I love this combination of sci fi and fantasy. Also, Grenan was an idiot. He recognizes the hammer as what's messing with his shields and then fails to connect it with all the system failures that prevent shields from working.
Great to hear a story dealing with the draugr! They're terrifying entities, indeed, with the strength of many men and driven by purpose (often to guard their own grave). While often described as "death-black" and foul smelling, indicating necrotic tissue, they're also described as a lot more sturdy than this one.
human animals, followed the rules for hunters? Do you not have rules against killing children and women when hunting? We humans literally have rules against killing juveniles and females of most species when WE go hunting, and you dare speak of ethics? Maybe you should have checked the rules for hunting a bit more carefully before hunting on earth. Just be glad your grandson won't be killed by us in vengeance.
Would love to have more from this timeline. I love a good Norse based story. This one was wonderful. Been listening to yall for a while now, and this is my first comment. Whoever wrote this, good on ya. Keep your ideas flowing, and always remember, stories have power.
HOW!! how are you getting there Vocally... remember this is a marathon it wont do if you dont last long. my narrator Pantheon has one that has required operations because they got to into their narrations
But then in the next world he found the alien had already taken his wife and kids. It demanded its own vengeance for disobeying the laws of physics and nature.
A humble and freely offered CODA. Do with this what you choose. Near the very end of this Taleths Veritak Hunter Lord Grenan looks up to see Brandr's face. In the Vikingr's eyes there was a searing unquenchable fire. As Brandr's Hammer came very close to Grenan's Skull, there was a brilliant blue-white light even his closed eyes could not shield him from. Grenan felt an intense pain throughout his body; a pain hs never knew possible. As he felt Brandr's Hzmmer reach his head, he thought he had found his escape in Death. After what seemed to be an eternity, Grenan's eyes opened and he found himself I. What appeared to be his own bed. There, on his mantle were his kill-trophies. As he gazed on the last head, the eyes of the head opened ! It was the Vikingr he had killed ! No ! How ! Brandr's mouth opened and the word "VIDARR !" echoed forth. Grenan reached for his nearby flame-pistol, took aim, and shot Brandr's Skull. The flaming skull fell to the floor arching the room on fire. Trapped, Grenan resolved to fie. Again, there was a bright blue-white light thag enveloped all. Again, Grenan awoke in his bed, Brandr's shull still on his fireplace mantle. Grenan yelled. "Maelia, help me !". After an eternity that lasted a second. Grenan called for Maelia. He turned his head to see Maelia's visage morph into that of Brandr's wife; the one whose neck he broke with his boot. The spectre before him raised her hand and pushed him into the waiting fireplace. The pain, the fear, and everything dark he knew rushed from the flames to consume him. As before, there was a bright blue-white light that surrounded and permeated his very Soul. Again, he awoke in his own bed, the mirror above his fireplace showed nothing; it was black. But, slowly a spot of light whirled through the glass. The spot of light resolved to show Brandr, his Wife, and children. They turned their gaze to him and Grenan realized that THIS is how he would spend ETETNITY !
To be fair, the curse of the Draugr didn't really give him any extra strength, just made it so he didn't lose it to decay or pain. All Vidarr really did was deny him death until his vengeance was done. Humans are shockingly strong when self-preservation systems are down.
Was a terrible story that wasny hfy at all. Humans only survived an arbitray list of unstatwd rules due to sucking at everything compared to every other species.
And that, kids, is the true story of how Loki was defeated, not by the host of Asgard, but by the animated corpse of a human, who was remade in Valhalla...into the god we know... as Thor.
That was a good story, and well narrated, but hardly a 'HFY' story. All the Humans got slaughtered until a God imbued a corps with divine powers of invincibility. Hell the human with a hammer could have been replaced with a squirrel and a straw and the outcome would have been the same. Absolutely nothing about humanity won this battle. 2/10
A human deity from human imagination/worship rose a human up from the dead to avenge human deaths and inflict revenge upon an Alien FAR 'Superior' then them. Pretty HFY to me.
An excellent story, VERY well narrated! I applaud the skills of the narrator as it reminds me strongly of my own narrations over the years at medieval campfires and sci-fi conventions... If you would ever like another to add to your line-up... contact me.
I love this combination of sci fi and fantasy.
Also, Grenan was an idiot. He recognizes the hammer as what's messing with his shields and then fails to connect it with all the system failures that prevent shields from working.
Oh he knew, he just didn't care. He was too sure of his victory.
Human: "You've killed us by the hundreds. Now, you face a real monster."
So the Norse Pantheon is canon in this setting, cool!
as all are everthing is manisfested from human mind in warp
I mean, the yorple frenin is always talking about Tyr, so I kinda just assumed that.
As both a fantasy and mythology nerd, that ending made me cry.
Same
The bug was really unlucky. He found a world which not only had a gods but gods who believe in revenge
The Crow reboot we didn't know we needed
Or Thor's origin story, before the storytellers sanitized it.
Mr narrator is chewing the scenery! I got goosebumps a couple of times. Absolutely wonderful
Of course! It tastes good :P (im the narrator)
STOP
HAMMERTIME!
Oooh oooh oooh!
I’ll stop there.
Acurate drager. The norse version of a zombi. be full on terrified if one of those start chasing after you.
Great to hear a story dealing with the draugr! They're terrifying entities, indeed, with the strength of many men and driven by purpose (often to guard their own grave). While often described as "death-black" and foul smelling, indicating necrotic tissue, they're also described as a lot more sturdy than this one.
To be fair, advanced alien weaponry wielded by what sounds like a highly evolved warrior species.
human animals, followed the rules for hunters? Do you not have rules against killing children and women when hunting? We humans literally have rules against killing juveniles and females of most species when WE go hunting, and you dare speak of ethics? Maybe you should have checked the rules for hunting a bit more carefully before hunting on earth. Just be glad your grandson won't be killed by us in vengeance.
Would love to have more from this timeline. I love a good Norse based story. This one was wonderful. Been listening to yall for a while now, and this is my first comment. Whoever wrote this, good on ya. Keep your ideas flowing, and always remember, stories have power.
Hi, I wrote this story! Thanks, and I am ecstatic that you liked the story! It makes me feel wonderful that you guys like my writing.
@@TheDramaGoblins It was magnificent, truly great work!
@@TheDramaGoblins You did good work with this story.🧟🧟♀️🧟♂️🦹
Man literally too angry to die, avenges his family.
Now THIS is a good HFY story. Well done Drama Goblin, very entertaining.
My favorite channel, my favorite story.
The Alfodr approves.
HOW!! how are you getting there Vocally... remember this is a marathon it wont do if you dont last long. my narrator Pantheon has one that has required operations because they got to into their narrations
I'm just sayin I hope you're treating your voice like the Vocal dicathalet that it is
Excellent story, more like this please
this was a beautiful story, and even though i know it's fake, i have but one thing to say: rest well Brandr, undying avenger, you have earned it
That's a great story.
Love the mix of Sci fi and fantasy.
Valhalla awaits
Supernatural vs Aliens = DanDaDan vibes 🥰
I didn't realize the connection until I read your comment Lol
A Sci-Fi Norse saga. Great!
Best bug control story ever!
good strong ending guys! this was a very interesting concept
Hail the Gods! Hail the Hero!
Such a great entertaining story!! Good job!! Love it 😊
Zombies vs. Aliens!
Thanks for another good story and very good narrator!
Well,,,,, Damn,,,,, good stuff
Wayne... Wayne; the cursed flame! 🔥
It would be great if Amon Amarth make a song out of this.
Thank you
But then in the next world he found the alien had already taken his wife and kids. It demanded its own vengeance for disobeying the laws of physics and nature.
Awesome
Holy crap he sounds like Kevin Michael
Great story
Good job
Cool!
So the corpse is just a rageful zombie Thor?
Audio is a tiny bit quiet. Great story, though.
A humble and freely offered CODA. Do with this what you choose. Near the very end of this Taleths Veritak Hunter Lord Grenan looks up to see Brandr's face. In the Vikingr's eyes there was a searing unquenchable fire. As Brandr's Hammer came very close to Grenan's Skull, there was a brilliant blue-white light even his closed eyes could not shield him from. Grenan felt an intense pain throughout his body; a pain hs never knew possible. As he felt Brandr's Hzmmer reach his head, he thought he had found his escape in Death. After what seemed to be an eternity, Grenan's eyes opened and he found himself I. What appeared to be his own bed. There, on his mantle were his kill-trophies. As he gazed on the last head, the eyes of the head opened ! It was the Vikingr he had killed ! No ! How ! Brandr's mouth opened and the word "VIDARR !" echoed forth. Grenan reached for his nearby flame-pistol, took aim, and shot Brandr's Skull. The flaming skull fell to the floor arching the room on fire. Trapped, Grenan resolved to fie. Again, there was a bright blue-white light thag enveloped all. Again, Grenan awoke in his bed, Brandr's shull still on his fireplace mantle. Grenan yelled. "Maelia, help me !". After an eternity that lasted a second. Grenan called for Maelia. He turned his head to see Maelia's visage morph into that of Brandr's wife; the one whose neck he broke with his boot. The spectre before him raised her hand and pushed him into the waiting fireplace. The pain, the fear, and everything dark he knew rushed from the flames to consume him. As before, there was a bright blue-white light that surrounded and permeated his very Soul. Again, he awoke in his own bed, the mirror above his fireplace showed nothing; it was black. But, slowly a spot of light whirled through the glass. The spot of light resolved to show Brandr, his Wife, and children. They turned their gaze to him and Grenan realized that THIS is how he would spend ETETNITY !
Wait....the frieren verse believe in tyr.....is this a prequel?
Title is slightly misleading but I guess it'd be spoilers to say "Zombie with a hammer" XD
To be fair, the curse of the Draugr didn't really give him any extra strength, just made it so he didn't lose it to decay or pain. All Vidarr really did was deny him death until his vengeance was done.
Humans are shockingly strong when self-preservation systems are down.
MILKMAN
Was a terrible story that wasny hfy at all. Humans only survived an arbitray list of unstatwd rules due to sucking at everything compared to every other species.
it's V I (vee eye), not 6. Virtual Intelligence. still good reading
He got it a few times, but I blame myself. I forgot to put the pronunciation guide on those during the writing.
Zombie Thor?
Vidarr is another son of Odin. He is the god of vengeance. He avenges Odin by slaying Fenrir.
Makes a fella think 🤔.
It does.
And that, kids, is the true story of how Loki was defeated, not by the host of Asgard, but by the animated corpse of a human, who was remade in Valhalla...into the god we know...
as Thor.
I was under the impression that the zombie kept saying by Thor
That was a good story, and well narrated, but hardly a 'HFY' story. All the Humans got slaughtered until a God imbued a corps with divine powers of invincibility. Hell the human with a hammer could have been replaced with a squirrel and a straw and the outcome would have been the same. Absolutely nothing about humanity won this battle. 2/10
A human deity from human imagination/worship rose a human up from the dead to avenge human deaths and inflict revenge upon an Alien FAR 'Superior' then them.
Pretty HFY to me.
An excellent story, VERY well narrated! I applaud the skills of the narrator as it reminds me strongly of my own narrations over the years at medieval campfires and sci-fi conventions... If you would ever like another to add to your line-up... contact me.
Under the right conditions even the DAMNED can deserve Paradise.⚔️🗡️🚬⚰️🪦📿🧿