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Kya kahne galib and mir sahab ka ,ap jaise logo ki badolat to ham new person ko galib aor unke jaise hogo ki khubsurat najm sunne and sanghane ko milta hai, thanks 👍💕💕💕🌹🌹🌹💞💞❤❤🙏
दर्द सह कर भी जीने को मजबूर हूँ ये खता है मेरी के मैं मजदूर हूँ ठोंकरें खाता हूँ फिर भी रुकता नहीं मर तो जाता हूँ लेकिन मैं थकता नहीं है गरीबी ही लोगो मुकद्दर मेरा इस जमाने की खुशियों से मै दूर हूँ दर्द सह कर भी जीने को मजबूर हूँ ये खता है मेरी के मैं मजदूर हूँ मेहनतों से हमारी इमारत बनी झोपडी़ मेरी फिर भी ये छत न बनी आसमां ओढ़ कर और जमीं को बिछा भूल कर सारे गम सोया भरपूर हूँ दर्द सह कर भी जीने को मजबूर हूँ ये खता है मेरी के मैं मजदूर हूँ न बचपन मेरा न जवानी मेरी आँसूओं से लिखी है कहानी मेरी अपने खूँ से जमाने को रौशन किया फिर भी टूटा सितारा हूँ बेनूर हूँ दर्द सह कर भी जीने को मजबूर हूँ ये खता है मेरी के मैं मजदूर हूँ
Good work, bhai!! Improve on your pronunciation (on words like Taqi (it's not taki, there's a nuqta; fir nahi phir, rakh lafz me aap ne aakhir me kha خ ki shakl di, kaaf aur haa hai; firta nahi phirta), I'd advise get in touch with someone who knows Urdu/Urdu teacher or an Imam, correct your pronunciation, and record your video. Overall great effort. How (what software) did you record and add the music in the background?
Bht khooob andaz apka bs ek iltija h kch jgah pr line sath me pardhte toh bahtar hota khas kr 1 line ko 2 parts se jyada na juda kiya kriye ayse bhi accha tha..bht shukriya apka
Pronunciation is required a little more improved also it will be good if Urdu script too included along with hindi!! However your love for Urdu Mir and Ghalib is laudable please keep it up!!
I lost you at 2:31, when you say “khwahishon” instead of “khwahish” .. though u correct this in repetition ... good try overall but similar mistakes at many other places ..Sher mukammal padhaiye pls.. thanks for the attempt
Your recitation is fine . You have been gifted a beautiful voice by God. Be careful while reciting the lyrics as you have recited wrong words on some occasions.
भैया किसकी शायरी चिपका रहे हो शेर हमेशा 2 लाइन में कहे जाते मीर और गालिब पर रहम कीजिए । ज़रा मेहनत कीजिए जनाब अच्छा काम करोगे तो यूं खैरात मांगना न पड़ेगी ।
Kya kahne galib and mir sahab ka ,ap jaise logo ki badolat to ham new person ko galib aor unke jaise hogo ki khubsurat najm sunne and sanghane ko milta hai, thanks 👍💕💕💕🌹🌹🌹💞💞❤❤🙏
Thank you so much for your support
बहोत अच्छा पेश किया है
दर्द सह कर भी जीने को मजबूर हूँ
ये खता है मेरी के मैं मजदूर हूँ
ठोंकरें खाता हूँ फिर भी रुकता नहीं
मर तो जाता हूँ लेकिन मैं थकता नहीं
है गरीबी ही लोगो मुकद्दर मेरा
इस जमाने की खुशियों से मै दूर हूँ
दर्द सह कर भी जीने को मजबूर हूँ
ये खता है मेरी के मैं मजदूर हूँ
मेहनतों से हमारी इमारत बनी
झोपडी़ मेरी फिर भी ये छत न बनी
आसमां ओढ़ कर और जमीं को बिछा
भूल कर सारे गम सोया भरपूर हूँ
दर्द सह कर भी जीने को मजबूर हूँ
ये खता है मेरी के मैं मजदूर हूँ
न बचपन मेरा न जवानी मेरी
आँसूओं से लिखी है कहानी मेरी
अपने खूँ से जमाने को रौशन किया
फिर भी टूटा सितारा हूँ बेनूर हूँ
दर्द सह कर भी जीने को मजबूर हूँ
ये खता है मेरी के मैं मजदूर हूँ
Kya khub kaha hai
Kya khub hai
واه
Shukriya Janab
ग़ालिब साहब के शब्दों में उसकी ऊंचाई का कोई पैमाना नहीं मिलता इंसानियत कूट कूट के भरी हुई लगती है आपकी शुरुआत बहुत अच्छी है मुझे अच्छा लगा धन्यवाद
Thank you so much for your support 🙏
Kya baat hain meer saheb heart touching poetry nice voice I did not listening any fault great
Lajvaab amazing voice is beautiful
Wow ❤️
Thank you so much for your support
Bahot. Achha. Collection. Dilli. Sukun. Mila. Hai. Suñkar. Subhan. Aallah
So sweet shayre
Mind blowing, fantastic, brilliant
Thank you to visit my channel.
Excellent ,mind-blowing,fandastic
Kya bat ha sir aj ke vdioe sabsa achi lagi 😍🥰
Thank you for appreciation
💗💗💗
Thank you dear
Very very nice
Very very nice sayri and Voce, thanks brother
Thank you so much for your support
Shaeri , voice
Shaeri, voice
❤️❤️
Love you beta
very nice
So,so.... beutiful
‘हाथ’ में दर्द हो तो दवा कीजै,
‘हाथ’ ही जब दर्द हो तो क्या कीजै.. said by Mirza Ghalib
Very well done
Thanks to visit on my channel
Haath nahi Dil
Mirza ghalib
Heart ❤️touching shayari sir 👍👌👏👏
Thank you so much for your support
👌
Thank you
हैं बहुत इन अशआर को कहने वाले,
पर है आप के अन्दाज - ए - बयां और |
👏
Shukriya
Bahut khoob 👍👍
Mirza ghalib
Your collection is best . I am so inspiration and Read your vidio.
Mind blowing Sir 🙏🙏👌
Thank you so much
Very nice poetry heart touching!
Nice line sir 👌👍
Thank you
Koi aisa ab dunya nahi aayega... Jise ye great preson hogeye....!!
Good collection. Impressive voice 👌👌😊🥰
It means a lot for me
Whole credit goes to you all because you were the person who inspired me to do.
Thank you so much
Gajab Sir.. Aapke paas ye talent v hai.. Speechless..👏👏
Thank you for you complement
vry nice
Thank you for visiting
Awesome sir😍😍😍
Thank you for complement
Good work, bhai!! Improve on your pronunciation (on words like Taqi (it's not taki, there's a nuqta; fir nahi phir, rakh lafz me aap ne aakhir me kha خ ki shakl di, kaaf aur haa hai; firta nahi phirta), I'd advise get in touch with someone who knows Urdu/Urdu teacher or an Imam, correct your pronunciation, and record your video. Overall great effort. How (what software) did you record and add the music in the background?
Brilliant
Last one is so good
Voice is also v clear and best .
God Bless you
💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Thank you so much for your support 🙏
@@adabjahangeer Thanks
Barring a few famous shers, most others don’t seem to be that of either Ghalib or Mir.
Thank you so much to make me correct
Nice sir👌👌
Thank you so much for your support
Awesome lines sir...👍👌
Sir would u plz give us also some tips about writing such lines....
Thank you so much
Whenever you want dear
Good
Thank you so much
Humko bhi hai shayari ka hunar saheb
Kabhi mauka mile toh apna kalam pesh karun...
Hume bhi koi mauka ho toh dijiye 🙏
😭😭😭
Impressive voice sir nice video sir😍😍😍😍
😘😘MIND BLOWING - I DIDN'T SEE ANY FAULT
Thank you so much
Bht khooob andaz apka bs ek iltija h kch jgah pr line sath me pardhte toh bahtar hota khas kr 1 line ko 2 parts se jyada na juda kiya kriye ayse bhi accha tha..bht shukriya apka
Very nice sir your video are Ossam
Thank you so much for your appreciation
Oh gazab Akshay kumar ki voice🔥🔥
Very nice sir 😍 🙏🙏🙏🙏😊🙏❤️🙏
Pronunciation is required a little more improved also it will be good if Urdu script too included along with hindi!! However your love for Urdu Mir and Ghalib is laudable please keep it up!!
Thank you so much for your suggestion and I will definitely take care of all the points which you have suggested to me.
Sir make more vedios
Ok sure
I lost you at 2:31, when you say “khwahishon” instead of “khwahish” .. though u correct this in repetition ... good try overall but similar mistakes at many other places ..Sher mukammal padhaiye pls.. thanks for the attempt
Thank you so much to make me correct and I will try to improve myself.Welcome for suggestions
Any heshayreya Hamilton senate rahay
Your recitation is fine . You have been gifted a beautiful voice by God. Be careful while reciting the lyrics as you have recited wrong words on some occasions.
Thank you so much for your support and suggestions
Some sheds are not Ghalib’s and Mir’s
Please aap dono legends ko compare mt kariye dono ka koi comparison nhi hai 🙏🙏
Thik se bol
Thank you so much for your suggestion and I will try to improve myself
aawaz aacha kriye sir 🔥🔥🤣
Sure dear I will try to improve myself
Thank you for your suggestion
Dard hai jindgi me and
Better mind your pronunciation sir, you are presenting Ghalib and Mir Taqi Mir, this may always keep in mind.Thanks.
Poitry is our life line....in Urdu language...need read.......
Poetry
galib ka ek sher miss h isme....
jalaa h jism to dil bhi jal gya hoga...
kuredte ho jo ab raakh justazu kya h...
Urdu pronciation thek kijye
Ser and voice very very nice sir, thanks ❤️👍🙏
भैया किसकी शायरी चिपका रहे हो
शेर हमेशा 2 लाइन में कहे जाते मीर और गालिब पर रहम कीजिए ।
ज़रा मेहनत कीजिए जनाब अच्छा काम करोगे तो यूं खैरात मांगना न पड़ेगी ।
Bahi apne alfaz durust kar ye
Thank you for your suggestions
Voice me dard nahi hain
Thank you so much for your suggestion and in next video I will definitely improve to it.thank you dost
" sheen " , k'aaf sahi kijiye, galat urdu se bohat koft hoti hai .
Thank you so much for your suggestions
Sher sahi hea naki Ser
Thank you so much to make me correct
@@adabjahangeeryou are welcome . It was not with bad intension but i want you enhance your channel. Best of luck.
Aap ka tallfuz sahi nahi andaze bayan aur sahi karein
Ghatiya shayari ku ghalib ka naam dekar badnam na kare pahle malum karle ke sher kiske hain please
Ye sab Ghalib ke sher hi nahi
Thank you so much to inform me about this
Aesa insan dhoke baaz hota hai jo apne se jada dusron ki parwah kare mafi ka talab gaar bas ye bat jhute insan krte hai
Ye ghalib ka sher nahi he
Pagle...
Sorry.none of these couplets belong to Ghalib
Welcome for your suggestion and thanks to make me correct
भाई साहब आप ग़ालिब को किसी जानकार की शागिर्दी में पढ़िए फिर लोगों को पढ़ाएं ग़ालिब व मीर को पढ़ना समझना इतना आसान नहीं है जितना आप समझ बैठे हैं
कुछ पढ़ लो, namauzu शेर पढ़ रहे हो,, इकबाल के शेर को ग़ालिब का शेर बता रहे हो,,,
Bakwaas se bhi jaada bakwaaas
Your collection is best . I am so inspiration and Read your vidio.
Thank you so much for your appreciation 🙏