If you enjoyed this story and want to read the SEQUEL, you can find it here: a.co/d/1dGc1fv Missed the start of the live premiere? Just rewind to the beginning!
Please do the second part you absolutely nailed it bro fell asleep fast so kept putting it back to where I left off bro making time to listen in the day time that good
Used to work at a state psychiatric Hospital in New York on Long Island. This brings back some extremely bad memories, the tunnels were extremely creepy. Thanks for the trip down memory lane. 👍🏻
I'm at 2 hours 19 minutes right now and it's just crazy how this story transformed. That's what I love about creepypasta, the title can be "I think my grandpa is a serial killer" but it turns out the world has been invaded by interdimensional beings (real example).
I absolutely love these long stories. It's so much easier to completely immerse into the story. More time to get to know characters and to relate to them. And jordan you are an amazing story teller one of my top 3 with Mr ballen and let's read.
I have been absolutely mesmerized with this story! I love the long ones! This one especially has kept my earpods in for the past 3 hours!! Thank you so much for the wonderful entertainment! I've sent it to everyone I know!! Love you!!!
Loved this one. Your fastly becoming my favourite story teller...and not only have you the talent of bringing to life a story with your voice, but you write them too!! Im so happy i discovered you. Thank you for consistently bringing out such quality content so often. You are Awesome ❤❤❤
Excellent writing, storytelling and flawless narration! Congratulations on your first novel; it was truly fascinating, kept me hanging onto every word - and up all night (and it’s been a while since I’ve been able to say that, lol). Here’s to many, many more and Happy Holidays to you and yours!
Love that you incorporate lots of comedy in your creepy pasta writing. It’s tough to go to sleep when it’s so scary you have an adrenaline rush and I’m pretty sure the slight comedic relief is more realistic to the human experience tbh
ive heard snippets of this story for years. i orginionally read part of it on R/nosleep. this is the first time I've ever heard the whole story. i love this series. but, to know you wrote it. bravo man. bravo
I was honestly impressed. Got to be the best story I've heard thats kept me on the edge of my chair while listening. The details are exceptionally on point. Your very talented ❤ thankyou ❤
Even though ive read this story through another, your version was more creepy, i had to wait to listen to this in the day. Very rare reaction for me. Bravo to your reading 👏
Started listening at 12.07am, at the part where Matt glimpsed a little girl standing in the window of century manor...I have to get up to close the curtains of my bedroom's balcony overlooking dark windows of a vacant double-storey house across the street 🥲. Not taking any chances with my active imagination. Great book so far...thanks for uploading.
We had a wand we had to carry around to swipe on spots to register your presence. If you hit them too quick it would show on the readout and you would get chewed out. Had to hit over 50 every 3 hours in a certain order which would ensure you covered every inch of searchable area. It was great at night because it was much quieter sans the screaming and yelling and general chaos of a place like that with close to 600 people there. The cats and skunks which lived together underneath the buildings generally ignored you no matter how close you were to them and even knew they could access different areas by hanging out with you because you opened and closed locked gates they couldn't get past. Walking around at 3 in the morning with 5 or 6 cats and skunks following you would probably be a sight you wouldn't see in any other place on the planet and would scare the ever living bejeezus out of new employees. It was common practice to absolutely always fail to inform any newbs on this happening. The looks of fear after their walk was always priceless and we would feign ignorance of this occurring for as long as possible letting them think it was only happening to them. Just one small snippet of a million and one stories from behind the fence!
Great tale! Will definitely be listening again because of all the phone calls and work emails I kept getting today. That’s definitely not a bad thing, though. Love how the main character is named Jordan. lol
I’d love to explore one. I’ve been in a psych hospital museum with a lot of contraptions for defunct “treatments” such as ice baths and lobotomy instruments (orbitoclasts and mallets), etc. It was very interesting, even though it was upsetting.
@@JordanGrupe I hate to sound like a fanboy, but I really do find the stories you write some of the most enjoyable. Not to mention you being an excellent narrator. Thanks for all of your hard work. 👍
Damn Jordan. That was amazing.. Just realized it's 6:35 AM. Simply couldn't go to bed, not finishing the story. Totally epic. Thank you so much 😁 But you owe me a few hours of sleep 🤣😉
@@kimberlyshepherd270 I’m doing pretty good. How’s everything going with you? My wife is having proton therapy for her brain tumor. She is doing well and not having any side effects from the radiation. She has to have it done 5 days a week. She has a little less than a month left of the treatments. I hope that you are doing better. Sending lots of love and prayers from Northeast Florida. 🤗🩷🙏🏼
I love these stories are the perfect combination of terror, grossness, paranormal, and absolute hilarity😂..."PIVOT!" .. I totally lost it😂😂😂😂❤😅😅 4:02:11
Okay Im starting to think I know the author. You get in trouble, you go to the "bubble". The main control booth. Used for punishment when you screwed up. You could get stuck working in the bubble for a looong time. One person was permanently assigned there for REALLY screwing up.
Jordan should have known that Doug would have cleaned it up since he already was lying & playing a decent person & Jordan should have taken a quick picture or something if he wanted to get evidence about what he saw since everyone thot he was already loosing his mind🤦🏽♀️🤦🏽♀️😡
dude. i dont know what to say. i love all creepypastas but this was great, only thing is it sucks sam lost it i can identify with her i think it would have been better if jordan had helped her overcome her demons. that being said i believe yoyu were meant for this. keep writing/narrating you have a fan here
Omg🤦🏽♀️😡 for a security guard in a mental hospital that knows all the stories & past news about it, why the heck would he really think that there would be a little girl running around in an old scary hospital like that & not thinking ghosts @ all, I mean seriously 🤷♀️😡😡 is he really that dense w no sense in his head??🤦🏽♀️🤬🤬🤬 talk about an idiot 🤦🏽♀️🤦🏽♀️🤬
Ok, you peaked the interest of Chicago Illinois as to why this story is over 4 hours, im a 38 year old 🗝️ black 🐈⬛🖤 retired home 🏡 owner and i got time today ( just like the song by Money 💰🤑 Bag 💰 Yo called Time Today, listen 👂🏼 to it please 🥺) so we're about to find out why
@@JordanGrupe That was your first? It was amazing... you're so talented! I just discovered this channel a couple weeks ago. So glad that I did! Blessed Be Kat
The start of this story is very much inspired by my actual time working as a security guard in a haunted mental hospital. ngl I definitely watched some Office. Not the other one tho LOL
If you enjoyed this story and want to read the SEQUEL, you can find it here: a.co/d/1dGc1fv
Missed the start of the live premiere? Just rewind to the beginning!
Can't wait for this one thank you 🙏 ☺ 💓 💗 😂❤
READ the sequel?!! If I could sit long enough to read, I wouldn't be following YOU like a lost puppy😂.
But I will check Audible for it.
Brilliant stuff please do the sequel
Maybe I'll read it on the channel in the future =)@@Badassoldwoman
Please do the second part you absolutely nailed it bro fell asleep fast so kept putting it back to where I left off bro making time to listen in the day time that good
Used to work at a state psychiatric Hospital in New York on Long Island. This brings back some extremely bad memories, the tunnels were extremely creepy. Thanks for the trip down memory lane. 👍🏻
Mind if I ask, was that it during the 1980s?
@mq9893 Yes. 1988.
This was crazy. Every time I thought they were doomed they got saved. Every time I thought they were safe it took a turn for the horrible.
I'm at 2 hours 19 minutes right now and it's just crazy how this story transformed. That's what I love about creepypasta, the title can be "I think my grandpa is a serial killer" but it turns out the world has been invaded by interdimensional beings (real example).
One of my favorite stories/series!
That one of my favorites.
You were right did I not see my that plot twist coming.😂
I'm at 2h 19m as well and I got a real chuckle out of "my cousin was twelve and, he did indeed love trains," 😂
The story did not transform into a different story 2 hours and 19 minutes and I disagree
I absolutely love these long stories. It's so much easier to completely immerse into the story. More time to get to know characters and to relate to them. And jordan you are an amazing story teller one of my top 3 with Mr ballen and let's read.
Thank you so much!
I have been absolutely mesmerized with this story! I love the long ones! This one especially has kept my earpods in for the past 3 hours!! Thank you so much for the wonderful entertainment! I've sent it to everyone I know!! Love you!!!
Im not a huge fan of them I often can't focus on them for that long then I lose where I am at and can't get back into it
Loved this one. Your fastly becoming my favourite story teller...and not only have you the talent of bringing to life a story with your voice, but you write them too!!
Im so happy i discovered you. Thank you for consistently bringing out such quality content so often.
You are Awesome ❤❤❤
Same here!!
Jordan is great 💯. Have you listened to the Hollows End series?
Excellent writing, storytelling and flawless narration! Congratulations on your first novel; it was truly fascinating, kept me hanging onto every word - and up all night (and it’s been a while since I’ve been able to say that, lol).
Here’s to many, many more and Happy Holidays to you and yours!
Thank you!
Love that you incorporate lots of comedy in your creepy pasta writing. It’s tough to go to sleep when it’s so scary you have an adrenaline rush and I’m pretty sure the slight comedic relief is more realistic to the human experience tbh
ive heard snippets of this story for years. i orginionally read part of it on R/nosleep. this is the first time I've ever heard the whole story. i love this series. but, to know you wrote it. bravo man. bravo
Thank you! Glad you like the series, this was my first one I ever wrote!
That was your first? It was amazing… you’re so talented! I just discovered this channel a couple weeks ago. So glad that I did!
Blessed Be
Kat
I was honestly impressed. Got to be the best story I've heard thats kept me on the edge of my chair while listening. The details are exceptionally on point. Your very talented ❤ thankyou ❤
Even though ive read this story through another, your version was more creepy, i had to wait to listen to this in the day. Very rare reaction for me. Bravo to your reading 👏
Oooh thank you that's a huge compliment! I know my story is scary when I need to stop writing until morning
Started listening at 12.07am, at the part where Matt glimpsed a little girl standing in the window of century manor...I have to get up to close the curtains of my bedroom's balcony overlooking dark windows of a vacant double-storey house across the street 🥲. Not taking any chances with my active imagination. Great book so far...thanks for uploading.
This is a really decent story. And Jordan tells it so well.
We had a wand we had to carry around to swipe on spots to register your presence. If you hit them too quick it would show on the readout and you would get chewed out. Had to hit over 50 every 3 hours in a certain order which would ensure you covered every inch of searchable area. It was great at night because it was much quieter sans the screaming and yelling and general chaos of a place like that with close to 600 people there. The cats and skunks which lived together underneath the buildings generally ignored you no matter how close you were to them and even knew they could access different areas by hanging out with you because you opened and closed locked gates they couldn't get past. Walking around at 3 in the morning with 5 or 6 cats and skunks following you would probably be a sight you wouldn't see in any other place on the planet and would scare the ever living bejeezus out of new employees. It was common practice to absolutely always fail to inform any newbs on this happening. The looks of fear after their walk was always priceless and we would feign ignorance of this occurring for as long as possible letting them think it was only happening to them. Just one small snippet of a million and one stories from behind the fence!
3:45:00 thank you, i enjoy listening to this while i paint, I am able to finish. I appreciate it.
This one of the best videos on this channel. I love it. This is perfect.
Great tale! Will definitely be listening again because of all the phone calls and work emails I kept getting today. That’s definitely not a bad thing, though. Love how the main character is named Jordan. lol
Great story. Love the long ones. Listen to it the entire work day. Thank you😊
I've been in an abandon psychological hospital, and this is giving me chills.
It was fucking scary as fuck. Excuse my language, but dude that is some scary shit
I have goosebumps right now
There are definitely basements below the basements, and tunnels going everywhere.
If you don't mind me asking did you have any experiences?
I’d love to explore one. I’ve been in a psych hospital museum with a lot of contraptions for defunct “treatments” such as ice baths and lobotomy instruments (orbitoclasts and mallets), etc. It was very interesting, even though it was upsetting.
Don’t mind if I do!!
This is awesome, thank you so much😊
So hey, when can we hear more from hallows end? I miss that town.
Thank you! I am working more on the next installment today, hopefully soon! I can't give an exact timeframe but I promise it will be quality!
@@JordanGrupeCan't wait!!!
Congratulations on the story Jordan this had me glued to every word and so many twists and turns great story thank You for sharing it here with us
Great job yet again Jordan! Loved it!
Glad you enjoyed it!
@@JordanGrupe I hate to sound like a fanboy, but I really do find the stories you write some of the most enjoyable. Not to mention you being an excellent narrator. Thanks for all of your hard work. 👍
Damn Jordan. That was amazing.. Just realized it's 6:35 AM. Simply couldn't go to bed, not finishing the story. Totally epic. Thank you so much 😁 But you owe me a few hours of sleep 🤣😉
That means a lot, thank you so much!!!
@@JordanGrupe You are very welcome. I enjoy your stories to the fullest. So thank you
You've found your niche, and by God do you excel at it
Thank you! I appreciate that a lot =)
Wow Jordan over 4 hours!
Excellent!
(I’m over 1/2 way already & as always it’s a great story too! Thanks heaps!
😎♥️♥️♥️✌️
Hope you enjoy the conclusion! Thanks for commenting!
Love this channel ❤❤
Wow. Very interesting story Jordan. I must say, other than the Hollow's End stories, this one is my favorite.
Great story, and superb narration, thank you!
Absolutely loved the story ❤ thank you for sharing. Also enjoyed your voice
👍🏻👍🏻 supremely awesome, this was a epic adventure through the insane asylum. I enjoyed it was very entertaining. Thanks Jordan.😇💖
I have just subscribed.loving your style of narrative and stories. Thank you so very much.
That was a GREAT story. Thank you for this one. I really like the longer stories and this one was awesome ! 👌
Thanks for listening!
You’re killing Jordan!!!
Hi 👋
Every dam day 😂 slaying 💯
@@kimberlyshepherd270
Hey there Kimberly 👋🏻🩷
@@keithblount229 How have you been?
@@kimberlyshepherd270
I’m doing pretty good. How’s everything going with you? My wife is having proton therapy for her brain tumor. She is doing well and not having any side effects from the radiation. She has to have it done 5 days a week. She has a little less than a month left of the treatments.
I hope that you are doing better.
Sending lots of love and prayers from Northeast Florida. 🤗🩷🙏🏼
Great story Jordan!!! Also I just picked up on the fact that the main character name is Jordan 😊 love it!
This was actually inspired by my own experiences working in a hospital just like this as a security guard!
@@JordanGrupe That’s actually very creative! Randomly this morning I said “Ohhhh Jordan isn’t the only thing that matches, literally JG” 😂
Thanks again for another badass upload jordan! I set an alarm on my phone so i dont ever miss on3 🤣💪🏻💪🏻
I love your original stories.
50:45 starting to think Doug is a ghost
Thank you Jordan ❤. Going to fall asleep to your wonderful voice 😴
Thanks for watching and commenting Kimberly! Hope you're doing well
I love these stories are the perfect combination of terror, grossness, paranormal, and absolute hilarity😂..."PIVOT!" .. I totally lost it😂😂😂😂❤😅😅 4:02:11
This was fantastic! Was gonna say, if this isnt a book it needs to be!
I did a 7 part series and it matched up to 3 1/2 hours....this is a SLUG!!!
That was a fantastic story i really hope you post the second story soon.
Hi Jordan 👋. Looking forward to listening to this ❤. I know I'll love it like always!! 7 minutes to go 🎉
Hello my friend 🧡
The best stories told by the best narrator ❤❤❤
@@cindyhesson9213 Hi friend ❤️🫂. How have you been doing?
@@cindyhesson9213 💯❤️
@@kimberlyshepherd270 getting ready for Xmas 🧑🎄 Hope you and yours are well 🥰
OMG! That was a phenomenal story!
Just starting this story at the start of a 3rd shift security post....here goes!
Okay Im starting to think I know the author. You get in trouble, you go to the "bubble". The main control booth. Used for punishment when you screwed up. You could get stuck working in the bubble for a looong time. One person was permanently assigned there for REALLY screwing up.
I'm late but here😅😅😅 love listening to your stories ❤❤
I just had to say this story had me invested. Keep up the great work Jordan
Glad you enjoyed it!
I was rooting for Jordan and Samantha for a while
Damn..... that was a RIDE! Thanks so much for creating this.
Oh yea..great start to a 5:30 work morning 🎉❤
This is brilliant. Really well done! Xxx
Jordan should have known that Doug would have cleaned it up since he already was lying & playing a decent person & Jordan should have taken a quick picture or something if he wanted to get evidence about what he saw since everyone thot he was already loosing his mind🤦🏽♀️🤦🏽♀️😡
“WeLcOmE tO tHe rUmBlE bUrGeR.” 😂😂😂
My favorite chapter of this whole story 🤣
we dont respond to unexplained noises in asylums.
In an asylum, in an abandoned basement, in the dark...smh
good story only thing i got stuck on is why didnt they just break the speakers as they went
Amazing story.
dude. i dont know what to say. i love all creepypastas but this was great, only thing is it sucks sam lost it i can identify with her i think it would have been better if jordan had helped her overcome her demons. that being said i believe yoyu were meant for this. keep writing/narrating you have a fan here
Can't thank you enough for unleashing this epic story upon the world😊😊❤
Holy crap this story has so many twists. You're like the story version of M.Knight Shamalamadingdong 😂. Seriously though, this is an awesome story 👍
Omg🤦🏽♀️😡 for a security guard in a mental hospital that knows all the stories & past news about it, why the heck would he really think that there would be a little girl running around in an old scary hospital like that & not thinking ghosts @ all, I mean seriously 🤷♀️😡😡 is he really that dense w no sense in his head??🤦🏽♀️🤬🤬🤬 talk about an idiot 🤦🏽♀️🤦🏽♀️🤬
Exactly. He was a damn idiot.
Excellent story! Kinda weird hearing my name so much lol.
This needs to be a movie!
Not me using 90 percent of my shift enjoying this story 😁🤘
This is awsome jordan great job bud have a good Christmas an new year's
Super stoked!
Excellent narration!!
" I have bats in my belfry "
" you did a really shitty job, mom"!!!!… rotf
💙💚🖤 Yay, a super long story by YOU!!!
His phone was still charged after living in a tunnel for two months!?! Unbelievable!
...Where do I get me one of those?
This is my favorite top 3 creepy pasta of all times!!
Thank you so much!
Keep it up you'll be at millions of subs in no time!
Please post the sequel 😊
Oh Yes !🎊!🎀!🎊!!
🎄Merry🎁Christmas☃️To ME!
4:39:14
Ok, you peaked the interest of Chicago Illinois as to why this story is over 4 hours, im a 38 year old 🗝️ black 🐈⬛🖤 retired home 🏡 owner and i got time today ( just like the song by Money 💰🤑 Bag 💰 Yo called Time Today, listen 👂🏼 to it please 🥺) so we're about to find out why
Thanks!
Thank you! Very much appreciated Katherine!
@@JordanGrupe That was your first? It was amazing... you're so talented! I just discovered this channel a couple weeks ago. So glad that I did!
Blessed Be
Kat
I love your voice!!! ❤❤❤
As a former security guard I felt attacked by that quip about watching the office and nrop😅
The start of this story is very much inspired by my actual time working as a security guard in a haunted mental hospital. ngl I definitely watched some Office. Not the other one tho LOL
@@JordanGrupeOh wow!!
This one was amazing!!!
Woo! Can't wait
Great twist
Been working in a paychiatric hospital 13 years, nothing this exciting weird or horrific has ever happened😂
4 hours! Good dang
Loved this one!
Jordan your awesome love your weiting style and readings
1:01:18 i knew she was involved.
Great stories but your audio output is to quiet have to turn it up to max to hear you
Noted!
Entertaining the masses every night 🌙
Thanks JGrupe!
Amazing story. I feel bad for the villian though. Good thing I wasn't there. I would have got us all killed. 😅
I feel like I’ve heard this same story before
Maybe the first few chapters on MCP?
Great stuff,just me,you got the best voice
PIVOT!! ..lmfao
Great Story.
I’m excited ❤
Great stuff
Violent patient is code grey in America
Good stuff
Crazy good