місяці тому +1

      an essay/short research literature review :)

  • @LuciaHerself
    @LuciaHerself 8 місяців тому

    the discord invite link is invalid

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  8 місяців тому

      Thanks for letting me know. In my case it did work 🤔

  • @ankurgiri7589
    @ankurgiri7589 5 місяців тому

    i have to write an essay for aerospace admissions with word limit of 500-700 i m confused can you suggest me the headings

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  5 місяців тому +1

      yeah, as the title of the video says it is for the TUM SOM (SOM = School of Management), so this is not relevant for aerospace :D

  • @one_piece37
    @one_piece37 Рік тому

    Sir, I am from india studying in 2nd year of bachelor of computer applications. It is a 3-year program, consisting of 120 credits. A masters at TUM requires 140 credits in a 3-year program. How can i cover those 20 credits? Is there any solution for this....

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому

      Hey there! Unfortunately I don't know about that... maybe contact TUM directly

  • @prokruztes
    @prokruztes Рік тому +1

    Do they ask for essay when applying for bachelors too?

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому

      For a Bachelor it is not necessary :)

  • @vyomsonagra2532
    @vyomsonagra2532 Рік тому

    Hii. Unfortunately, I watched this video AFTER submitting my essay. I am nervous I won't pass the plagiarism check. I did cite all the sources and did not use any paraphrasing software.

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  Рік тому +1

      I hope you get in. Fingers crossed!

    • @jawadahmad7991
      @jawadahmad7991 11 місяців тому

      It will detect palagarism since they are using very powerful palagarism tools.

  • @shubhamkumarsingh5377
    @shubhamkumarsingh5377 8 місяців тому

    Thanks, i need help to get admission in TUM. Please help me.

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  8 місяців тому

      Hey, unfortunately I cannot help you with this, but I wish you good luck! Fingers crossed!

  • @zubairstudio8706
    @zubairstudio8706 11 місяців тому

    Is essay is mendatory for getting admission in TUM

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  11 місяців тому +1

      Nope. Not for TUM in general. It depends on the program you choose. On the website of the program you want to pursue you can find the details about which documents are required for application.

  • @maxyoko
    @maxyoko Рік тому +1

    makes me wanna write an essay ngl 😂

  • @fernandotabora
    @fernandotabora Рік тому +2

    wa saaaaaaaaaa

  • @xdemgeo3581
    @xdemgeo3581 11 місяців тому

    This is good, but honestly, very pretentious

    • @markus_rut
      @markus_rut  11 місяців тому

      mh. thanks for your feedback