Hi. Your content is overall really good. The music is enticing, a journey experience each time, and the visuals of the videos are, most often, beautiful and transferring me to a different place. There's just one thing that puts me off in your music, and these are the lyrics and their effects. It feels like you put too many effects on your voice (autotune, echo, etc). I am no sound or music expert, but it sounds too much in my ears. Although you could have created something pure and beautiful, a lot of "noise" ends up appearing when your singing voice is involved because of all the effects. In my opinion, you need a little more practice with your vocals. I feel like your music would sound infinitely better without all those extra effects. Also, your lyrics are very blunt. They are very literal. I understand the messages you want to give to the audience, but you may want to think of a different approach. It sounds like you wrote a text (that very rarely rhymes) which you read in a singing voice, and it sounds like "preaching" and doesn't get the message across. I do agree with your messages, and I do believe in the power of music. However, the times I've become genuinely inspired by songs is when the music was enticing (yours fit in this category) and/or when the lyrics gave me strength. Do a little research on the kind of music that empowers people. Especially about the lyrics, since your genre is unique and won't fit in what most people are used to listening. At the least, make your lyrics rhyme.
Hey there! Thanks for the comprehensive feedback, glad you’re enjoying the visuals and the instrumental aspects 😊 I appreciate you bringing attention to what didn’t resonate for you. I agree on needing to practice my vocals, it’s one of the areas that needs the most work. And for the lyrics, thanks for pointing that out how literal they are, I’m still learning and working to find my own style, and who knows, maybe if 3-5 years the lyrics will be more poetic, more ‘showing not telling.’
@norwaywalksasmr9478 I really appreciate it actually. Feedback is valuable to me, thanks for making the time to share your perspective! In a few years I wonder what can happen with slow but steady growth, I hope the rest of your day is awesome!
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Wow. Super immersive.
Thank you! I wanted to take you on a journey, glad it felt that way :)
Hi. Your content is overall really good. The music is enticing, a journey experience each time, and the visuals of the videos are, most often, beautiful and transferring me to a different place.
There's just one thing that puts me off in your music, and these are the lyrics and their effects. It feels like you put too many effects on your voice (autotune, echo, etc). I am no sound or music expert, but it sounds too much in my ears. Although you could have created something pure and beautiful, a lot of "noise" ends up appearing when your singing voice is involved because of all the effects. In my opinion, you need a little more practice with your vocals. I feel like your music would sound infinitely better without all those extra effects.
Also, your lyrics are very blunt. They are very literal. I understand the messages you want to give to the audience, but you may want to think of a different approach. It sounds like you wrote a text (that very rarely rhymes) which you read in a singing voice, and it sounds like "preaching" and doesn't get the message across.
I do agree with your messages, and I do believe in the power of music. However, the times I've become genuinely inspired by songs is when the music was enticing (yours fit in this category) and/or when the lyrics gave me strength. Do a little research on the kind of music that empowers people. Especially about the lyrics, since your genre is unique and won't fit in what most people are used to listening.
At the least, make your lyrics rhyme.
Hey there!
Thanks for the comprehensive feedback, glad you’re enjoying the visuals and the instrumental aspects 😊
I appreciate you bringing attention to what didn’t resonate for you. I agree on needing to practice my vocals, it’s one of the areas that needs the most work.
And for the lyrics, thanks for pointing that out how literal they are, I’m still learning and working to find my own style, and who knows, maybe if 3-5 years the lyrics will be more poetic, more ‘showing not telling.’
@@WakingsCallThank you for reading, and I'm sorry if I was abrasive. I enjoy your music a lot, and I wish to see you evolving. Best of luck.
@norwaywalksasmr9478 I really appreciate it actually. Feedback is valuable to me, thanks for making the time to share your perspective!
In a few years I wonder what can happen with slow but steady growth,
I hope the rest of your day is awesome!