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  • @Amalioji2
    @Amalioji2 2 роки тому +162

    Spending months learning how to write an assay for my research papers, you are the most clear, concise, organize and easy to follow presenter. For that I am grateful. Thank you!!!

    • @XxTaEhYuNs_BaSmEnTxX
      @XxTaEhYuNs_BaSmEnTxX Рік тому +1

      Same as a 9th grader I do researches in science astronomy and this helped

    • @Crimsonedits
      @Crimsonedits Рік тому +2

      I agree

    • @Mitchclan
      @Mitchclan 27 днів тому +1

      You aren't the only person who is forever grateful for this video

  • @F33tLov3r
    @F33tLov3r 3 роки тому +824

    istg the essay was due 2 months ago and here I am just now starting to write it-

    • @davidpan6349
      @davidpan6349 3 роки тому +14

      Same...

    • @oliviastevens9934
      @oliviastevens9934 3 роки тому +78

      mine is due tonight 🧍🏼‍♀️

    • @polaris7346
      @polaris7346 3 роки тому +14

      mine was due in april....

    • @nonianunciacion503
      @nonianunciacion503 3 роки тому +6

      Lmao

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 3 роки тому

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved.

  • @anthonycortinas1291
    @anthonycortinas1291 2 роки тому +86

    Good evening. I just want to say how much I love watching your UA-cam videos. I am a retired veteran who never had the chance to go to high school. I am 38 years old and with my disability through the years of the military it has made going back to school so much harder than what it should be. I wrote my first essay ever a few weeks ago. And even though I need a lot of work and help in my writing. Thanks to you and how you broke it all down for me to learn. I was able to do my introduction, thesis , body and closing paragraphs. I am very proud because with your help I was able to make an 85. It was one of the hardest things I had to do in college. Especially since I never had that opportunity to go to high school and learn all these things I am so behind on. I am attempting to do this character analysis essay and once again I come to you for guidance. You don’t know how much it means to me that when I look up on UA-cam I look for your face out of everything and everyone on here. I am delighted and so great full for you and your videos that help me understand. When I read to understand it doesn’t catch or sink in. But watching you and seeing it does a whole lot. Thank you again. Have a blessed day or evening. And happy Halloween 🎃

  • @lucid-reality23
    @lucid-reality23 2 роки тому +18

    I watched this 2 days before my essay deadline and it helped me very much! Thank you!

  • @shotzcs2803
    @shotzcs2803 3 роки тому +344

    I got a fsa tommorow, i need this, thanks!

    • @float5251
      @float5251 3 роки тому +3

      @Gizmo Fd lol 🤝😂

    • @ashlee1330
      @ashlee1330 3 роки тому +13

      bro me too😂. & i have to wake up in 4hrs

    • @float5251
      @float5251 3 роки тому +7

      @@ashlee1330 wake up boi ma ah jus woke to 🤧 6:00 am

    • @JuanMendoza-hh2nq
      @JuanMendoza-hh2nq 3 роки тому +7

      I got fsa today 😱😂

    • @Young_FlexerOG
      @Young_FlexerOG 3 роки тому +6

      I got fsa today too lol.

  • @sheikahchick9861
    @sheikahchick9861 2 роки тому +142

    Really really helpful! I have never been a strong essay writer and I have two essays coming up for the end of the semester. This was so easy to understand! Thank you!

    • @Wahkee1
      @Wahkee1 Рік тому

      Ha! Sucks to be you!

  • @mr.alejandre9428
    @mr.alejandre9428 3 роки тому +75

    When were in high school my English teacher always requires essay in every topic in English we would encounter. Base on my stock knowledge, essay has three basic parts: introduction that aims to give the reader what is the essay all about, body it's typically about facts or anything that has anything to with the introduction part and lastly conclusion which aims to summarize all the parts of essay sometimes it may include your opinion or anything. I'm not good at writing essays but I have enough knowledge about it. Also, I find writing essays hard especially if it's in English which is my second language. Nevertheless, I sometimes find writing essays interesting.

  • @randomperson-gs1ck
    @randomperson-gs1ck 2 роки тому +12

    I just entered high school in a special class for Journalism and this very helpful. Thank you so much 🥰

  • @nihadtouiti
    @nihadtouiti 2 роки тому +17

    I’m preparing for my exam and I found your video so helpful. Thank you!

  • @bigboi5763
    @bigboi5763 3 роки тому +80

    I have an end of year exam and I'm in year 10. This helped me out so much and im really thankful for this video
    Edit: I got a grade 7 out of 9 which I'm really happy with😁😁 thank uuuuu❤

    • @emon3851
      @emon3851 2 роки тому +1

      Good

    • @Sir_Isaac_Newton_
      @Sir_Isaac_Newton_ 2 роки тому

      with that pfp you deserve a 0/9

    • @Wahkee1
      @Wahkee1 Рік тому +1

      Imagine getting a 7 out of 9! Couldn’t been me

    • @SwayamRao-vb8yx
      @SwayamRao-vb8yx 6 місяців тому

      ⁠@@Wahkee1bro what do you mean that is really good

  • @cecireynolds9800
    @cecireynolds9800 3 роки тому +84

    Thanks I was struggling with my essay! this helped so much! ❤️

  • @marydiamond3631
    @marydiamond3631 10 місяців тому +1

    Thank you! I played this for my English students to help them begin their writing their research papers!~

  • @mwansachikonde4193
    @mwansachikonde4193 2 роки тому +29

    Just came across this video series yesterday, I'm learning a lot and I love the content. Thanks! ❤️

  • @ghosttttt8
    @ghosttttt8 7 місяців тому +80

    Watching this before exam 💀

  • @chrisyes282
    @chrisyes282 3 роки тому +33

    Just to let you know my teacher used this video and it was helpful.

  • @vendetta4562
    @vendetta4562 3 роки тому +24

    Fsa today yessir, wish me luck

    • @shalicia.a
      @shalicia.a 3 роки тому +4

      I got mine tomorrow I’m scared😭🙏🏾

    • @pookiedookie3000
      @pookiedookie3000 3 роки тому

      @@shalicia.a same

    • @shalicia.a
      @shalicia.a 3 роки тому

      @@pookiedookie3000 wish you luck😭

  • @DigiSTREAM21
    @DigiSTREAM21 11 місяців тому +4

    Clearest introduction writing video on UA-cam thus far. Your style of presenting information gets five stars, it is easy to interpret and follow along with.

  • @sivakatakam3078
    @sivakatakam3078 3 роки тому +7

    I rocked my essay project just because of you

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 3 роки тому +1

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved. **

  • @Toemuncher1
    @Toemuncher1 2 роки тому +2

    My FSA is today. Thanks for the help wish me luck ✌🏽
    (Watching this before school)

  • @owenscooters1489
    @owenscooters1489 3 роки тому +18

    thank you I needed this !

  • @thadsanchez9306
    @thadsanchez9306 6 місяців тому +8

    "erm what the sigma" was my hook

  • @ssiqhr
    @ssiqhr 3 роки тому +17

    Thank you so much because I got fsa tomorrow

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 3 роки тому

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved. **

  • @Droplid
    @Droplid Рік тому +1

    As a student in college composition I find these videos very helpful.

  • @JackieOlkish
    @JackieOlkish 3 роки тому +35

    When I use that clear-concise-catchy sentence for the hook, my sentence feels cliché sometimes. Is that something usual at writing? Or is there any tips on this matter?

    • @yabokutora6111
      @yabokutora6111 3 роки тому +1

      Yes it is normal the more you write the better and diverse you will be able to write then things wont be repetitive

    • @atharva2920
      @atharva2920 3 роки тому +4

      Some hooks can be very corny or clichè, so you're doing something right

  • @abdullahnooreldinalkhawari704
    @abdullahnooreldinalkhawari704 2 роки тому +2

    Her video introduction did grab my interest which is a proof for the good quality of the video content 😁👍

  • @ss-wz6hm
    @ss-wz6hm 3 роки тому +9

    Great information
    1000%proper explanation
    I just got the idea as a student🙎
    THANK YOU SO MUCH 🖒

  • @TheCluelessCyclist
    @TheCluelessCyclist Рік тому +2

    THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE EXPLANATION.

  • @writebetterwithteachermel
    @writebetterwithteachermel 3 роки тому +18

    I like the novel concept you have here. Good job!

  • @amri9104
    @amri9104 3 роки тому +6

    thanks I got extra credit on my essay because of this

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 3 роки тому +1

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved. **

  • @WardNoor-h1y
    @WardNoor-h1y 4 місяці тому

    This guide is so detailed, I’m eternally grateful for this thank you!

  • @Mitchclan
    @Mitchclan 27 днів тому

    Because of this video I am going to be able to write an amazing essay and for that I am forever grateful 💗♾️

  • @bristolurban8432
    @bristolurban8432 11 місяців тому

    tysm for this! i was clueless on how to right an essay. But after I watched you mix, i knew exactly how to right an essay!
    🖤🖤🖤

  • @rochellefine3095
    @rochellefine3095 2 роки тому +6

    This video definitely helped me revise my introduction paragraph. I had no transition and my thesis statement was to general.

  • @bigmoniesponge
    @bigmoniesponge 3 роки тому +6

    Thanks, I missed my meet telling us how to do this so I hope I get a good grade.

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 3 роки тому

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved.

  • @Donotron
    @Donotron 3 роки тому +90

    I’m still lost 😅

  • @kitukusnr
    @kitukusnr Рік тому +1

    Doing my thesis from scratch.. very helpful

  • @kimberly.osorio
    @kimberly.osorio 3 роки тому +11

    Thank you, this video helped so much with my reading essay !

  • @viratthakur7786
    @viratthakur7786 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you much❤️
    Huge respect from India 🇮🇳

  • @glendzzenarosa1147
    @glendzzenarosa1147 Місяць тому

    4:32 Thx! I am going to write an essay at school they picked me as a writer you helped me understand ❤

  • @kaitlynbrinklow5738
    @kaitlynbrinklow5738 2 роки тому +3

    0:22 #1
    1:23 #2
    2:29 #3
    3:31 #4

  • @peapod5629
    @peapod5629 Рік тому

    Watching this the night before my GCSE O Level English examinations... Thanks for the video 😅

  • @kawaiinatalie9195
    @kawaiinatalie9195 3 роки тому +6

    thank you so much, this really helped me and I did not know how to make a introduction for my essay to thank you so much!!

  • @BigJoeFaceYT
    @BigJoeFaceYT Рік тому +1

    TY this helped a lot.

  • @yordanymartinez4158
    @yordanymartinez4158 2 роки тому +3

    Thank you I got a FSA tomorrow

  • @sethhhh
    @sethhhh 6 місяців тому

    pendahuluan
    - menarik pembaca, menarik rasa ingin tahu
    - latar belakang
    - mendiskripsikan kontrks historis atau sosial
    - mendifinisikan istilah istilah kunci
    - memperkenalkan teoris atau penelitian yg relevan
    - menyiapkan sisi sisi perdebatan yg berbeda
    - jangan berlebihan simpan untuk isi
    selanjutnya,
    - presentasikan pernyataan thesis anda > mempersempit fokus dan menunjukkan dengan tepat apa yg ingin dikatakan tentang topik tersebut
    pernyataan tesis: satu atau dua kalimat yg merangkum keseluruhan argumen (menentukan fokus keseluruhan)
    tesis bukan sekedar pernyataan fakta melainkan pernyataan yg memerlukan bukti dan penjelasan
    tujuannya menyampaikan dengan jelas poin utama tentang suatu topik dan menunjukkan alasan dibaliknya

  • @Hx3u
    @Hx3u Рік тому

    Bro her channel has everything to writing a good essay

  • @omotayomuyideenayinde8098
    @omotayomuyideenayinde8098 Рік тому +1

    I ❤the fact that you are a very talented and passionate person and I am very grateful

  • @bradleysamuels5366
    @bradleysamuels5366 8 місяців тому

    Jessica you deserve a bouquet of Flowers❤✨️

  • @gammingmatty8899
    @gammingmatty8899 3 роки тому +2

    I have a essay today thanks this really helped!!!!!

  • @holly2994
    @holly2994 3 роки тому +5

    Thank you this helped me so much!

  • @FosterHeita
    @FosterHeita Місяць тому +1

    You are the best ❤❤

  • @thelagamagin5345
    @thelagamagin5345 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you for your help because I got 99 % at my exam

  • @asheelow1256
    @asheelow1256 2 роки тому +1

    thank you for helping me to make a good introduction

  • @ilesm.5
    @ilesm.5 3 роки тому +10

    I needed this

  • @thatkidosma5807
    @thatkidosma5807 3 роки тому +3

    Thanks I just got done with my essay that is due today

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 3 роки тому

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved. **

  • @zoeyl.5480
    @zoeyl.5480 2 роки тому +1

    Wow! My teacher played this video to help us with essays, and its really fun to just watch!!

  • @zealluvsu9118
    @zealluvsu9118 3 роки тому +3

    This really helped, thanks!

  • @YvetteTownsend-r8i
    @YvetteTownsend-r8i 2 місяці тому

    This was a great introduction to the topic!

  • @hcrts4ning2
    @hcrts4ning2 Рік тому

    Thank you! This is exactly what I wanted. Thanks again :)

  • @nickey1848
    @nickey1848 2 роки тому +1

    Thanks never been a good writer but this helped a lot

  • @emlyrics6068
    @emlyrics6068 3 роки тому +1

    00:51 Loved The office reference 😂

  • @masterjericho9026
    @masterjericho9026 Рік тому +1

    Chat gpt and Undetectable AI is the best combo for making essays for me 😌

  • @matthewramlal8122
    @matthewramlal8122 2 роки тому +2

    This was very helpful

  • @dancancrinskid2989
    @dancancrinskid2989 3 роки тому +4

    Thank you dear😁

  • @jaysonW7
    @jaysonW7 Рік тому +1

    I just want her to write my essay at this point! This is giving me anxiety! Great video but seriously just write my essay😂

  • @emm3836
    @emm3836 19 днів тому

    This is so helpful. Thank you

  • @amithmaharaj1723
    @amithmaharaj1723 11 місяців тому +1

    this is amazing!!! i wish my teacher was u😍😄😉😋

  • @intrazelica
    @intrazelica 6 місяців тому

    The invention of braille has been a cornerstone in easier access to literature for people with disabilities

  • @fishboi1126
    @fishboi1126 2 роки тому +1

    This video helped me so much thank you

  • @lightningtail97
    @lightningtail97 8 місяців тому

    Thank you for this! It was super helpful!

  • @edgarserrano4203
    @edgarserrano4203 Місяць тому

    The topic that I choose for my pre-capstone project was focusing more around increasing science education for students with disabilities. Furthermore, I will be conducting on how students with disabilities often miss out on science instruction, and what are the consequences for them on missing out

  • @rose8448
    @rose8448 3 роки тому

    You're the best Jessica!

  • @filipinagirl2260
    @filipinagirl2260 2 роки тому +1

    My yesterday essay was completely messed up and I'm very disappointed that's why I'm here to improve my writing.Hope that I can catch up next next🥺

  • @abramporras7877
    @abramporras7877 3 роки тому +2

    Thank you I didn't know crap and used this and passed lol

    • @Scribbr-us
      @Scribbr-us  3 роки тому +2

      Glad to hear this!

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      @zelee9848 3 роки тому

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  • @drealfifi
    @drealfifi 3 роки тому +1

    Thanks for this I forgot how to write the hook part of the essay

  • @henghapchea735
    @henghapchea735 3 роки тому +8

    Anybody here has problems with starting the introductions, but once it's done, the rest of the essay is just 30 min away cuz that just when the brain decides to be cooperative?

    • @afifahilyana88
      @afifahilyana88 3 роки тому +1

      Same here... 😂 so tough if based on journal articles alone

  • @Bagyabro16
    @Bagyabro16 3 роки тому

    had to do a introduction and i found this very useful

  • @dinaazzahra6490
    @dinaazzahra6490 3 роки тому +32

    Such a great explanation!
    When I reading a text that containing hooks, it looks easy if I make it. But when I want to make it, it turned out to be hard to do. In making a hook, I have to understand the choice of the right words to make it more interesting. That's my problem. Then, how do we choose the fancy words so that the hook sentence is more attractive to the reader? Thank you

  • @ruikasasfixer
    @ruikasasfixer 8 місяців тому

    tomorrow is my state writing test and i came back to make sure im prepared bc i really want a 4

  • @Natalie-dn3wp
    @Natalie-dn3wp 8 місяців тому +1

    I got my writing test tomorrow I need this😭

  • @lizhadley3803
    @lizhadley3803 3 роки тому +1

    Sign-posting is often discouraged in college writing. If you're a high school student being told to sign-post in your English class, please know that we don't want you doing this in college.
    ~A college English professor

  • @brianoduor3211
    @brianoduor3211 2 роки тому

    Wow......enlighted on some things I did not understand...Thank you, Jessica

  • @spotify_editzzz
    @spotify_editzzz 2 роки тому

    Thanks for the video. I have grade 5 NAPLAN Tomorrow so I need this.

  • @zeusvladimirgrimaldo7015
    @zeusvladimirgrimaldo7015 3 роки тому +3

    Thank you!

  • @JThuijs
    @JThuijs 3 роки тому +1

    Buckle your seat belts boys and girls, Professor or whoever is reading this at this spectacular time in your life because in eight short pages I am going to learn you a thing that only I know the basics when I was in 1st or 2nd grade and the rest I learned myself about two hours ago, so sit down, shut up, and enjoy the experience of my 3-AM-Monster-Energy-ADHD-Medicine-Induced-Self-Hatred-Fuelled-Writing-Extravegenza about Rosa Parks and what you are going to read is damn near the best thing you will probably read in a 30 minute time frame.

  • @atheamangandia3098
    @atheamangandia3098 3 роки тому +3

    Thankyou! ❤️

  • @olje66
    @olje66 9 місяців тому

    You are a life saver😍😍😍

  • @caramel.1952
    @caramel.1952 3 роки тому

    your videos help me alott thank youuu

  • @ArslanHussain-qo5gf
    @ArslanHussain-qo5gf 2 роки тому +1

    My topic is the crown, cricket and Canada. Is this a good hook:
    Many people are aware of the relationship between cricket and the crown but not many know that Canada is also tied in.

  • @mkbasicenglishlearningcorn5627
    @mkbasicenglishlearningcorn5627 2 роки тому

    Scribbr ..I like your explanation. thanks for sharing!

  • @margaretfunmilayo171
    @margaretfunmilayo171 Рік тому

    Wow...this is actually nice and helpful

  • @keepam4867
    @keepam4867 3 роки тому +2

    I like you teaching essay

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 3 роки тому

      For students, isn’t it great that (profpiperr on IG) can help you solve your assignments and essays. The services are great and since I started using them, my grades have significantly improved.

    • @alexcjoechez7881
      @alexcjoechez7881 3 роки тому

      @Kyler Rogers Yes they went from Ds to Bs which is a great improvement

  • @looney.joe_
    @looney.joe_ 3 місяці тому

    It’s not the only time I see this

  • @shaheenscraft7273
    @shaheenscraft7273 2 роки тому

    Your explanation is understandable.

  • @Princessmow123
    @Princessmow123 4 місяці тому

    Thank you teacher ❤❤

  • @Goodolgoodboi
    @Goodolgoodboi 8 місяців тому

    Double chunk in alignment with a literary element and complex theme. Fun

  • @1XclusiveFBA
    @1XclusiveFBA Рік тому

    Great resource this has been

  • @rebekkakiertzner7050
    @rebekkakiertzner7050 3 роки тому +12

    "The short story Stop Thief! is truly a historical story with a meaningful and instructive plot." Is this a good hook?

    • @spookybells5099
      @spookybells5099 3 місяці тому +1

      Sounds good to me, but I’m not exactly the best person to judge lol. How’d it work out for you though? (If you even remember considering this was 3 years ago haha.)

  • @franceslawrenceong2146
    @franceslawrenceong2146 2 роки тому

    This video was very helpful thank you so much!!

  • @renierlouw6032
    @renierlouw6032 2 роки тому

    Earned yourself a sub!