Alex’s mind needs to stop racing, his heart needs to stop racing and he needs to stop resolving and beginning. Need a good thesaurus. Good lord, Alex is not the brightest penny in the roll. Great story, awesome premise and the best story teller around. Just need less repetitive descriptions. Really love the story
I listened to the second half of the story tonight. I enjoyed both parts. Excellent writing and narration. I do like these conspiracy type stories. Thank you. Have a great night 🤗🌟♥️
Hi Doc! Thanks for getting out the rest of the story so quickly. I have lots of thoughts on your writing style, but I will wait until I hear a few more. Thanks again and have a great Sunday everyone!🤗💜🕷
Well done Darius! I honestly was hoping you would end it this way. And you did not disappoint! Not every story has a happy ending or even a somewhat satisfying one. And this one was more of a realistic ending. Just one guy who recruits an old friend is supposed to take down such an entity? Not a chance! So I thank you tremendously for bringing a far more believable story than most would’ve. And it was all because he just had to open up the hatch. Damn things are so tempting it’s almost impossible to avoid so I can at least understand his reasoning for doing it. Alas what he did find underneath that hatch was not what anyone would want to find. (Well, maybe a certain group, but let’s leave them out of this) So to Mr. McCorkindale, another story excellently written and beautifully narrated! You’re writing is quickly becoming more outstanding by the day and if you do intend to keep it up until the end of the year, you may consider writing a book. It’s just a lot longer creepypasta. And the people who have it will have your voice to narrate it as they read! I can’t possibly see how that could fail. Hats off to you good sir! I’m anxiously awaiting your next upload!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍
Thanks! Yes, I felt that this was a weakness of my earlier efforts to write longer stories: a ragtag bunch wouldn't be able to pull off bringing down a giant organization. This felt like a much more realistic way to end things.
@@DrCreepen you were absolutely right to go with your instincts. Anything otherwise would have been completely ridiculous without some paranormal involvement. But as there wasn’t, and as deep as this went, which is certainly would’ve, two guys wouldn’t have gotten very far. Well done Dr Darius!
So happy to have found the rest of this outstanding story, I shall sit back with my fav drink which is as normal for me would be a nice cup of coffee and enjoy! keep up the great work!
Good evening Doctor, and good evening all. Excellent story, and as always excellent narration. Really enjoyed this one. Problem is that I fell asleep about half way, so yet again, I'll be listening twice!
SPOILER COMMENTS….. Next time make copies of documents and mail to media outlets, government agencies and foreign embassies…Chilling, really, after what happened this weekend.
Really? Nat-sees? How lame and overdone! Should have gone with something more plausible, like “replaced by CCP shills”. Oh wait, that’s already been happening, right under everyone’s nose.
This was alright. Way too many repetitive descriptions though. Not to mention going to a “meeting” with someone you already deduced to be against you? Come on that was just bad storytelling.
Alex’s mind needs to stop racing, his heart needs to stop racing and he needs to stop resolving and beginning. Need a good thesaurus. Good lord, Alex is not the brightest penny in the roll. Great story, awesome premise and the best story teller around. Just need less repetitive descriptions. Really love the story
I listen to every episode and now I’m an alcoholic .
Sorry about that.
At least u have a good Doctor treating u.
Prognosis? Entertaining future.
Hahahaa
I listen to most but not every. I’m also an alcoholic.
Another instant classic, Doc.
Great work, as well, Mr. "Darius McCorkindale"
Another wonderful story. Thank you Dr creepen 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 review. 😘😘😘
Nice! I listened to part 1 earlier this morning (EST) and I'm here again.
Thank you in advance!
I'm about to clean the house. Just in time Doc 💜
Enjoy!
I listened to the second half of the story tonight. I enjoyed both parts. Excellent writing and narration. I do like these conspiracy type stories. Thank you. Have a great night 🤗🌟♥️
Nice, something to listen to on this rainy day 🌧️
Hi Doc! Thanks for getting out the rest of the story so quickly. I have lots of thoughts on your writing style, but I will wait until I hear a few more. Thanks again and have a great Sunday everyone!🤗💜🕷
Well done Darius! I honestly was hoping you would end it this way. And you did not disappoint! Not every story has a happy ending or even a somewhat satisfying one. And this one was more of a realistic ending. Just one guy who recruits an old friend is supposed to take down such an entity? Not a chance! So I thank you tremendously for bringing a far more believable story than most would’ve. And it was all because he just had to open up the hatch. Damn things are so tempting it’s almost impossible to avoid so I can at least understand his reasoning for doing it. Alas what he did find underneath that hatch was not what anyone would want to find. (Well, maybe a certain group, but let’s leave them out of this) So to Mr. McCorkindale, another story excellently written and beautifully narrated! You’re writing is quickly becoming more outstanding by the day and if you do intend to keep it up until the end of the year, you may consider writing a book. It’s just a lot longer creepypasta. And the people who have it will have your voice to narrate it as they read! I can’t possibly see how that could fail. Hats off to you good sir! I’m anxiously awaiting your next upload!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍
Thanks! Yes, I felt that this was a weakness of my earlier efforts to write longer stories: a ragtag bunch wouldn't be able to pull off bringing down a giant organization. This felt like a much more realistic way to end things.
@@DrCreepen you were absolutely right to go with your instincts. Anything otherwise would have been completely ridiculous without some paranormal involvement. But as there wasn’t, and as deep as this went, which is certainly would’ve, two guys wouldn’t have gotten very far. Well done Dr Darius!
Thank You dear Doctor 💜
Most welcome!
❤❤❤I love your stories and your narration, I'm a very happy bunny, Thankyou so very much❤❤❤
Glad you enjoy it!
Wow these guys absolutely love walking into obvious traps and repeating things they've already said
No happy ending, but spot on for real life. Makes me dislike people more.😮
That's a dang if you do and dang if you don't situation to be in isn't it? I really enjoyed this, thank you.
Excellent!!! Love this one👍🏼💕
A proverb on Trust, "Most of the time, you can trust your Mother."
So happy to have found the rest of this outstanding story, I shall sit back with my fav drink which is as normal for me would be a nice cup of coffee and enjoy! keep up the great work!
Enjoy!
@DrCreepen that is exactly what I did and I very much enjoyed it.
Sir Darius 😮
Brilliant once again ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👌👍🇬🇧🫶
I just need to ask y does he trust so easily?😢
Dr Creepen👍This story is definitely based on real events👍👁👍
Obligatory comment for the algorithm 😊
I need the doc to take a poll on everyone's fave drinks
Margarita and🍺
Perfect timing CREEPEN DR!
He looked at the picture and recognized the notes doctor? That opening paragraph is one big Chekhov's twist😅
Sweet! Thankyou !❤😊
YES I WAS WAITING FOR PARTS 3+4 not gonna lie I wasn’t super into it at first but by part 2 I was
Thanks!
Very kind of you!
Longer videos brother you do good
Good evening Doctor, and good evening all. Excellent story, and as always excellent narration. Really enjoyed this one. Problem is that I fell asleep about half way, so yet again, I'll be listening twice!
Thanks
Very kind of you!
🖤🖤🖤
Great story enjoyed it
Thanks😊
I'm so excited to listen to the conclusion of this, thank you good Dr.!
" ahhh fuck come on"
👍🏻👏🏻
Thankyou dr creepen ❤❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉hope you r well ??xx
thanks doctor 👍
Yes, thank you! Your work is great!
Perfect timing doc❤
Once again, great atmospheric writing!
Thank you very much!
Remarkably stupid protagonists if I’m going to be completely honest.
Like every trope of mistakes in a conspiracy story.
SPOILER COMMENTS…..
Next time make copies of documents and mail to media outlets, government agencies and foreign embassies…Chilling, really, after what happened this weekend.
This story sounds vaguely familiar with our government regime in office now
😎👍
"We have to expose this. People need to know" for the 458th time come on bro, i love Dr. Creepen but was this written by an 11 year old?
It's like the whole point of the story. A guy comes across some messed up secret. What else is he supposed to do?
Really? Nat-sees? How lame and overdone!
Should have gone with something more plausible, like “replaced by CCP shills”.
Oh wait, that’s already been happening, right under everyone’s nose.
This was alright. Way too many repetitive descriptions though. Not to mention going to a “meeting” with someone you already deduced to be against you? Come on that was just bad storytelling.
1:33:55 this is the worst Creepypasta that a woke person can make
so apparently you are the author 😮
NO I would not write this crap down
Ok snowflake
The movie wascalled The Boys from Brazil....