The KEY to IELTS Academic Writing Task 1: LINE GRAPH

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  • @FasTrackIELTS
    @FasTrackIELTS  9 місяців тому +10

    Guys, don't forget to download the full sample answer: bit.ly/pdf-graph

    • @salmanhossainanas-01
      @salmanhossainanas-01 6 місяців тому

      Dear Honourable Mam, i Don't Open this Link. Have any alternative Way open & download this Link🙏

  • @fadaabraham5483
    @fadaabraham5483 10 місяців тому +38

    Had my results last week. Got 7.5 in writing. 6.5 in reading, 7.0 in listening and 8.5 in speaking. With an overall band score of 7.5… Preparation for the exam was just about 5 days. Thanks to some of your lovely tips here.

    • @JaluNisha
      @JaluNisha 9 місяців тому +6

      How do you get 8.5 in speaking 😮

    • @JaluNisha
      @JaluNisha 9 місяців тому

      Please give some ideas for me 😢

    • @fadaabraham5483
      @fadaabraham5483 9 місяців тому +24

      @@JaluNisha I was natural. I’m neither British nor American, so I didn’t try to sound like them. Corrected myself immediately I made any mistake. Didn’t panic. Never stopped talking till I was told to stop. Used simple and not too complicated vocabularies. And I smiled and responded to the interviewer like I was having a chat with a friend.

    • @noraliahmed6255
      @noraliahmed6255 6 місяців тому

      Amazing grade!

    • @Linishamohandas
      @Linishamohandas 23 години тому

      Can you tell me How to begin to writ essay for the first time like I have no idea

  • @MukhammadmirzoAkbarov
    @MukhammadmirzoAkbarov 10 місяців тому +33

    The line graph provides data regarding the proportion of urban dwellers in four nations over the period spanning from 1970 to 2020, along with projected figures for 2030 and 2040.
    Generally, in 1970, the percentage of Uruguayans and Ecuadorians was noticeably less than other nations, whereas Argentina took the lead in terms of residents in percentage terms. Additionally, in 2040, Uruguay and Argentina are forecast to be the most populated countries, while Ecuador is predicted to take the bottom-most position.
    Over a 50-year period, starting from 1970, Uruguay and Ecuador showed similar patterns, with both of them accounting for 20%, after which both witnessed a huge increase from 1980 to 2020(from nearly 40% and a bit over 20% to almost 100% and over 60% in turn). During the same period, Argentina and Brazil gradually climbed - despite some fluctuations at the beginning of the period, especially being true for the latter: just over 80% and 60% respectively in 2000. The figures for both of them in 2020 were nearly the same.
    Over the duration of forecasts, ranging from 2030 to 2040, the percentage of people living in Uruguay and Argentina is expected to elevate up to nearly 100%, meaning that they will be the most populous countries over the given period, alongside the data being somehow similar to Brazil. However, throughout the projected period, Ecuador is anticipated to occupy the last spot, making up the smallest percentage of inhabitants in 2040 - 80%.

    • @vikmod3825
      @vikmod3825 9 місяців тому +6

      Now try to squeeze it in 20 mins in your exam😁😁😁😁

  • @neoangel5694
    @neoangel5694 9 місяців тому +10

    Thanks for your lectures...scored a 7.0 in The IELTS test last week

  • @manozchand6893
    @manozchand6893 8 місяців тому +8

    After 2 hours there is mly LWR exam, wish me luck everyone 😊✨

  • @kinnagill9224
    @kinnagill9224 9 місяців тому +6

    Thank you Asia.Your videos helped me a lot and today I got my required band score in ilets.keep up your good work.

  • @luicrislloren1541
    @luicrislloren1541 9 місяців тому +1

    Thank you Asiya.. I passed the IELTS examination..💯🧑‍🎓🇬🇧
    TO GOD BE THE GLORY🙏

  • @kieranliu4778
    @kieranliu4778 9 місяців тому +1

    The line graph presents the proportion of city inhabintant in four nations, namely Argentina, Brazail, Uruguay and Ecudor over the 50-year period ending in 2020, along with projections in the next two decades. (my tying practice )

  • @sandugashyussupova3563
    @sandugashyussupova3563 6 місяців тому +1

    My test is tomorrow morning. I am watching these videos now as a preparation. Hope it helps. Wish me a good luck!

  • @borhanuddin681
    @borhanuddin681 9 місяців тому +4

    Yeah,it makes sense ma'am.
    Thank a ton.

  • @PraveenKumar-fp6km
    @PraveenKumar-fp6km 9 місяців тому +1

    Hello Asiya. I had like to thank you for all your videos and insights on IELTS. I didn't have any idea about this exam and I solely relied on your insights and the standard practice tests to score a 8.5 band in first attempt. Thanks much for all that you have been doing and truly appreciate your efforts. Good luck

  • @4d0jananireddy24
    @4d0jananireddy24 8 місяців тому +1

    Thank you asiya mam your videos had a great impact on me. Apart from the monk test we need some guidance and concepts to get ready for the exam . Asiya videos are very helpful.

  • @mohammadidhrisidris6856
    @mohammadidhrisidris6856 10 місяців тому +4

    Thank you mam for your giving suggestions

  • @iqravirk296
    @iqravirk296 10 місяців тому +3

    The chart provides statistics regarding the number of people in four territories residing in metropolis between 1970 and 2020 and foretell between 2030 and 2040.
    Overall, it is clear from the chart, that Uruguay had shown great increase in percentage and it surpasses in the future whereas,Ecuador's percentage was around Uruguay and it had also shown slightly increased and expected to progress in the next ten years. Furthermore,Argentina and Brazil had moderately progressed over the time with little variations and expected to remain stable for a decade.
    In 1970, Uruguay had twenty percent population which had reached around 95 percent surpassing the other nations and in the next decade its inhabitant's percentage is predicted to remain stable. However, in 1970, Ecuador's percentage was nearly twenty percent. In the year 2020, it had grown around forty-five percent. After that, in the period of two decades it had oscillated and reached around sixty-four percent. It is predicted that Ecuador's number of citizens will rise from 2030 to 2040.
    In 1970, the number of people in Argentina was approximately sixty-five percent and had grown slightly till 2020 and reached around ninety-four percent,while, Brazil's percentage had risen approximately to sixty-five percent. It had commenced to varies until it had reached the year 2020. The percentage population in Argentina and Brazil is predicted to stay steady for next ten years.

  • @opeyemibadirat6582
    @opeyemibadirat6582 10 місяців тому +2

    The graph illustrates the rate of people residing in urban areas in four South American erican countries over 50 years and forecast for the next two decades.
    Overall, the rate of people living in Argentina and Brazil started at high level, whereas, Uruguay and Ecuador began with a lower population but had a surge over the years to attain their peaks at the end of the time frame.
    It can be observed that Argentina had the highest population in 1970, witnessing a steady rise in the next 50 years to reach 90% in 2020, meanwhile, Brazil started slightly below 50% but had a progressive rise to a little below 70% in 1990, however, it experienced a sudden dip but later had a gradual rise to over 80% in 2020. Meanwhile, both countries are forecasted to show a steady rise in population in the next 20 years.
    In contrast, Uruguay and Ecuador began with a low population at a level slightly below 20%, however, both countries continue to have a surge in people to reach slightly above 90% and almost 70% in 2020 respectively. Furthermore, these two countries are predicted to have a slight increase in population in the next two decades with Uruguay reaching the highest point.

    • @meetmachhi1234
      @meetmachhi1234 10 місяців тому +1

    • @cathyubom9573
      @cathyubom9573 9 місяців тому

    • @heartz6437
      @heartz6437 7 місяців тому

      ig you've used too much linking words that doesn't make it seem smooth and natural ykwim. So ig you need to work on that part. Overall, it deserves at least a band 7 .Thank youu

  • @JaluNisha
    @JaluNisha 9 місяців тому +2

    Good video mam . I learned lot of ideas . Thanks a lot

  • @ilangilang7185
    @ilangilang7185 4 місяці тому

    Thank you for the very understandable instructions.

  • @ЯЧеловек-ю8ы
    @ЯЧеловек-ю8ы 3 місяці тому +1

    thank you so much!!

  • @thechillphil
    @thechillphil 6 місяців тому +1

    I watched a couple of your writing videos and they helped me a lot. I took IELTS this week and got 7.5 for Academic Writing. Keep up the good work!

  • @Mb_editz396
    @Mb_editz396 2 місяці тому +1

    My exam is after 5 days 😢please pray for me guys and wish me luck

  • @yorqinoyhasanova736
    @yorqinoyhasanova736 5 місяців тому

    O my god she can write essay,describe and teach in 18 minutes 😮

  • @SunShine-nh2ip
    @SunShine-nh2ip 9 місяців тому +1

    Hello, Asia, Thank you very much for your lessons🌹🌞
    Why did you say "Ecuador" instead of "Uruguay" on 9:00?

    • @yigitbstn3301
      @yigitbstn3301 9 місяців тому +1

      qardasimmm türkiyeden selamm

    • @SunShine-nh2ip
      @SunShine-nh2ip 9 місяців тому +1

      @@yigitbstn3301 Aleykum Salam❤

  • @shamalysarkershimo7182
    @shamalysarkershimo7182 9 місяців тому +1

    Is it okay to write 255 words here? Then how much words should I use in part 2?

  • @tchh6068
    @tchh6068 3 місяці тому

    Hi Asiya,
    Thank you for your tips. Can we use the collocations- fell heavily (for 'plummeted') and spiralled up (for 'rose sharply'). Thank you.

  • @aruka_engpen2500
    @aruka_engpen2500 6 місяців тому

    Hello,Asia bunch of thanks❤️ you are really an expert. I have a concerning question. Don’t we need a conclusion here in this task?

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  6 місяців тому

      Hi! Thank you so much. You don't need a conclusion in Task 1, so you can save time not writing one. Some may have their overview at the end, which is fine too. Good luck with your exam!

  • @SanjitaBasnet-f7s
    @SanjitaBasnet-f7s 10 місяців тому +85

    The day after tomorrow is my exams 😢 wish me luck

    • @lazizaasadova
      @lazizaasadova 10 місяців тому +6

      Mine too😢

    • @SanjitaBasnet-f7s
      @SanjitaBasnet-f7s 10 місяців тому +2

      @abduvalioka thanks a ton
      🙏🙏

    • @faxriddinrahmatov9174
      @faxriddinrahmatov9174 10 місяців тому +9

      Break a leg! Iʼll look forward to your comment that you will have a Band 9 certificate ❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉

    • @SanjitaBasnet-f7s
      @SanjitaBasnet-f7s 10 місяців тому

      @@faxriddinrahmatov9174 means a lot 🙏🙏

    • @AnhPhuong-sx3tu
      @AnhPhuong-sx3tu 10 місяців тому +2

      wish you all the best :D

  • @shuvomdshahidarman6909
    @shuvomdshahidarman6909 8 місяців тому

    70 years we can say here approximately platinum jubilee ending in 2020.

  • @rinzarasheed2021
    @rinzarasheed2021 9 місяців тому

    Hi Asiya, for do you think the development is positive or negative type esaay, was that same as advantages and disadvantages essay. Can you elaborate on how we can write this type of writing task 2 essay as this type is rarely asked

  • @k_____007
    @k_____007 9 місяців тому +1

    Damn ur sentences are so high level 🫠

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  9 місяців тому +1

      You don't need to take it to this level to pass ;)

    • @k_____007
      @k_____007 9 місяців тому

      @@FasTrackIELTS in pen & paper, if in writing task 2 word count is around 245 words, how many marks will be deducted for not achieving task ? 🙃🙃😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️

    • @serhatyldrm8736
      @serhatyldrm8736 8 місяців тому

      @@k_____007 how much score do you want

  • @MukhammadmirzoAkbarov
    @MukhammadmirzoAkbarov 10 місяців тому +2

    Hope you won't ignore that report of mine

  • @maameanane978
    @maameanane978 9 місяців тому

    Hello teacher,
    I took my ielts exam on 27th Jan, i have gotten an email saying my results have been withheld and under scrutiny for security and quality checks. They asked that i scan a handwritten statement and email it back to them....what does this mean please?

  • @fatehakbar4626
    @fatehakbar4626 4 місяці тому

    Now it's my time.😂 Tomorrow is my exam . Wish me Good Luck❤

  • @archanagill4915
    @archanagill4915 2 місяці тому

    I have always been told to write task one in past tense but u r writing it in resulting instead of resulted, making etc isit correct?

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  2 місяці тому

      You need to look at the dates. You may need to write in the past, present or future. "Resulting" and "making" are either gerunds or participles. You can check how to use them in English Grammar in Use by R.Murphy

  • @ashus705
    @ashus705 9 місяців тому

    I don't know how to improve tenses and i get confuse which tenses to use .

  • @Usmanliaqatgujjar
    @Usmanliaqatgujjar 5 місяців тому

    Going to appear on 13 june exam wish me good luck 😊

  • @aynurbakmirzayeva3292
    @aynurbakmirzayeva3292 9 місяців тому

    I stuck intermediate level and can't improve it. How can I do it?

  • @Kainatfatima147
    @Kainatfatima147 9 місяців тому

    Please add Shopping and language topics in your IELTS library pdf

  • @nexusfreefire6166
    @nexusfreefire6166 9 місяців тому +1

    Plese help i need to ralk with you I haven’t got my result i live in japan 😭😭😭😭

  • @Fatemejahangirie
    @Fatemejahangirie 5 місяців тому

    It was really complicated. I need a band 7. How can i write it in that way? I appreciate if you provide writing s with a band 7 too. They're often at 8 or 9 which is complicated.

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  5 місяців тому +1

      Working on one right now. Thank you for your feedback!

  • @khushikhushi2318
    @khushikhushi2318 9 місяців тому

    Ma'am .I am from Asian country I can understand English but I am having difficulty in writing my basic is not good can you please help me

  • @DipanDahal-v1y
    @DipanDahal-v1y 9 місяців тому +2

    My exam is tomorrow 😭

  • @notesam3698
    @notesam3698 9 місяців тому

    where did the 8 percent come from

  • @sushildas1399
    @sushildas1399 10 місяців тому +1

    Aray Bhai... Ab mujhe Nahi Jana Australia America.. yeh demo Dekh Kar kya karunga😢

  • @劉恆策
    @劉恆策 9 місяців тому

    Hey Asiya, I purcharsed your online course, however it is possible to provide editing writing, otherwise test takers won't know where and how they need to improve or fix. I am willing to pay extra.

    • @1koti
      @1koti 9 місяців тому

      Hi, im thinking to purchase academic pack, but im not sure is it really worth it? Do you think it is worth it ?

    • @劉恆策
      @劉恆策 9 місяців тому

      @@1koti As I said yo will get useful information and how to organise your essay in the test. However you are more likely to find someone or AI-based application to editing your generated ietls essay.

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  9 місяців тому +1

      Hi! At the moment, we don't provide an easy checking service and have thousands of students who successfully passed their test after taking them. If you'd like to have your essay checked, textranch.com is a great place where proofreaders can check your vocab and grammar for a couple of dollars. Indeed, ChatGPT can help with that too, but double check it. Just never ask an AI to grade your answers. What I've seen so far is simply wrong and an accurate model hasn't been created yet

  • @UsmanSiddiqui-rv6mb
    @UsmanSiddiqui-rv6mb 9 місяців тому +2

    I have my IELTS exam tomorrow. Wish me Good Luck specially in Writing and Speaking🥲

  • @HaileeN25
    @HaileeN25 7 місяців тому

    My exam is in 3 days , feeling a little bit overwhelmed

  • @PriscillaOriri
    @PriscillaOriri 9 місяців тому

    My exam is tomorrow
    Ma wish me well

  • @mahsayarizadeh7373
    @mahsayarizadeh7373 6 місяців тому

    I have a question, how can 2030 and 2040 be two decades??? It's one decade from 2030 to 2040

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  6 місяців тому

      The latest information is for 2020, right? From 2020 to 2040 is two decades ;)

  • @biskit_oliver
    @biskit_oliver 5 місяців тому

    Mine also but i guess that i am ready

  • @reellover5697
    @reellover5697 10 місяців тому +2

    Mam where are you living

  • @maryamseif2910
    @maryamseif2910 10 місяців тому +1

    Isn't 255 words too much for task 1? Will it deminish my score if I write as much as this sample?

    • @straytan78
      @straytan78 10 місяців тому +1

      yes I think so about 200 is fine for task 1. I got band 7 in writing recently

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  10 місяців тому +2

      No, it won't reduce your score and high-scoring answers (Band 8-9) are often longer. However, for those who are not yet fluent, I recommend targeting 170-200 words as writing more takes more time, which you don't have

  • @salahaldese8990
    @salahaldese8990 10 місяців тому +2

    Allah created us for a sublime aim to worship Him and whatever good we do in life is a kind of worship, thanks a lot for your message

  • @sajeendranrajakumar5957
    @sajeendranrajakumar5957 8 місяців тому

    Is it ok to write 250 words for task 1

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  7 місяців тому

      High-scoring answers are often longer. However, for most students, I'd recommend writing 170-190 words to have more time to think and check your answer

  • @FATHEEL123
    @FATHEEL123 2 місяці тому

    But isn't a lengthy? Bcz they just demand 150 words and you presented it in 255 words.

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  2 місяці тому

      150 words is the minimum and high-scoring answers (8-9) are often longer, especially when the chart is complex. For most students, however, I recommend targeting 170-190 words

  • @SarikaBalami
    @SarikaBalami 9 місяців тому +1

    Today is my exam 😢

  • @elmurodnumonov
    @elmurodnumonov 8 місяців тому

    Now is my exam 😂

    • @heartz6437
      @heartz6437 7 місяців тому

      @Mudiam_yaswanth hairband

  • @cirrussaravia1176
    @cirrussaravia1176 5 місяців тому

    Tomorrow is my test day 😢

  • @ctimshorts_
    @ctimshorts_ 10 місяців тому

    Hi there, I gave my ielts exam in Bangladesh and i got overall 5.0, speaking 4.5, reading 4.5.I want to give again ielts exam in uk, I need 5.5 , I have only one week, my grammar not good, please how i improve it one week, i am very depressed now. Please reply my comment.

  • @kimyoongi7733
    @kimyoongi7733 9 місяців тому

    Tomorrow is my exam wish me luck

    • @heartz6437
      @heartz6437 7 місяців тому +1

      luck!

    • @kimyoongi7733
      @kimyoongi7733 7 місяців тому

      @@heartz6437 ahh thank you I already got the scores I wanted

  • @A-ash1998
    @A-ash1998 10 місяців тому +1

    ❤❤❤❤

  • @a7meds7d61
    @a7meds7d61 5 місяців тому

    My exam after month and I think it is not enough time 😢

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  5 місяців тому

      Have you downloaded our free study plan? It'll give you step-by-step plan to prepare in one month ;) It's linked in the video description and on the channel page

    • @a7meds7d61
      @a7meds7d61 5 місяців тому

      @FasTrackIELTS OK I saw your course you said you make it in writing and speaking but the problem how I can know my mistake in writing I need teacher to correct me

  • @healthwithdr.sehrish5380
    @healthwithdr.sehrish5380 4 місяці тому

    she over-complicated this task and way too lengthy.

  • @opeyemibadirat6582
    @opeyemibadirat6582 10 місяців тому

    Please kindly help vet my work @Asiya. Thanks in anticipation.