Critiquing Your Design Projects - You Guys Rule 7

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  • @terln4707
    @terln4707 6 років тому +149

    im pretty sure the first logo didn't just represent a house for architect but also the person's initials "A" "A"

    • @sheaulle
      @sheaulle 5 років тому +20

      but that's a rather boring feature, isn't it?

    • @aitor.online
      @aitor.online 5 років тому +3

      same. I think the redesign still does that though. you could also argue that Ankit Ahir Architects makes up the new logo, the two triangles as A's AND the white space in the middle making up the A in architects

  • @jdingers
    @jdingers 6 років тому +130

    In the future i'd like to see Zimri go back and critique his own changes and adapt them again in concurrence with latest trends and design themes. Love the channel.

    • @kelseyk68
      @kelseyk68 6 років тому +2

      Great idea! He could see if he would've made the same changes today, or even suggest changes to himself on his versions

    • @clipsdefugu
      @clipsdefugu 4 роки тому

      Kelsey K now would be the time lol

  • @zimrimayfield
    @zimrimayfield  6 років тому +66

    Hey champs!! Thank you all so very much for sending your projects! : ) Every time I look through them I am very impressed! : D You guys are awesome and creative in so many ways. I'm not sure if I actually improved all of them, but as always let me know if I butchered them or kutchereeeeeeeed them :D

    • @johnmichaelramirez8637
      @johnmichaelramirez8637 6 років тому +2

      Zimri Mayfield hey zim. I would like to participate in this segment. What is your email address and the details to be included? Greetings from the Philippines.

    • @The_Northerner
      @The_Northerner 6 років тому

      Honestly, this time around I am not sure if you really improved all of them, rather pointed them in another direction. But hey, you cant always do stuff perfect!

    • @ziolp
      @ziolp 6 років тому

      What's your selection process when picking a project to critique?

    • @tomokawaiix
      @tomokawaiix 6 років тому

      Zimri Mayfield hope you can make a video on the devices you use and other media to make your art.
      I'm a beginner at this graphic design and I'm tired of my mouse and touchpad and it would really help me out if i knew which tablet or other things i could start with on a very low budget.

    • @JuanLunar
      @JuanLunar 6 років тому

      Dude I've sent you a draw of your personal logo to your Instagram. I think it fits perfectly. Check it out Man

  • @oniros80
    @oniros80 6 років тому +173

    The Ankit Ahir logo in the redesign reminds me immediately of Marlboro Menthol Cigarettes. I would have brought the roof down, disconnected the nature triangles as you did and then that width repeated between the sky and nature triangles. The three triangles would make a disjointed rectangle. This would be symbolic of structural framing. imho.

    • @D4rkLocus
      @D4rkLocus 6 років тому

      I just wanted to write the same :)

    • @yvesivo
      @yvesivo 6 років тому +6

      I thought this was a well known example, don't do this wrong, this shape resebles Marlboro. Also I thought the logo was pretty good as it was, the blue and the "white" triangle were like two A's and resembled the name Ankit Ahir.

    • @zimrimayfield
      @zimrimayfield  6 років тому +15

      Sorry i don't smoke, I've never seen that logo before : P But sure yes, that orientation would work too!

  • @btsobsessed7878
    @btsobsessed7878 5 років тому +5

    I could watch you do this ALL DAY! So soothing and calming. I love your positivity! Thank you for entertaining us.

  • @KillerRaspberry
    @KillerRaspberry 6 років тому +205

    2:46 you spelled Architect wrong, but I forgive you

    • @zimrimayfield
      @zimrimayfield  6 років тому +49

      Thank you Raspberry, I can't tell you how much that means right now.

    • @ysabellac.1309
      @ysabellac.1309 5 років тому +2

      Auom 120 Swnasiqubulotosife thats rude

  • @1506jet
    @1506jet 6 років тому +40

    i lightly tap my hands together every-time you call for claps

  • @aminasuleiman3861
    @aminasuleiman3861 6 років тому +1

    Can i just say you are the most amazing thing on the internet right now. Learnt so much from your channel. Thank you Mr. Zimri

  • @khienlee3890
    @khienlee3890 6 років тому +36

    Uh oh. It’s like Animal Hopital all over again with Architechts 🙊

  • @nb08
    @nb08 6 років тому +17

    WOW!... That gas station logo and shampoo bottle design was looking really professional.

  • @andyperson7695
    @andyperson7695 6 років тому +19

    I think it would be cool it you did a series where you look at famous company's logo and reveiw/improve it (Microsoft, Activision, Verizon)

    • @乃爪乃乂
      @乃爪乃乂 5 років тому

      andy person those logos were created by the best designers in the world and sold for like $500 000 i dont think there’s much to improve there😂

    • @nattybynature1262
      @nattybynature1262 5 років тому

      @@乃爪乃乂 there is actually and some were not that expensive to begin with i.e. the Nike logo designer was paid only $34. I think the biggest potential issue is getting the permission to use these big companies' intellectual property. I don't think they'd consent.

  • @m-ear
    @m-ear 6 років тому +1

    The changes you made to the gas station logo was so good. It was a great start and you took it to another level. Nice one Zimri

  •  6 років тому

    You fucking rule dude, your attitude your profesionalism, happiness, etc. You really love what you do, claps for you!

  • @tinymeal
    @tinymeal 6 років тому +19

    This is the greatest channel I’ve ever discovered on UA-cam! AND I LOVE THIS GUY ALREADY I WANNA BE FRIENDS WITH HIM

  • @cabs.
    @cabs. 6 років тому +5

    "IDK tho, just my opinion. Please don't fire me. AHYEUH"
    HAHAHAHAHA 10/10

  • @thegoldenwolf274
    @thegoldenwolf274 4 роки тому

    I'm binging all your videos. Your eye for design. Man! Awesome sauce

  • @priyakapoor5531
    @priyakapoor5531 6 років тому +8

    it hits me how much of zimri's viewership comes from india everytime i watch you guys rule

  • @pollyv4991
    @pollyv4991 6 років тому

    I like how clean this video looks! It focuses more on the design critique which is cool but I always get clever tips from seeing how you change things in photoshop/illustrator when you show that. Both are good. Ahh!

  • @yudv45
    @yudv45 6 років тому +4

    The Ankit Ahir Logo, had 2 triangles because his name has two 'A'.
    2 'A' Stacked to actually make a house. so it was spot on :p

  • @colinhimi
    @colinhimi 6 років тому +35

    Yeah that zero gas station design... I thought it said “Zenco” and it took me a really long time to see that it actually said “zero.” I also thought the r and the o blended together looked like a Greek symbol.

    • @HeatherCashArt
      @HeatherCashArt 6 років тому +3

      I thought it said zenco too!

    • @milena5067
      @milena5067 5 років тому

      I thought it said zeitcco 😂

    • @thomaswynn8244
      @thomaswynn8244 5 років тому +3

      I thought it was zerccco

    • @aitor.online
      @aitor.online 5 років тому +1

      @@thomaswynn8244 same. zerco is a pretty cool name anyways

    • @darrenflips7346
      @darrenflips7346 3 роки тому

      I thought it said zerccco

  • @maximusdoomed
    @maximusdoomed 6 років тому

    Great Perspective: I like the why and logical explanations and the move toward being concise.

  • @empireofpeaches
    @empireofpeaches 6 років тому +1

    "Those haters man, they don't want you to live a life of glory"
    Lol, I love your channel Zimri, you are so darned talented. Go live your life of glory!

  • @oh7004
    @oh7004 6 років тому +5

    The zerccco one is really clever because its like the r is the fuel hose going into the car which is the 3 Cs and the O which look like the wheels of a car. I would make it so this design is more explicit, maybe make the end of the r look like the end of a hose and make it going into a hole on top of the c

    • @omikronweapon
      @omikronweapon 5 років тому

      I completely missed that. That would be cool to emphasise, but you'd probably be better off losing the OOOO effect. The two themes are competing for the viewers' attention.

  • @Zimited
    @Zimited 6 років тому

    I liked the font on 'architects' in the architect logo before it was changed. Love your job on this logo, taught me alot!

  • @vodkaman2008
    @vodkaman2008 6 років тому

    Do you use photoshop or illustrator to make you're logos and wich one is better to use? Love the vids!!!

  • @callumyeates406
    @callumyeates406 6 років тому

    Dude your vids are the best, I never comment on shit, but you've given me heaps of inspiration so thanks

  • @ThePaartho
    @ThePaartho 6 років тому +94

    Thank you for critiquing it. You spelled my name funny.😂

    • @stenervaagland4809
      @stenervaagland4809 6 років тому +4

      Paartho Jalui nice logo!

    • @hyacinthdibley2420
      @hyacinthdibley2420 6 років тому +4

      Paartho Jalui /// your design is very beautiful. Well done. 🙂🙂🙂

    • @davianrod8843
      @davianrod8843 6 років тому +1

      Nice design i guess he didn’t realized that the Fox was also a part hair design he thought it was only the red side

    • @avichalthakur1482
      @avichalthakur1482 4 роки тому +1

      @Paartho Jalui Bro Did You Use Pen Tool For The Logo

    • @tejassheldekar8652
      @tejassheldekar8652 4 роки тому +3

      Hey man.. Does the fox in any way dipict a man's beard?...where the eye is the mouth

  • @Blackcatgfxx
    @Blackcatgfxx 6 років тому

    loved this video! For everyone who sent their work, claps for y'all!! They were looking cool. Also, your improvement on each of one; wow!!!

  • @rustyrehl6303
    @rustyrehl6303 6 років тому

    This reminds me of going to art school. I wish I had you to critique my work everyday because I need it. It is so important.

  • @fishpaleryder393
    @fishpaleryder393 5 років тому +2

    I think the shampoo bottle looked much better the way it was originally.

  • @CMTZ1
    @CMTZ1 6 років тому +1

    Yes, because we didn’t think you were already crazy. Haha love your videos man, keep it up.

  • @ginnayyyy
    @ginnayyyy 6 років тому

    that firefox logo redo was on point, esp where the font was situated, definitely gives good space making the red look like hair and then the font kinda outlining a face ishhhh

  • @Ratryoshka
    @Ratryoshka 5 років тому +1

    I see Paartho. Reminded me of Parto the famous comedian/presenter 🤣
    Most people just assume Firefox is just a browser. They have no idea that it's also a grooming company lol

  • @ravencassidy1979
    @ravencassidy1979 6 років тому

    This is my new favorite youtube channel

  • @hellisgroovy666
    @hellisgroovy666 6 років тому

    I mean 3.30am, should be sleeping but new upload damn it.

  • @wesphoenix5
    @wesphoenix5 6 років тому +1

    woah, I just realised you have two different coloured eyes! neat.

  • @johanrindborg
    @johanrindborg 6 років тому

    love the new version with the architect logo

  • @viloriamarkjonel3028
    @viloriamarkjonel3028 6 років тому

    That positive vibe 😍 Subbed and you're now one of my favorite youtuber

  • @fatima6452
    @fatima6452 3 роки тому

    Wow i love ur changes they are amazing

  • @sinyeatheng4991
    @sinyeatheng4991 6 років тому

    WOW!! Pretty cooll
    I like this program unit and it benefits me a lot

  • @kinderlover7098
    @kinderlover7098 6 років тому

    thank you very much for the awsome videos ! you helped me to create my entry videos . big thumbs up :)

  • @rockonileva
    @rockonileva 6 років тому +1

    Great! In the Architect logo, IMO it would be great to keep the distance from the triangles to the text... I think it keeps the notion of the presence of the body of the house in the middle... There's a structure, even if it's invisible! but removing the top triangle you gave life to the logo =)

  • @pauljmorton
    @pauljmorton 6 років тому +1

    The best change in the Firefox logo was the addition of the apostrophe.

  • @ryanbryant6317
    @ryanbryant6317 6 років тому +16

    Does he have 2 different color eyes like moira in overwatch?? That’s so cool dude.

  • @chillnoah
    @chillnoah 6 років тому

    Each video I'm impressed with your skills and knowledge to amp up logos that I think are fully finished... Speaking of that I have been getting really into graphic design and am going to school for it right now! I use a lot of premade objects so that limits my creativity and could run into copyright issues as you could imagine SO how can I start getting into getting better at creating my own objects and things in illustrator? Thanks :)

  • @OmarMekawy
    @OmarMekawy 6 років тому

    My smile did not get down, cool designs and so funny sprit!! :D :D i am designer too

  • @theidsingh
    @theidsingh 6 років тому

    Hey! I really love these critique videos. I also want to submit my designs. Is there any way to get short listed?

  • @adnnebs
    @adnnebs 6 років тому +35

    PRODUCE AND RELEASE THE DAMN FULL SONG CAUSE YOU RULE WITH A HOUSE IN A POOL

  • @bad.vibes777
    @bad.vibes777 6 років тому

    Literally found your channel 10 minutes ago. Do you have any videos on sports logo design? If you do not, could you do a video on how you'd approach a sports logo project? (P.S. your channel is amazing. I love your style.)

  • @cynicxl8
    @cynicxl8 6 років тому

    You seem so lovely!! So glad I came across your channel, I think you deserve way more subscribers!

  • @kasperstenbom
    @kasperstenbom 6 років тому

    Found your channel today through suggestions! Really liking what I see! I do graphics myself from time to time, I’m no good at it, but I know my way around haha. You’ve got yourself a new subscriber, and I don’t subscribe often at all. Consider yourself lucky, no, but you certainly have a great channel ☺️

  • @Abdokhairy
    @Abdokhairy 6 років тому

    you're the most amazing designer guy I ever seen

  • @FaraazThePhenom
    @FaraazThePhenom 6 років тому

    Where did you learn graphic design from ? Please give some tips it'll be very helpful thanks

  • @misiamurdr
    @misiamurdr 6 років тому

    Hi Zimri! I bet you get asked this question all the time but I was wondering what kind of equipment you use? Like what kind of tablet and such. I'm sorry if I looked over one of your videos if you've explained this already.

  • @WillPage
    @WillPage 6 років тому

    Finally realized it was fire did ya? What gave it away ;) What about a very small addition of yellow?

  • @SaadAldousari
    @SaadAldousari 6 років тому +1

    Amazing! I am clapping.

    • @rubah5639
      @rubah5639 4 роки тому

      هلا والله سعد

  • @ChristianSimpsonMusic
    @ChristianSimpsonMusic 6 років тому

    Zimri saying "dimfernt" just made my day

  • @Svg891
    @Svg891 5 років тому

    I think the firefox logo is stunning and maybe it's intentional but the fox is black and fire is red but the text is just the opposite :-P I'd switch them over and make the fire on top instead.. anyway just my two cents. really amazing stuff and I love yer channel!

  • @roeyni
    @roeyni 6 років тому

    Love your videos! Great ideas and positive attitued. A small ask for us - seasick prone audience - a bit less movement on screen if possible :)

  • @TillaT123
    @TillaT123 5 років тому

    Another thing to add about Firefox. Is the fox looks like a hand shadow puppet and it deals with a hand and they use their hands for grooming.

  • @elsieglue1328
    @elsieglue1328 6 років тому

    Favourite jingle of all time

  • @Mayamcnicoll
    @Mayamcnicoll 6 років тому

    I love watching your videos Zimri, thanks for doing these. Hey I spotted a typo on Architechts - Looooool! Crack up!

  • @lindajayneclark767
    @lindajayneclark767 5 років тому

    firefox brilliant illustration mark Paartho. zim, you made him look more like a fox. and more of a symbol.

  • @TylerTheGamerGaming
    @TylerTheGamerGaming 5 років тому

    I kinda want you to take a look at my Channel logo and tell me what you think
    I made it in a graphic design class and have been in love with it since, so I'd really like to hear your opinion on it

  • @chasecarney1793
    @chasecarney1793 6 років тому +156

    that grooming company is gonna get sued through the roof over their name

    • @adrianjimenez3887
      @adrianjimenez3887 6 років тому +37

      you can't get sued over a name if the company is in a completely different market/product

    • @negg7046
      @negg7046 6 років тому +3

      Adrian Jimenez Legal Loophole!!

    • @muteunmute5902
      @muteunmute5902 6 років тому +6

      @@negg7046 Not really, its intentionally so.

    • @EarlSquirrelsonn
      @EarlSquirrelsonn 6 років тому +20

      Adrian Jimenez yeah I’ll just go create a company called “Microsoft” that makes super soft microfibre toilet roll.
      I’m sure Bill won’t have any sort of problem with that.

    • @glaucofox
      @glaucofox 6 років тому +4

      @@EarlSquirrelsonn she's right, just don't make an app for your company and you're all set

  • @黑白插图
    @黑白插图 6 років тому

    超帅, love your work and your personality!

  • @redswanstudios
    @redswanstudios 5 років тому

    How do you send logo designs to get judged or possibly made better? Because I'm conflicted with mine which is my profile pic. It's for my GFX Design company, RedSwan GFX.

  • @markcrosby8221
    @markcrosby8221 5 років тому +1

    Is there any chance you watched a lot of Imagination Station with Mark Kistler when you were growing up? You've got the same energy.

    • @zimrimayfield
      @zimrimayfield  5 років тому

      Yoooo Mark!! So glad I found this comment :) I’m able to thank you for the dribbble invite! Haha I was trying to find a way to thank you, so this is great. Okay yes thank you for the invite that was really nice : D and actually no, I’ve never heard of it but I’ll check it it right now. Thanks again man you’re the best!

  • @Crosshill
    @Crosshill 6 років тому +1

    i would keep that shiny strong welfer logo and have a bit darker green, let it tie into the elements of the bottle. it looks too much like a faded shampoo at a grandmas house

  • @lilithium0
    @lilithium0 6 років тому

    wait so do you use Photoshop? I assumed you used illustrator just because that was what I was taught to use for logos in school

  • @kvpdesign5297
    @kvpdesign5297 6 років тому

    I am in the zone, so... sorry in advance for the long comment :) First logo: totally agreed with you, but In the middle I realized: the original has the initials in it, which, in that case, I think I might be able to ignore the tension you... mention. Second logo, I’d first have a talk with the client about business strategy. It’s a cool design, but I can’t relate the name/idea/logo to the actual concept itself in any way, unless it’s an annex pet salon maybe? :/ who knows :D Third logo: also, totally agree on the letters. Also, is it supposed to be Zerccco? I thought I should read Zeroooo, although I still see it as Zerccco. Either way, I really don’t know XD ... Logo 4: nailed the redesign!
    Besides all this: thanks for the inspiration, I’m preparing and gathering stuff for my own (totally different) graphic design videos, but I like to see what my fellow designers are up to. Keep it up!

  • @ricquettafrancis3495
    @ricquettafrancis3495 6 років тому +27

    I feel like we could be best friends but also you said they'd be a new video and you lied, so maybe this friendship is off to a bad start...

  • @jumbledmass5754
    @jumbledmass5754 6 років тому

    So, do you send back these logos for use or do you charge? How does this all work?

  • @Julianjan333
    @Julianjan333 6 років тому

    Hi I love these video's! I wondered, where could I send my questions in?

  • @avichalthakur1482
    @avichalthakur1482 4 роки тому

    Is Pen Tool Used In The Firefox Logo

  • @michaelmargiela8
    @michaelmargiela8 6 років тому

    What program do you use for drawing?

  • @meesgroothuis2797
    @meesgroothuis2797 6 років тому

    what tool did you use to adjust the e in the zero logo? is that in illustrator or photoshop?

    • @timlitwinschuh4741
      @timlitwinschuh4741 5 років тому +1

      That's in Photoshop. And he just used the rectangle selection tool and filled it with the same color as the rest of the e :)

  • @naviutube2
    @naviutube2 6 років тому

    Also I think, in FireFox logo the text should match the logo colors. I mean to say, the logo Fox is black but the word Fox is red and similar goes with Fire, in logo it is red and in word it is black. May be both logos and words can be same color?????

  • @dylanhavlicek4444
    @dylanhavlicek4444 6 років тому

    youre way more chill in these older vids lol. now its like youre on speed haha

  • @SunsetPunk
    @SunsetPunk 5 років тому

    I know this is super late but the red and black in the fire fox text should be opposite. Fire should be red because the fire/hair is and fox should be black since the fox is hehe. It also gives the logo cool symmetry.
    keep it mind next time i guess ;)
    Great channel!

  • @williamlillicrapp7601
    @williamlillicrapp7601 6 років тому +3

    How do you submit work to be critiqued ?

    • @MrReilly17
      @MrReilly17 6 років тому

      same i wanna know

    • @clovermau5
      @clovermau5 6 років тому

      William lillicrapp submit to his email :
      zimridesigner@gmail.com

  • @timothyhenry4806
    @timothyhenry4806 6 років тому

    How much do you usually charge for your logo design?

  • @WillWatches
    @WillWatches 6 років тому

    For the 1st I would move the triangle down and make it smaller like a triangle window and make it into a more distinct A

  • @oh7004
    @oh7004 6 років тому +1

    for the first one I think the two triangles are meant to be like the two A's at the start of his first and second name

  • @Pannemat
    @Pannemat 5 років тому

    I'm confused, is it
    Zercooo,
    Zerccoo,
    Zerccco,
    Zeroooo,
    Zerocoo,
    Zerooco,
    Zerocco,
    Zercoco or
    Zeraudi?

  • @jonasrsted6785
    @jonasrsted6785 6 років тому

    This a amazing zimri YOU rule :)

  • @melinaarias921
    @melinaarias921 6 років тому

    I am new to adobe illustrator and I have created a hand drawn design (logo). I want to take that hand drawn logo and upload it into adobe illustrator and make it look like a real logo. I am having the hardest time and just can't move forward with this. I took a photo of my hand drawn image and opened it in adobe illustrator. I think that is where I am stuck. Every video I have watched, doesn't seem to show me the steps in between. I need step by step help on how to draw my sketch, take a picture, upload it into adobe illustrator and then start making it look like a real logo that I can print to business cards, magnetic signs, etc. Please, any help will be GREATLY appreciated!!

  • @tanhandesign
    @tanhandesign 6 років тому

    Men am officially a fan !! You rule ______

  • @astroravioli
    @astroravioli 6 років тому

    where can i submit designs for this series??

  • @14104
    @14104 6 років тому +1

    They're aloud to use the name Fire Fox?

  • @anestispneuma268
    @anestispneuma268 6 років тому

    Does anyone know the fonts used for the architecture original logo; Dig a lot!

  • @cr2301
    @cr2301 6 років тому

    Wasn't Ankit Ahirs logo supposed to look like the letter A? Like his name? Anyway I like how you changed it, I just miss the A shape

  • @Flows0me
    @Flows0me 6 років тому

    Hi well done ! For the Gas station logo I think the red on red is too much.

  • @vishnupanchal6215
    @vishnupanchal6215 6 років тому

    When is the next vid coming

  • @anthonyaviles1863
    @anthonyaviles1863 6 років тому

    Where do I go to submit my logo to be looked at?

  • @Pannemat
    @Pannemat 5 років тому

    There's a fox?

  • @simbe5657
    @simbe5657 6 років тому

    The Firefox logo reminds me more of a security company than a men's grooming company. Might just be because of the color similarities to Securitas. I would mainly change the typography, maybe some hand lettering.

    • @jdingers
      @jdingers 6 років тому

      The imagery is great though the black is a beard outline and the red is a quiff.

  • @marksesko2285
    @marksesko2285 6 років тому

    What is the font in thumbnails?

  • @rann_28
    @rann_28 5 років тому

    What the lyrics song on the intro maybe about like this:
    "Maybe that i work ain't good
    But you work on the house on the book on the house on the book..."
    Something like that

  • @Abby_Liu
    @Abby_Liu 6 років тому

    but zimri there are no new videos every weekday