Character Goals In A Scene \\ Writing Great Scenes, Video 2

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  • @HeartBreathings
    @HeartBreathings  2 роки тому +15

    I hope you're enjoying this series. Don't forget to grab your workbook! (Link in Description) and I'll be back next week for a discussion on conflict and tension in your scenes.

    • @joannaholden943
      @joannaholden943 2 роки тому +1

      Loving this new series so far. ❤️ Thanks for all the amazing content you share!

    • @megdalena01
      @megdalena01 2 роки тому

      I love this series!!

    • @Diane281
      @Diane281 2 роки тому

      being a first time writer i wish i could talk to you in person because i'm seriously struggling with what i want to write

  • @mayadeslilas
    @mayadeslilas 2 роки тому +13

    Me : Can t write today. No motivation, depressed and on my period.
    Sarra: how to write a scene
    My brain : fine ill try a little..

  • @28hadassa
    @28hadassa 2 роки тому +7

    You're a great teacher, Sarra! Thank you for the step-by-step!

  • @keertanaanand2451
    @keertanaanand2451 2 роки тому +3

    It is so fun to wait for these videos...the happiness of seeing that notification 🤗

  • @SallyBosco
    @SallyBosco 2 роки тому +4

    Thanks Sara! Great series!!! I'd love it if you could analyze some of the quieter scenes that don't have a lot of apparent conflict.

  • @heathercamacho5721
    @heathercamacho5721 2 роки тому +7

    Love the video, and KM Weiland’s writing resources are my absolute favorite! Her writing is so comprehensive and thorough I hardly ever have questions after reading her content. I also enrolled in your upcoming course - can’t wait.

  • @nicolelee1717
    @nicolelee1717 2 роки тому +4

    This series is exactly what I need right now. I wish the entire series was available for me to binge!! Love your work!!!! Thank you so much.

  • @fralou_sind_kreativ
    @fralou_sind_kreativ 2 роки тому +1

    While watching I took so many notes!!!! The cool thing is, that I was just about to edit my children's novel and go for it scene by scene. So what a perfect timing to see you video! Thank you!

  • @nildam.bonilla5849
    @nildam.bonilla5849 2 роки тому +3

    Already know that when the series is done I will rewatch it all❤

  • @debpaynepurnell6131
    @debpaynepurnell6131 2 роки тому +1

    This advice is great for playwrights, too.

  • @brittany_wmsb
    @brittany_wmsb Рік тому

    So helpful, thank you!

  • @OwnYourPowerTV
    @OwnYourPowerTV Рік тому

    Thank you. Very helpful!

  • @BonnieDragonKat
    @BonnieDragonKat 2 роки тому +1

    Oh your timing Sarra! Just when I needed this! Thanks ans well done!

  • @tamidawn8383
    @tamidawn8383 2 роки тому

    Thank you for this series! This little video is packed with helpful nuggets that felt like treasures revealed. You have a way of explaining things that opens mind boxes for me. And I’m definitely adding the book recommendations to my “study the craft” list.

  • @debrahorst8154
    @debrahorst8154 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you, Sarra! Looking forward to implementing in my WIP.

  • @reginabusboom8271
    @reginabusboom8271 2 роки тому

    Thank you for the great video! I’ve learned so much!

  • @msmwriter
    @msmwriter 2 роки тому

    Loving this series! Thanks for all the book recs...I actually own, and have read, several of them. 😊

  • @judewalsh500
    @judewalsh500 2 роки тому

    Great segment Sarra, I am learning so much about scene writing! You mentioned a link to KM Weiland's blog posts about scenes but I don't see it? Looking forward to #3!

  • @sunshinejulie5687
    @sunshinejulie5687 2 роки тому

    Love this!

  • @mariajromaley
    @mariajromaley 2 роки тому

    hi thx ! It was very interesting. For the question of who speak (pov), I ask myself too what do I want to show to the readers, and who will be the funniest in this situation ? (sorry for my english). XD

  • @krisbrick3089
    @krisbrick3089 2 роки тому

    In two of my five opening chapters, my MC doesn’t have a goal. Instead, he’s meeting important side chapters. The point is to establish how they relate to him. This is so when they die/go crazy in the future, the reader understands how much of an impact it has on the MC and why he makes the decisions he does from that point. Curious what your thoughts are on this?
    -Brick

  • @josieann4390
    @josieann4390 2 роки тому

    💜💜💜

  • @lesliemoiseauthor
    @lesliemoiseauthor 2 роки тому +1

    I always ask my character what she wants and what she fears.

  • @rileytuawai7241
    @rileytuawai7241 2 роки тому

    Im a bit confused. These questions don't align with the workbook