This is a very very beautiful poem❤❤❤❤❤ aunty you have described the words so nicely you have described the topic so nicely you are a great poet aunty❤❤❤
Heartfelt lines and beautiful recitation, Abha. I liked the words you used, they are so rich in values and elegantly presented through your calm and soothing voice. Very nicely done, Abha. Also, liked the editing, the background music gives us goosebumps always. Jay Hind 🇮🇳
Wah kya khoob aur achi lines likhi hai apne.kash hum indians aisa ban pate,aisa kar pate.sabko desh se pyar karna,iss desh ke liye karna soch pate.kash humlog sabhi ke ander god ram ,sita,bharat,saturdhn,laxman jaise sanskar de pate.kash hum yaha ki sari girls ko jism numaish ki cheese se bahar nikalkar sabko rani laxmi bai bana pate.kash humlog sabhi ko god krisna and sudama ke jaisa pyar karna sikha pate.ye sab tabhi hoga jab ye bade bade log milkar sabke better education aur her youth ke job ka sochenge.but ye bade bade log to sirf fashion,dikhave,drugs,parties,au kutta palne me lage rahte hai.jab kutto ko apne seer chadhayenge to insan bhi to kutta hi banega ,god kaha se ban sakta hai.
so lovely can i use it for my competition . I am in 8th class DAV and will tell ur name and wont post on youtube or anywhere for sure while reciting please give permision
आप इस कविता को गणतंत्र दिवस और स्वतंत्रता दिवस के अवसर पर स्कूल में सुना सकते हैं । साधारण शब्दों में लिखी हुई देश भक्ति कविता।
Kal mujhe Ye poem assembly me bolna hair 🇮🇳
Mujhe bhi
mMvcV BV
Mujhe to hindi alogation ke liye chahiye tha kl hi h!
Bahut sunder kavita h ,meri beti iss kavita ko स्वतंत्रता दिवस pai suna ne ja rahi h apne school mai❤
No words for your poem 🤐🤐🤐
Thank you so much sister I proud of you an Indian I love my India .Jai hind jai bharat . Thank you
बहुत सुंदर कविता 👍
Very good poem and beautiful words chosen
Very Heart Touching Poem..........Thank you sooooo much for sharing Mam 😊🙏
Thanks a lot
बहुत ही सुंदर
This is a very very beautiful poem❤❤❤❤❤ aunty you have described the words so nicely you have described the topic so nicely you are a great poet aunty❤❤❤
Bhut Sundar 👏👏
Bahut bahut dhanyvad 🙏
भारत का वास्तविक चित्र उजागर करती कविता 🎯
मधुर स्वर और सुंदर लहजा 👌👌👌👌👌
Best recitation in hindi i have ever listened.
This is actually my favourite Hindi poem ever .we are proud to be indians
very beautiful kavita & speech
These poem heart' touching thank you mam
Great
♥️ congratulations 🎉.. ऐसी कविताएं सिर्फ़ वही व्यक्ति लिख सकता है जो सच्चा देशभक्त है 🇮🇳
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वाह 👏👏 बहुत सुंदर
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Outstanding
Superb 🎉🎉😊👍👍
Thank you so much for this poem
Ati sundar 😊
Jai hind 🙏🙏🙏🙏
Thank u so much mam 🙏 🙏
बहुत बहुत सुंदर रचना और आपका पेश करने का तरीका भी बहुत ज्यादा सुंदर है। बधाई आपको मेरा । ♥️
धन्यवाद 🙏
Bahut sunder
Such beautiful recital Abha, loved it. चिड़ियों की चहचहाट और इतनी सुंदर कविता साथ में, बहुत खूब।
Thank you so much 😊
Very nice mem 🎉🎉🎉🎉
Exellent 😍😍
Wow great mam.
You made me nostalgic 🇮🇳🇮🇳
Yeah…reminds me of school days 😍
I got goosebumps 😍
Beautiful ❤️
One of your best recital! And beautiful lines👏
Thank you 😊
I really like it
Superb Abha🌻Happy Republic Day🙏🙏
Thank you Deepika
Truly mesmerizing 🙇🏻♀️🌸
Beautifully written n spoken .
Thank you so much 😊
very motivational poem ♥️🥰
Thank you so much for appreciating. Glad you liked it 🙏
Very nice 👏 jai hind jai bharat
I did convert ur 999 likes into 1K 😉😅♥️| btw amazing patriotic poem !!!! Jai Hind 🇮🇳🙏🏻
Beautiful words
Amazing ❤❤
Mam I can't believe this video😮 it is very very nice
Thank you so much🙏
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Nice
Nice pottery ❤👍
Thanks 😊 1:53
Is this poem written by you? it's awesome!!
Yes, it’s written by me. Thank you for appreciation 🙏
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Heartfelt lines and beautiful recitation, Abha. I liked the words you used, they are so rich in values and elegantly presented through your calm and soothing voice. Very nicely done, Abha. Also, liked the editing, the background music gives us goosebumps always. Jay Hind 🇮🇳
Thank you so much Swarnali. Jai Hind 🇮🇳
Poem is very nice 😗😗😗😗many people can write like you but your voice...
Aah no one is having that talent ♥️♥️♥️
This comment was from heart ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️not from mind
I try to write poetry in simple words so that everyone can understand and enjoy it.
Thank you so much for appreciation.🙏
I am 12 years but I have written many poem like this in English on school, friends ,mom in hindi on imandari ,izzat.....and many more
@@beantkaurbeantkaur7383 great...keep writing 👍
@@beantkaurbeantkaur7383 if you are just 12 then you are talented. Some people have writing gift ✍️✍️and may be you are one of them 😊
Wah kya khoob aur achi lines likhi hai apne.kash hum indians aisa ban pate,aisa kar pate.sabko desh se pyar karna,iss desh ke liye karna soch pate.kash humlog sabhi ke ander god ram ,sita,bharat,saturdhn,laxman jaise sanskar de pate.kash hum yaha ki sari girls ko jism numaish ki cheese se bahar nikalkar sabko rani laxmi bai bana pate.kash humlog sabhi ko god krisna and sudama ke jaisa pyar karna sikha pate.ye sab tabhi hoga jab ye bade bade log milkar sabke better education aur her youth ke job ka sochenge.but ye bade bade log to sirf fashion,dikhave,drugs,parties,au kutta palne me lage rahte hai.jab kutto ko apne seer chadhayenge to insan bhi to kutta hi banega ,god kaha se ban sakta hai.
Such a beautiful poem and you have presented it so nicely. Loved the background music and editing too!
Thank you so much Rashi for your kind words ❤️
This poem is amazing thanks to it I got motivation and I referred a few words in my poem for a competition in school😅😅
Beautiful words, may we have the permission to use the poem for a patriotic event...?
It will be grateful
Yes
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It feels like the proud when I touch the Indian flag
Thank you for this beautiful poem. My students sang it for the choral recitation and won second prize
Wow great 👍
Please mam tomorrow is my compition I will tell this poem please mam tell me some props ideas so that I can use it in my poem love your poem
Thank you aunty 😊
so lovely can i use it for my competition . I am in 8th class DAV and will tell ur name and wont post on youtube or anywhere for sure while reciting please give permision
Sure Nishtha. Please recite this in your school. Just do not post anywhere without giving credit 🙏
@@PoetrybyAbhaChhavi yes thankyou mam you are so lovely and the poem is so beautiful loved it u should really try in higher platforms
Who is author of this poem
Written by me. Poem ©️Abha Chhavi
Thanks for you
This is my question to that you write english poem too
Do you write poems in english too ??
If plz then confirm me
Can you please sent the lyrics alone 😢😢
Bgm kaha se lia?
Kya ye Kavita vir rash ki h
ये एक देशभक्ति कविता है। पूर्णतया वीर रस कविता नही कह सकते इसको 🙏
मेरी ये कविता वीर रस कविता है 👇
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ma'am ne poit ka nam pocha tha
ये मेरी लिखी हुई कविता है
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