This guy is absolutely clueless. Still thinking "you're taking too long" about doing the thing she has no intention of doing. No, she's not taking too long, she's not doing it. And thinking she needs his permission to divorce him? In what country do people think that way? Also, you need a proofreader. You have random punctuation in wrong places and really weird sentence breaks, and the voice actors are reading it that way, and because of that it barely makes sense. It's really hard to follow a story when it's badly written.
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This guy is absolutely clueless. Still thinking "you're taking too long" about doing the thing she has no intention of doing. No, she's not taking too long, she's not doing it. And thinking she needs his permission to divorce him? In what country do people think that way?
Also, you need a proofreader. You have random punctuation in wrong places and really weird sentence breaks, and the voice actors are reading it that way, and because of that it barely makes sense. It's really hard to follow a story when it's badly written.
The male VA needs to get out of the box he perpetually records in, move closer to the mic or just stop doing VA work altogether.