So they answered a distress call to a war with two factions, then switched to new story no war? The story shifts to some unknown alien structure that gives them a map of unknown space. My question is what happened to the war and the civilians that in the beginning they were hell bent on protecting?" Weird disjointed story that can't keep a continuous plot. It's like two stories both incomplete were just mashed together. I've listened to a few stories from this channel and in them they either repeat sections already revealed once to say the same things again or they completely loose the plot only to switch to something else. My advice to whomever runs the channel would be to maybe proof listen and edit a little more before uploading. Figure out what story their telling and keep it consistent without loosing the plot or suddenly switching to something else entirely. Good luck in the future but until I see these things addressed I will not be subscribing as time is finite for us all and wasting it just makes no sense.
I appreciate your feedback! I aimed to create an intense and gripping narrative, but I understand that preferences vary. I'll keep that in mind for future stories!
So they answered a distress call to a war with two factions, then switched to new story no war?
The story shifts to some unknown alien structure that gives them a map of unknown space. My question is what happened to the war and the civilians that in the beginning they were hell bent on protecting?"
Weird disjointed story that can't keep a continuous plot. It's like two stories both incomplete were just mashed together.
I've listened to a few stories from this channel and in them they either repeat sections already revealed once to say the same things again or they completely loose the plot only to switch to something else.
My advice to whomever runs the channel would be to maybe proof listen and edit a little more before uploading.
Figure out what story their telling and keep it consistent without loosing the plot or suddenly switching to something else entirely.
Good luck in the future but until I see these things addressed I will not be subscribing as time is finite for us all and wasting it just makes no sense.
Wordy and unfocused.
super overly dramatic
I appreciate your feedback! I aimed to create an intense and gripping narrative, but I understand that preferences vary. I'll keep that in mind for future stories!