Character Goals In A Scene \\ Writing Great Scenes, Video 2

Поділитися
Вставка
  • Опубліковано 7 лип 2024
  • Welcome back to Video 2 of our "Writing Great Scenes" Series! Today, let's talk about one of the main elements of a great scene: A point-of-view character with a clear goal or desire.
    To grab your free “How To Write Great Scenes” Workbook, sign up for my mailing list on this blog post: heartbreathings.com/your-char...
    You’ll get instant access to my entire HB Resource Library!
    Watch The Bourne Identity Apartment Scene here: • The Bourne Identity (7...
    (Warning: It is a bit violent if you've never seen this before! If you don't like gun violence or killing, just skip it!)
    ✰✰✰My Favorite Craft Books That Helped Me Learn To Write Great Scenes✰✰✰
    "Plot and Structure" by James Scott Bell: amzn.to/3nYuTX2
    "Scene And Structure" by Jack M. Bickham: amzn.to/3Iz9L3a
    "Story Genius" by Lisa Cron: amzn.to/3Pmni0J
    "The Anatomy of Story" by John Truby: amzn.to/3z61Ze5
    "Structuring Your Novel" by K.M. Weiland: amzn.to/3AOfPTr
    Feel free to please add your favorite resources in the comments! We all learn from each other!!
    TimeStamps:
    0:00 Introduction
    0:21 Goal or Desire
    2:27 The Stakes
    6:32 Six Questions To Ask
    8:40 Example: The Bourne Identity
    14:22 Choosing POV Character
    17:18 Closing Thoughts
    ✰✰✰✰✰✰✰✰
    🖤Visit me on Etsy to see my custom 90-Day planner, the HB90 Method. The 2022 Planners are available now! www.etsy.com/shop/heartbreath...
    🖤Want to help support me as an author? Grab my book, The Witch’s Key, now!
    books2read.com/thewitchskey
    🖤FOLLOW ME ON INSTAGRAM!
    / heartbreathings
    🖤Join me LIVE Friday at 4PM Eastern time each week on my second channel for a live coffee chat Q&A where we often talk about witchy stuff or the writing process!. Join us! / sarracannon 🖤
    🖤Buy HB90 Method Stickers and other stickers for writers at Procrastiplanner, Etc!!! www.etsy.com/shop/Procrastipl...
    Like my music? I get all of it from Epidemic Sound. Get a 30 day free trial here when you use my link to sign up : www.epidemicsound.com/referra...
    ✰✰✰✰✰✰✰✰
    SUBSCRIBE NOW -- / heartbreathings
    _____
    I’m truly so honored and appreciative of when you want to send me Happy Mail! It touches my heart more than I can say. Thank you all so much!
    My mailing address is:
    Sarra Cannon
    445 E FM 1382
    Suite 3 - 419
    Cedar Hill, TX 75104
    _____
    BLOG -- heartbreathings.com/blog
    INSTAGRAM -- / heartbreathings
    FACEBOOK -- / heartbreathings
    TWITTER -- / heartbblog
    ____
    Heart Breathings, Episode 350
    _____
    About Me: My name is Sarra Cannon, and I've been indie publishing since 2010. In that time, I have published 26 books and sold well over half a million copies.
    I've made some mistakes along the way, but I've also learned some valuable lessons that I think will help you reach your goals. I can't wait to help you learn to make money writing what you love.
    ____
    MY BOOKS -- www.sarracannon.com
    THREE FREE BOOKS -- sarracannon.com/book/beautiful...
    My Author \ Vlog Channel - / sarracannon
    #authortube
  • Навчання та стиль

КОМЕНТАРІ • 29

  • @HeartBreathings
    @HeartBreathings  Рік тому +14

    I hope you're enjoying this series. Don't forget to grab your workbook! (Link in Description) and I'll be back next week for a discussion on conflict and tension in your scenes.

    • @joannaholden943
      @joannaholden943 Рік тому +1

      Loving this new series so far. ❤️ Thanks for all the amazing content you share!

    • @megdalena01
      @megdalena01 Рік тому

      I love this series!!

    • @Diane281
      @Diane281 Рік тому

      being a first time writer i wish i could talk to you in person because i'm seriously struggling with what i want to write

  • @lennemitincan
    @lennemitincan Рік тому +11

    Me : Can t write today. No motivation, depressed and on my period.
    Sarra: how to write a scene
    My brain : fine ill try a little..

  • @nicolelee1717
    @nicolelee1717 Рік тому +4

    This series is exactly what I need right now. I wish the entire series was available for me to binge!! Love your work!!!! Thank you so much.

  • @28hadassa
    @28hadassa Рік тому +7

    You're a great teacher, Sarra! Thank you for the step-by-step!

  • @heathercamacho5721
    @heathercamacho5721 Рік тому +7

    Love the video, and KM Weiland’s writing resources are my absolute favorite! Her writing is so comprehensive and thorough I hardly ever have questions after reading her content. I also enrolled in your upcoming course - can’t wait.

  • @SallyBosco
    @SallyBosco Рік тому +4

    Thanks Sara! Great series!!! I'd love it if you could analyze some of the quieter scenes that don't have a lot of apparent conflict.

  • @keertanaanand2451
    @keertanaanand2451 Рік тому +2

    It is so fun to wait for these videos...the happiness of seeing that notification 🤗

  • @debpaynepurnell6131
    @debpaynepurnell6131 Рік тому +1

    This advice is great for playwrights, too.

  • @fralou_sind_kreativ
    @fralou_sind_kreativ Рік тому

    While watching I took so many notes!!!! The cool thing is, that I was just about to edit my children's novel and go for it scene by scene. So what a perfect timing to see you video! Thank you!

  • @OwnYourPowerTV
    @OwnYourPowerTV 10 місяців тому

    Thank you. Very helpful!

  • @brittany_wmsb
    @brittany_wmsb Рік тому

    So helpful, thank you!

  • @sunshinejulie5687
    @sunshinejulie5687 Рік тому

    Love this!

  • @BonnieDragonKat
    @BonnieDragonKat Рік тому

    Oh your timing Sarra! Just when I needed this! Thanks ans well done!

  • @debrahorst8154
    @debrahorst8154 Рік тому +1

    Thank you, Sarra! Looking forward to implementing in my WIP.

  • @reginabusboom8271
    @reginabusboom8271 Рік тому

    Thank you for the great video! I’ve learned so much!

  • @truebookaddict
    @truebookaddict Рік тому

    Loving this series! Thanks for all the book recs...I actually own, and have read, several of them. 😊

  • @nildam.bonilla5849
    @nildam.bonilla5849 Рік тому +2

    Already know that when the series is done I will rewatch it all❤

  • @tamidawn8383
    @tamidawn8383 Рік тому

    Thank you for this series! This little video is packed with helpful nuggets that felt like treasures revealed. You have a way of explaining things that opens mind boxes for me. And I’m definitely adding the book recommendations to my “study the craft” list.

  • @judewalsh500
    @judewalsh500 Рік тому

    Great segment Sarra, I am learning so much about scene writing! You mentioned a link to KM Weiland's blog posts about scenes but I don't see it? Looking forward to #3!

  • @josieann4390
    @josieann4390 Рік тому

    💜💜💜

  • @mariajromaley
    @mariajromaley Рік тому

    hi thx ! It was very interesting. For the question of who speak (pov), I ask myself too what do I want to show to the readers, and who will be the funniest in this situation ? (sorry for my english). XD

  • @krisbrick3089
    @krisbrick3089 Рік тому

    In two of my five opening chapters, my MC doesn’t have a goal. Instead, he’s meeting important side chapters. The point is to establish how they relate to him. This is so when they die/go crazy in the future, the reader understands how much of an impact it has on the MC and why he makes the decisions he does from that point. Curious what your thoughts are on this?
    -Brick

  • @lesliemoiseauthor
    @lesliemoiseauthor Рік тому

    I always ask my character what she wants and what she fears.

  • @rileytuawai7241
    @rileytuawai7241 Рік тому

    Im a bit confused. These questions don't align with the workbook