I see that you've been sleeping, Walking while your dreaming, Talking lots of nonsense, an unconscious lucid being. Lost unto the sea in A dingy they call a mind, Shouting off opinions on how the other one should survive. Another one of the times, Another son of demise, One other reason the seasons are changing our lives. With rage in my eyes, I plead my case, We got peace to make, It's time to open eyes and let your beast awake.
if you want some genuine feedback..this sounds more like a poem than a song...needs some more cultivation...need to think about what would make the most sense to the listener...not bad tho
@@blackwll8547 it is more like a poem, you're right. I write them that way because I got bored of writing full length raps. But I appreciate the feedback, I comment on a lot of shit so if you see my name tell me what you think
Angel wings wrap around and entwine, Lifting up to a cherubs’ kiss beyond divine, A scent of old and new merge, And emotion can’t simply be put into words, The sun shines brightly, On those who ponder the intentions on a free world, And radiates on those who wish to escape, Drugs inserted into veins, Do not decimate the pain, Because pain is only lifted through warm embrace, And adaptation to bring change.
Im still awake Sun rays sneak past my curtain I start my day Don't understand why my necks hurting Pillows on the floor Yesterday was wild mmhm Water on my face In the morning feels as cold as ice Raspiness in the voice as I talk Stepping over petals as I walk Plaques on the walls hanging panties Yesterday was wild mmm
How you doin How you doin How you doin How you doin without me now How's the family Are they okay Hope they're alright Do they ever mention me now Should I wonder if I hurt you Or are you with someone Who treats you really well
Take me back before I fell in this trap her love turned wrath as my honeymoon period is everlast shes trying to swing trying to crack this light in me she questions how could this be a man with nothing so content is he her heart is envy of this peace within he lover of her pain this chaos she presents to me warrior of love n light baby lets flee into this dark yeah he knows both of we I have healed and found a light will you let me lead she controls controls controls and slowly watches us sink resilient my soul BE floating back to the surface baby I can only go so deep buoyant is my love in this dense galaxy the rest is on she, I see you still in this dark, looking down upon me this resenentment of my light kept you from me as I am you baby why cant you let me lead just trying to sooth your soul's wounds through these tunes for now I must go, as I can not intervene, GOD told me so, its always been a lonely road but now I know all is one so I am surronded by love light beings, fighting off these darker themes ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I figured if I could help you grow, evovle, are you awake? I am writting the answers to problems unsolved crimes against us all got me up late out of my mind in a lucid state this is what I find.........
Are you awake?hardly But haven't dreamed in a bit, Ate off the wrong tree Now we backwards a bit, the Atlas just keeps Ashing another casket it's sick,shackled- these binds ananomet trapped in the web, taping your foot tryna :tap out the_grim_ Reap want me sleep :another casket it sick You killed the old me,go on clap for it b!tch
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Are you still awake?
I'm floating on a cloud listing to this
MEANS I DID SOMETHING RIGHT LETS GO
Ain't no way you just dropped this.
I DID I DID I DID
it’s SO GOOD BRO HOLY F**K
thank uuuuu!
I see that you've been sleeping,
Walking while your dreaming,
Talking lots of nonsense,
an unconscious lucid being.
Lost unto the sea in
A dingy they call a mind,
Shouting off opinions on how the other one should survive.
Another one of the times,
Another son of demise,
One other reason the seasons are changing our lives.
With rage in my eyes,
I plead my case,
We got peace to make,
It's time to open eyes and let your beast awake.
you have so much talent, please keep writing
@@zionbs4579 Thanks man I appreciate it. Just wish I did something with it lol
@@rhymstien3975bandlab broski seriously
if you want some genuine feedback..this sounds more like a poem than a song...needs some more cultivation...need to think about what would make the most sense to the listener...not bad tho
@@blackwll8547 it is more like a poem, you're right. I write them that way because I got bored of writing full length raps. But I appreciate the feedback, I comment on a lot of shit so if you see my name tell me what you think
never disappoints.. u gotta believe i'm already working on smth special with this ;)
LOVE THAT
Freaking amazing .
thank you sm
this is pure art. Im working on something with this absolutely masterpiece🙌🏽
thank u sm
Amazing work, please go further down this direction
saw them live a few weeks ago so best beleive more is coming
Everytime I listen it just keeps getting better. Reminds me of some of the best times in my life 😩😩😩😩
ahhh love that!!
This is absolutely incredible
thanks my g !!
More of this. Please.
oh for sureee
Bro has every genre downnn
got to
Yes🤝🔥
I love this so muchhh!! I’m definitely gonna write a song to this but I’ll give you credits for the best 100% this is so good what ❤️
dat smooooth eery!!!
INDEED
What a vibe
thank u sm!!
Angel wings wrap around and entwine,
Lifting up to a cherubs’ kiss beyond divine,
A scent of old and new merge,
And emotion can’t simply be put into words,
The sun shines brightly,
On those who ponder the intentions on a free world,
And radiates on those who wish to escape,
Drugs inserted into veins,
Do not decimate the pain,
Because pain is only lifted through warm embrace,
And adaptation to bring change.
Keep up the cooking 🔥
will do :)
this one is so pretty, pleeeease make more like this! I have almost every song in my channel produced by you!❤
beautiful work art
thank u sm !!
this is amazing
thank you !!
amazing
Im still awake
Sun rays sneak past my curtain
I start my day
Don't understand why my necks hurting
Pillows on the floor
Yesterday was wild mmhm
Water on my face
In the morning feels as cold as ice
Raspiness in the voice as I talk
Stepping over petals as I walk
Plaques on the walls hanging panties
Yesterday was wild mmm
cuerpos alumbrantes
y no vas a parar
No
That is fucking biblical mate
MY GUY! thank u
🐐
ur too kind
Holy SHIT
:)
Cool nice
thanks
How you doin
How you doin
How you doin
How you doin without me now
How's the family
Are they okay
Hope they're alright
Do they ever mention me now
Should I wonder if I hurt you
Or are you with someone
Who treats you really well
WOW
😈
Take me back
before I fell in this trap
her love turned wrath
as my honeymoon period is everlast
shes trying to swing
trying to crack this light in me
she questions how could this be
a man with nothing so content is he
her heart is envy of this peace within he
lover of her pain this chaos she presents to me
warrior of love n light baby lets flee
into this dark yeah he knows both of we
I have healed and found a light will you let me lead
she controls controls controls and slowly watches us sink
resilient my soul BE floating back to the surface baby I can only go so deep buoyant is my love in this dense galaxy
the rest is on she, I see you still in this dark, looking down upon me
this resenentment of my light kept you from me as I am you
baby why cant you let me lead just trying to sooth your soul's wounds through these tunes
for now I must go, as I can not intervene, GOD told me so, its always been a lonely road
but now I know all is one so I am surronded by love light beings, fighting off these darker themes
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I figured if I could help you grow, evovle, are you awake? I am writting the answers to problems unsolved
crimes against us all got me up late out of my mind in a lucid state this is what I find.........
Lmao wtf eery.
You too good at this shit 😂😂
Never thought id see "arctic monkeys type beat" in my fuckin life
im doing everything from now on LOL
🎯🎯🎯🎯🎯
bullseye
why’s it saying track not found when you press the link?? I need this so bad 😭
try again! its working for me
arcane
thats my guy
my chance
i got it my chance
I'm not that bad
Matter of fact I'm half way decent at this thing called life
Probably not
yea im sleeping
Are you awake?hardly
But haven't dreamed in a bit,
Ate off the wrong tree
Now we backwards a bit,
the Atlas just keeps
Ashing another casket it's sick,shackled- these binds ananomet trapped in the web, taping your foot tryna :tap out the_grim_
Reap want me sleep :another casket it sick
You killed the old me,go on
clap for it
b!tch
🍷 🗿 why you only call me when you're high
MHMMM
holy fuck
LOVE U BROTHA THANK U
Hey man!, gave credit to you and check out the song I made!, Called Afternoon Blues, it's on SoundCloud and audiomack!❤❤❤
heck ya !!!
Am I really alive
who even knows
Bro just sell me this.
email me ;)